Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNETGYJQGEZEKGNGHBEV7JQ

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1m 4s
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Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The familiar burn of whiskey traced its way down Rory's throat as she sat hunched over the bar, her reflection swimming in the amber liquid. The Raven's Nest wrapped around her like an old coat—comfortable, worn, smelling faintly of leather and smoke despite the ban years ago. She'd been living upstairs for three months now, but tonight was the first time she'd ventured down to actually drink rather than just pass through. "Another?" Silas wiped down the bar with practiced efficiency, his signet ring catching the green glow from the neon sign outside. "Better not." Rory pushed the glass away, watching condensation bead on its surface. "Early delivery tomorrow. Mrs. Chen wants me there by six." The door chimed, bringing with it a gust of October air and the distant sound of Soho nightlife. Rory didn't look up—she'd learned that making eye contact in bars invited conversation, and tonight she wanted nothing more than to dissolve into the worn leather of her barstool. "Rory?" The voice hit her like ice water. She knew it instantly, though it had deepened, roughened at the edges like everything else touched by time. Her fingers tightened around the empty glass. "Christ, it is you." She turned slowly, as if sudden movement might shatter whatever strange dream had conjured him here. But no—there stood Marcus Donnelly, all six feet of him, broader now through the shoulders, his university softness hardened into something more deliberate. The boyish face she remembered had sharpened, and a neat beard covered the jaw she'd once traced with her fingers in the dark of her Cardiff dorm room. "Marcus." The name felt foreign on her tongue. He moved closer, and she caught his scent—different now, expensive cologne replacing the cheap body spray he'd favored at nineteen. His suit probably cost more than she made in a month delivering Chinese food. "I can't believe it. Rory Carter, in London." He smiled, and for a moment she saw the ghost of the boy who'd spent hours with her in the university library, building elaborate arguments about constitutional law while she doodled in the margins of her notebooks. "What's it been? Six years?" "Seven." The correction came automatically. Seven years, two months, and a handful of days since she'd walked out of their shared flat without a word, leaving only a note and the engagement ring he'd given her the night before. Marcus flagged Silas down. "Whatever she's having, and I'll take a Macallan. Neat." "I was just leaving, actually." Rory started to rise, but Marcus's hand on her arm stopped her. Not forceful—Marcus had never been forceful—but heavy with unspoken please. "One drink. For old times." Silas set down their glasses with a knowing look that made Rory want to throttle him. The old spy had a talent for reading situations, and his slight nod toward the back room told her he'd make himself scarce if needed. She settled back onto her stool. "So." Marcus took a sip of his whiskey, signet ring of his own catching the light. When had he started wearing jewelry? "London. I always thought you'd end up here eventually." "Did you?" The question came out sharper than intended. He had the grace to look away. "You talked about it enough. The Inner Temple, chambers with a view of the Thames. You had it all planned out." Rory traced the rim of her glass with one finger. "Plans change." "They do." He studied her, and she fought the urge to smooth down her delivery uniform, to hide the grease stain on her sleeve from this morning's motorcycle mishap. "I'm with Clifford Chance now. Corporate law. Made partner last year." Of course he had. Marcus had always been the steady one, the one who colored inside the lines while she sketched whole new pictures in the margins. "Congratulations." "Thanks." He paused, rolling his glass between his palms. "I heard about your father." The words hung between them like a blade. Rory's hand moved unconsciously to her wrist, thumb finding the crescent scar hidden beneath her sleeve. "News travels." "He was a good man. Brilliant barrister." "Yes." She took a long pull of whiskey. "He was." Marcus shifted on his stool, and she could feel the questions radiating off him. Why didn't you finish law school? Why are you delivering food? Why did you leave? The last one had haunted her through Cardiff, through her disastrous relationship with Evan, through the midnight flight to London with Eva's voice in her ear telling her to just get on the bloody train. "I'm sorry," he said finally. "About how things ended." Rory laughed, short and bitter. "You're sorry? Marc, I left you a note. A fucking note." "I know." "You'd just proposed. Your parents were coming down from Edinburgh the next week to celebrate." "I know." "I was a coward." "You were twenty." His voice held no recrimination, and somehow that made it worse. "We both were." The bar had filled while they talked, bodies pressing closer, voices rising to compete with the music someone had turned up. But their corner felt suspended, a pocket universe where the past bled into the present like watercolors in rain. "You look good," Marcus said quietly. "Different, but good." "I look like someone who delivers Chinese food for a living." "You look like yourself." He finished his whiskey in one smooth motion. "Not trying to be someone else." The observation cut deeper than any criticism could have. Because that's what she'd been then—playing at being the dutiful law student, the perfect fiancée, the daughter following in her father's footsteps. She'd worn those roles like ill-fitting clothes until they'd choked her. "I should go." Rory stood, steadier now despite the whiskey. "Rory, wait." Marcus reached into his jacket, pulled out a business card. "I'm not asking for anything. But if you ever need—" "A lawyer?" "A friend." She took the card, her fingers brushing his. No spark, no electricity—just the warm, sad touch of shared history. "It was good seeing you, Marcus." "You too." He stood as well, towering over her as he always had. "I mean that." She believed him. That was the thing about Marcus—he'd always meant what he said. It had been one of the things she'd loved about him, until it became one of the things that made leaving necessary. His certainty had made her feel like a fraud, like every doubt she harbored was a betrayal of the future they'd mapped out together. Rory made her way to the narrow stairs that led to her flat, pausing at the bottom to look back. Marcus stood at the bar, shoulders squared, probably ordering another drink. He'd stay for exactly one more, she knew. Marcus had always been disciplined about his limits. The green neon from outside painted everything in shades of emerald and shadow. Six years ago, she'd run from the life he represented—the mapped-out future, the weight of expectations, the suffocating predictability of it all. Looking at him now, successful and solid and still somehow lost in this Soho bar, she wondered if he'd been running from something too. But that was a question for someone else's sleepless night. Rory climbed the stairs to her small flat above the bar, Marcus's business card a weight in her pocket. She wouldn't call him. They both knew it. But she'd keep the card anyway, tucked into the drawer with her father's old letters and the crescent moon scar on her wrist—reminders that the past, no matter how far you ran, always found a way to circle back. Through her window, she could see the London she'd dreamed of at university—lights stretching endlessly, promises humming in the autumn air. It looked nothing like she'd imagined then. It looked like home.
