| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 81.13% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1325 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 54.72% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1325 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "throb" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "racing" | | 7 | "sense of" | | 8 | "predator" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.95% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 108 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1316 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 1237 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.65 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 8 | | Midnight | 1 | | Rory | 8 | | Heartstone | 2 | | November | 1 | | London | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Addressing | 1 | | Rot | 1 | | Escher | 1 | | Shadows | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Midnight" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Shadows" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "November" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Cardiff" | | 5 | "Escher" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 81.51% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "flowers that seemed to pulse in rhythm with her racing heart" | | 1 | "something like a bell, a pure note of discor" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.04 | | wordCount | 1316 | | matches | | 0 | "not large, barely four inches, but sharp enough" | | 1 | "not just darkness, but a shape moving through darkness, distinguishable from it by" | | 2 | "Not the fast pounce of a predator, but the deliberate, inexorable approach of something" | | 3 | "not moving quickly but moving with an absolute certainty" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 37.6 | | std | 26.14 | | cv | 0.695 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 73 | | 2 | 45 | | 3 | 77 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 89 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 60 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 54 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 48 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 47 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 55 | | 17 | 45 | | 18 | 73 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 48 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 58 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 46 | | 25 | 77 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 44 | | 30 | 45 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 53 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 78 |
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| 98.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "been brought" | | 1 | "being found" |
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| 97.96% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 196 | | matches | | 0 | "was trying" | | 1 | "were doing" | | 2 | "were trying" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 108 | | ratio | 0.065 | | matches | | 0 | "The silver chain caught on her jacket zipper—she freed it with practiced fingers, her bright blue eyes already adjusted to the darkness beyond the boundary." | | 1 | "The wildflowers—impossible in November, but the Grove didn't follow autumn's rules—seemed to glow faintly in the darkness, their colors muted but present." | | 2 | "The absence was so complete that Rory's breath became loud to her own ears—the careful in-and-out of a woman trained to stay calm in tight spaces." | | 3 | "She looked toward the sound—nothing but purple shadows and the impossible wildflowers, their petals seeming to drink in what little light existed in the Grove." | | 4 | "Rory's hand went to her jacket pocket where she kept a knife—not large, barely four inches, but sharp enough." | | 5 | "Something moved at the edge of her vision—not just darkness, but a shape moving through darkness, distinguishable from it by texture and intention." | | 6 | "The creatures—if creatures was the right word—didn't have forms that matched any animal she knew." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 692 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 18 | | adverbRatio | 0.02601156069364162 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010115606936416185 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 108 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 108 | | mean | 12.19 | | std | 8.25 | | cv | 0.677 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 34 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 67.90% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.46296296296296297 | | totalSentences | 108 | | uniqueOpeners | 50 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she heard it from" | | 1 | "Just flowers and shadow and" | | 2 | "Instead, the wildflowers reacted." |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "She needed answers." | | 1 | "It became thicker, almost oily" | | 2 | "She counted three small clearings" | | 3 | "She'd learned that in childhood," | | 4 | "You control your breath, you" | | 5 | "She looked toward the sound—nothing" | | 6 | "They didn't break." | | 7 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 8 | "She'd started carrying it after" | | 9 | "she called out" | | 10 | "Her voice cracked on the" | | 11 | "she said, louder this time" | | 12 | "They moved closer." | | 13 | "She could smell something now," | | 14 | "She'd smelled it once before," | | 15 | "She spun toward it, blade" | | 16 | "They seemed to shift at" | | 17 | "She counted five." | | 18 | "Her voice was steadier now," | | 19 | "Her skin under the silver" |
| | ratio | 0.253 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 68 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "# The Fae Grove at" | | 1 | "The silver chain caught on" | | 2 | "The standing stones marked the" | | 3 | "The pendant pulsed warm against" | | 4 | "That was why she'd come." | | 5 | "She needed answers." | | 6 | "It became thicker, almost oily" | | 7 | "The wildflowers—impossible in November, but" | | 8 | "Purples bled into deep blues." | | 9 | "Whites appeared almost translucent." | | 10 | "She counted three small clearings" | | 11 | "The night sounds stopped." | | 12 | "The sounds simply ceased, as" | | 13 | "The absence was so complete" | | 14 | "She'd learned that in childhood," | | 15 | "You control your breath, you" | | 16 | "A branch snapped somewhere to" | | 17 | "Rory stopped walking." | | 18 | "The pendant's warmth intensified, a" | | 19 | "She looked toward the sound—nothing" |
| | ratio | 0.716 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 8.09% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Three days of warmth, three days of pulses that grew stronger each evening, until tonight it burned like a coal pressed to her skin." | | 1 | "She counted three small clearings before the one she recognized, the one where she'd been brought weeks ago and told things that had rewritten her understanding…" | | 2 | "The pendant's warmth intensified, a steady throb that matched her heartbeat." | | 3 | "All she had was the pendant's warmth and the soft glow of flowers that seemed to pulse in rhythm with her racing heart." | | 4 | "The specific decay-smell of something that had been dead for a long time and was only now being found." | | 5 | "Shadows with eyes that were darker still, pupil-black in the darkness, but present." | | 6 | "The creatures—if creatures was the right word—didn't have forms that matched any animal she knew." | | 7 | "Not the fast pounce of a predator, but the deliberate, inexorable approach of something that knew it had her cornered." | | 8 | "She understood that with a sudden certainty that bypassed logic and went straight to her bones." | | 9 | "It was something like a bell, a pure note of discordant frequency that made her teeth ache and her vision blur." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 7.14% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |