Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNETYCB2D774SSYH5BHM6M2

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Duration:
27.7s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The moon hung heavy and swollen above Richmond Park, casting everything in an eerie silver glow. Rory pulled her coat tighter around herself as she made her way through the winding paths, the crunch of gravel beneath her boots unnaturally loud in the stillness of the night. She shouldn't be here. The park was closed after dark, and even if it hadn't been, this particular grove was hidden from ordinary eyes. But something had drawn her here, a tugging at her chest that had grown stronger with each passing day until she could ignore it no longer. The Heartstone pendant hung heavy against her skin, pulsing with a faint warmth that seemed to guide her steps. She'd found it in her mailbox three weeks ago, no return address, just her name scrawled across the front in a looping script she didn't recognize. When she'd touched it, a voice had whispered in her mind - not words exactly, but a feeling, an urgency that she couldn't quite understand. Now, as she pushed through the underbrush and into the clearing, she understood why. The grove was beautiful in a wild, untamed way. Ancient oaks stood sentinel around the perimeter, their branches reaching toward the sky like gnarled fingers. Wildflowers bloomed in vibrant patches, their colors intensified by the moonlight. And in the center, a ring of standing stones stood tall and proud, their surfaces etched with symbols she couldn't quite make out. But there was something else here too. A wrongness that made the hair on the back of her neck stand up and her skin prickle with unease. It was as if the very air was charged with electricity, humming with a tension that made her want to turn and run. Rory took a step forward, then another, her eyes scanning the clearing for any sign of movement. The pendant grew warmer against her skin, pulsing in time with her racing heart. She reached up to touch it, her fingers brushing against the cool metal of the chain. That's when she heard it. A whisper, soft and sibilant, coming from the direction of the standing stones. She froze, her breath catching in her throat as she strained to make out the words. "...come to me..." The voice was feminine, melodic, and yet there was something about it that set Rory's teeth on edge. It was too perfect, too smooth, like a recording played back at the wrong speed. "Who's there?" she called out, her voice sounding small and fragile in the vastness of the clearing. No answer. Just the whisper, growing louder, more insistent. "...come to me..." Rory took a step back, her mind racing. She should leave. This was a mistake. But the pendant seemed to have a will of its own, tugging her forward, urging her to move closer to the source of the voice. She reached the edge of the standing stones and paused, her hand hovering over the nearest one. The symbols etched into its surface seemed to shift and change in the moonlight, forming patterns that hurt her eyes to look at directly. "...come to me..." The whisper was right behind her now, so close she could feel the warmth of breath on the back of her neck. She whirled around, her heart in her throat, but there was nothing there. Just the empty clearing and the oppressive silence. Rory's mind raced as she tried to make sense of what was happening. She was alone in a strange place, being called by a voice she couldn't see. It was the stuff of nightmares, the kind of thing that happened in horror movies, not in real life. But the pendant was still warm against her skin, still pulsing with that same urgency. And deep down, in a place she didn't want to acknowledge, she knew that she couldn't leave. Not yet. Not until she found out what was calling to her. With a deep breath, Rory stepped into the center of the standing stones. The moment she crossed the threshold, the world seemed to shift around her. The air grew thick and heavy, pressing against her skin like a physical weight. The colors of the clearing bled together, swirling and twisting until they formed a kaleidoscope of impossible hues. And then the whispers came. Not just one voice now, but dozens, hundreds, a cacophony of sound that filled her mind and drowned out all thought. They spoke in languages she didn't understand, in words that hurt to hear, in tones that scraped against her sanity like nails on a chalkboard. Rory fell to her knees, her hands clamped over her ears as she tried to block out the sound. But it was no use. The whispers were inside her now, echoing in the chambers of her mind, filling her with a terror she had never known before. She looked up, her eyes wide with horror, and saw that the standing stones were no longer standing. They had come alive, their surfaces rippling and flowing like liquid stone. Faces formed in the rock, twisted and grotesque, mouths open in silent screams. And in the center of it all, a figure began to take shape. It was tall and thin, with skin the color of bleached bone and eyes that glowed with an inner fire. Its limbs were too long, its fingers ending in sharp, jagged claws. And its mouth, when it opened to speak, was filled with rows of needle-like teeth. "Welcome, little one," it said, its voice a chorus of a thousand whispers. "We have been waiting for you." Rory tried to scream, but no sound came out. She tried to move, to run, but her body wouldn't obey. She was frozen, trapped in a nightmare from which there was no waking. The creature took a step toward her, its movements jerky and unnatural. "You have something that belongs to us," it said, its voice dripping with malice. "Give it to us, and we will let you go." Rory's hand went to her chest, to the pendant that hung there. It was hot now, burning against her skin like a brand. She could feel it pulsing, could feel the power that lay dormant within it. "No," she whispered, the word barely audible over the whispers that filled her mind. "It's mine. You can't have it." The creature's eyes narrowed, and it took another step forward. "You do not understand," it said, its voice a hiss. "That pendant is not yours to keep. It belongs to us, to the ones who dwell in the spaces between. And we will have it, one way or another." Rory felt a surge of defiance rise up within her, fueled by the pendant's warmth. She stood, her legs shaking but her resolve firm. "I won't let you take it," she said, her voice stronger now. "I won't let you have it." The creature laughed, a sound like shattering glass. "Foolish child," it said. "You cannot stop us. We are eternal, unchanging. We are the darkness that lurks at the edges of your mind, the whispers that haunt your dreams. And we will have what is ours." With a roar, the creature lunged forward, its claws outstretched. Rory raised her hands to defend herself, but it was too late. The claws raked across her skin, tearing through flesh and bone with ease. She fell to the ground, her vision blurring as the pain overwhelmed her. The whispers grew louder, more insistent, filling her mind with a terror she had never known before. And through it all, the pendant burned against her skin, a beacon of light in the darkness. Rory closed her eyes, surrendering to the pain, to the fear, to the madness that threatened to consume her. And as she did, she felt something shift inside her, a change that went beyond the physical. It was as if a part of her had been unlocked, a part that had been waiting for this moment, for this confrontation. She opened her eyes, and they were no longer her own. They glowed with an inner fire, the same fire that burned in the creature's eyes. And as she rose to her feet, she knew that she was no longer alone. The pendant had chosen her, had given her the strength to fight back. And fight back she would, with everything she had. For she was Rory, and she would not be broken. Not by this creature, not by the whispers, not by the darkness that threatened to consume her. She was a force to be reckoned with, and she would not be defeated. With a roar of her own, Rory charged forward, her hands outstretched, her eyes blazing with a fire that could not be quenched. And as she did, she knew that this was only the beginning. The battle for her soul had just begun.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.438
leniency0.875
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1481
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
2.09% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1481
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"warmth"
count3
1
word"sentinel"
count1
2
word"etched"
count2
3
word"charged"
count2
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"racing"
count2
7
word"whisper"
count3
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count3
10
word"oppressive"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"raced"
count1
13
word"sense of"
count1
14
word"weight"
count1
15
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
16
word"cacophony"
count1
17
word"echoing"
count1
18
word"resolve"
count1
19
word"beacon"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"sentinel"
2"etched"
3"charged"
4"tension"
5"scanning"
6"racing"
7"whisper"
8"perfect"
9"could feel"
10"oppressive"
11"silence"
12"raced"
13"sense of"
14"weight"
15"kaleidoscope"
16"cacophony"
17"echoing"
18"resolve"
19"beacon"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
99.23% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences97
matches
0"e with unease"
1"d in horror"
2"e with horror"
10.31% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount9
narrationSentences97
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1482
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.45% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount1358
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.03
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone1
Rory14
persons
0"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.985
windowScore1
7.95% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"warmth that seemed to guide her steps"
1"quite understand"
2"quite make out"
3"It was as if the very air was charged with electricity, humming with a tension that made her want to turn and run"