total_cost0.15231

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
87.50% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"The correction came automatically [automatically]"
1"he said finally [finally]"
2"Marcus said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.125
96.18% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1309
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
60.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Chen"
1"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.98% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1309
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"traced"
count3
2
word"comfortable"
count1
3
word"unspoken"
count1
4
word"could feel"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"weight"
count2
highlights
0"familiar"
1"traced"
2"comfortable"
3"unspoken"
4"could feel"
5"perfect"
6"footsteps"
7"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences76
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1295
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1073
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.21
worstName"Marcus"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Marcus"
discoveredNames
Rory11
Raven1
Nest1
October1
Soho2
Marcus13
Donnelly1
Cardiff2
Chinese1
Seven1
Silas3
Evan1
London2
Eva1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Marcus"
4"Donnelly"
5"Silas"
6"Evan"
7"Eva"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore0.894
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1295
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean24.9
std20.35
cv0.817
sampleLengths
072
121
223
347
41
532
64
767
88
934
1050
1139
1213
1327
145
1547
1631
179
1828
1912
2040
2127
221
2314
2426
257
2610
2764
289
2916
302
3115
322
334
3417
3540
369
3711
3818
3942
4010
4122
422
432
4419
456
4616
4760
4847
4959
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"been then"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs180
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences106
ratio0.104
matches
0"The Raven's Nest wrapped around her like an old coat—comfortable, worn, smelling faintly of leather and smoke despite the ban years ago."
1"Rory didn't look up—she'd learned that making eye contact in bars invited conversation, and tonight she wanted nothing more than to dissolve into the worn leather of her barstool."
2"But no—there stood Marcus Donnelly, all six feet of him, broader now through the shoulders, his university softness hardened into something more deliberate."
3"He moved closer, and she caught his scent—different now, expensive cologne replacing the cheap body spray he'd favored at nineteen."
4"Not forceful—Marcus had never been forceful—but heavy with unspoken please."
5"Because that's what she'd been then—playing at being the dutiful law student, the perfect fiancée, the daughter following in her father's footsteps."
6"No spark, no electricity—just the warm, sad touch of shared history."
7"That was the thing about Marcus—he'd always meant what he said."
8"Six years ago, she'd run from the life he represented—the mapped-out future, the weight of expectations, the suffocating predictability of it all."
9"But she'd keep the card anyway, tucked into the drawer with her father's old letters and the crescent moon scar on her wrist—reminders that the past, no matter how far you ran, always found a way to circle back."
10"Through her window, she could see the London she'd dreamed of at university—lights stretching endlessly, promises humming in the autumn air."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1087
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.03955841766329347
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.012879484820607176
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean12.22
std8.97
cv0.734
sampleLengths
025
122
225
321
413
510
618
729
81
97
1018
117
124
1316
1423
1528
168
1720
1814
1945
205
215
2234
234
249
2517
2610
275
2816
2925
306
3116
326
339
349
357
3621
3710
382
3929
4011
414
4223
431
449
455
468
4716
482
497
60.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4056603773584906
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners43
43.86% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"Of course he had."
ratio0.013
83.16% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences76
matches
0"She'd been living upstairs for"
1"She knew it instantly, though"
2"Her fingers tightened around the"
3"She turned slowly, as if"
4"He moved closer, and she"
5"His suit probably cost more"
6"He smiled, and for a"
7"She settled back onto her"
8"He had the grace to"
9"He studied her, and she"
10"He paused, rolling his glass"
11"She took a long pull"
12"he said finally"
13"His voice held no recrimination,"
14"He finished his whiskey in"
15"She'd worn those roles like"
16"She took the card, her"
17"He stood as well, towering"
18"She believed him."
19"It had been one of"
ratio0.342
65.26% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences76
matches
0"The familiar burn of whiskey"
1"The Raven's Nest wrapped around"
2"She'd been living upstairs for"
3"Silas wiped down the bar"
4"Rory pushed the glass away,"
5"The door chimed, bringing with"
6"Rory didn't look up—she'd learned"
7"The voice hit her like"
8"She knew it instantly, though"
9"Her fingers tightened around the"
10"She turned slowly, as if"
11"The boyish face she remembered"
12"The name felt foreign on"
13"He moved closer, and she"
14"His suit probably cost more"
15"He smiled, and for a"
16"The correction came automatically"
17"Marcus flagged Silas down."
18"Rory started to rise, but"
19"Silas set down their glasses"
ratio0.789
65.79% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"Because that's what she'd been"
ratio0.013
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.042
leniency0.083
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.7710%