Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNETGZ0WE6H230NA2FW53C9

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Duration:
20.3s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The moon hung heavy and swollen above Richmond Park, casting an eerie silver glow across the frost-covered grass. Aurora pulled her coat tighter around herself, breath misting in the frigid air as she navigated the winding paths. The Heartstone pendant felt heavy against her chest, pulsing with a faint warmth that seemed to grow stronger with each step. She shouldn't be here. Not alone, not at this hour. But the dreams had been getting worse—nightmares of twisted trees and shadows that moved with malevolent intent. And then there was the message, scrawled across her bathroom mirror in what looked disturbingly like dried blood: "Come to the grove." The standing stones loomed ahead, ancient oaks twisted into unnatural shapes. Rory paused at the boundary, heart hammering against her ribs. The pendant grew warmer, almost hot against her skin. With a deep breath, she stepped across the threshold. The air changed immediately—thick and heavy, carrying the scent of wildflowers blooming in defiance of winter. The temperature rose several degrees, making her skin prickle with sweat beneath her coat. Rory pulled it off, draping it over her arm as she ventured deeper into the grove. Something rustled in the underbrush to her left. She froze, eyes straining against the darkness. A fox darted across her path, pausing to look at her with intelligent, almost human eyes before vanishing into the trees. "Just a fox," Rory muttered to herself, but the words sounded hollow in the unnatural quiet. She pressed on, following a path that seemed to materialize beneath her feet. The pendant's glow intensified, casting crimson shadows that danced and writhed across the ground. Rory's pulse quickened. She was close to something—something important. A twig snapped behind her. Rory whirled around, heart leaping into her throat. Nothing. Just trees and shadows and that suffocating silence. She turned back— —and nearly screamed. A figure stood before her, pale and ethereal in the moonlight. It was a woman, or something that had once been a woman. Her skin was translucent, stretched too tightly over angular bones. Long, dark hair hung in matted tangles around her shoulders. Rory's hand flew to her mouth, stifling a cry. The apparition tilted its head, empty eye sockets fixing on Rory with unnerving intensity. A voice, dry and brittle as autumn leaves, whispered through the grove: "Why have you come?" "I..." Rory's voice cracked. She swallowed hard, trying to find her courage. "I was drawn here. By dreams, by... by this." She held up the pendant, its crimson glow illuminating the wraith's skeletal features. The spirit's lipless mouth stretched into something that might have been a smile once. "The Heartstone. Dymas' last gift to the world of men." It drifted closer, movements jerky and unnatural. "You seek answers, child. But some truths are better left buried." "I need to know," Rory insisted, though her legs trembled with the urge to run. "About the shadows. About what's happening to me." The wraith's form flickered, like a candle flame in a draft. "You've been chosen, Aurora Carter. Marked by powers older than your world." It reached out with a hand that was more bone than flesh, skeletal fingers hovering just above the pendant. "The veil grows thin. Soon, they will come through." "Who? Who will come through?" Rory demanded, taking a step back as the spirit's touch neared her chest. A sound like shattering glass echoed through the grove. The wraith's head snapped up, empty sockets widening in what might have been fear. "Run," it hissed, voice rising to a shriek. "Run now, before—" The rest of the sentence dissolved into a wet, gurgling noise. The spirit's form began to unravel, skin peeling away like burning paper to reveal writhing darkness beneath. Rory stumbled backward, tripping over her own feet as she scrambled away. Something was coming. She could feel it in the air—a pressure building, a wrongness that made her skin crawl and her stomach turn. The pendant burned against her chest, searing hot now, and she tore it from her neck, letting it fall to the ground. A shadow detached itself from the treeline, resolving into a figure that was too tall, too thin to be human. Its limbs bent at wrong angles, joints cracking with each jerky movement. Where its face should have been, there was only a smooth expanse of pale flesh. Rory's scream caught in her throat. She turned to run, but her feet caught in the undergrowth. She fell hard, breath knocked from her lungs as she hit the frozen ground. Desperately, she scrabbled backward on hands and feet, eyes fixed on the approaching horror. The creature moved with a strange, fluid grace, limbs undulating like tentacles. It reached for her with elongated fingers, skin splitting to reveal glistening darkness beneath. Rory's back hit something solid—one of the standing stones. She was trapped. The wraith's voice echoed in her mind, dry and desperate: "The pendant! Use the pendant!" With a shaking hand, Rory snatched up the Heartstone. It burned in her palm, hot enough to blister, but she clenched her fingers around it and thrust it toward the creature. Crimson light exploded outward, illuminating the grove in stark relief. The creature shrieked—a sound that was more felt than heard, vibrating in Rory's bones. It recoiled, limbs thrashing as the light seared its pale flesh. Rory didn't hesitate. She scrambled to her feet and ran, the Heartstone clutched to her chest like a talisman. Behind her, the creature's cries rose in pitch, becoming something almost human in their agony. She burst from the treeline, gasping for breath as the normal sounds of the park rushed back in—distant traffic, the hoot of an owl, the rustle of nocturnal creatures in the underbrush. Rory didn't stop running until she reached the safety of her flat, slamming the door behind her and sliding to the floor. Her hands shook as she pressed them to her face, trying to scrub away the image of that pale, faceless horror. The Heartstone lay on the floor beside her, its crimson glow now dimmed to a faint pulse. Rory reached for it with trembling fingers, closing her hand around the warm metal. Whatever had happened in that grove, whatever she had stumbled into—it was only the beginning. The shadows were coming, and she was their target. She just prayed she'd be ready when they finally arrived.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1071
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
11.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1071
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"navigated"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"quickened"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"intensity"
count1
7
word"trembled"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count2
10
word"unravel"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count1
12
word"stomach"
count1
13
word"searing"
count1
14
word"resolving"
count1
15
word"glistening"
count1
16
word"stark"
count1
highlights
0"navigated"
1"warmth"
2"loomed"
3"pulse"
4"quickened"
5"silence"
6"intensity"
7"trembled"
8"flickered"
9"echoed"
10"unravel"
11"could feel"
12"stomach"
13"searing"
14"resolving"
15"glistening"
16"stark"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
89.95% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences81
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1062
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
57.50% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount973
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.85
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone4
Rory18
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.575
windowScore0.667
79.58% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"warmth that seemed to grow stronger with each step"
1"path that seemed to materialize beneath her feet"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1062
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
82.94% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean33.19
std14.61
cv0.44
sampleLengths
058
149
239
346
436
516
636
75
820
93
1043
1135
124
1334
1442
1523
1651
1718
1834
1940
2045
2147
2245
2338
2415
2531
2635
2734
2854
2938
3038
3110
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs169
matches
0"was coming"
1"were coming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences86
ratio0.116
matches
0"But the dreams had been getting worse—nightmares of twisted trees and shadows that moved with malevolent intent."
1"The air changed immediately—thick and heavy, carrying the scent of wildflowers blooming in defiance of winter."
2"She was close to something—something important."
3"She turned back—"
4"—and nearly screamed."
5"She could feel it in the air—a pressure building, a wrongness that made her skin crawl and her stomach turn."
6"Rory's back hit something solid—one of the standing stones."
7"The creature shrieked—a sound that was more felt than heard, vibrating in Rory's bones."
8"She burst from the treeline, gasping for breath as the normal sounds of the park rushed back in—distant traffic, the hoot of an owl, the rustle of nocturnal creatures in the underbrush."
9"Whatever had happened in that grove, whatever she had stumbled into—it was only the beginning."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount982
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.03360488798370672
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.008146639511201629
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean12.35
std6.15
cv0.498
sampleLengths
018
119
221
34
46
517
622
711
810
99
109
1116
1214
1316
148
157
1621
1716
1813
1914
203
216
225
238
241
258
263
273
2811
2912
3010
3110
329
3314
3412
354
364
378
3822
3914
4017
4111
4215
438
4411
4531
469
4718
489
4914
46.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.313953488372093
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners27
83.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences80
matches
0"Just trees and shadows and"
1"Desperately, she scrabbled backward on"
ratio0.025
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences80
matches
0"She shouldn't be here."
1"She froze, eyes straining against"
2"She pressed on, following a"
3"She was close to something—something"
4"She turned back—"
5"It was a woman, or"
6"Her skin was translucent, stretched"
7"She swallowed hard, trying to"
8"She held up the pendant,"
9"It drifted closer, movements jerky"
10"It reached out with a"
11"it hissed, voice rising to"
12"She could feel it in"
13"Its limbs bent at wrong"
14"She turned to run, but"
15"She fell hard, breath knocked"
16"It reached for her with"
17"She was trapped."
18"It burned in her palm,"
19"It recoiled, limbs thrashing as"
ratio0.3
28.75% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences80
matches
0"The moon hung heavy and"
1"Aurora pulled her coat tighter"
2"The Heartstone pendant felt heavy"
3"She shouldn't be here."
4"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
5"Rory paused at the boundary,"
6"The pendant grew warmer, almost"
7"The air changed immediately—thick and"
8"The temperature rose several degrees,"
9"Rory pulled it off, draping"
10"Something rustled in the underbrush"
11"She froze, eyes straining against"
12"A fox darted across her"
13"Rory muttered to herself, but"
14"She pressed on, following a"
15"The pendant's glow intensified, casting"
16"Rory's pulse quickened."
17"She was close to something—something"
18"A twig snapped behind her."
19"Rory whirled around, heart leaping"
ratio0.863
62.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"—and nearly screamed."
ratio0.013
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The Heartstone pendant felt heavy against her chest, pulsing with a faint warmth that seemed to grow stronger with each step."
1"But the dreams had been getting worse—nightmares of twisted trees and shadows that moved with malevolent intent."
2"A fox darted across her path, pausing to look at her with intelligent, almost human eyes before vanishing into the trees."
3"She pressed on, following a path that seemed to materialize beneath her feet."
4"The pendant's glow intensified, casting crimson shadows that danced and writhed across the ground."
5"She could feel it in the air—a pressure building, a wrongness that made her skin crawl and her stomach turn."
6"The pendant burned against her chest, searing hot now, and she tore it from her neck, letting it fall to the ground."
7"A shadow detached itself from the treeline, resolving into a figure that was too tall, too thin to be human."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Rory muttered, but the words sounded hollow in the unnatural quiet"
1"She held up, its crimson glow illuminating the wraith's skeletal features"
2"Rory insisted, though her legs trembled with the urge to run"
3"it hissed, voice rising to a shriek"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
1"Rory insisted (insist)"
2"Rory demanded (demand)"
3"it hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.267
leniency0.533
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.533
75.3835%