Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEVCVWVWHJBT1RXJPN5HKN

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Duration:
1m 3s
Cost:
$0.001217
Provider:
AtlasCloud

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign buzzed like a trapped insect against the gathering dusk. Inside The Raven’s Nest, the air was thick with the smell of old wood, polished brass, and the earthy peat of a decent Scotch. Aurora Carter—Rory to almost no one here—sat at the far end of the bar, her back to the wall. It was a habit, that positioning, one she’d picked up without even realizing it. She traced the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist with her thumb, a slow, absent circle, as she watched Silas pour a measure of Macallan for a man in a rumpled suit. Silas moved with a deliberate economy, the slight hitch in his left leg barely noticeable unless you knew to look for it. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the low light as he placed the glass down. He caught her eye and gave a barely perceptible nod towards the hidden door behind the bookshelf, a question. She shook her head once. No meetings tonight. Just the quiet hum of the bar and the weight of her own thoughts, which were, as usual, a tangled knot of delivery routes for Yu-Fei and the ghost of a law degree she’d abandoned. The door opened, slicing in a wedge of sodium-lit street noise and the distant wail of a siren. A man stepped in, blinking as his eyes adjusted to the gloom. He was tall, with the kind of broad-shouldered frame that strained the seams of a good wool coat. He scanned the room, his gaze passing over the maps on the walls, the lone drinkers at their tables, and then landing on her. Rory felt the recognition like a small, cold shock. It wasn’t immediate. Time had worked on him, adding thickness where there had been lean muscle, etching lines of weariness around his eyes that a smile couldn’t erase. His hair was shorter, military-neat, and touched with grey at the temples. But the set of his jaw, the way he held his head slightly tilted as he looked at her—it was David. David Griffiths. He’d been a rugby player at Cardiff, all roaring laughter and easy confidence. They’d been friends, of a sort. Running in overlapping social circles, sharing the occasional late-night kebab after the library, debating politics with a fervor that only the very young and very privileged could muster. That was before Evan. Before the slow, insistent closing of doors. She hadn’t seen David since her final year, since she’d begun to vanish from her own life. He walked towards her, his steps hesitant. She didn’t get up. She just watched him, her face carefully neutral, the cool-headed mask she’d cultivated slipping into place. “Rory?” His voice was deeper, rougher around the edges. A smoker’s voice, now. “Bloody hell. Aurora Carter?” “David.” She nodded to the stool beside her. “Fancy seeing your face here.” He slid onto the stool, his coat rustling. He smelled of cold air, cigarette smoke, and a faint, expensive cologne. “I’m in town for a conference. Bored out of my skull at the hotel. Thought I’d find a proper pub.” He looked around, taking in the shadowy corners, the photographs of forgotten places. “This is a bit off the beaten track.” “It’s quiet,” she said. Silas appeared, a clean towel in his hands. His hazel eyes took in David with the swift, appraising glance of a former spymaster. “For you, sir?” “Double Talisker, neat,” David said, then glanced at Rory’s nearly empty glass of ginger beer. “And whatever she’s having. A proper drink, I mean. You still drink, Rory?” “I’m fine,” she said, her voice even. Silas raised an eyebrow at her. She gave a slight shake of her head. He poured the Scotch and moved away to the other end of the bar, giving them the illusion of privacy. David took a long sip, exhaling slowly as the peat hit his system. “God, I needed that. So. London. I heard you’d moved. Never thought I’d actually stumble across you.” His eyes searched her face. “You look… different.” “It’s been seven years,” she said. “People change.” “You changed your hair. You used to have those long curls. Always a bit wild.” She self-consciously tucked a strand of straight, shoulder-length black hair behind her ear. “Easier to manage.” “And you’re… what? A barrister now? Following in your dad’s footsteps? Brendan Carter’s daughter, that’s what everyone always said you’d be.” The weight of the un-lived life pressed down on her. She could see her father’s disappointed face, hear her mother’s worried sighs from three hundred miles away. “Not quite,” she said. “I deliver food. For a Chinese restaurant.” He blinked, then let out a short, disbelieving