Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEV948PCV9DAEENYBKVRVZ

Run Details

Duration:
43.2s
Cost:
$0.001788
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest smelled of aged whiskey and wood polish, the green neon sign outside casting an eerie glow through the fogged windows. Rory wiped her damp palms on her jeans as she pushed through the door, the warmth of the bar hitting her like a wall after the chill London evening. She hadn’t planned on coming here tonight—hadn’t planned on much of anything, really, after another long shift delivering takeaway containers of steaming noodles and dumplings across the city. But her feet had carried her here anyway, drawn by the promise of something familiar in the chaos of her life. Silas was behind the bar, polishing a glass with the same meticulous care he gave to everything. His silver signet ring caught the dim light as he worked, the engraved surface glinting. He looked up as Rory approached, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners. "You look like hell," he said, setting the glass down. "Thanks," Rory muttered, sliding onto a stool. "I feel like it." Silas didn’t ask. He never did. Instead, he poured her a finger of whiskey—the good stuff, the kind he kept under the counter for people who mattered—and pushed it toward her. She took it without hesitation, the burn of it steadying her nerves. The door opened again, letting in a gust of cold air and the murmur of the street outside. Rory didn’t turn, not until she heard the footsteps stop behind her. "Rory?" The voice was familiar in a way that made her stomach twist. She turned slowly, her fingers tightening around the glass. Evan stood there, his face half in shadow, his coat damp from the rain. He looked older—of course he did, it had been years—but it was more than that. The sharp edges of his jaw had softened, his dark hair shorter than she remembered, streaked with the first hints of grey. His hands were shoved into his pockets, shoulders hunched as if bracing for impact. For a long moment, neither of them spoke. The bar seemed to hold its breath around them. "Didn’t think I’d find you here," Evan said at last, his voice quieter than she remembered. Rory forced herself to exhale. "Yeah. Well." She glanced at Silas, who was watching them with the careful neutrality of a man who had spent a lifetime reading people. "Small world." Evan hesitated, then took the stool beside her. Close enough to talk, far enough to give her space. She wasn’t sure if she appreciated it or resented it. Silas slid another glass across the bar, this time toward Evan, who nodded his thanks but didn’t drink. His fingers tapped restlessly against the wood. "You look good," Evan said finally, his gaze flickering over her. Rory snorted. "Liar." He smiled, just a little, and for a second, she saw the boy she’d known—the one who used to make her laugh until her ribs ached. But then it was gone, replaced by something heavier. "I heard you left Cardiff," he said. "Yeah." She took another sip of whiskey, letting the silence stretch. She could feel him waiting, could almost hear the unspoken questions. Why didn’t you tell me? Why did you go? "I’m sorry," Evan said at last, so softly she almost missed it. Rory stilled. She hadn’t expected that. He wasn’t looking at her now, his eyes fixed on the glass in front of him. "For a lot of things." The weight of it settled between them, thick and suffocating. She wanted to laugh, or maybe scream. Three years of silence, and this was what he led with? "You don’t get to do that," she said, her voice low. "You don’t get to walk in here and just—apologize. Like it’s that easy." Evan flinched, but he didn’t argue. "I know." Silas cleared his throat, the sound deliberate, and Rory realized her hands were shaking. She curled them into fists, the crescent scar on her left wrist a pale reminder of a time when things had been simpler. Evan finally lifted his glass, took a slow sip, and winced. "Christ, that’s strong." A laugh escaped her before she could stop it. "You always were shit at holding your liquor." He grinned, just for a second, and it was so painfully familiar that something in her chest cracked open. They sat there, the two of them, in the dim light of the bar, surrounded by ghosts of who they used to be. The past was a live wire between them, humming with everything they weren’t saying. Rory finished her drink and stood. "I should go." Evan didn’t try to stop her. He just nodded, his expression unreadable. "Take care of yourself, Rory." She hesitated, then turned away, heading for the door. The cold air hit her like a slap as she stepped outside, the neon sign casting her shadow long and jagged on the pavement. Behind her, the door of The Raven’s Nest swung shut, sealing away the past once more.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Evan said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.45
leniency0.9
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.1
82.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount836
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
10.29% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount836
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count3
3
word"glinting"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"reminder"
count1
11
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"chill"
2"familiar"
3"glinting"
4"footsteps"
5"stomach"
6"silence"
7"could feel"
8"unspoken"
9"weight"
10"reminder"
11"unreadable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
96.77% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences73
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords829
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount752
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.2
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
London1
Rory9
Silas5
Evan9
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.902
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if bracing for impact"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount829
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean24.38
std19
cv0.779
sampleLengths
0101
145
210
311
443
530
61
721
865
917
1016
1131
1228
1325
1411
153
1635
177
1831
1912
206
2121
2228
2324
248
2537
2614
2717
2819
2937
309
3117
3233
3316
93.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences62
matches
0"were shoved"
1"was gone"
16.09% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs145
matches
0"was watching"
1"wasn’t looking"
2"were shaking"
3"weren’t saying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences73
ratio0.055
matches
0"She hadn’t planned on coming here tonight—hadn’t planned on much of anything, really, after another long shift delivering takeaway containers of steaming noodles and dumplings across the city."
1"Instead, he poured her a finger of whiskey—the good stuff, the kind he kept under the counter for people who mattered—and pushed it toward her."
2"He looked older—of course he did, it had been years—but it was more than that."
3"He smiled, just a little, and for a second, she saw the boy she’d known—the one who used to make her laugh until her ribs ached."
99.22% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount758
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.040897097625329816
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.009234828496042216
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences73
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences73
mean11.36
std7.08
cv0.623
sampleLengths
023
129
228
321
417
515
613
710
87
94
103
113
1225
1312
1418
1512
161
1712
189
1914
2015
2122
2214
238
249
2516
265
2724
282
298
3010
3110
3218
337
3411
352
361
3726
389
397
4011
4111
425
434
4412
452
464
4716
485
4910
52.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3424657534246575
totalSentences73
uniqueOpeners25
56.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"Instead, he poured her a"
ratio0.017
57.29% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences59
matches
0"She hadn’t planned on coming"
1"His silver signet ring caught"
2"He looked up as Rory"
3"he said, setting the glass"
4"He never did."
5"She took it without hesitation,"
6"She turned slowly, her fingers"
7"He looked older—of course he"
8"His hands were shoved into"
9"She glanced at Silas, who"
10"She wasn’t sure if she"
11"His fingers tapped restlessly against"
12"He smiled, just a little,"
13"She took another sip of"
14"She could feel him waiting,"
15"She hadn’t expected that."
16"He wasn’t looking at her"
17"She wanted to laugh, or"
18"she said, her voice low"
19"She curled them into fists,"
ratio0.407
36.27% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences59
matches
0"The Raven's Nest smelled of"
1"Rory wiped her damp palms"
2"She hadn’t planned on coming"
3"Silas was behind the bar,"
4"His silver signet ring caught"
5"He looked up as Rory"
6"he said, setting the glass"
7"Rory muttered, sliding onto a"
8"Silas didn’t ask."
9"He never did."
10"She took it without hesitation,"
11"The door opened again, letting"
12"Rory didn’t turn, not until"
13"The voice was familiar in"
14"She turned slowly, her fingers"
15"Evan stood there, his face"
16"He looked older—of course he"
17"The sharp edges of his"
18"His hands were shoved into"
19"The bar seemed to hold"
ratio0.847
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"His hands were shoved into his pockets, shoulders hunched as if bracing for impact."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Evan said, his voice quieter than she remembered"
1"Evan said finally, his gaze flickering over her"
2"she said, her voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.35
leniency0.7
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.1
76.1576%