| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.45% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1169 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 1.63% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1169 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "oppressive" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "scanning" | | 11 | "pulse" | | 12 | "quickened" | | 13 | "footsteps" | | 14 | "warmth" | | 15 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | matches | | |
| 32.97% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1160 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 1122 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.07 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Isolde | 2 | | October | 1 | | Aurora | 12 | | Carter | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "October" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Carter" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.965 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 89.02% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "shadows that seemed to move independently of the gentle swaying of the chain" | | 1 | "seemed closer than they'd been a moment before" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1160 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 35.15 | | std | 17.88 | | cv | 0.509 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 60 | | 2 | 59 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 61 | | 5 | 51 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 40 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 46 | | 10 | 31 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 46 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 68 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 42 | | 19 | 52 | | 20 | 37 | | 21 | 43 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 57 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 47 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 29 | | 29 | 31 | | 30 | 36 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 8 |
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| 93.70% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "been—green" | | 1 | "was wounded" | | 2 | "was connected" |
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| 29.06% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 195 | | matches | | 0 | "was like stepping" | | 1 | "was burning" | | 2 | "was grounding" | | 3 | "wasn't just reacting" | | 4 | "were trying" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 94 | | ratio | 0.096 | | matches | | 0 | "But the dreams had been getting worse—visions of this place, of something waiting for her in the grove beyond the stone circle." | | 1 | "Even the ancient oak at the grove's heart looked different—its trunk scarred, its branches reaching toward the sky like desperate, grasping hands." | | 2 | "She'd been alone when she entered the grove—she was certain of it." | | 3 | "But now she could hear breathing that wasn't her own—slow, deliberate, coming from multiple directions at once." | | 4 | "At first, just glimpses at the edge of her vision—pale shapes that vanished when she turned to look directly at them." | | 5 | "Her heel caught on something—a root, or maybe a stone hidden among the dead flowers." | | 6 | "The grove as it had been—green and alive, filled with Isolde's laughter." | | 7 | "She could see them clearly now—their skin like moonlight on water, their eyes deep pits that reflected her pendant's glow." | | 8 | "The pendant wasn't just reacting to whatever had corrupted the grove—it was connected to it." |
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| 89.58% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1132 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "own—slow, deliberate, coming" |
| | adverbCount | 51 | | adverbRatio | 0.045053003533568906 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012367491166077738 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 94 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 94 | | mean | 12.34 | | std | 5.47 | | cv | 0.443 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 58.16% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.39361702127659576 | | totalSentences | 94 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Usually, crossing into Isolde's grove" | | 1 | "Even the ancient oak at" | | 2 | "Even the wind had stilled," | | 3 | "Too many angles, too much" | | 4 | "Then darkness spreading like spilled" |
| | ratio | 0.056 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldn't be here." | | 1 | "She pushed through, emerging into" | | 2 | "She took a tentative step" | | 3 | "She could feel it like" | | 4 | "She'd been alone when she" | | 5 | "Her voice came out smaller" | | 6 | "Its light cast strange shadows" | | 7 | "They weren't moving, but somehow" | | 8 | "Her heel caught on something—a" | | 9 | "She stumbled, catching herself with" | | 10 | "She could see them clearly" | | 11 | "They watched her with the" | | 12 | "She closed her fist around" | | 13 | "She was Aurora Carter." | | 14 | "She had walked between worlds" | | 15 | "it said, the words sliding" | | 16 | "Their footsteps made no sound," | | 17 | "She was three steps from" | | 18 | "It was recognition." | | 19 | "They were trying to get" |
| | ratio | 0.225 | |
| 94.83% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "Aurora pulled her jacket tighter" | | 2 | "The silver chain felt cold" | | 3 | "She shouldn't be here." | | 4 | "The pendant had grown warm" | | 5 | "The boundary between the standing" | | 6 | "This time, the air seemed" | | 7 | "She pushed through, emerging into" | | 8 | "The flowers that should have" | | 9 | "The sweet fragrance she remembered" | | 10 | "Aurora's breath misted in the" | | 11 | "This wasn't how time usually" | | 12 | "The cold felt invasive, wrong," | | 13 | "She took a tentative step" | | 14 | "The sound seemed too loud" | | 15 | "The pendant pulsed again, warmer" | | 16 | "Whatever had drawn her here" | | 17 | "She could feel it like" | | 18 | "A branch cracked somewhere behind" | | 19 | "Aurora spun around, scanning the" |
| | ratio | 0.73 | |
| 56.18% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "As if she'd wandered into" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 66.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Usually, crossing into Isolde's grove was like stepping through cool water, a gentle transition that left her skin tingling." | | 1 | "The flowers that should have glowed with their own soft light lay flat against the earth, their petals black in the moonlight." | | 2 | "The sweet fragrance she remembered had soured, carrying an undertone of decay that made her stomach clench." | | 3 | "Its light cast strange shadows among the dead flowers, shadows that seemed to move independently of the gentle swaying of the chain." | | 4 | "And standing at the center of it all, a figure in flowing robes, arms raised toward a sky that had torn open like old fabric." | | 5 | "She could see them clearly now—their skin like moonlight on water, their eyes deep pits that reflected her pendant's glow." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "it said, the words sliding through her mind like ice water" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |