| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 70.33% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 337 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 25.82% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 337 | | totalAiIsms | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "etched" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "navigating" | | 4 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 40 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 35.71% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 40 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 331 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 11 | | wordCount | 322 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.93 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Cool-headed | 1 | | Rory | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Empress" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 18.42% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 19 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed closer now, their lichen-covered surfaces darker than before" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 3.021 | | wordCount | 331 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the soft decay of autumn leaves, but a sharp, deliberate crack" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 14 | | mean | 23.64 | | std | 20.2 | | cv | 0.854 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 75 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 36 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 6 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't looking" | | 1 | "was watching" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 40 | | ratio | 0.1 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn't planned to be here in Richmond Park so late, but the delivery run for Golden Empress had taken longer than expected, and something—a whisper, a pull—had drawn her into the grove." | | 1 | "The first hint of wrongness crept along her spine—a sensation more felt than heard." | | 2 | "Her left wrist—the one with the small crescent-shaped childhood scar—began to tingle." | | 3 | "The ground beneath her feet felt different—softer, yet more solid." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 222 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped childhood" |
| | adverbCount | 8 | | adverbRatio | 0.036036036036036036 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013513513513513514 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 40 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 40 | | mean | 8.28 | | std | 7.43 | | cv | 0.898 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 33 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.625 | | totalSentences | 40 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 27 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 27 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn't planned to be" | | 1 | "Her left wrist—the one with" | | 2 | "She'd learned control from years" | | 3 | "Its crimson surface seemed to" |
| | ratio | 0.148 | |
| 34.07% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 27 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter clutched the Heartstone" | | 2 | "She hadn't planned to be" | | 3 | "Time felt different here." | | 4 | "The wildflowers that shouldn't bloom" | | 5 | "Rory's bright blue eyes scanned" | | 6 | "The first hint of wrongness" | | 7 | "A twig snapped behind her." | | 8 | "The standing stones seemed closer" | | 9 | "Her left wrist—the one with" | | 10 | "The Heartstone pendant grew warm," | | 11 | "Rory's voice came out steady" | | 12 | "She'd learned control from years" | | 13 | "The wildflowers had stopped moving." | | 14 | "Every single petal was perfectly" | | 15 | "The moonlight seemed to bend" | | 16 | "Something moved at the edge" | | 17 | "Darker than the surrounding darkness." | | 18 | "The pendant grew warmer." | | 19 | "Its crimson surface seemed to" |
| | ratio | 0.852 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 27 | | matches | | 0 | "As though the earth itself" |
| | ratio | 0.037 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 14 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The wildflowers that shouldn't bloom in late autumn swayed without wind, their petals iridescent under the silver moonlight." | | 1 | "The moonlight seemed to bend around the stone circle, creating impossible shadows that shifted when she wasn't looking directly at them." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |