Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR7SJD39SPSEG2K3YP272N

Run Details

Duration:
48.6s
Cost:
$0.030540
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora hesitated under the green glow of The Raven’s Nest’s neon sign, the rain-slick pavement reflecting its sickly light. She’d rented the flat above the bar only weeks ago, but tonight was the first time she’d ventured downstairs. She crossed the threshold on tentative toes, the door’s latch sighing behind her. Warm wood and whiskey smoke curled around her, and the hush of midnight conversations felt like the tail end of a dream. She shrugged off her soaked messenger bag, boots clicking on the polished oak. Her straight, shoulder-length black hair clung damp to her neck. She tucked a strand behind her ear, revealing the bright blue of her eyes—eyes she barely recognized in the fringe-lit gloom. A driftwood bookshelf lined one wall, and maps with tattered edges hung like ghosts of unspoken journeys. Beneath them, rows of black-and-white photographs traced silhouettes of men in trench coats, a woman with an umbrella in Prague, a blurred shape in a snowstorm. Aurora’s pulse throbbed when she saw him. He was leaning against the bar, one hand on his cane, the other tapping a silver ring. Silas Blackwood—Si to the few who dared. The neat auburn beard was flecked with gunmetal grey, and the limp in his left leg had grown more pronounced with the years. Yet his posture, still carrying the quiet authority of an MI6 veteran, made the narrow pub feel like the stage for something momentous. She swallowed. That signet ring caught the bar lamp, glinting—raven in flight, talons unclenching. A crest she’d traced as a child when he’d let her peek inside the secret room: a hidden chamber of low ceilings and battered chairs, a single lamp in a corner, maps of old safe houses pinpricked with white labels. He pressed his lips together, eyebrows lifting once, slowly. Then he straightened, right hand brushing the bar for balance. “Aurora,” he said, voice soft as moth wings. “Aurora,” she repeated, older now, but that syllable still tasted of childhood. She felt the scar on her left wrist itch, a small crescent from the night she got too close to the riverbank back home. He had shown up then, offering her the sleeve of his coat to press against her bleeding cut and telling her courage didn’t mean lack of fear. He inhaled. “I thought you were in Cardiff.” She clutched the strap of her bag. “I was. I… moved.” She met his hazel eyes, searching for welcome. Instead, she found questions she’d never answered. “Delivery,” she added, half-joking to hide how her pulse raced. “I work across the street.” He nodded, stepping back to reveal a stool. “Sit.” She eased onto it, the leather squeaking. He offered something in a glass—top-shelf whiskey, pale gold in the low light. She accepted, fingers brushing his as she took it. The warmth there was a tether. “How long has it been?” he asked. She stared at the swirling amber. “Almost six years since Cardiff. Four since I ran away.” He touched the scar on his own palm, then pressed the signet ring—weighing it like regret. “Four years since I worried I lost you.” Her breath went uneven. “I needed distance.” Silas’s gaze dropped to the wall. “I thought I’d made it too easy to disappear.” She closed her eyes, picturing those early days after she fled Evan’s apartment—her bruised lip, trembling fingers. She’d authored an address only he could trace, convinced that no one would look for her in London. “I was scared you’d insist on finding me.” “I would.” His tone cracked. “I would have broken down any door.” She exhaled, a tremor in her chest. “I didn’t want you to see how broken I was.” He set his glass down and leaned in close enough that she could smell his aftershave—cedar and tobacco. “I would have thought you phenomenal.” She blinked against a sudden heat. “You always knew what to say.” “Do I still?” he whispered. She pulled her sleeve back to reveal the scar more fully, the pale crescent curving like a waning moon. The bar lamp glowed behind it. “Every time I look at this, I remember I’m the girl who nearly drowned.” He reached over, fingers brushing hers. The signet ring pressed into her knuckles. “And every time I looked at you, I saw someone who could save herself.” Her throat tightened. “I saved myself, all right. Fled to law school, thinking I’d prove something. But I spent more nights studying statutes than understanding myself.” He nodded toward the maps overhead. “I left MI6 thinking I’d proved something. Ended up running a bar instead of a spy network.” She chuckled, a soft thing. “You hide maps in a bar?” “This place isn’t just a bar.” He waved a hand, revealing dusty corners—maps of cartel routes, coded schedules. “It’s the eyes and ears I couldn’t mobilize in the field anymore.” She followed his gesture to a plank of the floor scratched with dates. “You never let me in on all this.” “I always planned to,” he said. His limp seemed to deepen with the weight of words unspoken. “But I thought you’d rather not see how ugly truth can get.” Her eyes drifted over the wall of photos—one of her, age twelve, scowling in a raincoat, a younger Silas offering her a hand. Behind was the neon sign she now stood beneath. “That night,” she said. “You saved me.” He flicked a stray lock of hair from his forehead. “I’ve never lost sight of that.” They both fell silent. The hum of the bar faded to a hush. Aurora traced the rim of her glass. “I’ve been carrying my own regrets,” she admitted. “I left Cardiff, left law, left people behind. I didn’t know how to come back.” Silas remained still, as if absorbing that confession. “Are you coming back now?” She brushed her palm over the scar again, fingertips seeking its cool reassurance. “I’m here.” He pushed a loose wooden plank beside her. A faint click. The bookshelf groaned and slid open, revealing the secret room’s dim glow. Neither spoke as they stepped inside. The air smelled of dust and ink. A single lamp lit a scarred table ringed by two battered chairs. “Your first night here,” she murmured. He flicked a switch, clarifying maps pinned with red strings. “I wanted to show you something.” She sank into one chair, the threads of memory tugging at her. He settled opposite, the cane leaning against the wall like an old sentinel. He patted the table, scattered with files. “I kept these,” he said. “Every letter you ever sent me—x’s in the margins, doodles in the corners. Even the last one: ‘Please don’t look for me.’” Her chest tightened. “I was prideful.” She glanced at a page—her loopy handwriting in blue ink: “I have to do this on my own.” He unfurled another sheet—a photograph of her in court robes. “I wanted to brag. Thought you’d be proud.” Her voice shivered. “I was proud. And terrified.” He leaned back, one leg stretched, revealing the limp’s angle. “I carried guilt for all that fear.” She studied his face, lines deepening the story of decades. “You should have told me that.” He closed his eyes, voice low. “I was afraid you’d come back for the wrong reasons.” She reached across the table, fingertips hovering. “I came back tonight because I realized some debts demand repayment.” He opened his eyes and for the first time cracked a smile. “Only a Carter would phrase it like a court order.” She laughed, soft and honest. The sound echoed in the small room. “Do you forgive me?” He slid the photograph of her in damp hair, beaming at her teenage self. “I never stopped.” She dropped her gaze to the scar. “I forgive you too.” He stood, offered his hand. She took it, then leaned forward, resting her head on his shoulder for a moment—young Aurora seeking safety in a man she trusted. Silas’s arms were firm, a world of protective instincts housed in that lean frame. After a moment he cleared his throat. “Come back up?” he asked, stepping aside to let her pass. She rose, smoothing her chestnut jacket, and together they emerged. The bar’s main room was empty now, chairs stacked on tables, the neon sign blinking its green invitation. Aurora’s boots sounded loud in the silence. Silas tucked the cane under one arm, his signet ring steadying a loose chair. “Stay,” he said, voice steady. “I’ll keep you company.” She paused by the door between bar and stairs. “Thank you,” she whispered. Then she squared her shoulders. “I’d like that.” He smiled—wicked, warm. “I’ve missed you.” She met his hazel eyes with hers, bright blue and unwavering. “Me too.” They climbed the narrow stairs together, leaving the dreams and regrets of the past in the secret room’s dusty air. Upstairs, her new flat waited in shadow. But in the hush of midnight, Aurora Carter felt something she hadn’t in years: the hope that home could be more than a place, if she had the courage to stay.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she repeated, older now, but that syllable still tasted of childhood [still]"
93.4938% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1537
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
34.9382% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1537
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"sentinel"
count1
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count2
3
word"glinting"
count1
4
word"unwavering"
count1
5
word"unspoken"
count2
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"sentinel"
1"throbbed"
2"flicked"
3"glinting"
4"unwavering"
5"unspoken"
6"weight"
7"echoed"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of words"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences109
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences109
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences150
matches
0"absorbing that confession"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean26.14
std18.24
cv0.698
sampleLengths
073
187
277
354
427
563
68
741
89
935
107
1116
1224
137
1415
1543
1612
1717
1824
1912
205
2139
2227
2326
2423
2511
2630
2721
2829
2939
3016
3143
3213
3315
3448
356
3616
3725
3834
3924
4018
418
4217
4316
4416
4518
4622
4716
4817
4911
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences109
matches
0"was flecked"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs207
matches(empty)
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1153
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.026019080659150044
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006071118820468344
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences150
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences150
mean10.11
std6.5
cv0.643
sampleLengths
019
119
213
322
413
510
621
717
826
97
1017
117
1223
1323
142
1512
1640
179
1810
198
2012
2124
2227
232
246
257
2612
277
2810
295
308
311
327
3313
349
356
367
376
3810
3916
408
414
423
436
449
4517
4618
478
485
497
44.6667% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.26
totalSentences150
uniqueOpeners39
21.1538% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"he said, voice soft as moth wings (say, voice)"
1"she repeated, older now, but that syllable still tasted of childhood (repeat, still taste)"
2"she added, half-joking to hide how her pulse raced (add, hide race)"
3"whispered (whisper)"
4"she admitted (admit)"
5"she murmured (murmur)"
6"he said, voice steady (say, voice)"
7"she whispered (whisper)"
87.8972%