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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR9VKMH40VQ2VKCD5WZMSH
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Model:
Qwen 3.5 Plus (2026-02-15)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
25.4s
Cost:
$0.005137
Provider:
Alibaba
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Messages
Meta
AI
The rain in Soho did not fall so much as it hung, a thick, greasy mist that clinging to the wool of coats and turned the pavement into a slick mirror of neon and shadow. Aurora Carter pushed through the heavy door of The Raven's Nest, shaking the water from her straight, shoulder-length black hair with a sharp flick of her head. The distinctive green neon sign above the entrance buzzed with a faulty hum, casting a sickly emerald glow over the puddles outside, but inside, the air was warm and smelled of aged oak, lemon polish, and the faint, metallic tang of beer lines
being cleaned
. She
navigated
the room with the practiced efficiency of someone who knew the layout better than her own flat above. The walls were a
tapestry
of forgotten worlds, covered in yellowed maps of empires that no longer existed and black-and-white photographs of faces frozen in mid-laugh or mid-shout. Rory moved toward the far end of the bar, her bright blue eyes scanning the sparse crowd. It was early for the evening rush, the kind of liminal hour where the day's fatigue hadn't yet surrendered to the night's promise. Behind the bar, Silas Blackwood
was polishing
a glass. He moved with a deliberate, economical grace, though Rory noted the familiar hitch in his step as he shifted his
weight
away from his left leg. The old knee injury from Prague, he called it, though she suspected the pain was more than just physical. At fifty-eight, Silas carried the
weight
of his years like a well-tailored coat; his grey-streaked auburn hair
was swept
back, and his neatly trimmed beard framed a mouth that rarely smiled but often quirked in amusement. On his right hand, the silver signet ring caught the low light, a flash of cold metal against the warm wood of the bar top. He looked up as she approached, his hazel eyes narrowing
slightly
before widening in recognition. The rag stopped moving. For a heartbeat, the only sound was the low thrum of the refrigerator and the distant hiss of steam from the espresso machine. "Rory," he said, the name landing
softly
between them, testing its shape after years of disuse. "I heard you were in the city, but I didn't think you'd darken my doorstep." "Evening, Si," she replied, sliding onto a stool. Her voice was steady, cool-headed, the same tone she used when delivering orders to angry customers at the Golden Empress or diffusing a tense situation on the tube. "Place looks the same. Still hiding secrets behind the maps?" Silas set the glass down and leaned forward, resting his forearms on the counter. The slight limp was less noticeable when he was still, but the tension in his shoulders betrayed him. "Some secrets keep themselves, Laila. You know that better than most." She flinched, almost imperceptibly, at the use of the alias. It was a name from a life she had buried under layers of new routines and forced
normalcy
. A name that belonged to the girl who had fled Cardiff, who had run from Evan and the bruises he left on her skin and spirit, who had sought refuge in London and in Silas's orbit. That girl felt like a stranger now, viewed through the distorted glass of five years. "I go by Aurora these days," she said, tracing the grain of the bar with a finger. She stopped when her thumb brushed the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. The white line stood out against her skin, a permanent reminder of a childhood accident that felt trivial compared to the fractures of adulthood. "Just Rory to friends." "And are we still friends?" Silas asked. He reached for a bottle of whiskey, pouring two fingers without asking. He slid the glass across the wood to her. "You vanished, Rory. One day you were here, laughing about your pre-law lectures, the next you were gone. Eva told me you left. She didn't tell me you erased yourself." Rory wrapped her hands around the glass, feeling the heat seep into her palms. She took a sip, the amber liquid burning a familiar path down her throat. "I had to go, Silas. You know why." "I know about Evan," he said, his voice dropping to that quiet, authoritative register that had once made him a formidable spymaster. "I know he was bad news. But running doesn't fix the broken parts, love. It just moves the debris to a different location." "I'm not running anymore," she countered, though the defensiveness in her tone betrayed her. "I'm working. I'm living. I deliver noodles for Yu-Fei and I sleep in the flat above your bar. That's not running. That's... surviving." "Is it?" Silas tilted his head, studying her. His gaze was penetrative, stripping away the practiced nonchalance she had cultivated since arriving in London. "You look tired, Rory. Not the tired of a double shift at the restaurant. The tired of holding your breath for five years." The accusation
hung in the air
, heavier than the smoke that used to fill the room before the smoking ban. Rory looked away, focusing on a photograph on the wall behind him. It was a grainy image of a street in Berlin, circa 1980, featuring a young Silas standing next to a man whose face had
been scratched
out. A relic of a life Silas had left behind, much like she had
tried to
leave hers. "I changed," she said quietly. "People change, Si. The girl you knew, the one who wanted to be a barrister like her father, who thought justice was something you could find in a textbook... she's gone. Brendan and Jennifer raised a lawyer, but the world made something else." "You were brilliant," Silas said, a note of regret coloring his words. "You had a mind like a steel trap. You could think your way out of any box. I saw it in you. That's why I let you stay here, why I kept an eye on you. I thought you'd rise above it." "I did rise," Rory snapped, turning back to him. Her blue eyes flashed with a sudden, sharp intensity. "I got out. I'm safe. Isn't that what matters? Isn't that what you taught me? Survival is the first objective." "Survival is the baseline," Silas corrected
gently
. "It's not the goal. You're hiding, Rory. You're hiding in plain sight, delivering food and pretending you don't see the world turning around you. You're using the skills I hinted at, the instincts you have, to stay small. To stay invisible." He reached out, his hand hovering near hers before pulling back. The silver ring on his finger glinted again. "I should have done more. When you first came to me, shaking and scared, I gave you a roof and a job. I thought that was enough. I thought keeping you off Evan's radar was the victory. But I didn't push you to heal. I let you freeze in that moment of fear." Rory felt a tightness in her chest, a constriction she hadn't anticipated. She had spent years building walls, convincing herself that her distance from her past was a strength, a tactical retreat. Hearing Silas articulate the cost of that retreat unraveled something inside her. "You couldn't fix me, Silas," she whispered. "No one could. Not even the great Spymaster." "No," he admitted, his voice rough. "I couldn't. But I could have been a friend instead of a guardian. I treated you like an asset to be protected, not a person to be known. And now, look at us. Two ghosts haunting a bar in Soho, pretending the years haven't carved canyons between us." Rory looked down at her drink. The ice had melted, diluting the whiskey, blurring the edges of the amber pool. She thought of Evan, of the fear that still prickled at the back of her neck when a shadow moved too
quickly
. She thought of her parents in Cardiff, wondering if their daughter was dead or just lost. She thought of the delivery bag slung over her chair, filled with containers of kung pao chicken that needed to be dropped off in twenty minutes. "I'm not a ghost," she said, lifting her head. Her voice was firmer now, reclaiming some of that old, quick-witted resolve. "And I'm not done yet. Maybe I froze for a while. Maybe I hid. But I'm still here, Silas. And so are you." Silas watched her for a long moment, the silence stretching between them, filled with the
unspoken
things they would never say aloud. The regret of time lost, the paths not taken, the versions of themselves that existed only in memory. Finally, the corner of his mouth twitched, not quite a smile, but an acknowledgment. "Yes," he said, picking up his own glass. "Here we are." He raised the glass in a toast. Rory clinked hers against it, the sound sharp and clear in the dim room. They drank, the whiskey tasting of smoke and time, a bitter medicine for wounds that had never
truly
closed. Outside, the rain continued to fall, washing the streets of London clean, while inside The Raven's Nest, two old friends sat in the quiet understanding that some things could never be fixed, only endured.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
14.2857%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
14
adverbTagCount
5
adverbTags
0
"he said, the name landing softly between them, testing its shape after years of disuse [softly]"
1
"he said, his voice dropping to that quiet, authoritative register that had once made him a formidable spymaster [once]"
2
"she said quietly [quietly]"
3
"Rory snapped, turning back to him [back]"
4
"Silas corrected gently [gently]"
67.9693%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1561
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"gently"
count
1
1
adverb
"quickly"
count
1
2
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
3
adverb
"softly"
count
1
4
adverb
"truly"
count
1
highlights
0
"gently"
1
"quickly"
2
"slightly"
3
"softly"
4
"truly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
61.5631%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1561
totalAiIsms
6
found
0
word
"tapestry"
count
1
1
word
"unspoken"
count
1
2
word
"normalcy"
count
1
3
word
"weight"
count
2
4
word
"navigated"
count
1
highlights
0
"tapestry"
1
"unspoken"
2
"normalcy"
3
"weight"
4
"navigated"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"hung in the air"
count
1
highlights
0
"hung in the air"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
67
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
67
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"tried to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
85
matches
(empty)
80.2536%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
28
mean
55.32
std
23.84
cv
0.431
sampleLengths
0
107
1
88
2
115
3
42
4
31
5
46
6
43
7
79
8
59
9
58
10
36
11
45
12
37
13
47
14
76
15
48
16
54
17
38
18
48
19
72
20
44
21
15
22
54
23
84
24
44
25
54
26
11
27
74
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
3
totalSentences
67
matches
0
"being cleaned"
1
"was swept"
2
"been scratched"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
173
matches
0
"was polishing"
88.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1085
adjectiveStacks
2
stackExamples
0
"small, crescent-shaped scar"
1
"old, quick-witted resolve."
adverbCount
36
adverbRatio
0.03317972350230415
lyAdverbCount
15
lyAdverbRatio
0.013824884792626729
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
85
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
85
mean
18.22
std
10.78
cv
0.592
sampleLengths
0
35
1
27
2
45
3
20
4
28
5
17
6
23
7
9
8
26
9
19
10
36
11
25
12
15
13
4
14
23
15
16
16
15
17
8
18
28
19
10
20
14
21
18
22
11
23
10
24
18
25
36
26
15
27
17
28
14
29
24
30
4
31
7
32
12
33
9
34
30
35
14
36
14
37
8
38
22
39
23
40
14
41
23
42
8
43
16
44
23
45
20
46
12
47
27
48
17
49
5
52.1569%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
9
diversityRatio
0.3764705882352941
totalSentences
85
uniqueOpeners
32
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
14
fancyCount
13
fancyTags
0
"he said, the name landing softly between them, testing its shape after years of disuse (say, test)"
1
"she replied, sliding onto a stool (reply, slide)"
2
"she said, tracing the grain of the bar with a finger (say, trace)"
3
"he said, his voice dropping to that quiet, authoritative register that had once made him a formidable spymaster (say, drop once make)"
4
"she countered, though the defensiveness in her tone betrayed her (counter, betray)"
5
"she said quietly (say quietly)"
6
"Silas said, a note of regret coloring his words (say, coloring)"
7
"Rory snapped, turning back to him (snap, turn)"
8
"Silas corrected gently (correct gently)"
9
"she whispered (whisper)"
10
"he admitted, his voice rough (admit)"
11
"she said, lifting her head (say, lift)"
12
"he said, picking up his own glass (say, pick up)"
80.2487%