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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMRCJ8S483XCBDRDX4N5NSD
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Model:
Z.AI GLM 4.6
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
48.5s
Cost:
$0.009015
Provider:
Friendli
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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AI
The Raven’s Nest was quiet for a Tuesday. A low thrum of conversation hummed under the jazz drifting from the speakers, the scent of old wood and polished brass hanging in the air like a familiar coat. Rory sat at the far end of the bar, a half-empty glass of amber liquid before her. The dim, honeyed light caught the worn surface of the mahogany, turning the scratches and stains into a kind of topography of nights past. She traced a long groove with her fingertip, a map of someone else’s forgotten spill. It was her third night off in a row, a rare luxury, and she
was savoring
the stillness. Upstairs, her flat
was waiting
, a box of books still unpacked, a silent
testament
to the six months she’d been here. Six months of learning the streets of London on her delivery bike, of memorizing the faces of the regulars, of breathing in the air of a city that still felt like a borrowed coat. Silas moved behind the bar, his steps softened by the slight, almost imperceptible limp in his left leg. He didn’t speak, just placed a small bowl of wasabi peanuts next to her glass, his silver signet ring flashing once in the low light before his hand disappeared. He knew her moods. He knew when she wanted company and when she wanted the company of ghosts. Tonight, it was the latter. She offered him a grateful nod and popped a peanut into her mouth, the sharp heat a welcome distraction. The bell above the door chimed, a cheerful, incongruous sound that sliced through the mellow atmosphere. Rory didn’t look up. New patrons were a constant, a river of strangers flowing in and out of the Nest. But then a voice, smooth and confident, cut through the low jazz. “Laila? Laila Carter? Is that
really
you?” The name hit her like a physical blow. Laila. A ghost from a life she had buried in Cardiff. A name she hadn’t heard in years, not since Eva had started calling her Rory, a name that felt like armor. Her head snapped up, her cool-headed composure fracturing for a split second. Standing by the entrance, silhouetted for a moment against the distinctive green neon glow of the sign, was a man. He stepped forward, into the bar’s warm light, and the years fell away. It was Liam. Liam O’Connell, from her Pre-Law program. The boy who used to debate semantics with her until 3 a.m. in the university library, his hair perpetually messy, his glasses perpetually smudged. This was not that boy. This man wore a tailored grey suit that probably cost more than her monthly rent. His dark hair was styled with an effortless precision she knew must have cost a fortune, and the smudged glasses were gone, replaced by stylish, thin-rimmed frames. He looked… polished. Success
seemed to
cling to him like a cologne. “Rory,” she corrected, her voice tighter than she intended. The word came out clipped, a small wall thrown up between past and present. Liam’s smile faltered for a moment, a
flicker
of confusion in his eyes. “Rory? Of course. Sorry. It’s been a while.” He approached the bar, his expensive shoes silent on the old floorboards. “What are you doing in London? I thought you were staying in Cardiff, taking over the world with your dad’s firm.” The mention of her father, of the path she had so decisively abandoned, sent a familiar
pang
of something—regret, resentment, she could never quite untangle the two. “Plans change,” she said, turning back to her glass. She hoped the finality in her tone would be enough. Silas appeared, a silent
sentinel
. “Another for you, Rory?” he asked, his hazel eyes assessing Liam with a quick, professional glance. “No, I’m good, Si.” She gestured vaguely with her head. “He’s with me.” Liam slid onto the stool beside her, the scent of his expensive cologne washing over her, clean and alien. “A whiskey, please. Whatever she’s having.” Silas poured without a word, his movements economical and precise. He placed the glass down and retreated to his end of the bar, seemingly absorbed in polishing a pint glass, but Rory knew he
was listening
. It was the kind of place he ran. A
sanctuary
. And right now, it felt under siege. “So,” Liam began, swirling the whiskey in his glass. “Rory. It suits you.” He took a sip, his eyes on her. “You look good. Really good.” “You too,” she said, the words feeling hollow. He didn’t just look good; he looked like a different species. He was the future she’d
been groomed
for, the one she’d run screaming from. “I didn’t know you were in London.” “Moved here about three years ago. Got a position at Farrington & Croft. Corporate law.” He said it with a casual pride that made her stomach clench. “It’s… demanding. But rewarding. I’m making junior partner next year.” “Congratulations,” she murmured, the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist beginning to itch. A childhood accident, her parents always said. A fall from a swing. She remembered it differently. She remembered the sharp, sudden pain, the shock of blood on her pale skin. A small, sharp lesson in how
quickly
things can go wrong. “Thanks.” He smiled, but it didn’t quite reach his eyes. He
was studying
her,
really
studying her now. “And you? What brings you to… this place? Do you work around here?” “I live upstairs.” His eyebrows lifted. “Seriously? In Soho?” He looked around the bar, at the old maps of London and the black-and-white photographs of long-gone faces. “It’s… atmospheric. I’ll give it that. A bit of a dive, but I can see the charm.” She bristled. *Her* place. He
was calling
*her* place a dive. “It’s home.” The words were quiet but firm. “Right. Of course.” He backtracked, sensing the shift in her mood. “So what do you do? Are you at a firm here, too? I could put in a word, if you’re looking. Farrington’s always on the lookout for sharp minds. You were the best in our cohort, Laila. You could have had any clerkship you wanted.” There it was. The ghost of Laila, the brilliant law student, the prodigy. The girl who could argue a point of tort law until her opponent wept. That girl was a stranger to her now. “I’m a delivery person,” she said, the words tasting like defiance in her mouth. “For a Chinese restaurant.” Liam stared. The polished, confident mask cracked, and pure, unadulterated shock showed through. “A… what? You’re joking.” “I don’t joke about my rent,” she said, taking a long swallow of her whiskey. The burn was a comfort. “I deliver for the Golden Empress. Great dumplings.” He was silent for a long moment, processing. The jazz
seemed to
grow louder, filling the awkward space between them. He looked from her face to her worn jacket, to her hands resting on the bar. He
was trying
to reconcile the woman in front of him with the memory of the girl he knew. The chasm was too wide. “But… why?” he finally asked, his voice softer now,
tinged
with something that sounded suspiciously like pity. “What happened? Did you fail the bar?
Is that it?
Because it’s not the end of the world, you could just—” “I didn’t fail,” she cut in, her voice low and cold. “I left. I just… left.” She couldn’t tell him about Evan. About the slow, creeping poison of that relationship, about the way he’d chipped away at her confidence until she was a shell of herself. About the night she’d packed a single bag and fled to London with only Eva’s promise of a sofa to sleep on. That was a story for another lifetime, for another person. Not for the man in the five-hundred-pound suit. “Left,” he repeated, as if the word were foreign. “You just left all of it behind. Your degree, your future… Evan. How is Evan, by the way? I always wondered what happened with you two. He was a bit of a character, wasn’t he?” The name was a slap in the face. Evan. A character. That was one word for it. The itching on her wrist became a fire. She looked down, at the faint white line on her skin. It wasn’t from a swing. It was from a shattered glass, a thrown mug, a moment when a “character” had lost his temper. She had lied to her parents, to her friends, to herself, for so long the lie had become the truth. But hearing Liam say his name so casually, with a sort of detached nostalgia, made the real truth surface, sharp and ugly. She didn’t answer. She just stared at her glass, her knuckles white. “Rory?” Liam prompted, his voice laced with a concern that felt like an intrusion. “I’m sorry. Did I say something wrong?” She lifted her head, and the cool-headed intelligence he remembered was back in her bright blue eyes, but it was harder now, forged in a different fire. “You didn’t say anything wrong, Liam. You just don’t know anything at all.” She slid off the stool, her movements fluid and decisive. “It was good to see you. Really. But I have an early start.” She
was dismissing
him. He saw it, the finality in her posture, the wall back up, higher and thicker than before. He opened his mouth, then closed it. What could he say? The conversation was over. They were two people who had once shared a world, now standing on opposite sides of an unbridgeable gap. He was a success story. She was… a survivor. “Right,” he said, standing awkwardly. “Well. It was… it was
really
good to see you, Rory. Take care of yourself.” “You too,” she replied, her tone already distant. She watched him walk away, a perfect silhouette against the green glow before the door swung shut, plunging the bar back into its familiar dimness. Rory stood there for a long moment, the silence of the bar pressing in on her. She could feel Silas’s gaze on her, but he didn’t speak. He just waited. Finally, she sat back down, the energy draining out of her, leaving her feeling hollowed out. The ghost of Laila Carter had come calling, and for a few minutes, she had felt the sharp, biting sting of all the things she had lost. But as she looked around the Nest—at the maps, at the photos, at the quiet man watching over his domain—she felt the solid
weight
of the life she had chosen. A life that was hers. A life that was real. She picked up her glass, the whiskey a warm, steady
weight
in her hand, and finished it in one go.