4"It was as if a part of her had been unlocked, a part that had been waiting for this moment, for this confrontation"
65.05% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.35
wordCount1482
matches
0"not words exactly, but a feeling, an urgency"
1"Not just one voice now, but dozens, hundreds, a cacophony of sound"
40.88% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount4
totalSentences106
matches
0"knew that she"
1"saw that the"
2"knew that she"
3"knew that this"
92.17% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean36.15
std17.08
cv0.473
sampleLengths
047
150
270
314
459
550
647
734
83
933
1017
119
123
1340
1441
153
1643
1747
1844
1958
2051
2147
2243
2360
2419
2533
2636
2737
2820
2949
3042
3145
3235
3347
3459
3541
3622
3727
3814
3935
408
90.79% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences97
matches
0"was closed"
1"was hidden"
2"being called"
3"was filled"
4"been unlocked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs243
matches
0"was happening"
1"was calling"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences106
ratio0.009
matches
0"When she'd touched it, a voice had whispered in her mind - not words exactly, but a feeling, an urgency that she couldn't quite understand."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1357
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"heavy, pressing against her"
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.029476787030213707
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0036845983787767134
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean13.98
std6.53
cv0.467
sampleLengths
016
131
24
320
426
519
626
725
814
99
1016
1111
1223
137
1420
1523
1617
1714
1816
195
2013
2116
223
2318
2415
2517
262
277
283
298
303
314
3225
3317
3424
353
3622
3713
388
3913
4015
4119
4215
4317
442
4510
4613
4713
4814
4918
45.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.27358490566037735
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners29
70.92% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences94
matches
0"Just the whisper, growing louder,"
1"Just the empty clearing and"
ratio0.021
83.83% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences94
matches
0"She shouldn't be here."
1"She'd found it in her"
2"It was as if the"
3"She reached up to touch"
4"She froze, her breath catching"
5"It was too perfect, too"
6"she called out, her voice"
7"She should leave."
8"She reached the edge of"
9"She whirled around, her heart"
10"She was alone in a"
11"It was the stuff of"
12"They spoke in languages she"
13"She looked up, her eyes"
14"They had come alive, their"
15"It was tall and thin,"
16"Its limbs were too long,"
17"it said, its voice a"
18"She tried to move, to"
19"She was frozen, trapped in"
ratio0.34
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences94
matches
0"The moon hung heavy and"
1"Rory pulled her coat tighter"
2"She shouldn't be here."
3"The park was closed after"
4"The Heartstone pendant hung heavy"
5"She'd found it in her"
6"The grove was beautiful in"
7"Wildflowers bloomed in vibrant patches,"
8"A wrongness that made the"
9"It was as if the"
10"Rory took a step forward,"
11"The pendant grew warmer against"
12"She reached up to touch"
13"That's when she heard it."
14"A whisper, soft and sibilant,"
15"She froze, her breath catching"
16"The voice was feminine, melodic,"
17"It was too perfect, too"
18"she called out, her voice"
19"Rory took a step back,"
ratio0.713
53.19% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"Now, as she pushed through"
ratio0.011
43.65% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences72
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"But something had drawn her here, a tugging at her chest that had grown stronger with each passing day until she could ignore it no longer."
1"The Heartstone pendant hung heavy against her skin, pulsing with a faint warmth that seemed to guide her steps."
2"A wrongness that made the hair on the back of her neck stand up and her skin prickle with unease."
3"The pendant grew warmer against her skin, pulsing in time with her racing heart."
4"It was the stuff of nightmares, the kind of thing that happened in horror movies, not in real life."
5"They spoke in languages she didn't understand, in words that hurt to hear, in tones that scraped against her sanity like nails on a chalkboard."
6"The whispers were inside her now, echoing in the chambers of her mind, filling her with a terror she had never known before."
7"They had come alive, their surfaces rippling and flowing like liquid stone."
8"Rory's hand went to her chest, to the pendant that hung there."
9"And as she did, she felt something shift inside her, a change that went beyond the physical."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"it said, its voice a chorus of a thousand whispers"
1"it said, its voice dripping with malice"
2"it said, its voice a hiss"
3"she said, her voice stronger now"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she called out (call out)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.438
leniency0.875
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.25
73.9811%