Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
61
technicalSentenceCount
14
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"The rational part of her brain, the part that had gotten her through pre-law, through Evan, through the messy business of building a new life in a city that did…"
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"But the pendant against her chest, the Heartstone, was a steady, warm weight, a silent, insistent pull that had led her here."
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"It had been pulsing with a low, rhythmic heat all afternoon, a sensation that was neither unpleasant nor entirely comfortable, like a second, quieter heartbeat."
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"They were older than anything she’d ever seen, not the neat, tourist-friendly monoliths from history books, but gnarled, ancient oaks that seemed to have grown …"
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"They bloomed with a defiance that spoke of a different season, a different world."
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"Yet, the flowers themselves seemed to provide their own illumination, casting soft, shifting shadows that danced at the edge of her vision."
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"She kept turning her head, trying to catch them, but they were always just gone when she looked directly at them."
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"She whirled around, her hand going instinctively to the pendant, her fingers closing around the smooth, warm crimson stone."
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"The air, once still, now carried a subtle current, a movement that brushed against her cheek like a sigh."
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"It was a sibilant exhalation that seemed to come from everywhere at once, weaving through the flowers, dripping from the branches."
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"It was the simple, awful truth from something that knew the rules of this place and knew she was breaking every one of them."
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"They were just concentrations of a deeper darkness, pools of absolute nothing that were beginning to move, to flow toward her across the flower-strewn ground."
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"The whispers became a chorus, a cacophony of hissing, clicking, sighing sounds that clawed at the edges of her sanity."
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"And in that moment, standing alone in a grove that was not of her world, Aurora Carter knew with a certainty that froze the blood in her veins that she was not …"