laugh. It wasn’t cruel, just utterly baffled. “You’re joking.” “Do I look like I’m joking?” He studied her. The bright blue of her eyes, which he’d once called ‘daftly optimistic,’ now held a flat, assessing coolness. The neat, practical clothes. The way her hands rested on the bar, capable and still. No fidgeting. “No,” he conceded quietly. “No, you don’t. Delivery. Right. So, the law thing…” “Didn’t take.” “But you were brilliant. You argued old Professor Davies into a corner over habeas corpus. He nearly had an aneurysm.” “Arguing in a pub is different from arguing in court,” she said, a trace of old bitterness seeping through. “Turns out I didn’t have the stomach for the family business.” He swirled the amber liquid in his glass. “I went into finance. Canary Wharf. Married a girl from Surrey. Two kids. A semi in Esher.” He recited it like a list of achievements, but his voice was hollow. “It’s… it’s fine. It’s what you do.” “Sounds like a life,” Rory said. “It is a life. A bloody expensive one.” He took another drink. “What about you? Married? Kids?” “No.” “Seeing anyone?” Her left thumb found the scar on her wrist again, pressing down. “No.” A silence stretched between them, filled by the low murmur of a jazz record Silas had put on. It was a tune full of melancholy notes and spaces. “I heard about Evan,” David said suddenly, his voice dropping. “After you left. People talked. I wish… I wish I’d known how bad it was.” The sound of the name was like a door slamming shut in a distant room of her mind. She kept her breathing even. “It was a long time ago.” “Was it?” He looked at her, really looked, and she saw a flicker of the old David—the one who’d been perceptive, who’d cared. “You disappeared, Rory. One day you were there, the next you’d ghosted everyone. Eva said you’d gone to London, but you changed your number, deleted your socials. It was like you’d been erased. We were friends. I worried.” “You didn’t worry enough to find me,” she said, and immediately regretted it. It sounded like an accusation, and she didn’t want to give him that power. He flinched. “You’re right. I didn’t. I was wrapped up in my own stuff. The job, the climb. I thought you were just… having a rough patch. I didn’t know it was a war.” He finished his drink and signaled Silas for another. Silas glanced at Rory. She gave a tiny, almost imperceptible nod. Let him have it. “This place,” David said, following her gaze to Silas, who poured the drink with silent efficiency. “You’re a regular.” “I live upstairs.” “Above a Soho bar?” The disbelief was back, tinged with something like concern. “Is that… safe?” “It’s quieter than you’d think.” She almost smiled. If only he knew about the hidden room, the encrypted messages Silas sometimes asked her to decipher using her logical, out-of-the-box mind, the quiet network of informants that used the bar as a hub. Her life was a palimpsest, and the surface layer of ‘food delivery girl’ was the least interesting part. “You’ve become hard, Rory,” he said softly. “I’ve become realistic.” “It’s not the same thing.” He sighed, a heavy, weary sound. “Do you remember that night after we won the varsity match? We all went to that terrible club on the docks. You danced on a table. You were laughing so hard you cried. I have a photo of that somewhere.” She remembered. The sticky floor, the pounding music, the feeling of invincibility that came from youth and cheap vodka. The memory was like watching a film of a stranger. “That girl got tired,” Rory said. “She got tired of laughing at things that weren’t funny.” David stared into his fresh drink. The weight of time settled between them, a physical thing. He was mourning the vibrant, sharp-tongued girl he’d known. She was guarding the scarred, cautious woman she’d had to become. They were both prisoners of the person she’d been, but only one of them had to live with the escape. “I think about those days a lot,” he said. “They seemed so consequential. Every essay, every argument, every party felt like the most important thing in the world. Now I sell bonds to pension funds. My biggest worry is whether my mortgage rate will go up.” He looked at her, and his expression was naked with a regret she knew wasn’t just for her. “You were supposed to do something… luminous. Something that mattered.” The word ‘luminous’ hung in the smoky air. It belonged to a different lexicon, one of poetry and naive ambition. She felt a sudden, surprising pangnot for the loss of that potential, but for the fact that he still believed in it, that somewhere in his spreadsheet existence, he clung to the idea that a life could shine. “I deliver food,” she repeated, her voice gentle for the first time. “It matters to