Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMRAF100JJGBYPXG0JS38KS

Run Details

Duration:
26.0s
Cost:
$0.003388
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora stepped through the shimmer, the Veil fluttering like a silken curtain brushing her cheek, and found herself standing beneath a sky the color of warm amber, heavy and thick with golden light. The air tasted rich—ripe with fruit, honey, and something darker, sweeter, like the breath of an ancient orchard at midnight. She blinked, adjusting to the unfamiliar brightness, and saw the sprawling vineyards stretching endlessly, their gnarled vines heavy with plump grapes the size of her fists. Behind her, Nyx emerged, their form flowing and coalescing from shadow, fingers trailing faint wisps of darkness that vanished on the golden air. They did not speak, but the faint violet glow of their eyes, like dim stars embedded in living night, flickered with cautious curiosity. Isolde drifted forward, her silver hair catching the amber light and spilling it like mercury over the land. Her pale lavender eyes scanned every detail, serene and unreadable. Even in this strange place, she was as much a part of the scene as the ancient oaks silhouetted against the horizon. “This is…” Aurora started, voice hushed, as if afraid that the very air might shatter the moment. She swallowed, watching one vine curl up to a low, twisting tree and curl again into a knot that pulsed faintly with a soft, sap-like glow. “Dymas,” Isolde said, her voice low, ornate, a riddle wrapped in a sigh. “Where appetite becomes obsession and the flesh of the earth feeds the hunger of souls.” Nyx’s shadowy form stirred uneasily. “The scent… thick as a feast laid out for centuries, layered with want and decay.” Aurora swallowed hard, her fingers twitching near the small Heartstone pendant that hung low against her chest, its crimson glow faint but insistent. Every heartbeat sent a subtle warmth pulsing through it, and she felt uncomfortably aware of how alive it seemed here. They moved forward, stepping between rows of glistening fruit, their colors impossible to name—glowing oranges that hummed faintly, apples that gleamed with dew-bright silver, curling tendrils of grapes that shifted shade like oil on water. The ground beneath their feet was soft and warm, a rich earth tinged with sweetness and a faint undercurrent of something spoiled. “It’s a realm of excess,” Isolde murmured, her eyes narrowing as they took in the impressive orchards, vineyards, and gardens stretching in every direction. “Born from desire, cultivation without end.” Aurora’s gaze flicked upward, where massive fig trees bore fruit larger than her head, some ripening and bursting open to reveal bright seeds and strands of light that dripped down like glowing nectar. A cool breeze whispered through the branches, but it wasn’t cool—it pressed warm, a gentle persuasion that made her skin prickle. Nyx’s shadow flickered as they paused beside a low bush heavy with iridescent berries, which pulsed softly as if breathing. They reached out, fingers nearly touching, then recoiled. “Living things. Not quite alive, not quite dead.” “So many souls caught here,” Isolde said, voice distant, “bound by their appetites—helbound, longing for release or redemption, trapped in endless cycles.” Aurora’s eyes narrowed. “Feels like… a trap. Something waiting to devour us.” Nyx tilted their head, and a breeze stirred, whisking dust and faint twin scents of roasted spices and spoiled fruit. “I feel the hunger… an echo in the shadows.” Their form flickered, the hum of unseen life pulsing beneath the amber light. They pressed deeper, moving cautiously between groves where exotic flowers bloomed in impossible hues—petals that shimmered with pearls, edges that flickered like flame. The wild blossoms released scents that scrambled Aurora’s thoughts—lavender and musk, honey and decay, sweet smoke and fresh rain all tangled into one. An enormous tree, its trunk as thick as a castle tower, rose before them. Its bark was dappled silver, veins of dark bronze pulsing faintly like a beating heart. Hanging heavy from its massive branches were lantern-shaped fruits glowing with a soft inner light, casting dancing shadows over the ground. Isolde reached out, fingers brushing the smooth surface. The fruits pulsed stronger, and for a heartbeat, shadows gathered beneath the branches—figures made of smoke and hunger, eyes burning faintly like dying embers. Aurora felt a wash of unease. “Isolde…?” But the seer only smiled—a slow, cryptic curl of lips. “All is as it should be,” she whispered. “Here, the feast devours and gives in turn. Appetite is a cycle, and the shadows dance to its rhythm.” “Shadows that hunger,” Nyx said, their voice barely audible, a whisper wrapped in wind. “Like me… but eternal, bound to this place by want, not choice.” Aurora’s hand brushed against the Fae-Forged Blade at her side, its moonsilver surface cool, grounding, a tangible link to her own power. The blade felt alive here, faintly shining, a sliver of moonlight piercing the amber haze. They moved past the tree into a clearing where tables stretched, laden with impossible feasts: platters heaving with fruits that shimmered and sang softly, dishes crusted with spices that seemed to glow with inner fire, chalices filled with liquid light. Aurora’s breath caught. The place was magnificent—glorious excess made real—but beneath the beauty was something raw and unsettling, like the edges of a dream unraveling. “This is where the culinary competitions take place,” Isolde said softly. “Chefs and souls alike pit their wills against one another, crafting indulgences that bind, enchant, and sometimes destroy.” Nyx circled, shadow rippling across the soft ground. “A contest not of skill alone, but of desire and desperation. Each bite a vow, each flavor a chain.” The pendant against Aurora's chest pulsed steadily, its warmth growing as if sensing the concentrated power here. Her fingers curled slightly, the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist itching—an old wound stirring anew, a reminder of their mortal fragility amidst such strange, immortal hunger. A sudden rustle drew their eyes to the edge of the clearing, where figures moved through the golden haze: pale beings dressed in fabrics that shimmered with the softest hues of dawn, their faces serene yet marked with faint lines of suffering. One stepped forward, eyes deep and mournful. “Guests from another realm,” the voice was clear but carried a musical lilt, “you walk where the Veil wears thin, where hunger shapes flesh and spirit alike. Beware the feast, for gluttony’s grip is subtle—what you take, it will ask in return.” Isolde inclined her head. “A fair warning, and one well given.” Aurora’s gaze met the figure’s, steadying herself against the strange pull of the place. “We didn’t come looking to indulge,” she said. “We came for answers.” The figure’s eyes glimmered. “Answers come with a price, chosen or unchosen. Here, nothing stirs without cost.” Nyx’s form shifted, ink-dark against the amber light. “Then we will be cautious shadows,” they said, the whisper of their voice stirring the dust. “We walk not as prey, but as watchers.” The golden sky shifted imperceptibly, the warmth deepening, the scents weaving tighter around them, pulling Aurora’s senses taut. She took a slow breath, feeling the energy of Dymas seep beneath her skin—a world of hunger cloaked in splendor, of endless feasts and invisible chains. Ahead, more paths wound through glowing orchards and gardens so vast their end vanished in the heat-hazed distance. From deep within, the faint sound of laughter—rich, ravenous, and edged with something cruel—floated on the scented air. Aurora tightened her grip on the pendant and the blade, stepping forward with Nyx and Isolde at her side, each drawn by a different thread of this strange palace of gluttony. As their feet sank softly into the warm earth, they knew the path ahead would be tangled with temptation and peril, a banquet of discovery served alongside shadowed danger. In the heart of Dymas, the feast awaited.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.6667% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Nyx said, their voice barely audible, a whisper wrapped in wind [barely]"
1"Isolde said softly [softly]"
46.4832% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1308
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count4
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"slightly"
2"softly"
3"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1308
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"tangible"
count1
1
word"tinged"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count4
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"shimmered"
count3
5
word"glistening"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"dance"
count1
8
word"dancing"
count1
9
word"amidst"
count1
10
word"echo"
count1
11
word"unraveling"
count1
highlights
0"tangible"
1"tinged"
2"flickered"
3"flicked"
4"shimmered"
5"glistening"
6"unreadable"
7"dance"
8"dancing"
9"amidst"
10"echo"
11"unraveling"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences61
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences61
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
79.8516% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean35.75
std15.35
cv0.429
sampleLengths
079
146
250
343
428
520
643
757
830
954
1036
1122
1212
1342
1446
1550
1632
177
1837
1926
2037
2140
2225
2329
2427
2544
2642
2749
2811
2926
3017
3132
3244
3336
3460
358
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences61
matches
0"was dappled"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs171
matches(empty)
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1055
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.034123222748815164
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.01800947867298578
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean17.16
std9.36
cv0.546
sampleLengths
033
120
226
323
423
518
610
722
817
926
1013
1115
125
1315
1423
1520
1635
1722
1824
196
2033
2121
2220
238
248
2522
263
279
2820
2922
3023
3123
3214
3315
3421
358
3624
376
381
3910
408
4119
4214
4312
4422
4515
4640
473
4822
4911
83.1111% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5066666666666667
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners38
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"started (start)"
1"Isolde said, her voice low, ornate, a riddle wrapped in a sigh (say, ornate, wrap)"
2"Isolde murmured, her eyes narrowing as they took in the impressive orchards, vineyards, and gardens stretching in every direction (murmur, narrow take gardens stretching)"
3"Isolde said, voice distant (say, voice)"
4"she whispered (whisper)"
5"Nyx said, their voice barely audible, a whisper wrapped in wind (say, wrap)"
6"Isolde said softly (say softly)"
7"the voice was clear but carried a musical lilt (be carry)"
8"they said, the whisper of their voice stirring the dust (say, stir)"
80.5949%