Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEVHM4PD0GXHWW7DM3FXM2

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Duration:
8.2s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter slipped the silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant around her neck, the deep crimson gem catching the faint glow of her phone’s flashlight. The light fell on the small crescent scar on her left wrist, a reminder of a childhood accident that had taught her to watch the edge of things. She glanced at the time on her phone—23:47—then at the map she’d sketched on a napkin earlier that day. The coordinates pointed to a clearing in Richmond Park that locals called “Isolde’s grove,” a place whispered about in the back rooms of pubs, a pocket where the ordinary world brushed against something older, something… unquiet. She had come for a reason. The pendant had begun to pulse, a warm thrum against her skin whenever she passed the old oak standing stones that marked the grove’s boundary. The pulse was subtle, but it grew stronger each night, as if the stone itself were breathing. An unknown benefactor had slipped it to her in a sealed envelope, the note inside containing only a single word: “Find.” She had dismissed it as a prank until the night she stood at the edge of the park and felt the air thicken, the scent of wildflowers turning sharp, metallic. The path into the grove was a narrow track of damp earth, flanked by ancient oaks whose trunks rose like sentinels, their bark scarred with the deep grooves of centuries. Aurora’s boots crunched on the leaf litter, the sound echoing louder than it should in the stillness. The moon was a thin crescent, barely a silver sliver through the canopy, and the stars were hidden behind a veil of low clouds. She paused at the first standing stone, a gnarled oak that seemed to pulse with its own heartbeat. The pendant’s glow intensified, a faint inner light that made the crimson stone look like a drop of blood against her chest. She pressed her palm to the stone, feeling the rough bark under her fingertips. The stone was warm, the heat seeping through the wood and into her skin. A low humming filled her ears, a sound she could not locate, as if the earth itself were humming a lullaby. Aurora’s breath caught; the humming rose and fell, matching the rhythm of her own pulse. She pulled her hand away, the humming lingering like a memory. “Okay,” she whispered to herself, the word barely audible over the rustle of leaves. “Just a quick look. I’ll be back before the night is over.” She stepped through the circle of standing stones, the world shifting as she crossed the threshold. The air grew still, the wind dying as if it had been swallowed. The wildflowers that normally burst in a riot of color now seemed to dim, their petals turning a muted gray. The faint glow of the pendant cast a soft, wavering light on the ground, revealing a carpet of moss that glistened with dew. Aurora’s eyes adjusted, and she could see the faint outlines of other stones, half-buried, their surfaces slick with a sheen that was not moss but something else, something that reflected light in a way that made her skin prickle. She moved forward, the soft crunch of her boots the only sound. The forest seemed to close in around her, the trees leaning closer, their branches intertwining overhead to form a vaulted ceiling of darkness. The only illumination came from the pendant, its crimson heart beating in sync with her own. She could feel the weight of the night pressing against her, a pressure that made her ears pop and her thoughts tighten. A rustle to her left made her turn. A small rabbit darted out from behind a fern, its eyes reflecting the pendant’s glow for a heartbeat before it vanished into the underbrush. Aurora let out a breath she hadn’t realized she was holding. “Just a rabbit,” she muttered, half to herself, half to the darkness. She pressed on, the path winding deeper into the grove. The ancient oak standing stones grew more frequent, each one marked with strange runes that seemed to shift when she wasn’t looking directly at them. The runes glowed faintly, a pallid blue that contrasted with the crimson of her pendant. She could feel the time stretching, the minutes inside the grove pulling at the seams of her mind. The world outside—London, the neon lights of the city, the clatter of the Golden Empress kitchen—felt like a distant memory, a half-remembered dream. A low, melodic chime drifted through the air, like a distant bell, but it was not a bell. It resonated in her bones, a sound that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at Aurora stopped, the pendant’s pulse quickening. She raised her hand, feeling the cool night air brush her skin. The sound grew louder, a chorus of whispers that seemed to rise from the very ground beneath her feet. The whisper was not a language she could understand, but the cadence was unmistakable: a warning, a lament, a plea. “Who’s there?” she called, her voice steadier than she felt. The words fell into the darkness, swallowed by the rustle of leaves. The whisper answered, not with words but with a sensation—a cold draft that brushed the back of her neck, making the hair on her arms stand up. The pendant’s glow flared, the crimson deepening, as if the stone were reacting to an unseen presence. Aurora’s eyes darted to the edge of her vision, where a shape moved too quickly to be seen clearly. A silhouette, dark as the night itself, slipped between the trees, its outline flickering like a candle in a windstorm. She turned her head sharply, trying to locate the source. The grove seemed to pulse, the ancient oaks breathing in and out, the standing stones humming in time. The air grew thick with the scent of wildflowers, but now the scent was tinged with something metallic, like iron in rain. Aurora’s heart hammered against her ribs, the scar on her wrist throbbing as if it sensed the danger. “Okay, that’s enough,” she muttered, forcing herself to stay calm. “It’s just… it’s just the wind.” She took a step forward, the pendant’s glow casting a soft halo around her. The ground beneath her feet seemed to shift, the moss turning to a slick, black surface that reflected the crimson gem like a mirror. She could see her own reflection—her dark hair, her bright blue eyes—staring back at her, but the reflection’s eyes were not hers. They were empty, a void that swallowed the light. Aurora swallowed, the taste of metal on her tongue. She pressed the pendant harder against her chest, feeling the warmth radiating from the stone. The pulse was now a steady thrum, a heartbeat that seemed to synchronize with the grove itself. She could feel the pull of something deeper, a portal perhaps, a Hel portal she had only read about in obscure folklore. The pendant’s glow intensified, a bright flare that illuminated the surrounding stones in a crimson wash. A sudden, sharp crack split the night, a sound like a branch snapping under a heavy weight. Aurora’s head snapped toward the source. From the darkness, a figure emerged—a woman, or perhaps something that wore a woman’s shape, her skin pallid and translucent, eyes like black pits. She stood at the edge of the clearing, her hands outstretched, fingers elongated and ending in thin, claw‑like nails that seemed to drip with an unseen fluid. Aurora’s breath caught. The woman’s mouth opened, but no sound emerged. Instead, a low, guttural hum rose from her throat, a sound that seemed to vibrate the very air. The pendant’s glow flared, the crimson light beating against the darkness, as if trying to push back the encroaching shadow. “Who are you?” Aurora asked, voice barely a whisper, her mind racing. She could feel the weight of the scar on her wrist, a reminder of the accident that had taught her to look at the edges, to see what others missed. The woman’s eyes—if they could be called eyes—locked onto Aurora’s. In that instant, Aurora saw flashes: a child’s laughter, a courtroom, a courtroom’s echo, a mother’s gentle hand, a city’s neon lights, a kitchen full of sizzling woks. The images collided, a kaleidoscope of memories that were not hers, yet felt intimately familiar. The woman’s hand moved, and the air around her rippled, as if a veil were being lifted. The ground beneath Aurora’s feet shifted again, the moss turning to a slick, black surface that reflected the crimson gem like a mirror. She could see her own reflection—her dark hair, her bright blue eyes—staring back at her, but the reflection’s eyes were not hers. They were empty, a void that swallowed the light. Aurora’s pulse surged, the scar on her wrist throbbing with a strange pain that seemed to echo the woman’s hum. She clutched the pendant, feeling its warmth seep into her bones. The woman’s hum rose, a crescendo that seemed to pull at the very fabric of the grove, the ancient oak standing stones vibrating in response. A sudden gust of wind tore through the clearing, scattering a cascade of wildflowers into the air. The petals glowed briefly, each one catching the pendant’s crimson light before falling to the ground, turning the moss into a sea of scarlet. Aurora felt a cold hand brush her cheek, a whisper of breath that was not her own. The woman’s hand reached out, her fingers hovering just above Aurora’s face, as if to touch, to claim. “Don’t…,” Aurora began, but the words died in her throat. The pendant’s glow pulsed, a bright flare that seemed to push back the darkness, a beacon against the encroaching void. The woman’s form flickered, the translucent skin rippling like water. In that flicker, Aurora saw a doorway—a portal of swirling shadows, an opening that seemed to swallow light. The pendant’s pulse quickened, a frantic rhythm that