the people who are hungry. And I think, most days, that’s enough.” He didn’t have an answer for that. He just nodded, defeated by a simplicity he couldn’t comprehend. He paid his tab with a crisp fifty-pound note, telling Silas to keep the change. He stood, pulling on his coat. “It was good to see you, Rory. Truly.” “You too, David.” He hesitated, as if he might hug her, or offer a pat on the shoulder. She didn’t move from her stool, her posture clear. He offered a sad, half-smile instead. “Take care of yourself.” “You too. Give my best to Esher.” He gave a final, lingering look, trying perhaps to reconcile the woman before him with the ghost in his memory. Then he turned and walked out into the London night, the door swinging shut behind him, sealing the bar back into its bubble of quiet amber light. Silas came over and collected the empty glass. “Old friend?” he asked, his tone neutral. “Old life,” Rory corrected. Silas grunted, polishing the glass with his towel. “They’re the heaviest to carry.” He didn’t ask for details. He never did. Rory looked down at her hands, at the small, pale crescent on her wrist. A childhood accident, she always said. A simple story for a simple scar. She finished her ginger beer, the sweet bite of it grounding her in the present, in the dim, map-lined bar that was, for now, the closest thing she had to a home. The past had walked in, sat down, and shown her its own weary face. Then it had left again. And she was still here. Changed, yes. Harder, perhaps. But here. She caught Silas’s eye and nodded towards the hidden door behind the bookshelf. Maybe there was work to do after all.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
75.37% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags29
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"He looked around [around]"
1"he’d once [once]"
2"he conceded quietly [quietly]"
3"David said suddenly [suddenly]"
4"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.433
leniency0.866
rawRatio0.172
effectiveRatio0.149
74.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1938
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"utterly"
count1
5
adverb"suddenly"
count1
6
adverb"really"
count1
7
adverb"softly"
count1
8
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
2"carefully"
3"slowly"
4"utterly"
5"suddenly"
6"really"
7"softly"
8"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.14% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1938
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"etching"
count1
5
word"roaring"
count1
6
word"eyebrow"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"tinged"
count1
12
word"pounding"
count1
13
word"pang"
count1
14
word"potential"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"weight"
2"gloom"
3"scanned"
4"etching"
5"roaring"
6"eyebrow"
7"footsteps"
8"stomach"
9"silence"
10"flicker"
11"tinged"
12"pounding"
13"pang"
14"potential"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"the air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences127
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences127
filterMatches
0"hear"
1"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences164
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1920
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions28
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount1363
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Scotch2
Carter1
Rory8
Silas13
Macallan1
Yu-Fei1
David10
Griffiths1
Cardiff1
Evan1
London1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Silas"
3"David"
4"Griffiths"
5"Evan"
places
0"Raven"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
95.05% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences91
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like an accusation, and she didn’t"
1"something like concern"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.521
wordCount1920
matches
0"not for the loss of that potential, but for the fact"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences164
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean32
std26.64
cv0.833
sampleLengths
0102
1102
272
372
475
527
617
713
861
94
1026
1128
127
1334
1438
158
1615
1716
1821
1938
2017
216
2251
232
2420
2530
2645
276
2817
291
302
3113
3228
3325
3429
3561
3627
3758
3819
393
4016
4160
427
433
4451
4545
4656
4774
4858
4927
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences127
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs231
matches
0"was mourning"
1"was guarding"
73.17% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences164
ratio0.024
matches
0"Aurora Carter—Rory to almost no one here—sat at the far end of the bar, her back to the wall."
1"But the set of his jaw, the way he held his head slightly tilted as he looked at her—it was David."
2"“Was it?” He looked at her, really looked, and she saw a flicker of the old David—the one who’d been perceptive, who’d cared."
3"She felt a sudden, surprising pang—not for the loss of that potential, but for the fact that he still believed in it, that somewhere in his spreadsheet existence, he clung to the idea that a life could shine."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1403
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"vibrant, sharp-tongued girl"
1"dim, map-lined bar"
adverbCount51
adverbRatio0.036350677120456164
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.012829650748396294
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences164
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences164
mean11.71
std9.25
cv0.79
sampleLengths
013
124
219
314
432
522
618
719
85
93
1035
1118
1212
1318
1424
159
163
1725
1812
1921
202
2113
226
2328
244
257
2617
277
284
2916
309
314
324
338
345
358
3612
3733
388
394
408
4115
423
4315
4413
457
466
478
4820
4913
43.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.31097560975609756
totalSentences164
uniqueOpeners51
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences112
matches
0"Just the quiet hum of"
1"Then he turned and walked"
2"Then it had left again."
3"Maybe there was work to"
ratio0.036
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount66
totalSentences112
matches
0"It was a habit, that"
1"She traced the crescent-shaped scar"
2"He caught her eye and"
3"She shook her head once."
4"He was tall, with the"
5"He scanned the room, his"
6"It wasn’t immediate."
7"His hair was shorter, military-neat,"
8"He’d been a rugby player"
9"They’d been friends, of a"
10"She hadn’t seen David since"
11"He walked towards her, his"
12"She didn’t get up."
13"She just watched him, her"
14"His voice was deeper, rougher"
15"She nodded to the stool"
16"He slid onto the stool,"
17"He smelled of cold air,"
18"He looked around, taking in"
19"His hazel eyes took in"
ratio0.589
13.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount100
totalSentences112
matches
0"The green neon sign buzzed"
1"Aurora Carter—Rory to almost no"
2"It was a habit, that"
3"She traced the crescent-shaped scar"
4"Silas moved with a deliberate"
5"The silver signet ring on"
6"He caught her eye and"
7"She shook her head once."
8"The door opened, slicing in"
9"A man stepped in, blinking"
10"He was tall, with the"
11"He scanned the room, his"
12"Rory felt the recognition like"
13"It wasn’t immediate."
14"Time had worked on him,"
15"His hair was shorter, military-neat,"
16"He’d been a rugby player"
17"They’d been friends, of a"
18"That was before Evan."
19"She hadn’t seen David since"
ratio0.893
89.29% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences112
matches
0"Before the slow, insistent closing"
1"If only he knew about"
ratio0.018
72.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Just the quiet hum of the bar and the weight of her own thoughts, which were, as usual, a tangled knot of delivery routes for Yu-Fei and the ghost of a law degr…"
1"He was tall, with the kind of broad-shouldered frame that strained the seams of a good wool coat."
2"He scanned the room, his gaze passing over the maps on the walls, the lone drinkers at their tables, and then landing on her."
3"If only he knew about the hidden room, the encrypted messages Silas sometimes asked her to decipher using her logical, out-of-the-box mind, the quiet network of…"
4"She finished her ginger beer, the sweet bite of it grounding her in the present, in the dim, map-lined bar that was, for now, the closest thing she had to a hom…"
21.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags29
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"she said, a trace of old bitterness seeping through"
1"He recited, but his voice was hollow"
2"David said suddenly, his voice dropping"
3"He looked, and his expression was naked with a regret she knew wasn’t just for her"
4"she repeated, her voice gentle for the first time"
5"he asked, his tone neutral"
90.30% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he conceded quietly (concede)"
1"He sighed (sigh)"
2"she repeated (repeat)"
3"Rory corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.269
leniency0.537
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.119
82.5367%