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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMRC4TFHJM6QRMXTPT9K9PR
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Model:
GPT-4.1 Mini
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
20.7s
Cost:
$0.002836
Provider:
OpenAI
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
The ancient oaks of Richmond Park gave way to a faint shimmer in the air, a soft distortion flickering where the boundary between worlds bled thin. Aurora’s heart quickened beneath her ribcage as she stepped forward, fingers brushing the cool silver chain of the Heartstone pendant hidden under her jacket. The pendant’s faint crimson glow pulsed like a slumbering ember, responding to the faint disturbance in the Veil. Beside her, Isolde drifted ahead like a wispy wraith, her silver hair catching stray beams of a pale, unearthly light that seemed not quite of this world. Her pale lavender eyes scanned the horizon with quiet attention, lips parting now and then to speak words that sounded like riddles, half-heard and half-understood. Nyx followed behind Aurora in their shifting humanoid silhouette, the faint glow of violet eyes humming in the dimness beneath the canopy. Their voice barely rose above the rustle of leaves, a whisper carried on the wind. “This place breathes differently,” Nyx said. “Not bound by time, or so it seems. The Grove folds in and out of something older, something forgotten.” Aurora swallowed, eyes wide. Even the air felt thick — sweet and rich with wildflowers blooming year-round, their colors impossible to name. It was as though the sundappled realm they had stepped into was a living dream, caught between the ticking of the mortal clock and the timeless pulse of the Fae. The standing stones, gnarled and worn,
loomed
ahead. Ancient oaks carved into towering pillars, roots twisting like serpents weaving beneath the earth. Isolde stopped before them, her feet silent as the moss beneath. “The boundary,” she whispered, reaching out to touch the smooth bark of one stone, which hummed cold as ice beneath her fingertips. “Cross here, and the world shifts beneath your feet.” Aurora glanced back once, at the familiar shadows cast by London’s dim streets where her flat and Silas’ bar waited, at the
echo
of the city’s restless hum. Then forward again, her bright blue eyes fixed on the clearing before them. The Grove stretched wide, a pocket of wild magic carved out from the
very
fabric of reality. Time folded and spun curiously here. An hour inside could stretch into days without their knowledge. The air
shimmered
with that peculiar blend of warmth and chill, like a breath between lives. The wildflowers b
loomed
in riotous colors —
luminous
blues, vivid violet berries
glistening
like glass. The scent
was intoxicating
, both sweet and faintly metallic. Nyx’s shadow form drifted forward, fingers trailing through the strange blossoms, their fingers phasing in and out of corporeality. “Like the garden of the forgotten,” they murmured, voice a breeze through the leaves. “A place neither here nor there.” Isolde’s gaze turned to the sky, where the amber warmth of Dymas’s realms could almost be felt pressing faintly beyond the Veil. “This crossing grows weaker as the solstice approaches,” she said. “The boundaries thin, and dangers stir beneath.” A thread of unease tugged at Aurora’s spine. Not from the Grove itself — its beauty was undeniable — but from the way the Veil policed itself, watching, waiting. The repetitious pulse of the Heartstone quickened faintly against her chest. While Isolde traced ancient symbols in the soil, Nyx drifted toward a twisted tree at the edge of the clearing. Its branches creaked in a silence that felt too heavy, watching. The bark here was rough, blackened as if scorched, yet alive with silver veins pulsing faintly like nerves. Aurora took another step forward, drawn by a faint chime barely audible beneath the hum of the Grove. The sound came from the gnarled base of the tree, where a hollow opened like a doorway. Light, dim but present, spilled
softly
from its depths. “Be careful,” Isolde warned, voice still melodic, but edged with an ancient caution. “Not all that shines is safe.” She reached out to grip the Fae-Forged Blade at her belt, the moonsilver hilt cool and faintly glowing under the canopy’s filtered light. Aurora felt its cold promise, a weapon made to cut through darkness no mortal blade could pierce. Nyx hovered nearby, shadow fingers curling
lightly
. “Shadows twist when the Veil thins,” they said. “Curiosities become snares.” The trio moved
cautiously
, Aurora’s breath steady despite the hum of uncertainty threading through the clearing. With a hesitant step, she knelt beside the hollow. Inside, nestled in a nest of roots and glowing moss, lay an orb, no larger than a fist, flickering with shifting amber light. It seemed neither stone nor flame — something caught between essence and element. The pulse was slow and measured. Her fingers hovered, the Heartstone flickering wildly now, warming against her skin. Isolde’s
eyes widened
. “A fragment of Hel’s wyrd—a seed from the vineyards of Dymas,” she said in a voice both reverent and wary. “It carries
echo
es of gluttony and excess, but also potential. A cursed gift, or a boon yet born.” Aurora met Nyx’s glowing gaze. “We shouldn’t take it
lightly
.” Her voice was calm, but inside, a knot of
anticipation
twisted. The shade inclined their head in agreement, their form flickering faintly. “Power held here is ancient, dangerous. Yet its tether to the mortal coil still weak. If we can harness it, it might untangle threads we’ve thought lost.” Isolde’s silver hair shifted, as though stirred by an unseen breeze. “But beware the price,” she warned. “E
very
thing here feeds — be it vine, shadow, or soul.” The clearing
seemed to
pulse around them, wildflowers trembling, the standing stones humming an ancient chorus. Aurora rose, exchanging a glance with her companions. Her fingers closed
tightly
around the Heartstone hidden beneath her jacket. The secret world of the Fae had beckoned them here—not just as wanderers, but as seekers. As they prepared to leave the Grove, the familiar sensation of time warping tugged at Aurora’s mind. What had begun as moments might stretch into hours or days beyond the Veil. But she could not yet say what mysteries, or dangers, lay waiting in the hidden realms between. The Grove held its wonders close, fragrant and alive, yet bound by an ancient caution whispered only in shadows. With one last glance at the silent standing stones, the three began their return, their steps light but their thoughts heavy with the burden of
newfound
truths—and the fragile thread between this world and the many others beyond.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
91.6667%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
8
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"Isolde warned, voice still melodic, but edged with an ancient caution [still]"
43.5560%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1063
totalAiIsmAdverbs
6
found
0
adverb
"cautiously"
count
1
1
adverb
"lightly"
count
2
2
adverb
"softly"
count
1
3
adverb
"tightly"
count
1
4
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"cautiously"
1
"lightly"
2
"softly"
3
"tightly"
4
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
24.7413%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1063
totalAiIsms
8
found
0
word
"luminous"
count
1
1
word
"shimmered"
count
1
2
word
"glistening"
count
1
3
word
"loomed"
count
1
4
word
"newfound"
count
1
5
word
"anticipation"
count
1
6
word
"echo"
count
1
7
word
"echoes"
count
1
highlights
0
"luminous"
1
"shimmered"
2
"glistening"
3
"loomed"
4
"newfound"
5
"anticipation"
6
"echo"
7
"echoes"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes widened"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
63
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
63
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
72
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
26
mean
40.85
std
22.19
cv
0.543
sampleLengths
0
120
1
37
2
25
3
52
4
64
5
41
6
73
7
39
8
39
9
40
10
49
11
44
12
19
13
40
14
18
15
16
16
51
17
12
18
41
19
21
20
38
21
27
22
16
23
35
24
67
25
38
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
63
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
142
matches
0
"was intoxicating"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
910
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
34
adverbRatio
0.03736263736263736
lyAdverbCount
16
lyAdverbRatio
0.017582417582417582
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
72
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
72
mean
14.75
std
7.12
cv
0.482
sampleLengths
0
26
1
24
2
18
3
27
4
25
5
22
6
15
7
6
8
19
9
4
10
18
11
30
12
8
13
14
14
11
15
22
16
9
17
28
18
13
19
17
20
6
21
10
22
16
23
15
24
9
25
19
26
14
27
6
28
22
29
10
30
7
31
8
32
21
33
11
34
20
35
11
36
18
37
18
38
17
39
9
40
13
41
6
42
23
43
17
44
7
45
8
46
3
47
16
48
9
49
23
73.6111%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.4583333333333333
totalSentences
72
uniqueOpeners
33
50.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
8
fancyCount
4
fancyTags
0
"she whispered, reaching out to touch the smooth bark of one stone, which hummed cold as ice beneath her fingertips (whisper, reach out touch hum)"
1
"they murmured, voice a breeze through the leaves (murmur, voice)"
2
"Isolde warned, voice still melodic, but edged with an ancient caution (warn, voice still edge)"
3
"she warned (warn)"
87.2691%