Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
647
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
35
adverbRatio
0.05409582689335394
lyAdverbCount
17
lyAdverbRatio
0.02627511591962906
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
64
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
64
mean
13.13
std
6.69
cv
0.51
sampleLengths
0
24
1
22
2
16
3
9
4
10
5
6
6
20
7
16
8
3
9
24
10
20
11
5
12
24
13
18
14
5
15
21
16
14
17
23
18
11
19
20
20
12
21
3
22
25
23
16
24
7
25
19
26
19
27
13
28
11
29
10
30
19
31
10
32
21
33
8
34
15
35
12
36
9
37
24
38
4
39
17
40
14
41
9
42
9
43
7
44
5
45
18
46
18
47
12
48
4
49
6
83.8542%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
3
diversityRatio
0.53125
totalSentences
64
uniqueOpeners
34
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
12
fancyCount
11
fancyTags
0
"she said, voice steady but low, as if speaking loud might break the fragile barrier between them (say, voice speak break)"
1
"he said, using that nickname like it was a balm and a blade all at once (say, use be)"
2
"he finished for her, a faint, rueful smile curving his lips (finish curve)"
3
"he said, voice low, the catch of a thousand unspoken regrets threading through it (say, voice thread)"
4
"Rory said, the accusation bitter but laced with something softer, something that made her voice tremble (say, lace make tremble)"
5
"he confessed (confess)"
6
"he admitted, stepping carefully now, his footsteps measured, echoing off the cramped walls stacked with books and scattered notes (admit, step carefully measure, echo stack)"
7
"she said, the ghost of a smile touching her lips (say, touch)"
8
"he said simply (say simply)"
9
"she whispered (whisper)"
10
"he agreed, voice thick with honesty (agree, voice)"