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2/17/2026, 2:56:23 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
56.4103%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
13
adverbTagCount
3
adverbTags
0
"she said, turning back to her glass [back]"
1
"he said, standing awkwardly [awkwardly]"
2
"she replied, her tone already distant [already]"
66.9604%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1816
totalAiIsmAdverbs
6
found
0
adverb
"quickly"
count
1
1
adverb
"really"
count
5
highlights
0
"quickly"
1
"really"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
55.9471%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1816
totalAiIsms
8
found
0
word
"testament"
count
1
1
word
"sanctuary"
count
1
2
word
"sentinel"
count
1
3
word
"pang"
count
1
4
word
"tinged"
count
1
5
word
"flicker"
count
1
6
word
"weight"
count
2
highlights
0
"testament"
1
"sanctuary"
2
"sentinel"
3
"pang"
4
"tinged"
5
"flicker"
6
"weight"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
130
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
130
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
149
matches
0
"Is that it?"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
37
mean
48.73
std
35.29
cv
0.724
sampleLengths
0
166
1
89
2
48
3
7
4
118
5
59
6
23
7
54
8
46
9
21
10
13
11
25
12
53
13
26
14
40
15
37
16
55
17
31
18
3
19
41
20
19
21
56
22
53
23
17
24
28
25
60
26
38
27
86
28
44
29
101
30
12
31
21
32
63
33
64
34
20
35
33
36
133
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
130
matches
0
"was styled were gone"
1
"been groomed"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
7
totalVerbs
227
matches
0
"was savoring"
1
"was waiting"
2
"was listening"
3
"was studying"
4
"was calling"
5
"was trying"
6
"was dismissing"
88.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1483
adjectiveStacks
2
stackExamples
0
"stylish, thin-rimmed frames."
1
"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
47
adverbRatio
0.03169251517194875
lyAdverbCount
17
lyAdverbRatio
0.011463250168577209
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
149
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
149
mean
12.1
std
8.09
cv
0.668
sampleLengths
0
8
1
29
2
17
3
24
4
15
5
18
6
21
7
34
8
18
9
29
10
4
11
14
12
5
13
19
14
16
15
4
16
16
17
12
18
7
19
8
20
1
21
10
22
21
23
12
24
20
25
13
26
3
27
6
28
12
29
12
30
5
31
15
32
27
33
2
34
1
35
9
36
9
37
14
38
13
39
20
40
21
41
27
42
9
43
10
44
5
45
16
46
10
47
3
48
19
49
6
39.2617%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
16
diversityRatio
0.2953020134228188
totalSentences
149
uniqueOpeners
44
21.1538%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
13
fancyCount
8
fancyTags
0
"she corrected, her voice tighter than she intended (correct, intend)"
1
"she said, turning back to her glass (say, turn)"
2
"Liam began, swirling the whiskey in his glass (begin, swirl)"
3
"she murmured, the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist beginning to itch (murmur, leave)"
4
"she said, taking a long swallow of her whiskey (say, take)"
5
"she cut in, her voice low and cold (cut in)"
6
"he repeated, as if the word were foreign (repeat, be)"
7
"he said, standing awkwardly (say, stand awkwardly)"
83.9843%