| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 855 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 855 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "glint" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "echoed" | | 4 | "throbbed" | | 5 | "footfall" | | 6 | "trembled" | | 7 | "perfect" | | 8 | "traced" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "chill" | | 11 | "raced" | | 12 | "down her spine" | | 13 | "pulse" | | 14 | "thundered" | | 15 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 22 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 841 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 15 | | wordCount | 836 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.36 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Grove | 3 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 2 | | Aurora | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 841 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 41.03% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 15 | | mean | 56.07 | | std | 16.46 | | cv | 0.294 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 88 | | 1 | 84 | | 2 | 58 | | 3 | 62 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 57 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 52 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 52 | | 12 | 62 | | 13 | 69 | | 14 | 19 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 158 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 86 | | ratio | 0.163 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones clustered around her—gnarled pillars carved by time—reminded her how small she was here." | | 1 | "Yet last night the pendant had throbbed against her skin—insistent, urgent—pointing her here, to this hidden glade in Richmond Park." | | 2 | "Each footfall sank in damp earth; each breath came too loud." | | 3 | "She paused, flinching at the unseen movement at the edge of her vision—something pale, sinuous." | | 4 | "She spun again; only shadows slipped through moonbeams." | | 5 | "Pinching the crescent scar at her wrist steadied her—and reminded her she could endure pain." | | 6 | "Just ahead, she glimpsed a figure slip behind a trunk—long limbs, impossible angles." | | 7 | "She lunged, snatching the pendant; the silver chain tangled around her fingers." | | 8 | "Her fingertips traced a narrow glyph carved into the wood—an angular rune she’d never seen." | | 9 | "A breath—wet and ragged—ghosted her ear." | | 10 | "Brambles snagged her jeans; loose stones tripped her." | | 11 | "Beneath a twisted oak sat a figure—crouched, motionless, hair matted and pale." | | 12 | "She lunged away, stumbling through brambles, flailing past ghostly shapes pressed against dark trunks—dozens of featureless watchers, leaning toward her." | | 13 | "She took a single step forward—toward safety, she hoped—but branches cracked behind her." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 851 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.03172737955346651 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008225616921269096 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 86 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 86 | | mean | 9.78 | | std | 4.52 | | cv | 0.462 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 58.14% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.38372093023255816 | | totalSentences | 86 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead she moved deeper." | | 1 | "Only the hush of night" | | 2 | "Just ahead, she glimpsed a" | | 3 | "Then the darkness swallowed them" |
| | ratio | 0.047 | |
| 60.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "She pressed a hand to" | | 1 | "She closed her fist around" | | 2 | "She had laughed." | | 3 | "She whirled, cutting a lone" | | 4 | "she told herself, voice too" | | 5 | "She followed a narrow track" | | 6 | "She paused, flinching at the" | | 7 | "She spun again; only shadows" | | 8 | "She swallowed, fighting the squeeze" | | 9 | "She pressed on, brambles tugging" | | 10 | "She froze, chest hammering." | | 11 | "Her rational mind whispered deer," | | 12 | "She stepped in, the air" | | 13 | "She knelt, placing the pendant" | | 14 | "Its glow seeped outward, igniting" | | 15 | "She lunged, snatching the pendant;" | | 16 | "She jerked aside." | | 17 | "She stumbled back, brushing against" | | 18 | "Her fingertips traced a narrow" | | 19 | "It shimmered beneath the pendant’s" |
| | ratio | 0.4 | |
| 71.76% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stepped between two" | | 1 | "The air hit her like" | | 2 | "The standing stones clustered around" | | 3 | "A single hour might stretch" | | 4 | "She pressed a hand to" | | 5 | "She closed her fist around" | | 6 | "The deep crimson gem pulsed" | | 7 | "Eva’s teasing words echoed: If" | | 8 | "She had laughed." | | 9 | "Cities didn’t sprout faerie portals." | | 10 | "A twig snapped behind her." | | 11 | "She whirled, cutting a lone" | | 12 | "she told herself, voice too" | | 13 | "She followed a narrow track" | | 14 | "Each footfall sank in damp" | | 15 | "She paused, flinching at the" | | 16 | "She spun again; only shadows" | | 17 | "The pendant pulsed stronger now," | | 18 | "She swallowed, fighting the squeeze" | | 19 | "She pressed on, brambles tugging" |
| | ratio | 0.776 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 86.47% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The deep crimson gem pulsed with a reluctant warmth, as if it remembered something she had forgotten." | | 1 | "She pressed on, brambles tugging at her sleeves, petals brushing her ankles as if to warn her away." | | 2 | "The moonlight pooled brighter here, hotter, focused as if through an unseen lens." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she told, voice too small" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |