Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNETN6VG534PPV8ZWGBEBN2

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Duration:
41.6s
Cost:
$0.002840
Provider:
SiliconFlow

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The pendant had led her here. Aurora told herself this as she locked her bicycle to a rack outside Richmond Park's western entrance, as she walked past the closed visitor center and into the tree line where the path dissolved into rough grass and shadow. The Heartstone pulsed against her chest—not the steady warmth she was used to, but something quicker, almost eager. Like it recognized something nearby. She hadn't asked for the pendant. Three weeks ago, it had simply appeared on her pillow, a thumb-sized crimson gem on a silver chain, with no note, no explanation. She'd meant to throw it away. Instead, she'd put it on, and ever since, she'd felt... directed. Drawn. Like a compass needle that pointed toward something she couldn't name. Tonight, the pulling had become impossible to ignore. The park was wrong at this hour. Too quiet. She understood that parks at night were quiet—that was the nature of darkness in cities—but this silence had texture. It pressed against her ears. Her footsteps on the gravel path seemed to swallow themselves, fading after only a few feet rather than carrying into the distance. The path curved left, and she followed it without conscious decision. The trees grew denser here, oaks and beeches that should have been indistinguishable in the dark but somehow resolved into shapes that felt deliberate. Organized. Like pillars in a building too vast to see. She found the standing stones first. They emerged from the darkness one by one—not carved, she realized as she drew closer, but grown. The oaks had been shaped over centuries, their trunks fused and twisted into rough pillars that rose ten feet high, their bark so dark it seemed to drink the moonlight. Seven of them, arranged in a rough circle, and as Aurora stepped between two of them, the temperature dropped. Not by much. A few degrees. But enough to notice. Enough to raise the hairs on her arms. "Hello?" Her voice came out smaller than she'd intended. The word fell flat, dampened, as if the air itself were thicker here. She waited. Nothing answered. The pendant pulsed again, stronger now, and she pressed her hand against it instinctively. The gem was warm—warmer than her skin, warmer than it had been outside the circle. A faint glow emanated from within, visible now that her eyes had adjusted, a deep red luminescence that cast strange shadows across the stones. That was when she noticed the flowers. They grew in the center of the circle, clustered around a raised mound of earth that might have been a burial mound or simply a hillock. Wildflowers—she recognized oxeye daisies, cornflowers, lavender—but they shouldn't have been here. It was October. These blooms should have died weeks ago. But they were alive. Thriving, even. Their petals caught the pendant's red glow and held it, reflecting it back in colors that shifted as she moved. Blue became violet. White became silver. The effect was beautiful, and for a moment, Aurora forgot to be afraid. Then she heard the sound. It came from somewhere beyond the stones—a whisper, or the suggestion of one. Not a voice, exactly. More like the memory of a voice, the shape of words formed without sound. She turned, scanning the darkness between the trees, but saw nothing. Probably the wind. Animals. The park had foxes, deer, any number of creatures that might make noise in the night. But there was no wind. The air was perfectly still, the leaves on the trees hanging motionless, and when she held her breath—as she suddenly, inexplicably wanted to—she could hear her own heartbeat and nothing else. No. Not nothing. There was a sound beneath the silence. A low hum, almost below the range of hearing, like the resonance of a bell long after it had been struck. It seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere, and when she focused on it, she could almost perceive a rhythm. A pattern. A heartbeat that wasn't hers. Aurora took a step backward, and her heel caught on a root that hadn't been there a moment before. She stumbled, caught herself against one of the standing stones, and the bark felt wrong beneath her palm. Too smooth. Too warm. She looked down and saw that the bark wasn't bark at all—or rather, it was bark that had been shaped to look like bark, but the lines were too regular. Too symmetrical. Like something pretending to be a tree. The pendant burned against her chest, and she realized it wasn't just pulsing now—it was throbbed in time with that other heartbeat. The one she could almost hear. The one that seemed to be coming from everywhere and nowhere, from the earth beneath her feet and the air above her head. She should leave. Every instinct told her to leave. But when she turned toward the gap in the stones where she'd entered, she saw that the path was gone. In its place was more darkness, denser than before, a black that seemed to breathe and shift and watch. "Hello?" She tried again, and this time her voice cracked. "Is anyone there?" The silence stretched. The flowers in the center of the circle swayed, though there was no wind, and for one terrible moment, Aurora thought she saw a shape among them. A figure, crouched low, utterly still. Human in outline but wrong in proportion, limbs too long, head tilted at an angle that suggested a neck that bent in too many places. She blinked. The figure was gone. Or had it ever been there? She couldn't be sure. That was the worst part—not the fear, but the doubt. The slow erosion of her certainty about what was real and what wasn't. She pressed her palm harder against the pendant, and its warmth was almost comforting, a small anchor in a night that had become a maelstrom of wrongness. Then the whispers started. They came from everywhere at once—or from nowhere, from inside her own skull, from the spaces between thoughts. They weren't words, not exactly. They were impressions. Meanings that arrived without language. Welcome, they seemed to say. We've been waiting. You've been here before. You'll be here again. You never left. Aurora's breath came faster now, shallow and sharp. She forced herself to breathe deeply, to think. She'd been in bad situations before. She'd left an abusive relationship, she'd moved cities, she'd started over from nothing. She knew how to handle fear. She knew how to outthink it. But this fear was different. It had weight. It had presence. It wasn't hers. She looked down at the pendant, at the crimson glow that had intensified until it lit her face and the stones around her in bloody light. The warmth was almost painful now, and she thought of what the old woman had said—the one who'd appeared in her flat three days ago, who'd spoken in a language Aurora didn't understand but somehow knew, who'd pressed a cup of tea into her hands and told her, in perfect English, that the pendant would show her the way. That she needed to see. That she needed to understand. That the grove had been waiting for her since before she was born. The whispers grew louder, and Aurora realized she could almost make out words now. Names. Her name, repeated in a voice that was not a voice, a chorus of syllables that scraped against the inside of her skull. "Rory." She closed her eyes—then forced them open. Closing her eyes in a place like this felt dangerous. Felt like an invitation. The flowers in the center of the circle had begun to move, not with the wind but with intention, their heads turning toward her in unison. And behind them, in the darkness that pooled at the center of the mound, something was rising. It had no face, but she knew it was looking at her. She could feel its attention like a physical weight, pressing down on her chest, squeezing the air from her lungs. It was vast. It was old. It had been here when the trees were seeds, when the stones were young, and it was looking at her now with something that might have been hunger or might have been joy or might have been a feeling that had no human name. The pendant pulsed once—a final, brilliant surge of warmth—and in that moment, Aurora understood. She wasn't alone. She had never been alone. And in the grove that existed between worlds, in the place where time folded back on itself and the flowers bloomed forever, something ancient had been waiting for her to finally arrive. The darkness folded around her like an embrace, and the whispers became a roar, and Aurora Carter stood in the heart of the fae grove and realized, too late, that some doors, once opened, could never be closed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She tried again [again]"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
90.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1501
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"suddenly"
2"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
30.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1501
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"pulsed"
count3
1
word"warmth"
count4
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"resolved"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"resonance"
count1
8
word"throbbed"
count1
9
word"comforting"
count1
10
word"weight"
count2
11
word"perfect"
count1
12
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"silence"
3"footsteps"
4"resolved"
5"whisper"
6"scanning"
7"resonance"
8"throbbed"
9"comforting"
10"weight"
11"perfect"
12"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences133
matches(empty)
78.41% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences133
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences135
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1482
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1476
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.68
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone1
Aurora10
October1
English1
Carter1
Like4
You3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"You"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"black that seemed to breathe and shift and watch"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords2.699
wordCount1482
matches
0"not the steady warmth she was used to, but something quicker, almost eager"
1"not carved, she realized as she drew closer, but grown"
2"not the fear, but the doubt"
3"not with the wind but with intention, their heads turning toward her in unison"
92.59% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences135
matches
0"understood that parks"
1"saw that the"
2"saw that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean30.24
std24.14
cv0.798
sampleLengths
06
162
258
38
455
545
66
766
818
922
104
1153
127
1347
1445
155
1642
1720
1836
193
2050
215
2273
237
2451
2548
2613
2761
286
296
3054
314
3250
3347
3414
3585
365
375
3813
3938
401
4121
4243
4382
4414
453
465
4732
4838
86.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences133
matches
0"was used"
1"been shaped"
2"been struck"
3"been shaped"
4"was throbbed"
5"was gone"
6"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs260
matches
0"was rising"
1"was looking"
2"was looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount18
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences135
ratio0.104
matches
0"The Heartstone pulsed against her chest—not the steady warmth she was used to, but something quicker, almost eager."
1"She understood that parks at night were quiet—that was the nature of darkness in cities—but this silence had texture."
2"They emerged from the darkness one by one—not carved, she realized as she drew closer, but grown."
3"The gem was warm—warmer than her skin, warmer than it had been outside the circle."
4"Wildflowers—she recognized oxeye daisies, cornflowers, lavender—but they shouldn't have been here."
5"It came from somewhere beyond the stones—a whisper, or the suggestion of one."
6"The air was perfectly still, the leaves on the trees hanging motionless, and when she held her breath—as she suddenly, inexplicably wanted to—she could hear her own heartbeat and nothing else."
7"She looked down and saw that the bark wasn't bark at all—or rather, it was bark that had been shaped to look like bark, but the lines were too regular."
8"The pendant burned against her chest, and she realized it wasn't just pulsing now—it was throbbed in time with that other heartbeat."
9"That was the worst part—not the fear, but the doubt."
10"They came from everywhere at once—or from nowhere, from inside her own skull, from the spaces between thoughts."
11"The warmth was almost painful now, and she thought of what the old woman had said—the one who'd appeared in her flat three days ago, who'd spoken in a language Aurora didn't understand but somehow knew, who'd pressed a cup of tea into her hands and told her, in perfect English, that the pendant would show her the way."
12"She closed her eyes—then forced them open."
13"The pendant pulsed once—a final, brilliant surge of warmth—and in that moment, Aurora understood."
96.96% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1495
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount65
adverbRatio0.043478260869565216
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.008695652173913044
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences135
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences135
mean10.98
std10.12
cv0.922
sampleLengths
06
139
218
35
46
523
66
710
81
91
1011
118
127
132
1419
155
1622
1711
1824
191
209
216
2217
2330
2419
253
263
274
288
299
3013
312
322
3314
3415
3524
367
3726
3811
393
407
414
422
4320
443
453
4613
475
4813
494
42.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.35555555555555557
totalSentences135
uniqueOpeners48
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences117
matches
0"Instead, she'd put it on,"
1"Then she heard the sound."
2"More like the memory of"
3"Probably the wind."
4"Then the whispers started."
ratio0.043
66.15% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences117
matches
0"She hadn't asked for the"
1"She'd meant to throw it"
2"She understood that parks at"
3"It pressed against her ears."
4"Her footsteps on the gravel"
5"She found the standing stones"
6"They emerged from the darkness"
7"Her voice came out smaller"
8"They grew in the center"
9"It was October."
10"Their petals caught the pendant's"
11"It came from somewhere beyond"
12"She turned, scanning the darkness"
13"It seemed to come from"
14"She stumbled, caught herself against"
15"She looked down and saw"
16"She should leave."
17"She tried again, and this"
18"She couldn't be sure."
19"She pressed her palm harder"
ratio0.385
88.21% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences117
matches
0"The pendant had led her"
1"Aurora told herself this as"
2"The Heartstone pulsed against her"
3"She hadn't asked for the"
4"She'd meant to throw it"
5"Tonight, the pulling had become"
6"The park was wrong at"
7"She understood that parks at"
8"It pressed against her ears."
9"Her footsteps on the gravel"
10"The path curved left, and"
11"The trees grew denser here,"
12"She found the standing stones"
13"They emerged from the darkness"
14"The oaks had been shaped"
15"Her voice came out smaller"
16"The word fell flat, dampened,"
17"The pendant pulsed again, stronger"
18"The gem was warm—warmer than"
19"A faint glow emanated from"
ratio0.744
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
ratio0
64.94% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The trees grew denser here, oaks and beeches that should have been indistinguishable in the dark but somehow resolved into shapes that felt deliberate."
1"Their petals caught the pendant's red glow and held it, reflecting it back in colors that shifted as she moved."
2"The park had foxes, deer, any number of creatures that might make noise in the night."
3"She pressed her palm harder against the pendant, and its warmth was almost comforting, a small anchor in a night that had become a maelstrom of wrongness."
4"She could feel its attention like a physical weight, pressing down on her chest, squeezing the air from her lungs."
5"It had been here when the trees were seeds, when the stones were young, and it was looking at her now with something that might have been hunger or might have b…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
77.9022%