| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.58% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1464 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 38.52% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1464 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "unsettled" | | 2 | "sentinel" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "lurch" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "synchronized" | | 7 | "footsteps" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "etched" | | 10 | "depths" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 169 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 169 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 170 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1454 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the cold, she told herself." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 1450 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.21 | | worstName | "Richmond" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "November" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 3 | | Park | 3 | | Bring | 1 | | November | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | London | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Thin | 2 | | Kingston | 1 | | Gate | 1 | | Rory | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Kingston" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed deeper than they should have been" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1454 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 170 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 56 | | mean | 25.96 | | std | 20.44 | | cv | 0.787 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 68 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 59 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 78 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 52 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 59 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 58 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 42 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 61 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 45 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 44 | | 34 | 62 | | 35 | 40 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 56 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 54 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 33 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 30 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 96.96% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 169 | | matches | | 0 | "been warned" | | 1 | "was marked" | | 2 | "was supposed" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 3.92% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 238 | | matches | | 0 | "was trying" | | 1 | "was passing" | | 2 | "was rising" | | 3 | "wasn't standing" | | 4 | "weren't brushing" | | 5 | "were wrapping" | | 6 | "were trying" |
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| 25.21% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 170 | | ratio | 0.041 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd known that would happen—had been warned, in fact—but some stubborn part of her had hoped the old man at the restaurant had been exaggerating." | | 1 | "A plain white envelope containing cash—more than she made in a typical week—and a handwritten note with coordinates that led to this hidden corner of Richmond Park." | | 2 | "The stones marked a rough circle maybe thirty feet across, and between them—where there should have been the close-cropped grass of a public park—wildflowers grew in dense clusters." | | 3 | "A small package on her doorstep three months ago, no note, no return address—just the silver chain and its deep crimson stone." | | 4 | "The stone burned against her palm, and she realized with growing horror that it wasn't just warm anymore—it was hot." | | 5 | "It wasn't standing on the flowers—it was emerging from them, as if the ground itself had decided to take form." | | 6 | "Her heel caught on something again, and this time she didn't stumble—she fell, hard, her palms slapping against the earth." |
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| 96.70% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1462 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 64 | | adverbRatio | 0.04377564979480164 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006155950752393981 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 170 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 170 | | mean | 8.55 | | std | 6.96 | | cv | 0.813 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 41.76% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.3176470588235294 | | totalSentences | 170 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the money and the" | | 1 | "Just the cold, she told" | | 2 | "Then back to her flat" | | 3 | "Just a root." | | 4 | "Just the standing stones, the" | | 5 | "Then the footsteps again, but" | | 6 | "Just a smooth, pale head" | | 7 | "Then it turned toward her." | | 8 | "Only then did she slow." | | 9 | "Only then did she let" | | 10 | "Just the distant silhouette of" | | 11 | "Then faded back into the" |
| | ratio | 0.086 | |
| 87.63% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd known that would happen—had" | | 1 | "He hadn't been." | | 2 | "She'd felt it shift once" | | 3 | "She'd told herself it was" | | 4 | "She told herself that a" | | 5 | "They shouldn't have been growing" | | 6 | "Her pendant pulsed once against" | | 7 | "She stopped walking." | | 8 | "She'd almost thrown it away." | | 9 | "It was November in London," | | 10 | "She moved forward anyway." | | 11 | "She'd come this far." | | 12 | "She might as well finish" | | 13 | "She kept her eyes forward." | | 14 | "Her boot caught on something." | | 15 | "She stumbled, caught herself, looked" | | 16 | "She looked back at where" | | 17 | "Her heart beat a little" | | 18 | "She pressed her palm against" | | 19 | "It pulsed again, stronger this" |
| | ratio | 0.331 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 95 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose against" | | 1 | "Rory wiped sweat from her" | | 2 | "She'd known that would happen—had" | | 3 | "He hadn't been." | | 4 | "The delivery had been strange" | | 5 | "A plain white envelope containing" | | 6 | "The package sat in her" | | 7 | "She'd felt it shift once" | | 8 | "She'd told herself it was" | | 9 | "The vibration of the bike." | | 10 | "She told herself that a" | | 11 | "The stones marked a rough" | | 12 | "They shouldn't have been growing" | | 13 | "Her pendant pulsed once against" | | 14 | "She stopped walking." | | 15 | "The Heartstone had been a" | | 16 | "A small package on her" | | 17 | "She'd almost thrown it away." | | 18 | "Something about it had unsettled" | | 19 | "Tonight, it was warm." |
| | ratio | 0.683 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | | 0 | "As if the stone was" | | 1 | "As if the air had" | | 2 | "To her left." |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 80.20% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "A plain white envelope containing cash—more than she made in a typical week—and a handwritten note with coordinates that led to this hidden corner of Richmond P…" | | 1 | "They shouldn't have been growing here, shouldn't have been growing anywhere in late November, but they carpeted the ground like snow that had forgotten to fall." | | 2 | "Thin stems coiling around her fingers, her wrists, climbing her arms with a slow, deliberate pressure." | | 3 | "Just a smooth, pale head atop a body that was too long, too thin, its arms ending in hands that had too many fingers." | | 4 | "Just the distant silhouette of the ancient oaks, standing close together, as if they were trying to hide something behind them." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |