| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.89% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1407 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 36.03% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1407 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "footfall" | | 7 | "measured" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "loomed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 141 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 141 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 98.59% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 142 | | gibberishSentences | 1 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 1 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0.007 | | matches | | 0 | "She冲出 their circle, expecting—to what?" |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1388 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 1383 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 0.43 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Richmond | 3 | | Park | 3 | | Golden | 2 | | Empress | 2 | | Heartstone | 3 | | London | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Silas | 6 | | Eva | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Rory | 2 | | Footsteps | 1 | | Stupid | 1 | | Pendant | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Empress" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Dymas" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Silas" | | 6 | "Eva" | | 7 | "Rory" | | 8 | "Footsteps" | | 9 | "Pendant" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Golden" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 13.01% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "streets that seemed to rearrange themselves, past buildings whose windows showed rooms she didn't recognize, until the path deposited her here" | | 1 | "symbols that seemed to shift when she didn't look at them directly" | | 2 | "quite a shape, a darkness that was darker than the darkness around it" | | 3 | "something like a heartbeat thrumming through" |
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| 55.91% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.441 | | wordCount | 1388 | | matches | | 0 | "Not dramatically, not like stepping into a freezer, but a subtle shift, as though the air itself had become older" | | 1 | "not like stepping into a freezer, but a subtle shift, as though the air itself had become older" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 142 | | matches | | 0 | "was that her" | | 1 | "seen that it" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 33.85 | | std | 29.4 | | cv | 0.868 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 52 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 104 | | 4 | 73 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 55 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 71 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 67 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 70 | | 21 | 53 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 73 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 35 | | 28 | 66 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 77 | | 31 | 80 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 42 | | 34 | 43 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 63 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 58 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | |
| 50.52% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 223 | | matches | | 0 | "was blazing" | | 1 | "were calming" | | 2 | "was screaming" | | 3 | "was watching was drawing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 142 | | ratio | 0.077 | | matches | | 0 | "The pathway behind her—the one she'd walked a hundred times delivering orders from Golden Empress—had vanished." | | 1 | "The Heartstone had started pulsing sometime around nine o'clock—a slow, warm throb against her sternum that she'd learned to recognize during her first weeks in London." | | 2 | "She'd walked for twenty minutes—maybe longer—through streets that seemed to rearrange themselves, past buildings whose windows showed rooms she didn't recognize, until the path deposited her here." | | 3 | "The wildflowers Silas had mentioned grew in abundance—foxglove and moonpetals and something blue that didn't match any flower she knew—but they were wrong somehow." | | 4 | "It pressed against her eardrums like water, and she could hear her own pulse loud in her ears, and beneath it—" | | 5 | "Closer this time—or was that her imagination?" | | 6 | "She could feel it now—the wrongness." | | 7 | "She could see it properly now—or rather, she could see the space it occupied, a void in the shape of something that might once have been human." | | 8 | "Not toward the path—she'd already seen that it was gone—but toward the stones, toward the far side of the circle where the trees thinned and the darkness was thinner too." | | 9 | "Her foot caught on a root—she was certain it hadn't been there a moment ago—and she stumbled, catching herself on one of the ancient oaks." | | 10 | "She冲出 their circle, expecting—to what?" |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1402 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 52 | | adverbRatio | 0.037089871611982884 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006419400855920114 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 142 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 142 | | mean | 9.77 | | std | 9.38 | | cv | 0.959 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 49.77% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.36619718309859156 | | totalSentences | 142 | | uniqueOpeners | 52 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the dark." | | 1 | "Just one step." | | 2 | "Instead, she found herself in" | | 3 | "Just a crack." | | 4 | "Just a sliver of darkness" |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 99.31% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "She turned, half-expecting to see" | | 1 | "She checked her phone." | | 2 | "She shoved it back into" | | 3 | "She'd felt it the night" | | 4 | "She'd felt it three months" | | 5 | "She'd walked for twenty minutes—maybe" | | 6 | "She'd heard about it in" | | 7 | "She knew she should turn" | | 8 | "She'd just take one look." | | 9 | "She stepped into the circle." | | 10 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 11 | "It pressed against her eardrums" | | 12 | "She spun around." | | 13 | "Her voice came out thin" | | 14 | "She cleared her throat and" | | 15 | "She forced herself to breathe." | | 16 | "She couldn't tell anymore." | | 17 | "She couldn't trust her imagination" | | 18 | "She watched them, and one" | | 19 | "She was certain of it." |
| | ratio | 0.302 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 81 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "The gravel crunched beneath her" | | 1 | "The pathway behind her—the one" | | 2 | "She turned, half-expecting to see" | | 3 | "She checked her phone." | | 4 | "The battery icon showed seventy-three" | | 5 | "She shoved it back into" | | 6 | "That was why." | | 7 | "The Heartstone had started pulsing" | | 8 | "She'd felt it the night" | | 9 | "She'd felt it three months" | | 10 | "Tonight the pulse had sharpened" | | 11 | "She'd walked for twenty minutes—maybe" | | 12 | "The Fae Grove." | | 13 | "She'd heard about it in" | | 14 | "Silas mentioning it once, over" | | 15 | "Eva had laughed it off." | | 16 | "Rory always listened, even when" | | 17 | "The standing stones rose ahead" | | 18 | "She knew she should turn" | | 19 | "The sensible thing would be" |
| | ratio | 0.698 | |
| 43.10% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "Whenever Dymas stirred, whenever some" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "She turned, half-expecting to see the familiar lamp posts of the parking lot, the iron railings that marked the pedestrian entrance." | | 1 | "Tonight the pulse had sharpened into something urgent, a heartbeat that wasn't hers, pulling her out of bed and down the stairs and through the back door of Sil…" | | 2 | "She'd walked for twenty minutes—maybe longer—through streets that seemed to rearrange themselves, past buildings whose windows showed rooms she didn't recognize…" | | 3 | "Silas mentioning it once, over drinks, a story about a girl who wandered into Richmond Park and came out three days later with silver in her hair and no memory …" | | 4 | "Not dramatically, not like stepping into a freezer, but a subtle shift, as though the air itself had become older." | | 5 | "The shadows between the trees seemed to breathe, expanding and contracting in a rhythm that matched no heartbeat she knew." | | 6 | "Smaller than the first, bordered by trees that grew so close together their branches intertwined overhead, forming a ceiling of leaves that blotted out the sky." | | 7 | "Just a sliver of darkness beneath, but that darkness was absolute, and it breathed, and from somewhere far below she heard a sound that might have been wind or …" | | 8 | "Cold, like a chip of ice against her chest, and in that cold she felt something that froze her in place more effectively than any chain." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |