Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMRA1D63NN8K6H1GGWS5XHG

Run Details

Duration:
40.7s
Cost:
$0.004545
Provider:
WandB

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The crescent moon hung low in the black sky as Rory slipped through the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the Fae Grove. The silver chain of her pendant caught the faint light, and the deep crimson gemstone pulsed with a warmth that intensified the closer she got to the center of the clearing. She had felt it all day—a persistent hum against her skin that grew stronger as evening approached, urging her to return to this place she had discovered only weeks ago. Rory shifted the backpack on her shoulders, its weight negligible but present. She had come prepared with a flashlight, water, and her phone—though the battery had been draining strangely all day, regardless of how many times she charged it. Her bright blue eyes scanned the perimeter of the grove, taking in the wildflowers that bloomed unnaturally in the moonlight. They shouldn't be this vibrant in late autumn, but then again, the Grove defied all logic. "Stupid place to come alone at night," she muttered to herself, the sound swallowed almost immediately by the unnatural stillness of the clearing. The pendant's warmth had been her guide. Since it had arrived anonymously in her mailbox two months ago, she had noticed its peculiar behavior—pulsing when she crossed certain thresholds, warming at specific times of day. Tonight, it had grown hot against her skin, almost burning, until she finally gave in and made the journey to Richmond Park. She needed answers. The dreams had been getting worse—the same strange landscape, the feeling of being watched, the whispers that seemed to curl directly into her mind. And always, the pendant featured prominently, glowing like an emergency beacon in the darkness. As she moved deeper into the Grove, Rory caught movement at the edge of her vision. She froze, turning her head slowly to the left. Nothing. Just the gentle sway of wildflowers in a breeze she couldn't feel. Her fingers unconsciously traced the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a nervous habit she had developed since childhood. "Probably just an animal," she reassured herself, though Richmond Park's deer rarely ventured this deep into the woods at night. The pendant pulsed again, more insistently this time. She unclasped the chain and held the gemstone in her palm. The faint inner glow brightened, casting eerie red shadows across her face. The warmth spread up her arm, pleasant at first, then almost uncomfortably hot. A sound fractured the silence—a dry rustling, like paper being crumpled from a distance. Rory's head snapped in the direction of the noise. Still nothing. The wildflowers remained perfectly still, defying the sound that had clearly come from their midst. "Hello?" she called out, her voice steady despite the quickening of her pulse. "Is someone there?" Only silence answered. But it was a different kind of silence now—thicker, heavier, as if the air itself had solidified around her. The temperature had dropped several degrees since she entered the Grove, and Rory wished she had worn more than just a light jacket over her shirt. She glanced at her watch. 11:47 PM. When she looked up again, the moon had moved across the sky as if hours had passed. Rory shook her head. That wasn't right. The time distortion was stronger tonight than during her previous visits. The pendant in her hand grew colder abruptly, the warmth vanishing as if it had never been. At the same moment, a whisper seemed to brush against her ear, though the words were indistinct—more sibilance than language. She spun around, finding only empty space. "Okay, time to go," she decided, moving swiftly back the way she had come. But the standing stones were no longer where she remembered them. The perimeter had shifted, or perhaps she had become disoriented in the strange darkness. The wildflowers seemed to glow with a faint luminescence now, casting twisted shadows that danced just beyond her reach. Another sound—this time, like footsteps walking on fallen leaves, circling around her position. Rory stopped, listening intently. The footsteps stopped too. "I know you're there," she said, her voice firm despite the fear creeping up her spine. "Show yourself." A figure detached itself from the shadows between two ancient oaks. Tall and impossibly thin, it moved with a grace that seemed to defy physics. Rory couldn't make out features—just a silhouette that seemed to absorb the moonlight rather than reflect it. "Who are you?" she demanded, taking a step back. The figure tilted its head, a gesture that seemed almost curious. Then it took a step forward, and Rory saw that its feet never quite touched the ground. As it moved into a patch of moonlight, she could see that it was not exactly solid—more like a hole in the shape of a person, a piece of darkness given form. The pendant in her hand began to vibrate, a low hum that matched the frequency of the whispers now growing louder in her mind. Words began to form amidst the sibilance. *"Laila..."* Rory flinched. No one had called her Laila since she was a child—a nickname her grandmother had used that had died with the old woman. *"We've been waiting for you, Laila,"* the whispers continued, now clearly coming from the figure before her, though its mouth—if it had one—never moved.* "How do you know that name?" Rory asked, her voice barely above a whisper. The figure drifted closer, and with it came the scent of ozone and something sweetly rotten. The air grew colder still, and Rory's breath misted before her. *"The door is opening,"* the whispers said. *"The realms bleed together. You feel it, don't you? The pendant calls to you. It knows what you are."* "I don't know what you're talking about." Rory gripped the pendant tighter, its gemstone now ice-cold against her palm. "I'm going to leave now." The figure's head tilted again, this time at an unnatural angle. *"You cannot leave until the debt is paid."* With sudden clarity, Rory remembered the stories her grandmother used to tell—tales of the Fae and their bargains, of doors between worlds that opened on certain nights when the veil was thin. Stories she had dismissed as fairy tales, the ramblings of an old woman with too much imagination and time on her hands. The figure extended an arm—long, skeletal, ending in fingers that tapered to nothingness. *"The pendant was merely the key. Now that you are here, the lock must be turned."* Rory turned to run, but the ground beneath her feet had grown soft, almost liquid. The wildflowers twisted into grasping shapes that snagged at her ankles. The pendant's chain, still looped around her neck, tightened like a noose. More figures emerged from the shadows between the trees—dozens of them, all variations of the first. None had distinct faces, but she could feel their attention focusing on her, like a physical weight. *"What do you want?"* she cried out, struggling against the flowers that held her fast. The first figure drifted closer until it was almost touching her. The whispers in her mind resolved into a single, clear thought that was not her own. *"We want you to remember who you are, Aurora Carter. We want you to remember Malphora."* The name struck her like a physical blow, unlocking something deep in her memory. Images flooded her mind—a place that looked nothing like Earth, a throne made of twisted roots, a crown of stars that had sat upon her brow. As the memories surfaced, the pendant began to glow with an intense crimson light, casting the entire Grove in bloody hues. The figures recoiled from its radiance, their forms flickering like faulty projections. Rory looked down at the gemstone in her hand, understanding dawning with terrifying clarity. She hadn't found the pendant by accident. It hadn't been sent to her randomly. It had been a summons. And tonight, she had answered.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"she muttered to herself, the sound swallowed almost immediately by the unnatural stillness of the clearing [almost immediately]"
1"she reassured herself, though Richmond Park's deer rarely ventured this deep into the woods at night [rarely]"
2"she decided, moving swiftly back the way she had come [swiftly]"
3"the whispers continued, now clearly coming from the figure before her, though its mouth—if it had one—never moved [clearly]"
70.0599% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1336
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"sweetly"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"slowly"
2"sweetly"
3"barely above a whisper"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.6048% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1336
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"beacon"
count1
1
word"fractured"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"footsteps"
count2
4
word"amidst"
count1
highlights
0"beacon"
1"fractured"
2"weight"
3"footsteps"
4"amidst"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences92
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount8
narrationSentences92
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences95
matches
0"saw that its"
1"see that it"
2"know that name"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean32.9
std18.13
cv0.551
sampleLengths
087
175
223
357
441
557
620
744
840
916
1048
1142
1244
1314
1444
1521
1618
1742
189
1960
2031
211
2225
2324
2414
2527
2626
2724
2819
2954
3029
3138
3233
3315
3427
3516
3640
3733
3833
395
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences92
matches
0"being watched"
1"being crumpled"
2"been sent"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs196
matches(empty)
74.7838% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1224
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"ice-cold against her"
adverbCount66
adverbRatio0.05392156862745098
lyAdverbCount26
lyAdverbRatio0.021241830065359478
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean13.85
std7.61
cv0.55
sampleLengths
026
131
230
312
427
520
616
723
87
928
1022
113
1224
1314
1416
159
161
1712
1819
1920
208
2111
2212
2313
2414
259
262
2715
2813
293
303
3119
3226
335
342
3517
364
373
3811
3917
4020
417
4214
4311
4414
4519
4613
474
484
4916
62.8070% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.45263157894736844
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners43
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"she muttered to herself, the sound swallowed almost immediately by the unnatural stillness of the clearing (mutter)"
1"she reassured herself, though Richmond Park's deer rarely ventured this deep into the woods at night (reassure rarely venture)"
2"she decided, moving swiftly back the way she had come (decide, swiftly back come)"
3"she said, her voice firm despite the fear creeping up her spine (say, firm creep up)"
4"demanded (demand)"
5"the whispers continued, now clearly coming from the figure before her, though its mouth—if it had one—never moved (continue, clearly come have does not never move)"
6"cried (cry)"
79.7209%