Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMWZKMTGDZN4X4VB6YH6TQQ

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Duration:
39.1s
Cost:
$0.025734

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The ancient oak standing stones loomed against the night sky like arthritic fingers, their bark scarred by centuries of wind and weather. Aurora pulled her jacket tighter as she stepped between them, the familiar weight of the Heartstone pendant warm against her chest. The silver chain felt cold where it touched her throat. She shouldn't be here. Not at half past midnight, not alone, and certainly not without telling anyone where she'd gone. But the dreams had been getting worse—visions of this place, of something waiting for her in the grove beyond the stone circle. The pendant had grown warm each time she'd woken, its deep crimson surface pulsing like a second heartbeat. The boundary between the standing stones felt different tonight. Usually, crossing into Isolde's grove was like stepping through cool water, a gentle transition that left her skin tingling. This time, the air seemed to resist her passage, thick and cloying like honey. She pushed through, emerging into the familiar clearing where wildflowers bloomed in defiance of the October chill. But something was wrong. The flowers that should have glowed with their own soft light lay flat against the earth, their petals black in the moonlight. The sweet fragrance she remembered had soured, carrying an undertone of decay that made her stomach clench. Even the ancient oak at the grove's heart looked different—its trunk scarred, its branches reaching toward the sky like desperate, grasping hands. Aurora's breath misted in the suddenly frigid air. This wasn't how time usually behaved here. In all her previous visits, the grove had maintained its own seasonal rhythm, eternal spring trapped in a pocket between realms. The cold felt invasive, wrong, as if winter had followed her through the boundary stones. She took a tentative step forward, dead flowers crunching beneath her boots. The sound seemed too loud in the oppressive silence. No insects hummed, no night birds called. Even the wind had stilled, leaving only the faint whisper of her own breathing. The pendant pulsed again, warmer now, and Aurora pressed her palm against it through her jacket. Whatever had drawn her here was close. She could feel it like static electricity before a storm, raising the fine hairs on her arms. A branch cracked somewhere behind her. Aurora spun around, scanning the tree line that bordered the clearing. Nothing moved among the shadows, but her pulse quickened anyway. She'd been alone when she entered the grove—she was certain of it. The standing stones would have warned her if someone else had been near. Another sound, softer this time. Like footsteps on carpet, or bare feet on grass. But there was no grass here anymore, only the withered remains of what had once been beautiful. "Hello?" Her voice came out smaller than she'd intended. The word seemed to die just a few feet from her lips, swallowed by the unnatural quiet. No answer. But now she could hear breathing that wasn't her own—slow, deliberate, coming from multiple directions at once. As if she'd wandered into the center of a circle of watchers. The pendant was burning hot now, its crimson glow visible through her jacket. Aurora pulled it free, letting it hang in the open air. Its light cast strange shadows among the dead flowers, shadows that seemed to move independently of the gentle swaying of the chain. That was when she saw them. At first, just glimpses at the edge of her vision—pale shapes that vanished when she turned to look directly at them. But as her eyes adjusted to the pendant's glow, she began to make out details. Figures standing motionless among the trees. Tall, impossibly thin, with faces that were almost human but not quite right. Too many angles, too much symmetry, features that hurt to look at directly. They weren't moving, but somehow they seemed closer than they'd been a moment before. Aurora took a step backward, toward the standing stones. The figures didn't react, but she could feel their attention like cold breath on her neck. The pendant's warmth was the only thing keeping her from shivering apart. Her heel caught on something—a root, or maybe a stone hidden among the dead flowers. She stumbled, catching herself with her free hand against the rough bark of the central oak. The moment her skin touched the tree, images flooded her mind. The grove as it had been—green and alive, filled with Isolde's laughter. Then darkness spreading like spilled ink, flowers withering, the very air growing thick with wrongness. And standing at the center of it all, a figure in flowing robes, arms raised toward a sky that had torn open like old fabric. Aurora jerked her hand away from the tree, gasping. The vision faded, but the taste of copper and ozone lingered in her mouth. Whatever had happened here, it had been recent. The grove was wounded, maybe dying. The figures among the trees had moved closer. She could see them clearly now—their skin like moonlight on water, their eyes deep pits that reflected her pendant's glow. They watched her with the patient hunger of predators who knew their prey was trapped. But Aurora wasn't trapped. Not yet. She closed her fist around the pendant, feeling its heat sear her palm. The pain was grounding, real, cutting through the dreamlike horror of her surroundings. She was Aurora Carter. She had walked between worlds before and survived. Whatever these things were, whatever had poisoned the grove, she wouldn't give them the satisfaction of seeing her panic. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist began to itch, the way it always did when she was afraid. But fear could be useful. Fear kept you alive when rational thought failed. One of the figures stepped forward, into the pendant's circle of light. Up close, Aurora could see that what she'd taken for robes were actually its own elongated limbs, stretched and twisted into flowing shapes. When it spoke, its voice came from everywhere and nowhere at once. "You carry light in the darkness," it said, the words sliding through her mind like ice water. "We have been waiting for you to return it to us." Aurora backed toward the standing stones, her movements slow and deliberate. "I don't know what you're talking about." "The stone remembers," the thing said, gesturing toward her pendant with a limb that bent in too many directions. "It has tasted our realm. It belongs with us now." The other figures began to move, closing the circle. Their footsteps made no sound, but Aurora could feel the earth trembling beneath their weight. The pendant's glow flickered, its warmth fading. She was three steps from the boundary stones when she understood. The pendant wasn't just reacting to whatever had corrupted the grove—it was connected to it. The warmth she'd been feeling wasn't protection. It was recognition. These things weren't trapped in the grove. They were trying to get out. And she'd brought them exactly what they needed.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"the thing said, gesturing toward her pendant with a limb that bent in too many directions [too]"
82.9060% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1170
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.1709% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1170
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"oppressive"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"footsteps"
count2
highlights
0"flickered"
1"oppressive"
2"loomed"
3"weight"
4"footsteps"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences91
matches
0"was afraid"
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences91
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean35.15
std17.88
cv0.509
sampleLengths
053
160
259
34
461
551
642
740
86
946
1031
1126
1231
1346
146
1568
1614
1737
1842
1952
2037
2143
226
2357
2432
2547
2628
2718
2829
2931
3036
3113
328
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences91
matches
0"been—green"
1"was wounded"
2"was connected"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs195
matches
0"was burning"
1"was grounding"
2"were trying"
89.5786% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1132
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"own—slow, deliberate, coming"
adverbCount51
adverbRatio0.045053003533568906
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.012367491166077738
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean12.34
std5.47
cv0.443
sampleLengths
022
121
210
34
416
522
618
79
819
914
1017
114
1222
1317
1422
158
167
1721
1815
1912
209
217
2214
2316
247
2517
266
2711
2810
2912
3013
315
329
3317
349
3517
362
3717
3812
3913
4011
4122
426
4321
4415
456
4613
4713
4814
499
58.1560% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.39361702127659576
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners37
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"it said, the words sliding through her mind like ice water (say, slide)"
1"the thing said, gesturing toward her pendant with a limb that bent in too many directions (say, gesture)"
80.6360%