| 88.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she noted aloud [aloud]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |
| 68.49% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1587 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "quickly" | | 4 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 52.74% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1587 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "racing" | | 9 | "pounding" | | 10 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 122 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 49.18% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 122 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "appeared to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 132 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1572 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Almost there, she told herself, gritting her teeth against the pain." |
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| 83.98% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 1439 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.32 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 19 | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 4 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | September | 1 | | One | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Pendant" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.84 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed muted as if filtered through water" | | 1 | "not quite a breeze, not quite a voice" | | 2 | "not quite a voice" | | 3 | "even ones as seemingly benign as this" | | 4 | "whisper that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once" | | 5 | "seemed taller now, more menacing" | | 6 | "as if hiding from whatever was approaching" | | 7 | "limbs that seemed to bend at unnatural angles" |
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| 72.77% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.272 | | wordCount | 1572 | | matches | | 0 | "not with its usual faint warmth, but with an almost feverish heat" | | 1 | "Not words, exactly, but the suggestion of words" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 132 | | matches | | |
| 84.96% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 56 | | mean | 28.07 | | std | 12.56 | | cv | 0.447 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 50 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 43 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 40 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 46 | | 15 | 39 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 42 | | 18 | 41 | | 19 | 43 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 33 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 36 | | 30 | 32 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 30 | | 34 | 33 | | 35 | 28 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 37 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 30 | | 40 | 37 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 31 | | 43 | 34 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 31 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 42 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 37 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | |
| 7.16% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 242 | | matches | | 0 | "was pulsing" | | 1 | "was screaming" | | 2 | "was approaching" | | 3 | "were going" | | 4 | "was burning" | | 5 | "was working" | | 6 | "was disorienting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 132 | | ratio | 0.114 | | matches | | 0 | "The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist tingled—a familiar warning she'd learned not to ignore." | | 1 | "Not that she'd expected one—previous visits had taught her the grove existed in its own pocket of reality—but she always checked anyway." | | 2 | "A sound whispered through the grove—not quite a breeze, not quite a voice." | | 3 | "Another sound—this time unmistakably a footstep, somewhere to her left." | | 4 | "That wasn't right either—it had been a mild September evening when she'd entered." | | 5 | "Nothing should have been there to begin with—she'd made sure of that, arriving hours after the park closed, scaling the fence to avoid the night patrol." | | 6 | "Something moved at the edge of her vision—tall and thin, disappearing behind one of the standing stones." | | 7 | "Not words, exactly, but the suggestion of words—promises and threats wrapped together in a language she almost understood." | | 8 | "A figure emerged from behind one of the stones—tall, impossibly thin, with limbs that seemed to bend at unnatural angles." | | 9 | "Not walking exactly—more like flowing, its feet never seeming to quite touch the ground." | | 10 | "As she moved, she noticed something strange—the wildflowers beneath the figures' feet withered and turned black, as if drained of life." | | 11 | "A hand closed around her arm—cold, impossibly strong, pulling her back." | | 12 | "The sudden change was disorienting—the bright moonlight, the normal sounds of the park at night, the relative warmth of the autumn air." | | 13 | "They appeared exactly as they always had—ancient, weathered, but not menacing." | | 14 | "And something had followed her out—she could feel it, a prickling between her shoulder blades, the certainty of eyes watching from the darkness beyond the standing stones." |
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| 89.44% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1018 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 53 | | adverbRatio | 0.05206286836935167 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018664047151277015 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 132 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 132 | | mean | 11.91 | | std | 6.78 | | cv | 0.569 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 28 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 27 |
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| 50.76% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.36363636363636365 | | totalSentences | 132 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the rustling of flowers" | | 1 | "Then it raised a long," | | 2 | "Then another, and another, until" | | 3 | "Almost there, she told herself," | | 4 | "Slowly, carefully, Aurora pushed herself" |
| | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the backpack containing" | | 1 | "she whispered to herself, the" | | 2 | "She paused, fingers instinctively closing" | | 3 | "It was pulsing, not with" | | 4 | "she murmured, her bright blue" | | 5 | "She took a deep breath," | | 6 | "Her father had taught her" | | 7 | "she called out, her voice" | | 8 | "She continued toward the center" | | 9 | "Her own heartbeat?" | | 10 | "Her cool-headed intelligence screamed at" | | 11 | "She checked her watch." | | 12 | "She'd entered the grove at" | | 13 | "she noted aloud, hearing the" | | 14 | "she said, her mind racing" | | 15 | "She turned slowly in a" | | 16 | "Her fingers were going numb" | | 17 | "Its face was a smooth" | | 18 | "She took a step back," | | 19 | "she muttered, her eyes darting" |
| | ratio | 0.261 | |
| 63.60% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 88 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "The crescent-shaped scar on her" | | 2 | "She adjusted the backpack containing" | | 3 | "she whispered to herself, the" | | 4 | "The grove shouldn't have been" | | 5 | "The moon hung full and" | | 6 | "The wildflowers that bloomed year-round" | | 7 | "Aurora pulled out her phone," | | 8 | "The pendant warmed against her" | | 9 | "She paused, fingers instinctively closing" | | 10 | "It was pulsing, not with" | | 11 | "That was new." | | 12 | "she murmured, her bright blue" | | 13 | "A sound whispered through the" | | 14 | "Aurora froze, listening." | | 15 | "The standing stones seemed to" | | 16 | "The pendant's heat intensified." | | 17 | "She took a deep breath," | | 18 | "Another sound—this time unmistakably a" | | 19 | "Aurora turned slowly, her hand" |
| | ratio | 0.793 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 75.29% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The moon hung full and bright outside the circle of standing stones, but here, beyond the boundary, the light seemed muted, as if filtered through water." | | 1 | "The wildflowers that bloomed year-round looked washed out, their colors muted to near-monochrome in the strange twilight." | | 2 | "Aurora turned slowly, her hand slipping into her jacket pocket for the iron knife she always carried when entering the grove." | | 3 | "The wildflowers had closed up, their petals curling inward as if hiding from whatever was approaching." | | 4 | "A figure emerged from behind one of the stones—tall, impossibly thin, with limbs that seemed to bend at unnatural angles." | | 5 | "There was something profoundly wrong about it, something that violated the natural order." | | 6 | "The distance to the stones seemed to stretch impossibly far, as if the grove itself was working against her escape." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice steady despite the quickening of her pulse" | | 1 | "she said, her mind racing through possibilities" | | 2 | "Aurora whispered, her mind working frantically" | | 3 | "she muttered, her eyes darting between the approaching figures" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "she called out (call out)" | | 3 | "she noted aloud (note)" | | 4 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 6 | "she corrected (correct)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0.875 | | effectiveRatio | 0.778 | |