| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.67% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1047 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1047 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "quickened" | | 8 | "perfect" | | 9 | "sentinel" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "dancing" | | 13 | "echo" | | 14 | "measured" | | 15 | "navigate" | | 16 | "footsteps" | | 17 | "intensity" | | 18 | "crystallized" | | 19 | "could feel" | | 20 | "throbbed" | | 21 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 65.64% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1037 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 1036 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 0.97 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 10 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Rory | 7 |
| | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed muted in the darkness, their colors leached to pale shadows" | | 1 | "seemed taller now, or perhaps she had grown smaller" | | 2 | "rhythm that seemed to echo the pendant's frantic pulsing" | | 3 | "inhalations that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once" | | 4 | "as if responding to some signal she couldn't hear" | | 5 | "seemed suddenly significant as if that long-ago wound had been marking her for this moment" | | 6 | "sounded like a congregation of lungs worki" | | 7 | "quite human, weren't quite animal, weren't quite anything she had words for" | | 8 | "quite anything she had words for" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1037 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | |
| 71.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 43.21 | | std | 17.22 | | cv | 0.399 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 64 | | 1 | 53 | | 2 | 51 | | 3 | 49 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 65 | | 6 | 54 | | 7 | 38 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 54 | | 11 | 38 | | 12 | 58 | | 13 | 52 | | 14 | 49 | | 15 | 52 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 66 | | 18 | 51 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 40 | | 22 | 52 | | 23 | 18 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.04% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 171 | | matches | | 0 | "was calling" | | 1 | "were pressing" | | 2 | "was watching" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 74 | | ratio | 0.135 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant lay heavy against her chest, its crimson surface pulsing with that familiar warmth—though tonight, the rhythm felt erratic, almost frantic." | | 1 | "Even the air felt different here—thicker, pregnant with possibilities that made her skin crawl." | | 2 | "Time moved differently here—Eva had warned her about that." | | 3 | "A sound drifted through the stillness—soft, like fabric brushing against bark." | | 4 | "The silence that followed felt different—expectant, hungry." | | 5 | "Another sound reached her—breathing that wasn't her own." | | 6 | "That's when she saw them—eyes reflecting that glow, watching her from behind the nearest standing stone." | | 7 | "The eyes blinked—a slow, deliberate gesture that somehow conveyed amusement." | | 8 | "The wrongness she'd felt from the moment she entered crystallized into certainty—she was not alone." | | 9 | "Not rushing, not attacking—simply closing the distance with inevitable purpose." |
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| 85.43% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1048 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "lay heavy against her" | | 1 | "absolute, pressing against her" |
| | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.042938931297709926 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013358778625954198 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 74 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 74 | | mean | 14.01 | | std | 6.01 | | cv | 0.429 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 56.76% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.40540540540540543 | | totalSentences | 74 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the air felt different" | | 1 | "Just the ancient oaks standing" | | 2 | "Definitely fabric, or perhaps leather." |
| | ratio | 0.041 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldn't be here." | | 1 | "She paused near the center" | | 2 | "She spun toward it, but" | | 3 | "Her heart hammered against her" | | 4 | "Her childhood accident had taught" | | 5 | "She clutched it tighter, letting" | | 6 | "They held too much knowledge," | | 7 | "They belonged to something that" | | 8 | "They formed a circle around" | | 9 | "She had never been alone" | | 10 | "Her scar throbbed in time" |
| | ratio | 0.151 | |
| 76.44% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed against" | | 1 | "Rory stood at the boundary" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant lay heavy" | | 3 | "She shouldn't be here." | | 4 | "Something in the Grove was" | | 5 | "The first step across the" | | 6 | "The wildflowers that bloomed impossibly" | | 7 | "Rory pulled her jacket tighter" | | 8 | "The silence was absolute, pressing" | | 9 | "The pendant's pulse quickened." | | 10 | "She paused near the center" | | 11 | "The stones around her seemed" | | 12 | "Time moved differently here—Eva had" | | 13 | "An hour inside could stretch" | | 14 | "A sound drifted through the" | | 15 | "Rory turned toward it, her" | | 16 | "The sound came again, closer" | | 17 | "The slow, deliberate whisper of" | | 18 | "Rory's hand went instinctively to" | | 19 | "The word escaped before she" |
| | ratio | 0.767 | |
| 68.49% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "As if something had been" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 28.06% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Something in the Grove was calling to her, something that made her childhood scar ache with phantom pain." | | 1 | "The wildflowers that bloomed impossibly year-round seemed muted in the darkness, their colors leached to pale shadows." | | 2 | "Even the air felt different here—thicker, pregnant with possibilities that made her skin crawl." | | 3 | "But something warned her against making noise, some primitive instinct that whispered of predators in the dark." | | 4 | "Just the ancient oaks standing sentinel, their branches reaching toward a sky that seemed somehow too close, as if the heavens themselves were pressing down on …" | | 5 | "Slow, measured inhalations that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once." | | 6 | "The air itself seemed to be drawing breath, the Grove's lungs expanding and contracting with alien purpose." | | 7 | "They belonged to something that had been waiting far longer than any mortal creature could wait, something that measured time in centuries rather than heartbeat…" | | 8 | "The childhood accident that had left its mark seemed suddenly significant, as if that long-ago wound had been marking her for this moment." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |