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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR9BD9V4M0ZYCXPXRCS8SF
Run Details
Model:
Gemini 2.5 Flash
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Horror: alone in an eerie place at night
Duration:
14.0s
Cost:
$0.006867
Provider:
Google AI Studio
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
82.60%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
99.04%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
30.95%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
98.24%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
75.62%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
82.77%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
44.80%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
83.23%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
96.77%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
73.73%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
88.9253%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The air in Richmond Park
bit, sharper than a London winter had any right to be.
Aurora hunched deeper into her
jacket, pulling the collar up over her mouth, her breath misting in the frigid air.
The path, once paved, dissolved
into a slick, muddy track, hemmed in by the skeletal fingers of trees.
The setting sun had bled
the sky of all
warmth
, leaving it a bruised purple that hinted at something deeper, colder.
She consulted the frayed map
again, the paper soft and damp beneath her gloved fingers.
The faded ink pointed to
a spot deep within the sprawling park, beyond the well-trodden trails.
Her instructions from Yu-Fei had
been unsettlingly vague: “Deliver the package with utmost discretion. A woman expects it. Do not tarry.” The package itself, a small,
velvet
-wrapped box, was light in her backpack, but felt heavy with
unspoken
meaning.
Rory usually enjoyed the quiet
solitude of her evening deliveries, the city lights winking around her like a hundred thousand distant eyes. But out here, the darkness pressed in, absolute and suffocating.
A branch snapped nearby, a
sound too loud, too close in the
profound
silence
.
She froze, her hand instinctively
going to the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit from childhood. Nothing.
Just the wind, she told
herself, trying to rationalize the sudden prickle on her neck. It was a fool’s errand, this.
A wild goose chase into
the darkening park.
She should’ve just told Yu-Fei
no. The map showed a small, forested area, marked only as ‘The Grove.’ Isolde’s Grove, some locals called it.
She’d always dismissed the whispers
about it as local folklore, the kind of stories spun by bored teenagers looking for a thrill.
Now, the stories felt less
like fiction and more like premonitions.
The trees grew denser, their
branches interwoven overhead, blotting out the last vestiges of twilight.
The ground underfoot grew strangely
smooth, almost unnaturally so, as if worn by countless
footsteps
over countless ages.
Then, through the gloom, she
saw them: rough-hewn pillars of ancient oak, standing
sentinel
, marking an irregular boundary. The Fae Grove.
A shiver, deeper than the
cold,
traced
its way
down her spine
. Entering the Grove felt like stepping into an older, forgotten world.
The air shifted, growing eerily
still, the biting wind from the park dying to a faint murmur. And then, the wildflowers. Tiny, luminous blooms in shades of violet and sapphire, carpeting the forest floor, pushing up through the damp earth, glowing with an impossible inner light.
They should be dead, she
thought.
It was the middle of
winter.
She unzipped her backpack, her
fingers brushing against the cold metal of the Heartstone pendant, a silent comfort. It hadn't
pulsed
with
warmth
, hadn't hummed with any energy she
could
discern. Whatever this place was, it wasn't a Hel portal. A low, keening sound drifted through the trees, a drawn-out
sigh that seemed to melt into the silence
. It *
could
* be the wind. But it didn't feel like the wind. It felt like a voice. Rory tightened her grip on her backpack straps, her heart thudding against her ribs. She
was being
ridiculous. It was a park. An old park, maybe, but still just a park.
She pushed deeper into the
Grove, following the faint path that snaked through the glowing wildflowers. The oaks here were immense, their trunks wider than her outstretched arms, their bark gnarled and ancient. Moss clung to them like
velvet
cloaks, soft and emerald green. There was no sound now, not even the rustle of leaves. The overwhelming
silence
was more unnerving than any noise.
It felt as if the
air itself had absorbed all sound, left it nowhere to go. The further she went, the more aware she became of a subtle shift in the light.
It wasn’t quite dark, not
truly
. The luminous flowers cast a soft, ethereal glow, but above the canopy, she
could
still discern the faint, bruised purple of the twilight sky. Had she
walked that far
, that
quickly
? It
felt like an hour, maybe more, but the
sky suggested only minutes had passed. Time, she remembered from stories, moved differently here. A movement at the edge of her vision. She whipped her head around, her breath catching in her throat. Nothing.
Only the gnarled trunks of
the oaks, the luminous carpet of wildflowers.
Her mind was playing tricks
on her, she decided, a consequence of the spooky atmosphere and Yu-Fei’s cryptic instructions. She saw it again. A
flicker
, like a shadow detaching itself from a tree trunk, melding back into the
gloom
. Too swift to be real. Too subtle to be imagined. Rory stood
perfectly
still, her senses on high alert, straining to hear, to see. The
silence
pressed in, heavy and expectant.
Then, a faint, rhythmic scratching
sound. Like fingernails dragging across bark. Or claws. It wasn't constant, but intermittent, moving, circling. It came from her left, then her right, then from behind her. She spun around, a cold knot of dread tightening in her
stomach
. ‘Hello?’ she called out, her voice barely a
whisper
in the stifling
silence
. It sounded thin, swallowed by the vastness of the Grove. No answer.
Only the intermittent scratching, seeming
to draw closer. Her bright blue eyes darted amongst the trees, searching for the source of the sound. She
tried to
discern shapes in the deepening shadows, but the luminous wildflowers only made the darkness between the trees denser, more absolute. The scratching stopped. For a moment, she was almost relieved.
Then, something brushed against her
hair. Lightly. Like a feather. She flinched, pulling back, her heart leaping into her throat. She spun, hands up, ready to defend herself, but there was nothing there.
Just the ancient oaks, the
luminous flowers. The
profound
, terrifying
silence
. She wasn’t alone. The certainty of it settled over her like a shroud. Whatever was in the Grove with her, it
was watching
. It
was playing
with her. A sound, like a soft sigh right beside her ear, made her jump. It carried a hint of melody, a
whisper
of something ancient and mournful. She backed away
slowly
, her eyes wide,
scanning
the trees, her hand now clutching the Heartstone pendant, its cool metal a small anchor in the rising tide of her fear. ‘Who’s there?’ she demanded, her voice a little stronger this time, though it still
trembled
slightly
. A ripple of movement, like heat rising off asphalt, disturbed the air between two trees ahead. Not a sound this time, just a visual distortion, a shimmering. And then, a shape
began to
coalesce in the space where the shimmer had been. Taller than a human, slender, its form indistinct, like a figure wrought of smoke and shadow. No discernible features, but she
could feel
its gaze, a
palpable
weight
pressing down on her. The
velvet
-wrapped package in her backpack
suddenly
felt like a
beacon
, drawing whatever this thing was to her. The instructions had been 'utmost discretion.’ They hadn’t mentioned fighting off… this. She took another step back, then another. The shadowy figure mirrored her, moving with a fluid, terrifying grace, never quite solidifying, never quite showing itself fully. It didn't make a sound, but the air around it felt colder, the
silence
deeper. Rory spun and bolted. Not towards the interior of the Grove, but back the way she came, towards the ancient oak standing stones, towards the distant, normal world of Richmond Park. Her boots slipped on the damp earth, her breath ragged in her chest. She pushed herself harder, forcing her legs to pump, her lungs to burn. Behind her, she heard it. A sound like dry leaves skittering across stone, but faster, gaining on her. It wasn’t a
footfall
,
not quite
. More like a
whisper
-soft slither. She risked a glance over her shoulder. The shadowy figure was there, closer now, its form still indistinct but unmistakably present. It flowed between the trees, moving without effort, without hindrance, its silent pursuit more terrifying than any scream. The standing stones were ahead, a gaping
maw
beckoning her back to reality. She sprinted, adrenaline surging through her veins, blurring her vision.
Just as she was about
to burst through the boundary of the oaks, a gnarled, moss-covered branch, thick as a man’s arm, lashed out from one of the trees directly in front of her. It wasn’t there a second ago. It was too fast, too sudden. It caught her across the chest, sending her sprawling onto the damp earth. The impact knocked the wind from her lungs, leaving her gasping, dazed. Her backpack spilled open, the
velvet
-wrapped package tumbling out onto the glowing wildflowers. The shadowy figure was there, hovering over it, its form finally solidifying enough for her to perceive outlines. Long, slender limbs, fingers that tapered into impossibly sharp points. But still, no face. Just a void. It bent, with a terrifying, silent grace, and picked up the package. Aurora scrambled to her feet, her chest aching, her head throbbing. ‘No!’ she cried, her voice raw. ‘That’s not for you!’ The figure straightened, holding the package. And then, for the first time, it made a sound she
could
understand. Not a voice, not exactly. But an impression of a voice, ancient and resonant,
echoing
in her mind. *“It is not for me, little mortal. But for another. And she is here.”*
As if on cue, the
air around the shadowy figure rippled again,
not with distortion, but with appearance
. Another figure stepped out of the shadow, this one clearly human. A woman. She was tall, with long, dark hair, and eyes that
shimmered
with an unnatural light. There was a knowing smile on her lips. She reached out, and the shadowy figure, with an unearthly bow, handed her the
velvet
-wrapped package. The woman’s gaze fixed on Rory, bright and piercing. ‘Thank you, Aurora Carter,’ she said, her voice like wind chimes. ‘Your discretion is appreciated.’ Rory stared, speechless. Her name. This woman knew her name. The woman opened the package. Inside, nestled on a bed of dark
silk
, was an object that
pulsed
with a faint, internal light. It looked like an ornate, miniature hourglass, filled with what
appeared to
be shifting starlight. She closed the package, a look of
profound
satisfaction on her face. Then, she tipped her head, a strange, almost curious expression on her features. ‘You have a protector,’ she murmured, her eyes flicking down to Rory’s chest, to where the Heartstone pendant now
pulsed
with a faint, warm glow against her skin. Rory looked down, startled. It
was glowing
. Right here, right now. A soft, almost imperceptible sigh emanated from the shadowy figure beside the woman. The air around them
began to
shimmer once more. ‘You may go now, Aurora,’ the woman said, turning, her attention already focused on the shadowy entity. ‘Your delivery is complete.’ The world around Rory blurred, the luminous wildflowers twisting into streaks of color, the ancient oaks dissolving into indistinct shapes. She stumbled forward, pushing through the
spectral
boundary of the standing stones. One moment, she was in the heart of the Grove, facing a shadowy entity and an unnervingly serene woman. The next, she was back on the muddy path in Richmond Park, the piercing cold wind biting at her cheeks, the bruised purple sky above her head finally succumbing to the true, inky blackness of night. The Heartstone still
pulsed
faintly against her skin, a small, warm ember. But even its
radiant
reassurance couldn't erase the feeling that she had
been gone
for hours, yet only moments had passed. The memory of the shadowy figure, the glowing hourglass, the knowing smile of the woman, burned in her mind. She walked, hands shoved deep in her pockets, the phantom touch of a branch still aching in her chest, the
echoes
of an ancient sigh still whispering in her ears. The Grove was silent behind her, as if it had never been. But Rory knew better. Some things, once seen,
could
never be unseen. And some deliveries, once made,
could
change everything.
created_at
"2026-02-17T02:54:03.287888+00:00"
2/17/2026, 2:54:03 AM
model
"google/gemini-2.5-flash"
app_id
182717
external_user
(null)
streamed
true
cancelled
false
latency
374
moderation_latency
(null)
generation_time
14011
tokens_prompt
812
tokens_completion
3087
native_tokens_prompt
773
native_tokens_completion
2654
native_tokens_completion_images
0
native_tokens_reasoning
0
native_tokens_cached
0
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
origin
"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byok
false
finish_reason
"stop"
native_finish_reason
"STOP"
usage
0.0068669
router
(null)
provider_responses
0
status
200
is_byok
false
latency
374
endpoint_id
"16c01e26-9b91-4d22-b487-ed35634b017d"
provider_name
"Google AI Studio"
model_permaslug
"google/gemini-2.5-flash"
api_type
"completions"
id
"gen-1771296828-G1iDBKb4yrQ2sIu9N31K"
upstream_id
(null)
total_cost
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cache_discount
(null)
upstream_inference_cost
0
provider_name
"Google AI Studio"
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
3
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
2
tagDensity
1
leniency
1
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
82.60%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
2012
totalAiIsmAdverbs
7
found
0
adverb
"truly"
count
1
1
adverb
"quickly"
count
1
2
adverb
"perfectly"
count
1
3
adverb
"lightly"
count
1
4
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
5
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
6
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
highlights
0
"truly"
1
"quickly"
2
"perfectly"
3
"lightly"
4
"slowly"
5
"slightly"
6
"suddenly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
2012
totalAiIsms
48
found
0
word
"warmth"
count
2
1
word
"velvet"
count
5
2
word
"unspoken"
count
1
3
word
"profound"
count
3
4
word
"silence"
count
7
5
word
"footsteps"
count
1
6
word
"gloom"
count
2
7
word
"sentinel"
count
1
8
word
"traced"
count
1
9
word
"down her spine"
count
1
10
word
"pulsed"
count
4
11
word
"flicker"
count
1
12
word
"rhythmic"
count
1
13
word
"stomach"
count
1
14
word
"whisper"
count
3
15
word
"scanning"
count
1
16
word
"trembled"
count
1
17
word
"could feel"
count
1
18
word
"palpable"
count
1
19
word
"weight"
count
1
20
word
"beacon"
count
1
21
word
"footfall"
count
1
22
word
"maw"
count
1
23
word
"echoing"
count
1
24
word
"shimmered"
count
1
25
word
"silk"
count
1
26
word
"spectral"
count
1
27
word
"radiant"
count
1
28
word
"echoes"
count
1
highlights
0
"warmth"
1
"velvet"
2
"unspoken"
3
"profound"
4
"silence"
5
"footsteps"
6
"gloom"
7
"sentinel"
8
"traced"
9
"down her spine"
10
"pulsed"
11
"flicker"
12
"rhythmic"
13
"stomach"
14
"whisper"
15
"scanning"
16
"trembled"
17
"could feel"
18
"palpable"
19
"weight"
20
"beacon"
21
"footfall"
22
"maw"
23
"echoing"
24
"shimmered"
25
"silk"
26
"spectral"
27
"radiant"
28
"echoes"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
1
narrationSentences
163
matches
0
"d with warmth"
99.04%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
5
narrationSentences
163
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"tried to"
2
"began to"
3
"appeared to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
173
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
41
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
2
markdownWords
15
totalWords
2012
ratio
0.007
matches
0
"could"
1
"“It is not for me, little mortal. But for another. And she is here.”"
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
10
unquotedAttributions
1
matches
0
"Just the wind, she told herself, trying to rationalize the sudden prickle on her neck."
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
32
wordCount
1867
uniqueNames
9
maxNameDensity
0.48
worstName
"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity
2
worstWindowName
"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond
3
Park
3
London
1
Yu-Fei
3
Fae
1
Grove
8
Heartstone
3
Hel
1
Rory
9
persons
0
"Yu-Fei"
1
"Rory"
places
0
"Richmond"
1
"Park"
2
"London"
3
"Fae"
4
"Grove"
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
30.95%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
126
glossingSentenceCount
6
matches
0
"felt like stepping into an older, forgo"
1
"sigh that seemed to melt into the silence"
2
"felt like an hour, maybe more, but the"
3
"felt like a beacon, drawing whatever th"
4
"not quite"
5
"looked like an ornate, miniature hourglas"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
2
per1kWords
0.994
wordCount
2012
matches
0
"Not towards the interior of the Grove, but back the way she came, towards the ancient oak standing ston"
1
"not with distortion, but with appearance"
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
173
matches
0
"walked that far"
98.24%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
44
mean
45.73
std
22.58
cv
0.494
sampleLengths
0
106
1
71
2
70
3
51
4
54
5
81
6
40
7
66
8
80
9
76
10
51
11
51
12
44
13
33
14
38
15
54
16
28
17
56
18
16
19
74
20
30
21
41
22
57
23
29
24
39
25
23
26
71
27
48
28
12
29
21
30
37
31
14
32
70
33
24
34
10
35
50
36
41
37
11
38
22
39
21
40
32
41
55
42
82
43
32
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
163
matches
0
"been gone"
75.62%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
5
totalVerbs
268
matches
0
"was being"
1
"was playing"
2
"was watching"
3
"was playing"
4
"was glowing"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
173
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
82.77%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
261
adjectiveStacks
2
stackExamples
0
"small, velvet-wrapped box,"
1
"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
12
adverbRatio
0.04597701149425287
lyAdverbCount
4
lyAdverbRatio
0.01532567049808429
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
173
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
173
mean
11.63
std
7.01
cv
0.602
sampleLengths
0
16
1
20
2
18
3
21
4
15
5
16
6
39
7
22
8
10
9
14
10
20
11
1
12
15
13
6
14
8
15
6
16
18
17
22
18
11
19
15
20
18
21
18
22
3
23
12
24
11
25
17
26
4
27
25
28
6
29
6
30
18
31
13
32
9
33
18
34
5
35
7
36
5
37
14
38
4
39
4
40
9
41
16
42
17
43
11
44
11
45
9
46
16
47
16
48
6
49
24
44.80%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
9
diversityRatio
0.27167630057803466
totalSentences
173
uniqueOpeners
47
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
12
totalSentences
155
matches
0
"Just the wind, she told"
1
"Then, through the gloom, she"
2
"Only the gnarled trunks of"
3
"Too swift to be real."
4
"Too subtle to be imagined."
5
"Then, a faint, rhythmic scratching"
6
"Only the intermittent scratching, seeming"
7
"Then, something brushed against her"
8
"Just the ancient oaks, the"
9
"More like a whisper-soft slither."
10
"Just a void."
11
"Then, she tipped her head,"
ratio
0.077
83.23%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
53
totalSentences
155
matches
0
"She consulted the frayed map"
1
"Her instructions from Yu-Fei had"
2
"She froze, her hand instinctively"
3
"It was a fool’s errand,"
4
"She should’ve just told Yu-Fei"
5
"She’d always dismissed the whispers"
6
"They should be dead, she"
7
"It was the middle of"
8
"She unzipped her backpack, her"
9
"It hadn't pulsed with warmth,"
10
"It *could* be the wind."
11
"It felt like a voice."
12
"She was being ridiculous."
13
"It was a park."
14
"She pushed deeper into the"
15
"It felt as if the"
16
"It wasn’t quite dark, not"
17
"It felt like an hour,"
18
"She whipped her head around,"
19
"Her mind was playing tricks"
ratio
0.342
100.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
111
totalSentences
155
matches
0
"The air in Richmond Park"
1
"Aurora hunched deeper into her"
2
"The path, once paved, dissolved"
3
"The setting sun had bled"
4
"She consulted the frayed map"
5
"The faded ink pointed to"
6
"Her instructions from Yu-Fei had"
7
"Rory usually enjoyed the quiet"
8
"A branch snapped nearby, a"
9
"She froze, her hand instinctively"
10
"It was a fool’s errand,"
11
"A wild goose chase into"
12
"She should’ve just told Yu-Fei"
13
"The map showed a small,"
14
"She’d always dismissed the whispers"
15
"The trees grew denser, their"
16
"The ground underfoot grew strangely"
17
"The Fae Grove."
18
"A shiver, deeper than the"
19
"The air shifted, growing eerily"
ratio
0.716
96.77%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
3
totalSentences
155
matches
0
"Now, the stories felt less"
1
"Just as she was about"
2
"As if on cue, the"
ratio
0.019
73.73%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
93
technicalSentenceCount
9
matches
0
"Aurora hunched deeper into her jacket, pulling the collar up over her mouth, her breath misting in the frigid air."
1
"The ground underfoot grew strangely smooth, almost unnaturally so, as if worn by countless footsteps over countless ages."
2
"A low, keening sound drifted through the trees, a drawn-out sigh that seemed to melt into the silence."
3
"She pushed deeper into the Grove, following the faint path that snaked through the glowing wildflowers."
4
"She flinched, pulling back, her heart leaping into her throat."
5
"She sprinted, adrenaline surging through her veins, blurring her vision."
6
"The impact knocked the wind from her lungs, leaving her gasping, dazed."
7
"Long, slender limbs, fingers that tapered into impossibly sharp points."
8
"Aurora scrambled to her feet, her chest aching, her head throbbing."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
3
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
0
88.9253%