Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNETGYSB053KQB8F45HPYP4

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Duration:
22.6s
Cost:
$0.002663
Provider:
SiliconFlow

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The gravel crunched beneath her boots as Aurora stopped at the edge of Richmond Park. The pathway behind her—the one she'd walked a hundred times delivering orders from Golden Empress—had vanished. She turned, half-expecting to see the familiar lamp posts of the parking lot, the iron railings that marked the pedestrian entrance. Nothing. Only trees. Only the dark. She checked her phone. No signal, of course. The battery icon showed seventy-three percent, but the screen had that flat, dead quality of a device cut off from the world. She shoved it back into her jacket pocket and tried to remember why she'd come here. The pendant. That was why. The Heartstone had started pulsing sometime around nine o'clock—a slow, warm throb against her sternum that she'd learned to recognize during her first weeks in London. Whenever Dymas stirred, whenever some door between worlds cracked open, the small crimson gem came alive. She'd felt it the night she'd fled Evan's flat, felt it lead her to Silas's bar where Eva was already waiting with a spare key and a new name. She'd felt it three months later, pulsing softly beneath the floorboards of Golden Empress's storage room, guiding her to a torn page in a language she couldn't read. But this was different. Tonight the pulse had sharpened into something urgent, a heartbeat that wasn't hers, pulling her out of bed and down the stairs and through the back door of Silas's place like a dog on a leash. She'd walked for twenty minutes—maybe longer—through streets that seemed to rearrange themselves, past buildings whose windows showed rooms she didn't recognize, until the path deposited her here. At the edge of the grove. The Fae Grove. She'd heard about it in fragments. Silas mentioning it once, over drinks, a story about a girl who wandered into Richmond Park and came out three days later with silver in her hair and no memory of her own name. Eva had laughed it off. But Rory had listened. Rory always listened, even when she wished she hadn't. The standing stones rose ahead of her, pale shapes against the darker dark of the trees. She knew she should turn back. The sensible thing would be to turn back. But the pendant was blazing now, a coal of heat against her skin, and she could feel the pull like a hook behind her navel. One look. She'd just take one look. The stones were taller than she remembered from Silas's description. Six of them, arranged in a rough circle, their surfaces carved with symbols that seemed to shift when she didn't look at them directly. The wildflowers Silas had mentioned grew in abundance—foxglove and moonpetals and something blue that didn't match any flower she knew—but they were wrong somehow. Too bright. Too still. Like paintings of flowers rather than the real thing. She stepped into the circle. The temperature dropped. Not dramatically, not like stepping into a freezer, but a subtle shift, as though the air itself had become older. Colder. She pulled her jacket tighter and listened. Nothing. No. Not nothing. That was worse. There should have been the distant murmur of traffic from the road, the hoot of an owl, the rustle of foxes in the underbrush. Richmond Park never went truly quiet. But here, in this clearing, the silence was total. Complete. It pressed against her eardrums like water, and she could hear her own pulse loud in her ears, and beneath it— Footsteps. Not hers. Behind her, to the left, somewhere among the trees. A single footfall, measured and deliberate, then nothing. She spun around. The trees stood silent. The stones watched. The flowers swayed, though there was no wind. "Hello?" Her voice came out thin. Stupid. A mouse-squeak in the vastness. She cleared her throat and tried again. "I know someone's there." Silence. The kind of silence that laughs at you. She forced herself to breathe. In through the nose, out through the mouth. The pendant pulsed, slower now, almost as if it were calming her. Or warning her. She couldn't tell anymore. The footsteps came again. Closer this time—or was that her imagination? She couldn't trust her imagination right now. The shadows between the trees seemed to breathe, expanding and contracting in a rhythm that matched no heartbeat she knew. She watched them, and one of them watched her back. She was certain of it. A shape that wasn't quite a shape, a darkness that was darker than the darkness around it. She took a step toward the stones. Just one step. The ground beneath her feet was soft, too soft, and when she looked down, the wildflowers had grown up around her boots, stems wrapping around her ankles in a gentle, almost tender embrace. She shook them loose, heart hammering, and stepped forward again. The footsteps stopped. So did she. The silence stretched. It stretched until it became a living thing, a presence in the grove that pressed against her from all sides. She could feel it now—the wrongness. It had been there from the beginning, she realized, buried beneath the strangeness of the path and the beauty of the flowers and the allure of the pulsing stone. But now it surfaced, unmistakable. This place was not empty. It had never been empty. Something was here. Something had always been here. She thought of the girl with silver hair. Three days in the grove, Silas had said. Three days, and she'd walked out not knowing her own name. What had walked in? What had walked out? The darkness between the trees moved again. Closer now. She could see it properly now—or rather, she could see the space it occupied, a void in the shape of something that might once have been human. It had no features she could name, no face to meet her eyes, but she felt its attention like a hand on the back of her neck. Cold. Patient. Hungry. She ran. Not toward the path—she'd already seen that it was gone—but toward the stones, toward the far side of the circle where the trees thinned and the darkness was thinner too. The pendant was screaming now, a white-hot blaze of warning, and she understood with terrible clarity that she'd made a mistake. Coming here had been a mistake. Following the pull had been a mistake. The Heartstone hadn't led her to something. It had led something to her. Her foot caught on a root—she was certain it hadn't been there a moment ago—and she stumbled, catching herself on one of the ancient oaks. The bark was cold beneath her palm, colder than it should have been, and she felt something like a heartbeat thrumming through it. The tree was alive. They were all alive. The whole grove was alive, and it was watching her fall, and the thing behind her was drawing closer with every second she wasted. She hauled herself upright and ran again. The stones loomed ahead. She冲出 their circle, expecting—to what? She didn't know. For the world to snap back into place, for the path to reappear, for her phone to buzz with a notification and her life to resume its boring, manageable shape. Instead, she found herself in a second clearing. Smaller than the first, bordered by trees that grew so close together their branches intertwined overhead, forming a ceiling of leaves that blotted out the sky. In the center of this clearing was a well. No. Not a well. A door. It was made of stone, too, carved with the same shifting symbols as the standing stones, and it was open. Just a crack. Just a sliver of darkness beneath, but that darkness was absolute, and it breathed, and from somewhere far below she heard a sound that might have been wind or might have been voices or might have been something else entirely. The Heartstone Pendant went cold. Not cool. Not lukewarm. Cold, like a chip of ice against her chest, and in that cold she felt something that froze her in place more effectively than any chain. Recognition. The door wasn't random. The door wasn't accidental. The door was a threshold, and it knew her, and it had been waiting for her to find it. From behind her, the footsteps resumed. And this time, they were not alone.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1407
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1407
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"throb"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"could feel"
count2
4
word"silence"
count4
5
word"footsteps"
count4
6
word"footfall"
count1
7
word"measured"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"loomed"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"throb"
2"pulse"
3"could feel"
4"silence"
5"footsteps"
6"footfall"
7"measured"
8"pulsed"
9"loomed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences141
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences141
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
98.59% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences142
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0.007
matches
0"She冲出 their circle, expecting—to what?"
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1388
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1383
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity0.43
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Richmond3
Park3
Golden2
Empress2
Heartstone3
London1
Dymas1
Evan1
Silas6
Eva2
Fae1
Grove1
Rory2
Footsteps1
Stupid1
Pendant1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Empress"
2"Heartstone"
3"Dymas"
4"Evan"
5"Silas"
6"Eva"
7"Rory"
8"Footsteps"
9"Pendant"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Golden"
3"London"
4"Fae"
5"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
13.01% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"streets that seemed to rearrange themselves, past buildings whose windows showed rooms she didn't recognize, until the path deposited her here"
1"symbols that seemed to shift when she didn't look at them directly"
2"quite a shape, a darkness that was darker than the darkness around it"
3"something like a heartbeat thrumming through"
55.91% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.441
wordCount1388
matches
0"Not dramatically, not like stepping into a freezer, but a subtle shift, as though the air itself had become older"
1"not like stepping into a freezer, but a subtle shift, as though the air itself had become older"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences142
matches
0"was that her"
1"seen that it"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean33.85
std29.4
cv0.868
sampleLengths
052
16
246
3104
473
53
658
755
87
971
105
1131
121
1367
141
1519
1618
1723
189
1932
2070
2153
223
233
2473
253
265
2735
2866
292
3077
3180
327
3342
3443
356
3663
375
3858
396
407
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences141
matches
0"was gone"
1"was made"
50.52% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs223
matches
0"was blazing"
1"were calming"
2"was screaming"
3"was watching was drawing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences142
ratio0.077
matches
0"The pathway behind her—the one she'd walked a hundred times delivering orders from Golden Empress—had vanished."
1"The Heartstone had started pulsing sometime around nine o'clock—a slow, warm throb against her sternum that she'd learned to recognize during her first weeks in London."
2"She'd walked for twenty minutes—maybe longer—through streets that seemed to rearrange themselves, past buildings whose windows showed rooms she didn't recognize, until the path deposited her here."
3"The wildflowers Silas had mentioned grew in abundance—foxglove and moonpetals and something blue that didn't match any flower she knew—but they were wrong somehow."
4"It pressed against her eardrums like water, and she could hear her own pulse loud in her ears, and beneath it—"
5"Closer this time—or was that her imagination?"
6"She could feel it now—the wrongness."
7"She could see it properly now—or rather, she could see the space it occupied, a void in the shape of something that might once have been human."
8"Not toward the path—she'd already seen that it was gone—but toward the stones, toward the far side of the circle where the trees thinned and the darkness was thinner too."
9"Her foot caught on a root—she was certain it hadn't been there a moment ago—and she stumbled, catching herself on one of the ancient oaks."
10"She冲出 their circle, expecting—to what?"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1402
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount52
adverbRatio0.037089871611982884
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.006419400855920114
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences142
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences142
mean9.77
std9.38
cv0.959
sampleLengths
015
116
221
31
42
53
64
74
822
916
102
113
1226
1316
1429
1528
164
1736
1827
196
203
216
2234
235
244
259
2616
276
288
2925
302
315
3210
3324
3424
352
362
379
385
393
4020
411
427
431
441
452
463
4724
486
499
49.77% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.36619718309859156
totalSentences142
uniqueOpeners52
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences116
matches
0"Only the dark."
1"Just one step."
2"Instead, she found herself in"
3"Just a crack."
4"Just a sliver of darkness"
ratio0.043
99.31% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences116
matches
0"She turned, half-expecting to see"
1"She checked her phone."
2"She shoved it back into"
3"She'd felt it the night"
4"She'd felt it three months"
5"She'd walked for twenty minutes—maybe"
6"She'd heard about it in"
7"She knew she should turn"
8"She'd just take one look."
9"She stepped into the circle."
10"She pulled her jacket tighter"
11"It pressed against her eardrums"
12"She spun around."
13"Her voice came out thin"
14"She cleared her throat and"
15"She forced herself to breathe."
16"She couldn't tell anymore."
17"She couldn't trust her imagination"
18"She watched them, and one"
19"She was certain of it."
ratio0.302
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences116
matches
0"The gravel crunched beneath her"
1"The pathway behind her—the one"
2"She turned, half-expecting to see"
3"She checked her phone."
4"The battery icon showed seventy-three"
5"She shoved it back into"
6"That was why."
7"The Heartstone had started pulsing"
8"She'd felt it the night"
9"She'd felt it three months"
10"Tonight the pulse had sharpened"
11"She'd walked for twenty minutes—maybe"
12"The Fae Grove."
13"She'd heard about it in"
14"Silas mentioning it once, over"
15"Eva had laughed it off."
16"Rory always listened, even when"
17"The standing stones rose ahead"
18"She knew she should turn"
19"The sensible thing would be"
ratio0.698
43.10% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences116
matches
0"Whenever Dymas stirred, whenever some"
ratio0.009
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"She turned, half-expecting to see the familiar lamp posts of the parking lot, the iron railings that marked the pedestrian entrance."
1"Tonight the pulse had sharpened into something urgent, a heartbeat that wasn't hers, pulling her out of bed and down the stairs and through the back door of Sil…"
2"She'd walked for twenty minutes—maybe longer—through streets that seemed to rearrange themselves, past buildings whose windows showed rooms she didn't recognize…"
3"Silas mentioning it once, over drinks, a story about a girl who wandered into Richmond Park and came out three days later with silver in her hair and no memory …"
4"Not dramatically, not like stepping into a freezer, but a subtle shift, as though the air itself had become older."
5"The shadows between the trees seemed to breathe, expanding and contracting in a rhythm that matched no heartbeat she knew."
6"Smaller than the first, bordered by trees that grew so close together their branches intertwined overhead, forming a ceiling of leaves that blotted out the sky."
7"Just a sliver of darkness beneath, but that darkness was absolute, and it breathed, and from somewhere far below she heard a sound that might have been wind or …"
8"Cold, like a chip of ice against her chest, and in that cold she felt something that froze her in place more effectively than any chain."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
81.3047%