Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMZ0GWRYY954ZBAGXJNBW5P

Run Details

Duration:
13.5s
Cost:
$0.002678

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The ancient oak standing stones cast long shadows in the moonlight, their weathered surfaces etched with lichen and memories older than any living thing. Aurora Carter clutched the Heartstone pendant around her neck, its deep crimson surface pulsing faintly against her skin. She hadn't planned to be here in Richmond Park so late, but the delivery run for Golden Empress had taken longer than expected, and something—a whisper, a pull—had drawn her into the grove. Time felt different here. The wildflowers that shouldn't bloom in late autumn swayed without wind, their petals iridescent under the silver moonlight. Rory's bright blue eyes scanned the clearing, her straight black hair stirring slightly around her shoulders. The first hint of wrongness crept along her spine—a sensation more felt than heard. A twig snapped behind her. Not the soft decay of autumn leaves, but a sharp, deliberate crack. She turned. Nothing. The standing stones seemed closer now, their lichen-covered surfaces darker than before. Her left wrist—the one with the small crescent-shaped childhood scar—began to tingle. The Heartstone pendant grew warm, its faint inner glow intensifying almost imperceptibly. Another sound. A rustle. Like fabric dragging through tall grass, but smoother. More deliberate. "Who's there?" Rory's voice came out steady. She'd learned control from years of dealing with her ex, from navigating her parents' expectations, from surviving London's unpredictable streets. Cool-headed. Analytical. Silence answered. The wildflowers had stopped moving. Every single petal was perfectly still, as though carved from glass. The moonlight seemed to bend around the stone circle, creating impossible shadows that shifted when she wasn't looking directly at them. Something moved at the edge of her vision. A shape. Darker than the surrounding darkness. Gone when she turned her head. The pendant grew warmer. Its crimson surface seemed to ripple, like blood beneath skin. Rory took a step backward. The ground beneath her feet felt different—softer, yet more solid. As though the earth itself was watching. Waiting. Another step. The standing stones watched. Silent. Knowing.
total_cost0.0026784

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
70.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount337
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount337
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"etched"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"navigating"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"whisper"
2"scanned"
3"navigating"
4"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences40
matches(empty)
35.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences40
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences40
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords331
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount322
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.93
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Heartstone2
Richmond1
Park1
Golden1
Empress1
Cool-headed1
Rory3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Empress"
2"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
18.42% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences19
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed closer now, their lichen-covered surfaces darker than before"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords3.021
wordCount331
matches
0"Not the soft decay of autumn leaves, but a sharp, deliberate crack"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences40
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs14
mean23.64
std20.2
cv0.854
sampleLengths
075
152
217
33
436
514
629
72
837
921
1014
1123
122
136
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences40
matches(empty)
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs51
matches
0"wasn't looking"
1"was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences40
ratio0.1
matches
0"She hadn't planned to be here in Richmond Park so late, but the delivery run for Golden Empress had taken longer than expected, and something—a whisper, a pull—had drawn her into the grove."
1"The first hint of wrongness crept along her spine—a sensation more felt than heard."
2"Her left wrist—the one with the small crescent-shaped childhood scar—began to tingle."
3"The ground beneath her feet felt different—softer, yet more solid."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount222
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped childhood"
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.036036036036036036
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.013513513513513514
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences40
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences40
mean8.28
std7.43
cv0.898
sampleLengths
024
118
233
34
418
516
614
75
812
92
101
1112
1212
1312
142
152
168
172
187
1920
201
211
222
235
2411
2521
268
272
285
296
304
3110
325
3310
347
351
362
374
381
391
100.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.625
totalSentences40
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences27
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount4
totalSentences27
matches
0"She hadn't planned to be"
1"Her left wrist—the one with"
2"She'd learned control from years"
3"Its crimson surface seemed to"
ratio0.148
34.07% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount23
totalSentences27
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones"
1"Aurora Carter clutched the Heartstone"
2"She hadn't planned to be"
3"Time felt different here."
4"The wildflowers that shouldn't bloom"
5"Rory's bright blue eyes scanned"
6"The first hint of wrongness"
7"A twig snapped behind her."
8"The standing stones seemed closer"
9"Her left wrist—the one with"
10"The Heartstone pendant grew warm,"
11"Rory's voice came out steady"
12"She'd learned control from years"
13"The wildflowers had stopped moving."
14"Every single petal was perfectly"
15"The moonlight seemed to bend"
16"Something moved at the edge"
17"Darker than the surrounding darkness."
18"The pendant grew warmer."
19"Its crimson surface seemed to"
ratio0.852
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences27
matches
0"As though the earth itself"
ratio0.037
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences14
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The wildflowers that shouldn't bloom in late autumn swayed without wind, their petals iridescent under the silver moonlight."
1"The moonlight seemed to bend around the stone circle, creating impossible shadows that shifted when she wasn't looking directly at them."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
73.9723%