| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she called again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.733 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.091 | |
| 93.06% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1440 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1440 | | totalAiIsms | 35 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "trembled" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "down her spine" | | 6 | "dancing" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "thundered" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "familiar" | | 11 | "comforting" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "traced" | | 14 | "echo" | | 15 | "stomach" | | 16 | "echoed" | | 17 | "fractured" | | 18 | "throbbed" | | 19 | "wavering" | | 20 | "vibrated" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "shiver down spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "A shiver ran down her spine" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 179 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 179 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 182 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1429 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 1388 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.72 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Aurora | 10 | | Grove | 4 | | Brittle | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Silence | 2 | | Moonlight | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Silence" | | 5 | "Moonlight" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 62.28% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 114 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like Eva—familiar, comforting" | | 1 | "seemed almost frantic" | | 2 | "looked like a tiny face, crying tears of" | | 3 | "as if responding to the pendant" |
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| 60.04% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.4 | | wordCount | 1429 | | matches | | 0 | "Not cold granite, but living wood" | | 1 | "No answer but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 182 | | matches | | |
| 90.46% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 47.63 | | std | 22.23 | | cv | 0.467 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 100 | | 1 | 70 | | 2 | 101 | | 3 | 64 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 53 | | 6 | 71 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 55 | | 10 | 69 | | 11 | 48 | | 12 | 61 | | 13 | 58 | | 14 | 52 | | 15 | 56 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 60 | | 23 | 47 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 54 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 12 |
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| 99.38% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 179 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "were gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 264 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 182 | | ratio | 0.066 | | matches | | 0 | "Outside, Richmond Park lay silent—no coyotes on the prowl, no prowling foxes." | | 1 | "The memory of it flickered brief and bright—fear, then pain, then relief." | | 2 | "Eva’s text had been simple: “Meet me in the Grove, Rory. It’s important.” Aurora had tried to argue—deliveries to make, a flat to clean—but something in the pendant’s warmth had called her out." | | 3 | "The time-slowing enchantment wasn’t new; she’d read legends in old books." | | 4 | "The beam of her flashlight landed on a cluster of bluebells—glowing faintly, phosphorescent in the dark." | | 5 | "A white shape glinted between two oaks—no more than a second, a blur at the edge of her vision." | | 6 | "The air tasted of damp earth and something coppery—like fresh blood." | | 7 | "It had sounded like Eva—familiar, comforting." | | 8 | "A figure stood at the edge of light—too tall, too thin, its head canted at an impossible angle." | | 9 | "But the pendants warmth held her in place—tethered, luring." | | 10 | "Aurora realized its face resembled hers—smooth, unblemished, the scar absent." | | 11 | "She realized then the truth—this place had marked her long ago." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1402 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.03281027104136947 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006419400855920114 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 182 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 182 | | mean | 7.85 | | std | 4.48 | | cv | 0.571 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 42.86% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.2692307692307692 | | totalSentences | 182 | | uniqueOpeners | 49 | |
| 79.84% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 167 | | matches | | 0 | "Then every whisper stopped." | | 1 | "Then she burst through the" | | 2 | "Only unremarkable woodland stretched before" | | 3 | "Somewhere far off, the city" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 59.52% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 167 | | matches | | 0 | "Their petals trembled in a" | | 1 | "She drew in a breath" | | 2 | "She clicked her flashlight on," | | 3 | "She pressed her palm against" | | 4 | "She’d come because the pendant" | | 5 | "Her watch said ten past" | | 6 | "She advanced, stepping over tangled" | | 7 | "She heard a twig snap" | | 8 | "They shouldn’t do that." | | 9 | "She swung the flashlight, the" | | 10 | "Her pulse ratcheted faster." | | 11 | "She forced her jaw to" | | 12 | "You’re imagining it." | | 13 | "She steadied her breathing and" | | 14 | "She wiped a bead of" | | 15 | "She looked up: the sky" | | 16 | "She frowned, shone her light" | | 17 | "She lifted the beam again." | | 18 | "She braced herself against a" | | 19 | "Her heart thundered." |
| | ratio | 0.401 | |
| 28.86% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 144 | | totalSentences | 167 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter’s boots sank into" | | 1 | "Moonlight pooled in silvery patches" | | 2 | "Their petals trembled in a" | | 3 | "The Heartstone pendant at her" | | 4 | "She drew in a breath" | | 5 | "Here, every sound felt borrowed" | | 6 | "She clicked her flashlight on," | | 7 | "Aurora’s fingers tightened around the" | | 8 | "A childhood accident." | | 9 | "The memory of it flickered" | | 10 | "She pressed her palm against" | | 11 | "Here, fear gathered again, slow" | | 12 | "She’d come because the pendant" | | 13 | "Eva’s text had been simple:" | | 14 | "The time-slowing enchantment wasn’t new;" | | 15 | "Her watch said ten past" | | 16 | "She advanced, stepping over tangled" | | 17 | "She heard a twig snap" | | 18 | "The beam of her flashlight" | | 19 | "They shouldn’t do that." |
| | ratio | 0.862 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 167 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Moonlight pooled in silvery patches on the ground, illuminating wildflowers that should have withered months ago." | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant at her throat pulsed warm against her sternum, as though it recognized something buried in these woods." | | 2 | "Hollow oaks arched overhead, their bark slick with moisture that wasn’t there." |
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| 34.09% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she called again, higher" | | 1 | "She lifted, the stone glowing" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva’s text had (have)" | | 1 | "she yelled (yell)" | | 2 | "the night spoke (speak)" | | 3 | "the creature whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "She whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.833 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |