| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.86% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1321 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "completely" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 31.87% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1321 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "perfect" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "navigating" | | 6 | "gloom" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "could feel" | | 11 | "anticipation" | | 12 | "footsteps" | | 13 | "shattered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.43% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 118 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "managed to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 124 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 17 | | totalWords | 1318 | | ratio | 0.013 | | matches | | 0 | "“Keep the scent,”" | | 1 | "“Follow the warmth until you hit the stones.”" | | 2 | "Get out. Run." | | 3 | "Click, click, click." |
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| 97.22% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The stones marked the boundary, they said." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 1270 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.71 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Silas" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 38.89% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "sky that seemed to tilt at an angle that hurt her eyes to focus on" | | 1 | "looked like a painting of a garden that h" | | 2 | "looked like a discarded puppet" | | 3 | "looked like rotting leaves and dried mud" |
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| 48.25% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.517 | | wordCount | 1318 | | matches | | 0 | "Not from the ground, but from high above" | | 1 | "not down, but inward, into the crushing dark of the stone’s pull" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 124 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 34.68 | | std | 21.55 | | cv | 0.621 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 76 | | 1 | 78 | | 2 | 64 | | 3 | 58 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 69 | | 6 | 62 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 66 | | 10 | 40 | | 11 | 56 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 53 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 51 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 57 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 54 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 45 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 34 | | 37 | 38 |
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| 87.42% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "were elongated" | | 1 | "been polished" | | 2 | "being blown" | | 3 | "were splayed" | | 4 | "was gone" | | 5 | "was tilted" |
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| 77.11% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 217 | | matches | | 0 | "was constantly blowing" | | 1 | "was walking" | | 2 | "wasn’t walking" | | 3 | "was coming" |
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| 27.65% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 124 | | ratio | 0.04 | | matches | | 0 | "Here, in Richmond Park, the air was different—thinner, clinging to the skin like damp wool." | | 1 | "To her left, the wildflowers—codified as blooming year-round in the park records—were vibrant against the gloom." | | 2 | "It wasn't a paranoia born of imagination; it was a physical pressure, a weight pressing down on her shoulder blades, as if a draft was constantly blowing against the back of her neck." | | 3 | "She wasn’t walking on a path anymore; she was walking on the earth, exposed, naked." | | 4 | "It wasn't being blown by wind; the air in the grove was perfectly still." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1277 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.03445575567736883 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010180109631949883 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 124 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 124 | | mean | 10.63 | | std | 6.58 | | cv | 0.619 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 33 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 25 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 33.87% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 20 | | diversityRatio | 0.27419354838709675 | | totalSentences | 124 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the silence." | | 1 | "Then came the sound of" | | 2 | "Instead, a shape coalesced from" | | 3 | "Then came the sound of" | | 4 | "Instead, they floated upward, weaving" |
| | ratio | 0.044 | |
| 58.60% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "She checked her watch for" | | 1 | "It was 2:14 AM." | | 2 | "she muttered, her voice too" | | 3 | "She had cut through the" | | 4 | "She pulled the Heartstone Pendant" | | 5 | "It wasn’t supposed to get" | | 6 | "She wasn’t supposed to be" | | 7 | "She was just a delivery" | | 8 | "She looked around." | | 9 | "Their colors were hyper-saturated, bleeding" | | 10 | "It looked like a painting" | | 11 | "She took a step forward." | | 12 | "Her boot crunched." | | 13 | "It wasn't a paranoia born" | | 14 | "She couldn't see anyone, but" | | 15 | "She wasn’t walking on a" | | 16 | "They were massive, rough-hewn blocks" | | 17 | "She heard it then." | | 18 | "It came from her left," | | 19 | "She raised her hand, keeping" |
| | ratio | 0.404 | |
| 43.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 95 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "The London night air usually" | | 1 | "Here, in Richmond Park, the" | | 2 | "Rory tightened her jacket, the" | | 3 | "She checked her watch for" | | 4 | "It was 2:14 AM." | | 5 | "The digital display flickered, then" | | 6 | "she muttered, her voice too" | | 7 | "The usual rustle of distant" | | 8 | "She had cut through the" | | 9 | "The familiar gravel path had" | | 10 | "Rory paused, gripping the strap" | | 11 | "The shadows stretching out from" | | 12 | "She pulled the Heartstone Pendant" | | 13 | "The silver chain was cool" | | 14 | "It wasn’t supposed to get" | | 15 | "The codex, the cryptic history" | | 16 | "She wasn’t supposed to be" | | 17 | "She was just a delivery" | | 18 | "the voice on the other" | | 19 | "Rory forced her breathing to" |
| | ratio | 0.833 | |
| 43.86% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "To her left, the wildflowers—codified" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 64.94% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones were visible through the gloom, a jagged silhouette against the sky that seemed to tilt at an angle that hurt her eyes to focus on." | | 1 | "Their colors were hyper-saturated, bleeding into one another in a visual discordance that made her stomach turn." | | 2 | "Rory walked faster now, a brisk stride that felt defensive." | | 3 | "It wasn't a paranoia born of imagination; it was a physical pressure, a weight pressing down on her shoulder blades, as if a draft was constantly blowing agains…" | | 4 | "They were massive, rough-hewn blocks of gray granite, weathered by centuries, yet their surfaces shone as if they had been polished yesterday." | | 5 | "The absolute, suffocating silence that followed was worse than the breathing." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said, her voice trembling slightly, refusing to break" |
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| 38.89% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.222 | | leniency | 0.444 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.222 | |