Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMWY210V9FYVH6Z0A381N6V

Run Details

Duration:
50.8s
Cost:
$0.030864

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Richmond Park gates had been locked for hours when Rory finally found the gap in the hedgerow that Eva had described. The opening was barely wide enough for her shoulders, branches catching at her jacket as she squeezed through into the park's interior. Her phone's flashlight carved a narrow beam through the darkness, illuminating patches of frost-brittle grass and the skeletal silhouettes of ancient oaks. She shouldn't be here. Not at two in the morning, not alone, and certainly not chasing after Eva's cryptic text message: *Grove. Midnight. Come alone or don't come at all.* But Eva had been missing for three days, and the police weren't taking it seriously. Just another troubled young woman who'd probably run off with a boyfriend, they'd said. They didn't know Eva like Rory did. The Heartstone pendant beneath her coat pulsed with a warmth that had nothing to do with her body heat. It had been doing that more frequently lately, ever since Eva had given it to her with shaking hands and wild eyes, babbling about old debts and older promises. Rory had thought it was just Eva being dramatic, the way she'd always been as a child. Now she wondered if she should have listened more carefully. Her footsteps crunched through dead leaves as she followed the path deeper into the park. The silence pressed against her eardrums, too complete for a place so close to London. No distant traffic, no urban hum, not even the rustle of small creatures in the underbrush. Just her breathing and the steady rhythm of her boots on the frost-hardened ground. The standing stones appeared without warning, looming out of the darkness like ancient sentinels. Seven massive oaks arranged in a perfect circle, their trunks easily wide enough for three people to link hands around. Rory had never seen anything like them in Richmond Park, despite having walked these paths countless times during her university years. Yet here they stood, their bark scarred with symbols that seemed to shift in the uncertain light of her phone. The pendant's warmth intensified, now almost hot against her skin. "Eva?" Her voice sounded thin in the vast silence. "Eva, are you here?" Nothing answered, but something was wrong with the quality of the darkness between the trees. It seemed thicker somehow, more substantial, as if shadows had gained weight and substance. Rory stepped closer to the circle's edge, and the air itself felt different—charged, expectant, alive with possibilities that made her skin crawl. She'd come this far. Eva needed her. Rory stepped between two of the massive oaks. The change was immediate and disorienting. The night sounds of London—so distant she hadn't consciously registered their absence—vanished entirely. The temperature rose several degrees, and the frost beneath her feet dissolved into soft earth that seemed to pulse with its own rhythm. Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion around her boots, their colors vivid even in the darkness. This wasn't Richmond Park anymore. This was somewhere else entirely. The pendant burned against her chest now, its crimson glow visible even through her coat and sweater. Rory pulled it free, and the deep red stone cast everything in shades of blood and shadow. The light revealed a clearing that extended far beyond what the circle of oaks should have contained, dotted with flowers that had no names and trees whose leaves whispered secrets in languages that predated human speech. "Welcome, Aurora Carter." The voice came from everywhere and nowhere, melodious and terrible. Rory spun in place, but saw nothing except the impossible garden and the star-drunk sky overhead. The constellations were wrong here, arranged in patterns that hurt to look at directly. "Where's Eva?" She kept her voice steady through sheer force of will. "What have you done with her?" Laughter like silver bells and breaking glass echoed through the clearing. "Your friend came willingly, as did you. The old contracts must be honored, the debts paid in full." Movement at the edge of her vision made Rory turn sharply to the left, but there was nothing there except swaying flowers. Then to the right—again, nothing. But something was definitely circling her, keeping just beyond the pendant's crimson light. "What contracts? What debts?" Rory backed toward the center of the clearing, trying to keep the entire space in view. "I don't understand what you're talking about." "Your bloodline understands. Welsh blood, thick with old promises. Your great-grandmother knew the price when she accepted our gift." The pendant's heat was becoming unbearable, but when Rory tried to lift the chain over her head, it wouldn't move. The silver had somehow fused with her skin, or perhaps her skin had grown around it. She could feel it becoming part of her, its warmth spreading through her veins like infection. "Jennifer Ellis," the voice continued, closer now. "She bore a daughter who bore a daughter who bore you. Three generations of borrowed time, of lives lived beyond their natural span. Did you never wonder why your grandmother lived to be ninety-seven despite the cancer? Why your mother survived that car accident with barely a scratch? Why you walked away from worse?" Images flashed through Rory's mind: her grandmother's unnaturally clear eyes on her deathbed, her mother emerging from twisted metal without serious injury, her own miraculous recoveries from childhood illnesses that should have been fatal. The crescent scar on her wrist throbbed, and she remembered with sudden, terrible clarity that the "childhood accident" had been no accident at all. She'd been seven years old, playing in her grandmother's garden, when she'd found the silver knife buried beneath the rosebush. The cut had been deliberate, precise, made while whispering words her grandmother had taught her in what she'd claimed was old Welsh. But it hadn't been Welsh at all. "The debt comes due with the third daughter of the third daughter," the voice said, and now Rory could see its owner moving between the trees—tall and impossibly graceful, with features that shifted like water whenever she tried to focus on them. "Your friend simply hastened the collection. She thought she could bargain for your freedom, trade herself in your place. But the contract is quite specific about bloodlines." Terror crystallized in Rory's chest, sharp and clean as winter air. "Where is she? Where's Eva?" The figure gestured toward the far end of the clearing, where the wildflowers grew thickest. Among their impossible blooms, Rory could now make out a pale shape that might have been a sleeping person or might have been something else entirely. The flowers seemed to be growing from it, or into it—in the pendant's hellish light, it was impossible to tell which. "She sleeps in the dreaming earth," the figure said. "As you will sleep, when your time comes. The gift your great-grandmother accepted carries its own weight. Every year beyond your natural span must be balanced by a year of service." Rory's mind raced, cataloging possibilities and escape routes with the cold efficiency that had gotten her through law school despite her reluctance. The standing stones were behind her, but she could feel that they were just symbols now—the real boundary between worlds had closed the moment she'd stepped into the clearing. The pendant was part of her, its crimson light revealing more creatures moving in the shadows beyond the trees. Not malevolent, exactly, but alien in a way that made her hindbrain scream warnings about things that wore familiar shapes but lacked familiar souls. Time moved differently here, the voice had implied. An hour inside could be minutes or days outside. How long had Eva been here? How long before someone noticed Rory was missing? "You have a choice," the figure continued, now close enough that Rory could smell earth and growing things and something else, something that reminded her uncomfortably of copper pennies. "Accept your inheritance willingly, and serve with dignity. Resist, and watch your friend wither while you join her in the dreaming earth." The pendant pulsed once, twice, then began to dim. As its light faded, the creatures at the edge of the clearing pressed closer, their eyes reflecting the dying glow like scattered stars. Rory closed her eyes and tried to think like the lawyer she'd never wanted to become. Every contract had loopholes. Every deal could be renegotiated. She just had to find the right words before the light went out entirely.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"the voice said, and now Rory could see its owner moving between the trees—tall and impossibly graceful, with features that shifted like water whenever she tried to focus on them [impossibly like]"
1"the figure continued, now close enough that Rory could smell earth and growing things and something else, something that reminded her uncomfortably of copper pennies [enough uncomfortably]"
85.8257% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1411
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"sharply"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.3026% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1411
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"sentinels"
count1
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"looming"
count1
3
word"crystallized"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"sentinels"
1"throbbed"
2"looming"
3"crystallized"
4"weight"
5"footsteps"
6"echoed"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences77
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences88
matches
0"survived that car"
1"feel that they"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean41.12
std26.54
cv0.646
sampleLengths
066
166
275
360
475
510
613
751
87
98
1057
1110
1270
133
1440
1518
1629
1740
1827
1919
2052
2161
22100
237
2469
2516
2662
2740
2894
2931
3051
3132
3225
3314
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences77
matches
0"been locked"
1"been seven"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs180
matches
0"weren't taking"
93.4394% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1179
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount56
adverbRatio0.04749787955894826
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.018659881255301103
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean15.89
std9.23
cv0.581
sampleLengths
022
122
222
34
418
51
622
714
87
919
1029
1117
1210
1315
1415
1516
1614
1714
1820
1921
2020
2110
229
234
2415
2514
2622
274
283
298
306
3113
3223
3315
345
355
3617
3717
3836
393
4010
4116
4214
4312
446
4511
4618
4722
485
4913
61.7424% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.4318181818181818
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners38
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"the voice continued, closer now (continue)"
1"the voice said, and now Rory could see its owner moving between the trees—tall and impossibly graceful, with features that shifted like water whenever she tried to focus on them (say, see move shift like try focus)"
2"the figure continued, now close enough that Rory could smell earth and growing things and something else, something that reminded her uncomfortably of copper pennies (continue, smell grow remind)"
81.4300%