matched the thudding of Aurora’s heart. She could feel the pull of the portal, a magnetic force that threatened to draw her in, to swallow her whole. Aurora’s mind raced. She had come here for a reason, to find whatever the unknown benefactor had hinted at. The Heartstone Pendant was not just a trinket; it was a key, a beacon, a warning. She could feel the weight of the decision pressing on her: step forward and risk being pulled into the unknown, or retreat and leave the mystery unsolved. She took a breath, the air thick with the scent of iron and wildflowers. The pendant’s glow steadied, a calm, steady light that seemed to anchor her. She lifted her chin, the scar on her wrist catching the light, a small crescent that glowed faintly as if acknowledging her resolve. “Stay where you are,” she said, her voice steadier than she felt. “I’m not afraid of you.” The woman’s hum faltered, a crack in the sound, a moment of hesitation. The portal’s edge rippled, the darkness within it seeming to recoil. Aurora felt a surge of warmth from the pendant, a wave that spread through her chest, through her arms, through her legs, grounding her. She stepped forward, the crimson light of the pendant illuminating the path to the portal. The ancient oak standing stones seemed to lean away, their runes dimming, as if conceding to her presence. The woman’s form dissolved into a cascade of black petals that fell to the ground, each one dissolving into nothingness upon contact with the moss. Aurora reached the edge of the portal, the darkness within it swirling like a storm of shadows. The pendant’s glow intensified, a beacon that cut through the gloom, a thin line of crimson that marked her path. She placed her hand on the portal’s edge, feeling the cold, the void, the pull. The scar on her wrist tingled, a reminder of the accident that had taught her to watch the edge of things, to see what others missed. She hesitated for a heartbeat, then stepped forward. The portal swallowed her, the darkness enveloping her like a blanket. The pendant’s glow flared, a burst of crimson that seemed to push back the void, a heartbeat that resonated with the ancient stones beyond. Aurora felt a surge of cold, then warmth, a sensation of being pulled through a tunnel of light and shadow, of time stretching and compressing, of the world outside the grove folding in on itself. When the light finally dimmed, Aurora found herself standing in a place that was both familiar and alien. The air was thick with the scent of wildflowers, but the colors were muted, the sky a perpetual dusk. The ancient oak standing stones loomed around her, their runes now glowing a steady blue, the heartbeat of the grove echoing in her ears. The Heartstone Pendant hung heavy against her chest, its crimson glow a steady rhythm that matched her own pulse. She was alone, but she no longer felt the same isolation. The grove had become a part of her, its whispers now a low hum in her head, a reminder that she was a bridge between worlds. Aurora Carter, the cool‑headed, quick‑thinking delivery girl from London, stood in the Fae Grove at night, the scar on her wrist a tiny crescent against the darkness, the pendant a beacon against the encroaching void. She inhaled deeply, the cold air filling her lungs, and felt the first true sense of purpose settle over her like a cloak. In the distance, a faint rustle echoed, the sound of leaves shifting in a wind that did not exist. Aurora’s eyes narrowed. She tightened her grip on the pendant, feeling its warmth pulse in time with her heartbeat. The grove was alive, and it was watching. She could hear the faint, melodic chime again, this time not as a warning but as a promise—a promise that she would uncover the truth hidden within the standing stones, that she would navigate the thin line between the ordinary and the uncanny, and that she would not be alone, not truly. The night stretched on, the ancient oak standing stones casting long shadows that seemed to move of their own accord. Aurora took a step forward, the soft click of her boots the only sound in the stillness. The Heartstone Pendant glowed brighter, its crimson heart beating against the darkness, a steady rhythm that marked her path. The grove, with its wildflowers and its ancient stones, held its breath, waiting for her to uncover its secrets. And somewhere, just beyond the edge of her vision, something moved, a shape that lingered in the periphery, a reminder that the wrongness she had felt from the moment she entered was not a mistake, but a warning. She pressed on, the night swallowing her footsteps, the pulse of the pendant guiding her deeper into the heart of the Fae Grove, where time bent, where the ordinary and the uncanny collided, and where the horror of being watched was matched only by the horror of not knowing what lay ahead. The scar on her wrist glowed faintly, a crescent moon in the darkness, as if to remind her that every wound, every mark, every scar was a doorway to something larger. Aurora Carter moved forward, the night around her alive with whispers, with rustles, with the soft, steady thrum of an ancient heart beating in time with hers.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.75
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2594
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"very"
count3
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"quickly"
2"sharply"
3"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2594
totalAiIsms68
found
0
word"reminder"
count5
1
word"pulse"
count12
2
word"sentinels"
count1
3
word"echoing"
count2
4
word"wavering"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count6
6
word"weight"
count4
7
word"resonated"
count2
8
word"whisper"
count4
9
word"tinged"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count5
11
word"racing"
count1
12
word"echo"
count2
13
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
14
word"familiar"
count2
15
word"pulsed"
count1
16
word"beacon"
count4
17
word"flickered"
count1
18
word"flicker"
count1
19
word"quickened"
count1
20
word"magnetic"
count1
21
word"raced"
count1
22
word"resolve"
count1
23
word"gloom"
count1
24
word"loomed"
count1
25
word"sense of"
count1
26
word"echoed"
count1
27
word"navigate"
count1
28
word"uncanny"
count2
29
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"reminder"
1"pulse"
2"sentinels"
3"echoing"
4"wavering"
5"could feel"
6"weight"
7"resonated"
8"whisper"
9"tinged"
10"warmth"
11"racing"
12"echo"
13"kaleidoscope"
14"familiar"
15"pulsed"
16"beacon"
17"flickered"
18"flicker"
19"quickened"
20"magnetic"
21"raced"
22"resolve"
23"gloom"
24"loomed"
25"sense of"
26"echoed"
27"navigate"
28"uncanny"
29"footsteps"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
2
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"eyes narrowed"
2"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences136
matches
0"a surge of warmth"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount19
narrationSentences136
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences139
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2578
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount2535
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.18
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter3
Heartstone4
Pendant4
Richmond1
Park1
London2
Golden1
Empress1
Aurora30
Hel1
Fae2
Grove2
persons
0"Carter"
1"Pendant"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
globalScore0.908
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences132
glossingSentenceCount15
matches
0"oak that seemed to pulse with its own heartbeat"
1"felt like a distant memory, a half-reme"
2"sound that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at Aurora stopped, the pendant’s pulse quickening"
3"whispers that seemed to rise from the very ground beneath her feet"
4"heartbeat that seemed to synchronize with the grove itself"
5"sound that seemed to vibrate the very air"
6"as if trying to push back the encroaching shadow"
7"pain that seemed to echo the woman’s hum"
8"crescendo that seemed to pull at the very fabric of the grove, the ancient oak standing stones vibrating in response"
9"flare that seemed to push back the darkness, a beacon against the encroaching void"
10"light that seemed to anchor her"
11"as if acknowledging her resolve"
12"as if conceding to her presence"
13"crimson that seemed to push back the void, a heartbeat that resonated with the ancient stones beyond"
14"shadows that seemed to move of their own accord"
6.05% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches5
per1kWords1.939
wordCount2578
matches
0"not moss but something else, something"
1"not a language she could understand, but the cadence was unmistakable: a warning, a lament, a plea"
2"not with words but with a sensation"
3"not as a warning but as a promise"
4"not a mistake, but a warning"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences139
matches(empty)
67.01% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean69.68
std26.79
cv0.385
sampleLengths
0108
199
2111
375
426
5111
673
755
891
991
1022
1183
1268
1316
1469
1579
1674
1749
1842
1970
2054
2156
2276
2330
2463
2562
2650
2717
2848
2958
3078
3178
3280
3395
3498
35113
36110
87.20% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences136
matches
0"were hidden"
1"been swallowed"
2"was tinged"
3"being lifted"
4"being pulled"
5"being pulled"
6"was matched"
98.99% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs396
matches
0"were breathing"
1"were humming"
2"was holding"
3"wasn’t looking"
4"were reacting"
5"was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences139
ratio0.079
matches
0"She glanced at the time on her phone—23:47—then at the map she’d sketched on a napkin earlier that day."
1"Aurora’s breath caught; the humming rose and fell, matching the rhythm of her own pulse."
2"The world outside—London, the neon lights of the city, the clatter of the Golden Empress kitchen—felt like a distant memory, a half-remembered dream."
3"The whisper answered, not with words but with a sensation—a cold draft that brushed the back of her neck, making the hair on her arms stand up."
4"She could see her own reflection—her dark hair, her bright blue eyes—staring back at her, but the reflection’s eyes were not hers."
5"From the darkness, a figure emerged—a woman, or perhaps something that wore a woman’s shape, her skin pallid and translucent, eyes like black pits."
6"The woman’s eyes—if they could be called eyes—locked onto Aurora’s."
7"She could see her own reflection—her dark hair, her bright blue eyes—staring back at her, but the reflection’s eyes were not hers."
8"In that flicker, Aurora saw a doorway—a portal of swirling shadows, an opening that seemed to swallow light."
9"The Heartstone Pendant was not just a trinket; it was a key, a beacon, a warning."
10"She could hear the faint, melodic chime again, this time not as a warning but as a promise—a promise that she would uncover the truth hidden within the standing stones, that she would navigate the thin line between the ordinary and the uncanny, and that she would not be alone, not truly."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2551
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount57
adverbRatio0.022344178753430026
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.00862406899255194
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences139
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences139
mean18.55
std8.69
cv0.468
sampleLengths
025
128
219
335
41
56
625
717
851
930
1017
1124
1218
1322
1414
1514
1621
1715
1811
1914
2012
2116
2213
2320
2423
2539
2612
2723
2816
2922
308
3124
3211
3312
3410
3525
3615
3718
3823
3918
4022
4112
4219
4320
4410
4512
4627
4717
4819
4920
35.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.1366906474820144
totalSentences139
uniqueOpeners19
24.69% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences135
matches
0"Instead, a low, guttural hum"
ratio0.007
98.52% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences135
matches
0"She glanced at the time"
1"She had come for a"
2"She paused at the first"
3"She pressed her palm to"
4"She pulled her hand away,"
5"she whispered to herself, the"
6"She stepped through the circle"
7"She moved forward, the soft"
8"She could feel the weight"
9"she muttered, half to herself,"
10"She pressed on, the path"
11"She could feel the time"
12"It resonated in her bones,"
13"She raised her hand, feeling"
14"she called, her voice steadier"
15"She turned her head sharply,"
16"she muttered, forcing herself to"
17"She took a step forward,"
18"She could see her own"
19"They were empty, a void"
ratio0.304
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount128
totalSentences135
matches
0"Aurora Carter slipped the silver"
1"The light fell on the"
2"She glanced at the time"
3"The coordinates pointed to a"
4"She had come for a"
5"The pendant had begun to"
6"The pulse was subtle, but"
7"An unknown benefactor had slipped"
8"The path into the grove"
9"Aurora’s boots crunched on the"
10"The moon was a thin"
11"She paused at the first"
12"The pendant’s glow intensified, a"
13"She pressed her palm to"
14"The stone was warm, the"
15"A low humming filled her"
16"Aurora’s breath caught; the humming"
17"She pulled her hand away,"
18"she whispered to herself, the"
19"She stepped through the circle"
ratio0.948
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences135
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences114
technicalSentenceCount28
matches
0"The pendant had begun to pulse, a warm thrum against her skin whenever she passed the old oak standing stones that marked the grove’s boundary."
1"The pulse was subtle, but it grew stronger each night, as if the stone itself were breathing."
2"The pendant’s glow intensified, a faint inner light that made the crimson stone look like a drop of blood against her chest."
3"The faint glow of the pendant cast a soft, wavering light on the ground, revealing a carpet of moss that glistened with dew."
4"Aurora’s eyes adjusted, and she could see the faint outlines of other stones, half-buried, their surfaces slick with a sheen that was not moss but something els…"
5"The forest seemed to close in around her, the trees leaning closer, their branches intertwining overhead to form a vaulted ceiling of darkness."
6"It resonated in her bones, a sound that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at Aurora stopped, the pendant’s pulse quickening."
7"The pendant’s glow flared, the crimson deepening, as if the stone were reacting to an unseen presence."
8"Aurora’s heart hammered against her ribs, the scar on her wrist throbbing as if it sensed the danger."
9"The ground beneath her feet seemed to shift, the moss turning to a slick, black surface that reflected the crimson gem like a mirror."
10"She pressed the pendant harder against her chest, feeling the warmth radiating from the stone."
11"The pendant’s glow intensified, a bright flare that illuminated the surrounding stones in a crimson wash."
12"From the darkness, a figure emerged—a woman, or perhaps something that wore a woman’s shape, her skin pallid and translucent, eyes like black pits."
13"The pendant’s glow flared, the crimson light beating against the darkness, as if trying to push back the encroaching shadow."
14"The ground beneath Aurora’s feet shifted again, the moss turning to a slick, black surface that reflected the crimson gem like a mirror."
15"The woman’s hum rose, a crescendo that seemed to pull at the very fabric of the grove, the ancient oak standing stones vibrating in response."
16"Aurora felt a cold hand brush her cheek, a whisper of breath that was not her own."
17"The pendant’s glow pulsed, a bright flare that seemed to push back the darkness, a beacon against the encroaching void."
18"The pendant’s pulse quickened, a frantic rhythm that matched the thudding of Aurora’s heart."
19"She lifted her chin, the scar on her wrist catching the light, a small crescent that glowed faintly as if acknowledging her resolve."
20"The ancient oak standing stones seemed to lean away, their runes dimming, as if conceding to her presence."
21"The woman’s form dissolved into a cascade of black petals that fell to the ground, each one dissolving into nothingness upon contact with the moss."
22"The pendant’s glow intensified, a beacon that cut through the gloom, a thin line of crimson that marked her path."
23"The pendant’s glow flared, a burst of crimson that seemed to push back the void, a heartbeat that resonated with the ancient stones beyond."
24"The Heartstone Pendant hung heavy against her chest, its crimson glow a steady rhythm that matched her own pulse."
25"The night stretched on, the ancient oak standing stones casting long shadows that seemed to move of their own accord."
26"The Heartstone Pendant glowed brighter, its crimson heart beating against the darkness, a steady rhythm that marked her path."
27"And somewhere, just beyond the edge of her vision, something moved, a shape that lingered in the periphery, a reminder that the wrongness she had felt from the …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"she whispered, the word barely audible over the rustle of leaves"
1"she muttered, half to herself, half to the darkness"
2"she called, her voice steadier than she felt"
3"Aurora asked, voice barely a whisper, her mind racing"
4"Aurora began, but the words died in her throat"
5"she said, her voice steadier than she felt"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"The coordinates pointed (point)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she muttered (mutter)"
3"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.583
leniency1
rawRatio0.571
effectiveRatio0.571
57.9948%