| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she whispered aloud [aloud]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |
| 85.60% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1042 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "utterly" | | 2 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1042 | | totalAiIsms | 31 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "unspoken" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "comforting" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "flicker" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "pounding" | | 11 | "echoes" | | 12 | "footsteps" | | 13 | "echoing" | | 14 | "unsettled" | | 15 | "sinewy" | | 16 | "racing" | | 17 | "scanning" | | 18 | "pulsed" | | 19 | "resolve" | | 20 | "depths" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 3 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "clenched her jaw" | | 1 | "clenched her fists" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.61% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1010 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 6 | | wordCount | 1006 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 0.3 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Pulsed | 1 |
| | persons | (empty) | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 74.24% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite pin down" | | 1 | "as if responding to some unseen signal" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1010 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 64.29% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 23 | | mean | 43.91 | | std | 16.47 | | cv | 0.375 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 64 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 58 | | 4 | 33 | | 5 | 43 | | 6 | 35 | | 7 | 61 | | 8 | 49 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 56 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 53 | | 13 | 46 | | 14 | 58 | | 15 | 52 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 42 | | 19 | 36 | | 20 | 54 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 8 | | totalVerbs | 171 | | matches | | 0 | "was being" | | 1 | "was sliding" | | 2 | "was lurking" | | 3 | "was circling" | | 4 | "were watching" | | 5 | "weren’t just waiting" | | 6 | "wasn’t just watching" | | 7 | "was waiting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 32 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 25 | | totalSentences | 80 | | ratio | 0.313 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come here hoping for answers, some fragment of clarity amid the chaos of her life, but the place felt different—wrong in a way she couldn’t quite pin down." | | 1 | "The silence was thick—unnatural, like a heavy curtain draped over the woods." | | 2 | "She told herself it was her imagination, that after all, she’d always been prone to overthinking—especially since fleeing Cardiff." | | 3 | "Just as she reached out to touch one, a faint flicker of movement flickered at the edge of her vision—a shift, a whisper of something slipping just beyond her line of sight." | | 4 | "Still, the feeling persisted—an odd, prickling sense that she was being watched." | | 5 | "But the sound lingered—the brittle snap, like a branch breaking under a careless footstep." | | 6 | "No—just her own breathing echoing in her ears." | | 7 | "Sometimes, it was the unknown sounds that unsettled the mind—nothing more." | | 8 | "Then she saw it—something just beyond the reach of her vision, a flicker of movement too quick, too subtle to describe." | | 9 | "As if someone—something—was sliding just out of sight, always just out of the corner of her eye." | | 10 | "Something brushed past her peripheral vision—a dark shape, too fluid, too deliberate." | | 11 | "She looked down—nothing but a scattered bed of wildflowers that bloomed stubbornly despite the season." | | 12 | "A tiny shift—movement—caught her eye." | | 13 | "No—more like a shadow, a stain on the night that refused to sit still." | | 14 | "She felt her pulse quicken—fear gnawing at the edges of her mind." | | 15 | "She took a tentative step back, only to freeze—her eyes catching a flicker of movement beneath the larger oak." | | 16 | "Not a branch—something darker, moving with unnatural, sinewy grace." | | 17 | "She pinched her eyes shut for a second, trying to dismiss it, but it seeped in—low, close, almost breathless." | | 18 | "But the faint glow of the pendant in her vision told her otherwise—something here responded, something waiting." | | 19 | "A shift behind her—someone—something—was right there." | | 20 | "The woods had never felt so alive, yet utterly silent—all the noises of the forest hushed save for her own ragged breathing." | | 21 | "The stone’s faint glow renewed her resolve, but she knew—knew—it was an illusion." | | 22 | "The woods weren’t just waiting—they were watching—and they had been waiting for someone like her to arrive." | | 23 | "And as the darkness thickened, a new sensation prickled at her skin—a cold, heavy presence pressing against her mind, whispering softly yet insistently." | | 24 | "Because she knew—somewhere in the depths of her mind—that whatever was here, it wasn’t just watching." |
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| 87.84% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1039 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 56 | | adverbRatio | 0.05389797882579403 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013474494706448507 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 80 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 80 | | mean | 12.63 | | std | 6.93 | | cv | 0.549 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 62.92% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4 | | totalSentences | 80 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the wind had subsided," | | 1 | "Just the dense, silent woods," | | 2 | "Sometimes, it was the unknown" | | 3 | "Then she saw it—something just" | | 4 | "Somewhere deep within, she knew" |
| | ratio | 0.069 | |
| 64.44% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come here hoping" | | 1 | "She shifted the strap of" | | 2 | "Its faint pulse, a warm," | | 3 | "She told herself it was" | | 4 | "She hesitated, then stepped forward," | | 5 | "She spun around, heart pounding." | | 6 | "She froze, head turning instinctively," | | 7 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 8 | "She told herself to stay" | | 9 | "She clenched her jaw and" | | 10 | "Her fingers brushed the rough" | | 11 | "She clenched her fists, forcing" | | 12 | "she whispered aloud, voice barely" | | 13 | "She looked down—nothing but a" | | 14 | "Her eyes returned to the" | | 15 | "They seemed to hum with" | | 16 | "Her gaze snapped to a" | | 17 | "Her breath hitched." | | 18 | "She felt her pulse quicken—fear" | | 19 | "She took a tentative step" |
| | ratio | 0.389 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "The woods pressed in around" | | 1 | "Aurora’s breath clouded in the" | | 2 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 3 | "She had come here hoping" | | 4 | "The silence was thick—unnatural, like" | | 5 | "She shifted the strap of" | | 6 | "Its faint pulse, a warm," | | 7 | "A subtle sensation prickled at" | | 8 | "She told herself it was" | | 9 | "The standing stones emerged shadowy" | | 10 | "She hesitated, then stepped forward," | | 11 | "She spun around, heart pounding." | | 12 | "A sudden, sharp crack broke" | | 13 | "She froze, head turning instinctively," | | 14 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 15 | "She told herself to stay" | | 16 | "She clenched her jaw and" | | 17 | "Her fingers brushed the rough" | | 18 | "Something brushed past her peripheral" | | 19 | "A shiver crawled up her" |
| | ratio | 0.708 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Just as she reached out" | | 1 | "As if someone—something—was sliding just" | | 2 | "To be lured into this" | | 3 | "Because she knew—somewhere in the" |
| | ratio | 0.056 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "She looked down—nothing but a scattered bed of wildflowers that bloomed stubbornly despite the season." | | 1 | "The faint pulse of the Heartstone under her shirt grew warmer, softer, as if responding to some unseen signal." | | 2 | "The faint glow from the Heartstone Pulsed a little stronger, as if it recognized the darkness, feeding on the presence of something unnatural." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered aloud, voice barely more than a breath" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered aloud (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |