| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.08 | |
| 73.12% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1302 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "cautiously" | | 3 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1302 | | totalAiIsms | 32 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "scanned" | | 2 | "unreadable" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "glistening" | | 6 | "tinged" | | 7 | "desire" | | 8 | "flicked" | | 9 | "echo" | | 10 | "shimmered" | | 11 | "dancing" | | 12 | "dance" | | 13 | "whisper" | | 14 | "tangible" | | 15 | "unraveling" | | 16 | "reminder" | | 17 | "amidst" | | 18 | "lilt" | | 19 | "peril" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1287 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.26% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 1036 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.25 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Veil | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Aurora | 13 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Isolde | 8 | | Dymas | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Veil" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Blade" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.873 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 5.77% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if breathing" | | 1 | "spices that seemed to glow with inner fire, chalices filled with liquid light" | | 2 | "as if sensing the concentrated power here" |
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| 44.60% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.554 | | wordCount | 1287 | | matches | | 0 | "not of skill alone, but of desire" | | 1 | "not as prey, but as watchers" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 79.85% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 35.75 | | std | 15.35 | | cv | 0.429 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 79 | | 1 | 46 | | 2 | 50 | | 3 | 43 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 43 | | 7 | 57 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 54 | | 10 | 36 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 46 | | 15 | 50 | | 16 | 32 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 37 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 37 | | 21 | 40 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 44 | | 26 | 42 | | 27 | 49 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 44 | | 33 | 36 | | 34 | 60 | | 35 | 8 |
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| 99.51% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 171 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 75 | | ratio | 0.147 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted rich—ripe with fruit, honey, and something darker, sweeter, like the breath of an ancient orchard at midnight." | | 1 | "They moved forward, stepping between rows of glistening fruit, their colors impossible to name—glowing oranges that hummed faintly, apples that gleamed with dew-bright silver, curling tendrils of grapes that shifted shade like oil on water." | | 2 | "A cool breeze whispered through the branches, but it wasn’t cool—it pressed warm, a gentle persuasion that made her skin prickle." | | 3 | "They pressed deeper, moving cautiously between groves where exotic flowers bloomed in impossible hues—petals that shimmered with pearls, edges that flickered like flame." | | 4 | "The wild blossoms released scents that scrambled Aurora’s thoughts—lavender and musk, honey and decay, sweet smoke and fresh rain all tangled into one." | | 5 | "The fruits pulsed stronger, and for a heartbeat, shadows gathered beneath the branches—figures made of smoke and hunger, eyes burning faintly like dying embers." | | 6 | "But the seer only smiled—a slow, cryptic curl of lips." | | 7 | "The place was magnificent—glorious excess made real—but beneath the beauty was something raw and unsettling, like the edges of a dream unraveling." | | 8 | "Her fingers curled slightly, the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist itching—an old wound stirring anew, a reminder of their mortal fragility amidst such strange, immortal hunger." | | 9 | "She took a slow breath, feeling the energy of Dymas seep beneath her skin—a world of hunger cloaked in splendor, of endless feasts and invisible chains." | | 10 | "From deep within, the faint sound of laughter—rich, ravenous, and edged with something cruel—floated on the scented air." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1055 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.035071090047393366 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01800947867298578 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 75 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 75 | | mean | 17.16 | | std | 9.36 | | cv | 0.546 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 33 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 35 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 33 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 40 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 83.11% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5066666666666667 | | totalSentences | 75 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "She blinked, adjusting to the" | | 1 | "They did not speak, but" | | 2 | "Her pale lavender eyes scanned" | | 3 | "She swallowed, watching one vine" | | 4 | "They moved forward, stepping between" | | 5 | "They reached out, fingers nearly" | | 6 | "Their form flickered, the hum" | | 7 | "They pressed deeper, moving cautiously" | | 8 | "Its bark was dappled silver," | | 9 | "They moved past the tree" | | 10 | "Her fingers curled slightly, the" | | 11 | "they said, the whisper of" | | 12 | "She took a slow breath," |
| | ratio | 0.22 | |
| 36.27% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped through the shimmer," | | 1 | "The air tasted rich—ripe with" | | 2 | "She blinked, adjusting to the" | | 3 | "They did not speak, but" | | 4 | "Isolde drifted forward, her silver" | | 5 | "Her pale lavender eyes scanned" | | 6 | "Aurora started, voice hushed, as" | | 7 | "She swallowed, watching one vine" | | 8 | "Isolde said, her voice low," | | 9 | "Nyx’s shadowy form stirred uneasily." | | 10 | "Aurora swallowed hard, her fingers" | | 11 | "Every heartbeat sent a subtle" | | 12 | "They moved forward, stepping between" | | 13 | "The ground beneath their feet" | | 14 | "Isolde murmured, her eyes narrowing" | | 15 | "Aurora’s gaze flicked upward, where" | | 16 | "A cool breeze whispered through" | | 17 | "Nyx’s shadow flickered as they" | | 18 | "They reached out, fingers nearly" | | 19 | "Isolde said, voice distant" |
| | ratio | 0.847 | |
| 84.75% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "Even in this strange place," |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "Behind her, Nyx emerged, their form flowing and coalescing from shadow, fingers trailing faint wisps of darkness that vanished on the golden air." | | 1 | "Aurora swallowed hard, her fingers twitching near the small Heartstone pendant that hung low against her chest, its crimson glow faint but insistent." | | 2 | "They moved forward, stepping between rows of glistening fruit, their colors impossible to name—glowing oranges that hummed faintly, apples that gleamed with dew…" | | 3 | "Aurora’s gaze flicked upward, where massive fig trees bore fruit larger than her head, some ripening and bursting open to reveal bright seeds and strands of lig…" | | 4 | "A cool breeze whispered through the branches, but it wasn’t cool—it pressed warm, a gentle persuasion that made her skin prickle." | | 5 | "Nyx’s shadow flickered as they paused beside a low bush heavy with iridescent berries, which pulsed softly as if breathing." | | 6 | "They pressed deeper, moving cautiously between groves where exotic flowers bloomed in impossible hues—petals that shimmered with pearls, edges that flickered li…" | | 7 | "The wild blossoms released scents that scrambled Aurora’s thoughts—lavender and musk, honey and decay, sweet smoke and fresh rain all tangled into one." | | 8 | "They moved past the tree into a clearing where tables stretched, laden with impossible feasts: platters heaving with fruits that shimmered and sang softly, dish…" | | 9 | "The pendant against Aurora's chest pulsed steadily, its warmth growing as if sensing the concentrated power here." | | 10 | "A sudden rustle drew their eyes to the edge of the clearing, where figures moved through the golden haze: pale beings dressed in fabrics that shimmered with the…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, her voice low, ornate, a riddle wrapped in a sigh" | | 1 | "Isolde said, voice distant," | | 2 | "Their form flickered, the hum of unseen life pulsing beneath the amber light" | | 3 | "Nyx said, their voice barely audible, a whisper wrapped in wind" | | 4 | "they said, the whisper of their voice stirring the dust" |
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| 70.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.32 | | leniency | 0.64 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.16 | |