| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.22% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1391 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 35.30% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1391 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "charged" | | 6 | "comforting" | | 7 | "sense of" | | 8 | "echoed" | | 9 | "electric" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "searing" | | 12 | "crystallized" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "try to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 106 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 49 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1367 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "A trick of the shadows, she told herself, or a tree limb caught on the wind." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 1359 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.52 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | England | 1 | | November | 1 | | Heartstone | 6 | | Grove | 1 | | Aurora | 5 | | Welsh-lilted | 1 | | Rory | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Welsh-lilted" | | 5 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "England" | | 4 | "November" | | 5 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 89.76% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite illuminating the forest floor" | | 1 | "as if tracking her movements" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.732 | | wordCount | 1367 | | matches | | 0 | "not caught but made, as if a smoldering coal had been dropped inside the st" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 37.97 | | std | 20.9 | | cv | 0.55 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 98 | | 2 | 58 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 55 | | 5 | 45 | | 6 | 37 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 68 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 39 | | 12 | 71 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 35 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 45 | | 17 | 60 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 45 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 51 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 32 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 64 | | 32 | 35 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 47 |
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| 95.24% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "been dropped" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was trapped" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 228 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 24 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 21 | | totalSentences | 106 | | ratio | 0.198 | | matches | | 0 | "Each footstep trod on slick, rotted mulch as she wound deeper into the heart of Richmond Park—the part the maps and dog-walkers never quite reached, the part nobody else seemed to notice at all." | | 1 | "Part of her wondered if she’d taken a wrong turn, missed some marker Eva had mentioned, but then her fingers brushed damp stone; she glanced down and found the edge of a massive oak root curling up pale and hard, a strange geometry set into the ground." | | 2 | "Her boot scuffed against another—this one upright, weathered and pitted, its wood run through with wormholes older than any human story." | | 3 | "The pendant at her throat—the Heartstone—felt heavier than usual, and for a moment she wondered if it was the stone or her own pulse that gave off that faint warmth." | | 4 | "Just the whisper of leaves and, faintly, somewhere off to her left, a soft wet plop—a toad, maybe, or something dropping from a branch." | | 5 | "The world beyond the grove faded to a distant blur—a city growing stranger by the second." | | 6 | "She pulled her jacket tighter and glanced at her phone—no signal, unsurprisingly." | | 7 | "Frogs burrowed somewhere underfoot—she told herself that’s what she heard, not the susurrus of something dragging over leaves just out of sight." | | 8 | "The pendant glimmered between her fingers—a faint inner glow, not caught but made, as if a smoldering coal had been dropped inside the stone." | | 9 | "A fox perhaps, she thought—the local parks had their share of them." | | 10 | "For one sharp instant, she saw a tall shape standing outside the line of trees—impossibly thin, jointed wrong, shifting as the moonlight caught it." | | 11 | "The Heartstone flared—briefly, crimson, sickly-bright—then returned to its gentle glow." | | 12 | "In the hush that followed, Aurora heard her mother’s voice—soft and Welsh-lilted, singing a lullaby she hadn’t remembered until now." | | 13 | "The world seemed both brighter and dimmer—the edges of things too sharp, the shadows slick and bulging, as if something behind them pressed to slip through." | | 14 | "A second sound—a dragging, deliberate scrape—echoed behind her." | | 15 | "She focused on the wildflowers—violet, butter-yellow, blood-red—a riot of impossible colors, petals trembling as if tracking her movements." | | 16 | "Or—something pale, limbed, ducking between the trees?" | | 17 | "But she was trapped—by promise, by curiosity, by obligation lurking in the marrow." | | 18 | "The standing stones thrummed—she felt it in her bones—a low sound like a war drum slow-marching to a tune she didn’t know." | | 19 | "That certainty crystallized, freezing her in place as the laughter dove and scattered, replaced by a single, sharp whisper behind her ear—a tongue she didn’t understand, but which knew her name." | | 20 | "She counted the beats as time stretched wider than the sky—wondering if she’d been in the grove for an hour or a lifetime—until the shadows melted and the world beyond the standing stones returned, distant as a memory, insistent as a warning she would never quite shake." |
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| 98.67% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1397 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 58 | | adverbRatio | 0.04151753758052971 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012168933428775949 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 106 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 106 | | mean | 12.9 | | std | 8.84 | | cv | 0.686 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 34 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 47 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 30 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 42.45% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.3113207547169811 | | totalSentences | 106 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the whisper of leaves" | | 1 | "Soft, musical laughter rippled through" | | 2 | "Only the wildflowers nodding gently" | | 3 | "Just the sense of being" | | 4 | "Just the standing stones and" |
| | ratio | 0.051 | |
| 62.42% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "She pressed a palm to" | | 1 | "She could hear the city" | | 2 | "Her boot scuffed against another—this" | | 3 | "She exhaled, slow and deliberate." | | 4 | "She unclipped the silver chain," | | 5 | "she whispered into the hush," | | 6 | "She turned in a slow" | | 7 | "She was almost inside, almost" | | 8 | "It ballooned out with every" | | 9 | "It was just as Eva" | | 10 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 11 | "She didn’t try to check" | | 12 | "It reminded her of a" | | 13 | "She thought of why she’d" | | 14 | "She’d memorized every step, rolling" | | 15 | "She shifted her feet, wincing" | | 16 | "She was no stranger to" | | 17 | "She kept replaying her approach" | | 18 | "It shifted, sliding along the" | | 19 | "She cleared her throat." |
| | ratio | 0.394 | |
| 30.71% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 85 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter slipped between the" | | 1 | "She pressed a palm to" | | 2 | "Moonlight spilled in thin silver" | | 3 | "Each footstep trod on slick," | | 4 | "She could hear the city" | | 5 | "Part of her wondered if" | | 6 | "Her boot scuffed against another—this" | | 7 | "She exhaled, slow and deliberate." | | 8 | "The cold air tasted green" | | 9 | "The pendant at her throat—the" | | 10 | "She unclipped the silver chain," | | 11 | "she whispered into the hush," | | 12 | "Rory edged forward, cool-headed as" | | 13 | "The moon crept through the" | | 14 | "She turned in a slow" | | 15 | "The standing stones were unmistakable" | | 16 | "She was almost inside, almost" | | 17 | "The quiet was growing." | | 18 | "It ballooned out with every" | | 19 | "The world beyond the grove" |
| | ratio | 0.859 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "Even so, the wrongness felt" | | 1 | "Or—something pale, limbed, ducking between" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 58.11% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "She could hear the city behind her, but only distantly, as if London had drawn a thick scarf over its face to muffle the sirens and the rumble of trains." | | 1 | "The cold air tasted green and loamy, too alive for midnight, fragrant with wildflowers that had no business blooming in England in November." | | 2 | "Frogs burrowed somewhere underfoot—she told herself that’s what she heard, not the susurrus of something dragging over leaves just out of sight." | | 3 | "The pendant glimmered between her fingers—a faint inner glow, not caught but made, as if a smoldering coal had been dropped inside the stone." | | 4 | "In the hush that followed, Aurora heard her mother’s voice—soft and Welsh-lilted, singing a lullaby she hadn’t remembered until now." | | 5 | "The world seemed both brighter and dimmer—the edges of things too sharp, the shadows slick and bulging, as if something behind them pressed to slip through." | | 6 | "She focused on the wildflowers—violet, butter-yellow, blood-red—a riot of impossible colors, petals trembling as if tracking her movements." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, as if she could make a bargain with the darkness" | | 1 | "she whispered, her voice small" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |