Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMRAR7BYB2FM5ZJA4CB2BFJ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 36s
Cost:
$0.017129
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign buzzed like a dying insect, casting a sickly emerald glow over the wet pavement of Soho. Aurora Carter pushed open the door of The Raven's Nest, the bell above the frame chiming a dull, bronze note that smelled of brass polish and stale beer. She shook the rain from her black hair, the strands clinging to her cheeks like wet ink. The delivery bag from Golden Empress hung heavy on her shoulder, smelling of sesame oil and damp cardboard. She should have gone upstairs to the flat, should have kicked off her boots and poured a glass of wine, but the pull of the bar was a gravity she rarely resisted after a shift like this. Inside, the air was thick and warm, preserved in amber light. The walls were a collage of forgotten geography; old maps of London and black-and-white photographs of men in suits who looked like they knew where the bodies were buried. Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a tumbler with a rag that looked cleaner than the glass. He paused when she entered, his hazel eyes catching the light, the grey streaks in his auburn beard shifting as he nodded. He wore the silver signet ring on his right hand, the metal flashing as he set the glass down. He didn't speak. He never did when she came in looking like this. He just poured a water and set it on the far end of the counter, respecting the space she needed to decompress. Rory moved toward her usual stool, her left wrist brushing against the cold wood of the bar. The crescent-shaped scar there itched when the pressure dropped, a phantom ache from a childhood accident that felt like it belonged to a different person. She was reaching for the water when she saw her. Sitting in the shadowed booth near the back, beneath a map of the Welsh valleys, was a woman with a cup of tea steaming in front of her. She wore a coat that cost more than Rory's monthly rent, her hair blown out in a perfect, sensible bob that hadn't seen a drop of London rain. Eva. The air left Rory's lungs in a sharp hiss. They hadn't spoken in three years, not since the night Rory fled Cardiff, leaving her Pre-Law textbooks stacked neatly on her desk and a voicemail from Evan unanswered. Eva had been the one to tell her to run, the one to buy the train ticket, but they had drawn a line after that. Safety required silence. Eva looked up. The recognition was instant, a widening of the eyes that crinkled the corners. She didn't wave. She just waited. Rory picked up the water and walked over. Her boots felt heavy on the floorboards. She slid into the booth opposite her oldest friend. For a long moment, neither of them spoke. The weight of the time between them sat on the table, heavier than the tea service. You look well, Eva said. Her voice was the same, steady and warm, but it sounded foreign in this dim room. Rory traced the rim of her glass. I look tired, Eva. You look alive. That is enough. Eva glanced toward the bar, where Silas was now wiping down the counter, his slight limp visible as he shifted his weight off his left leg. Is he the one? He is the landlord. And a friend. He looks like a man who keeps secrets. We all do now. Rory took a sip of water. It was cold, shocking against her throat. I didn't think you would come to London. I had business. I wanted to see if you were still here. Eva leaned forward, her hands clasped tightly. I heard about Evan. He is in prison, Rory. The name hit her like a physical blow, a bruise pressed fresh on old skin. She looked down at her hands. They were rougher than they used to be. The manicured nails of the university student were gone, replaced by short, practical edges suited for gripping handlebars and takeout bags. I know. Why didn't you call? You know why. I know you were scared. But you disappeared. You were going to be a barrister. You were going to argue cases in Cardiff Bay. Now I find you in a bar in Soho wearing a delivery uniform. Eva's voice wasn't judgmental, but the grief in it was palpable. You changed. People change. Not like this. Not all at once. Eva reached across the table, hovering her hand over Rory's left wrist. She didn't touch the scar, but her shadow fell over it. You used to plan everything. Every year mapped out. Now you look like you are waiting for the next shoe to drop. Rory pulled her hand back, tucking it into her lap. The scar throbbed. I am waiting. That is what survival is. It is not living, Eva. It is just waiting to see if the past catches up. Silas moved behind them, refilling a salt shaker. He didn't look at them, but his presence was a wall between them and the rest of the room. He knew the shape of Rory's silence. He knew the weight of a botched operation, whether it was in Prague or a living room in Cardiff. I missed you, Eva said softly. I missed my friend. I am still here. Are you? Eva looked around the dimly lit room, at the maps of places neither of them would ever visit. You live above a bar. You deliver food for a man named Yu-Fei. You hide in the shadows. Where is Aurora? Where is the girl who wanted to fix things? She got hurt. Rory looked up, her bright blue eyes meeting Eva's. And she learned that fixing things sometimes means breaking them first. I am not that girl anymore. I am the one who got out. Eva sat back, the leather of the booth creaking. She looked at Rory, really looked at her, seeing the tension in the shoulders, the way her eyes scanned the exit, the way she kept her back to the wall. She saw the cost of safety. You are harder, Eva said. I am safer. Is it worth it? The law degree? The life we planned? Rory thought of the flat upstairs. Quiet. Secure. She thought of Silas, watching the door, his hand resting near the drawer where he kept the things he didn't talk about. She thought of Evan, behind bars, and the freedom that tasted like ash. I do not know, Rory said. But I am here. And you are here. For tonight, that has to be enough. Eva nodded, slowly. She picked up her tea. The steam had stopped rising. The heat was gone. They sat in the dim light of The Raven's Nest, two women separated by years and choices, drinking cold beverages while the green neon sign buzzed outside, marking the passage of time in electric hums. Silas finished his work at the counter and disappeared into the back room, leaving them alone with the maps and the memories. Rory touched her wrist again, the crescent scar smooth under her thumb. It did not hurt anymore. It just was. Like the rain. Like the bar. Like the distance between who she was and who she had become.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
67.4797% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1230
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"tightly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"softly"
2"tightly"
3"really"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.3496% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1230
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"palpable"
count1
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"weight"
count3
highlights
0"palpable"
1"throbbed"
2"weight"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences128
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount7
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences128
filterMatches
0"look"
1"know"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean37.15
std33
cv0.888
sampleLengths
0120
1133
252
357
465
522
648
721
811
936
107
118
1225
1328
1452
154
163
1750
182
1952
2037
2153
2210
234
2450
2536
2645
275
283
2911
3043
3121
32112
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences128
matches
0"were buried"
1"were gone"
2"was gone"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs230
matches
0"was reaching"
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1231
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"cold, shocking against her"
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.023558082859463852
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007311129163281885
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences128
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences128
mean9.58
std8
cv0.835
sampleLengths
020
128
217
318
437
511
629
717
822
919
103
1110
1222
1317
1425
1510
1628
1728
181
199
2028
2125
223
233
2413
253
263
278
287
299
308
3116
325
3316
347
354
363
373
3826
394
404
413
428
434
446
457
468
473
489
497
30.4688% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats25
diversityRatio0.2421875
totalSentences128
uniqueOpeners31
100.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
91.2528%