Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEVZKAAMXQ6D5KG58ZA2ZK

Run Details

Duration:
1m 2s
Cost:
$0.001292
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign buzzed like a trapped insect in the damp London evening, casting an otherworldly glow on the wet pavement. *The Raven’s Nest*. Aurora pushed the heavy door open, the weight of it familiar in her hand. The smell of old wood, spilled whiskey, and lemon polish washed over her, a welcome blanket after the chill outside and the greasy-sweet smell of takeaway boxes that had clung to her all day. It was early, and the bar was quiet. A couple of regulars hunched like bookends at the far end, and the low murmur of a football match whispered from a corner television. Her shoulders ached from the scooter, from hauling bags up stairwells. All she wanted was a quiet pint and the dim sanctuary of her flat upstairs. Silas was behind the bar, polishing a glass with a slow, methodical twist of the cloth. He looked up, his hazel eyes catching the low light. “Rory. Long day?” “Aren’t they all?” she said, sliding onto a stool. She nodded toward the tap. He set the glass down and began pulling her a lager, his movements precise, economical. The silver signet ring on his right hand flashed. She watched the way he favored his left leg, the slight shift of weight as he turned to place the full pint before her. It was a familiar dance. She was halfway through the pint, the cool bitterness washing the taste of the city away, when the door opened again. A draft, a shift in the light. She didn’t look up until she heard the voice. “Good God. Aurora Carter?” The voice was deeper than she remembered, polished with a confidence that had once been aspirational, not assured. She turned. Leo stood there, a camel coat draped over his shoulders, his hair expensively cut, his face a more defined, more tired version of the boy she’d known. Leo Fenton. They’d been in the same pre-law cohort at Cardiff, part of a tight, ambitious little group that debated jurisprudence in the student union until it closed, dreaming of chambers and high courts. “Leo,” she said. The name felt strange in her mouth. He moved toward her, a wide, disbelieving smile on his face. He didn’t sit, just stood before her stool, looking her up and down. She was acutely aware of her practical jacket, the faint smell of fried rice that probably still lingered on her, the simple black ponytail she’d shoved her hair into that morning. “I don’t believe it,” he said, his laugh a rich, practiced sound. “What on earth are you doing in London? Last I heard, you were… well, no one quite knew. You vanished after…” “After my father died,” she finished for him, her voice flat. She took a sip of her pint. “Yes. A terrible shock. We all felt for you.” He finally took the stool next to her, signalling to Silas. “Glenfiddich, neat, please.” He turned back to her. “So? Solicitor? Barrister? Don’t tell me you’re at the Old Bailey already, slumming it in a pub.” Silas placed the whiskey before Leo without a word, but his eyes lingered on Rory for a fraction of a second. A silent question. She gave a minute shake of her head. “I’m not in law,” she said. Leo’s smile didn’t falter, but it stiffened at the edges. “No? Teaching, then? Like your mum? You always had a brilliant way of explaining the obscure bits of tort law.” “Not teaching.” She traced the handle of her pint glass with her thumb. The small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist caught the light. A childhood fall from a tree. It felt like a scar from a different person entirely. “Well, you’ve got me intrigued,” Leo said, leaning in. His cologne was subtle and expensive. “What does the great Aurora Carter do, if not bend the legal world to her will? We all thought you were a sure thing. Your father was so proud.” The mention of her father, of that particular kind of pride, was a needle. She saw her father’s face, stern but loving, saw the stack of law texts he’d gifted her on her first day. All of it now felt like artefacts in a museum of a life that wasn’t hers. “I deliver food,” she said, looking directly at him. For a moment, he simply blinked. The words didn’t seem to compute. “You… deliver?” “For a Chinese restaurant. On a scooter. Part-time.” She said it cleanly, precisely, like stating evidence. She watched the confusion in his eyes curdle into a kind of horrified pity. “Aurora,” he said, his voice dropping. “Good lord. What happened?” “Life happened, Leo.” He took a swift drink of his whiskey. “But your mind… it’s a *waste*. I mean, no offence to… delivery persons. But you. You argued circles around Professor Hennessy. You were going to change the world.” “Was I?” she asked, and it was a genuine question. She remembered the girl who believed that, the one who wore blazers and planned her future in five-year increments. That girl had been buried alongside her father, and then again in the wreckage of a relationship with a man named Evan, who preferred his women silent and compliant. “Of course you were!” Leo’s face was animated now, flushed with drink and a sudden, passionate dismay. “We all were. Look at us. James is at a magic circle firm. Anya is a junior crown prosecutor. I’m in mergers and acquisitions.” He said it not to boast, but as proof of a plan correctly executed. “We *did* it. You were the best of us. And you’re… you’re *here*.” His gesture took in the dim bar, the old maps on the walls, Silas quietly wiping down the counter. “I live here,” she said. “The flat’s upstairs.” This was the final, unanswerable blow. Leo stared at her, his jaw working slightly. He looked around now, truly seeing the place. The worn leather of the booths, the faint patina of dust on the framed photographs of places no one could identify. A retired spy’s museum. Not the habitat of a rising legal star. “Why?” The word was a breath. She thought of the suffocating pressure of law school after her father’s sudden heart attack, the way every case study felt like a betrayal of his ghost. She thought of Evan, his charming smile that later tightened into a sneer, his hands that weren’t always gentle. She thought of the frantic phone call to Eva, the escape to London with a single suitcase, the terrifying freedom of having no plan at all. “The law felt like a cage,” she said simply, omitting everything in the middle. “This doesn’t.” “This?” he echoed, incredulous. “This.” She gestured to Silas, who was now inspecting a bottle of bourbon with deep concentration, giving them the illusion of privacy. “A quiet job. A quiet place. No one’s expectations to meet.” Leo was silent for a long time. He finished his whiskey, the ice clinking softly. “We missed you, you know. At the reunions. People ask.” “Do they?” “They wonder what became of the brilliant Aurora Carter.” She smiled then, a small, tight thing. “You can tell them she’s fine. She’s just Rory now. And she’s fine.” He looked at her, really looked, past the practical clothes and the tired eyes. He was searching for the girl he’d known, the fierce intelligence, the ready laugh. It was still there, she knew, but it was tempered now, cooled in a different fire. It was the intelligence that navigated London’s backstreets on a foggy night, that managed Silas’s occasional cryptic errands, that kept her safe and self-contained. It wasn’t the kind of brilliance that shone in a courtroom. It was the kind that ensured survival. “I don’t think you’re fine,” he said softly, the pity winning out. “That’s because you’re comparing me to a ghost, Leo. I’m not her anymore.” He nodded slowly, as if accepting a unfavourable verdict. He pulled a card from his wallet, thick, creamy stock with embossed lettering. He placed it on the bar beside her pint. “If you ever change your mind. The offer’s always open. I could make introductions. It’s not too late.” She looked at the card but didn’t touch it. “Thank you.” He stood, draping his coat back over his shoulders. He seemed taller, more solid in this dim light, a man carved from success. She remained on the stool, a figure in the shadows. The distance between them was no longer just the width of a bar; it was a chasm of years and choices, lined with the unspoken rubble of regret—his for what he perceived she’d lost, and hers, perhaps, for the simplicity of the life he assumed she should want. “It was good to see you, Aurora,” he said. “You too, Leo.” He left, the door sighing shut behind him, cutting off the sound of the city. The green neon light bled through the window, painting a faint emerald stripe across the floorboards. Silas moved down the bar and picked up Leo’s empty glass. “Friend from the old life?” “Something like that.” “He looked like he’d seen a ghost.” Rory finally picked up the business card. *Leo Fenton, Associate. Sterling, Vale & Crowthorne LLP.* It felt heavy. She spun it once between her fingers, then slid it across the polished wood back toward Silas. “Bin,” she said. Silas took it, his face impassive. He didn’t throw it away, though. He slipped it under the counter, into a small drawer where he kept lost property and other forgotten things. He refilled her pint without asking, the glass whispering as he set it down. “The past has a way of knocking,” he said, his voice a low rumble. “Doesn’t mean you have to answer.” Rory wrapped her hands around the cool glass and looked toward the door, now still. The ghost had come and gone. The room felt quieter, emptier, and somehow more solid because of it. She was here. In the Nest. This was the life she had, for better or worse. It was real. She took a long, slow drink, and let the weight of the encounter settle, a sediment at the bottom of her soul.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
90.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"He turned back [back]"
1"she said simply [simply]"
2"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.46
leniency0.92
rawRatio0.13
effectiveRatio0.12
79.58% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1714
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"truly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count2
4
adverb"really"
count1
5
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"slightly"
2"truly"
3"softly"
4"really"
5"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1714
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"otherworldly"
count1
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"sanctuary"
count1
5
word"methodical"
count1
6
word"dance"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"navigated"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count1
11
word"encounter"
count1
highlights
0"otherworldly"
1"weight"
2"familiar"
3"chill"
4"sanctuary"
5"methodical"
6"dance"
7"traced"
8"echoed"
9"navigated"
10"unspoken"
11"encounter"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences115
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences140
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords14
totalWords1708
ratio0.008
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"waste"
2"did"
3"here"
4"Leo Fenton, Associate. Sterling, Vale & Crowthorne LLP."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1348
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.74
worstName"Leo"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Leo"
discoveredNames
London3
Raven1
Fenton2
Cardiff1
Silas9
Leo10
Rory3
Evan2
Eva1
Associate1
Vale1
Crowthorne1
Nest2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Fenton"
2"Silas"
3"Leo"
4"Rory"
5"Evan"
6"Eva"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
2"Nest"
globalScore1
windowScore1
17.02% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences94
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"felt like a scar from a different perso"
1"felt like artefacts in a museum of a li"
2"felt like a betrayal of his ghost"
3"as if accepting a unfavourable verdict"
4"seemed taller more solid in this dim light, a man carved from success"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.585
wordCount1708
matches
0"not to boast, but as proof of a plan correctly executed"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences140
matches
0"believed that, the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean31.05
std24.4
cv0.786
sampleLengths
073
158
229
367
437
54
620
761
810
955
1033
1118
1245
1332
146
1530
1640
1744
1851
199
2014
2130
2210
233
2436
2558
2687
278
2855
296
3072
3116
324
3333
3425
352
369
3720
3886
3912
4013
4149
4211
4381
449
453
4631
4716
483
497
99.16% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences115
matches
0"been buried"
1"was tempered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs213
matches
0"was searching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences140
ratio0.007
matches
0"The distance between them was no longer just the width of a bar; it was a chasm of years and choices, lined with the unspoken rubble of regret—his for what he perceived she’d lost, and hers, perhaps, for the simplicity of the life he assumed she should want."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1353
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"tight, ambitious little group"
1"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount51
adverbRatio0.037694013303769404
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.015521064301552107
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences140
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences140
mean12.2
std8.38
cv0.687
sampleLengths
022
13
214
334
48
524
611
715
816
910
103
119
125
1315
149
1524
165
1721
187
199
204
2118
222
2327
242
2532
263
277
2811
2913
3031
3112
3221
3311
347
3520
368
3717
3821
393
408
416
4210
4320
4413
4511
466
4710
489
496
38.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.30714285714285716
totalSentences140
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount65
totalSentences108
matches
0"It was early, and the"
1"Her shoulders ached from the"
2"He looked up, his hazel"
3"she said, sliding onto a"
4"She nodded toward the tap."
5"He set the glass down"
6"She watched the way he"
7"It was a familiar dance."
8"She was halfway through the"
9"She didn’t look up until"
10"They’d been in the same"
11"He moved toward her, a"
12"He didn’t sit, just stood"
13"She was acutely aware of"
14"he said, his laugh a"
15"she finished for him, her"
16"She took a sip of"
17"He finally took the stool"
18"He turned back to her"
19"She gave a minute shake"
ratio0.602
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount103
totalSentences108
matches
0"The green neon sign buzzed"
1"*The Raven’s Nest*."
2"Aurora pushed the heavy door"
3"The smell of old wood,"
4"It was early, and the"
5"A couple of regulars hunched"
6"Her shoulders ached from the"
7"Silas was behind the bar,"
8"He looked up, his hazel"
9"she said, sliding onto a"
10"She nodded toward the tap."
11"He set the glass down"
12"The silver signet ring on"
13"She watched the way he"
14"It was a familiar dance."
15"She was halfway through the"
16"A draft, a shift in"
17"She didn’t look up until"
18"The voice was deeper than"
19"Leo stood there, a camel"
ratio0.954
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
ratio0
57.14% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The voice was deeper than she remembered, polished with a confidence that had once been aspirational, not assured."
1"They’d been in the same pre-law cohort at Cardiff, part of a tight, ambitious little group that debated jurisprudence in the student union until it closed, drea…"
2"She remembered the girl who believed that, the one who wore blazers and planned her future in five-year increments."
3"That girl had been buried alongside her father, and then again in the wreckage of a relationship with a man named Evan, who preferred his women silent and compl…"
4"She thought of Evan, his charming smile that later tightened into a sneer, his hands that weren’t always gentle."
5"It was the intelligence that navigated London’s backstreets on a foggy night, that managed Silas’s occasional cryptic errands, that kept her safe and self-conta…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"he said, his laugh a rich, practiced sound"
1"she finished, her voice flat"
2"he said, his voice dropping"
3"he echoed, incredulous"
4"he said softly, the pity winning out"
5"he said, his voice a low rumble"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.32
leniency0.64
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
74.1827%