Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEWEGP1V6ED5PHS53Q6TN8

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Duration:
1m 50s
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$0.001442
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SambaNova

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park had turned sharp with the coming night, the kind of cold that seeped through denim and settled deep in the bones. Aurora Carter—Rory to almost no one these days—pulled her jacket tighter, the worn leather creaking in protest. Her breath plumed in the twilight, a ghostly signal in the gathering dark. She shouldn’t be here. The rational part of her brain, the part that had gotten her through pre-law, through Evan, through the messy business of building a new life in a city that didn’t care, screamed that this was a profoundly stupid idea. But the pendant against her chest, the Heartstone, was a steady, warm weight, a silent, insistent pull that had led her here. It had been pulsing with a low, rhythmic heat all afternoon, a sensation that was neither unpleasant nor entirely comfortable, like a second, quieter heartbeat. It had guided her away from the well-trodden paths of the park, through thickets that snagged at her sleeves, until she found them: the standing stones. They were older than anything she’d ever seen, not the neat, tourist-friendly monoliths from history books, but gnarled, ancient oaks that seemed to have grown into these impossible, upright shapes. They formed a rough circle, a gateway of twisted bark and grasping branches. As she stepped between two of them, the air changed. The sounds of distant London traffic—the ever-present hum of the A316—simply vanished, replaced by an absolute, ringing silence. The temperature shifted, too, from the chill of an English autumn to something milder, almost damp, like the air inside a greenhouse. She was in the Fae Grove. Wildflowers carpeted the ground, their colours impossibly vivid in the fading light: deep purples, fiery oranges, a white so pure it seemed to glow from within. They bloomed with a defiance that spoke of a different season, a different world. It was beautiful. It was wrong. The silence was the first clue. In a park this size, there should have been the rustle of a hedgehog, the call of an owl, the scuttling of some unseen creature in the undergrowth. Here, there was nothing. It was a vacuum. Rory took a hesitant step forward, the crunch of leaves under her boots sounding obscenely loud. The pendant pulsed again, a little warmer this time. She’d come because she needed answers. Since the night it had been pressed into her hand by a shadowy figure in an alley behind the Golden Empress, her life had been tilting off its axis. Strange figures glimpsed in crowds, whispers from corners of empty rooms, and this… this thing around her neck that seemed to have a mind of its own. The Grove was mentioned in the fragment of a manuscript she’d found tucked into a library book, a place where the veil was thin. A place of truth. She walked slowly towards the center of the clearing, her senses straining. The light was fading fast, the deep blue of twilight giving way to a velvety, starless black. Yet, the flowers themselves seemed to provide their own illumination, casting soft, shifting shadows that danced at the edge of her vision. She kept turning her head, trying to catch them, but they were always just gone when she looked directly at them. A sound. She froze, one foot hovering above a patch of luminous blue blossoms. It was a faint, crystalline chime, like a single droplet of water falling into a perfect pool. It came from her left. She turned slowly, heart hammering against her ribs. Nothing. Just the silent, watchful stones and the oppressive blanket of flowers. She took another step. And another. The center of the Grove was a flat, moss-covered stone, an altar waiting for a sacrifice. The thought skittered, unwelcome, through her mind. The pendant was practically humming now, its warmth a constant presence against her skin. There was another sound. Not a chime this time. A rustle. Not the dry shuffle of leaves, but something softer, wetter. Like something moving through dense, damp vegetation. It was behind her. She whirled around, her hand going instinctively to the pendant, her fingers closing around the smooth, warm crimson stone. The silver chain felt cold by comparison. The clearing was empty. But the feeling was undeniable now. She was not alone. The air, once still, now carried a subtle current, a movement that brushed against her cheek like a sigh. It didn’t smell like flowers anymore. It smelled of loam, of deep, turned earth, and something else underneath—something metallic and old. A flicker of movement, high in the branches of one of the stone-oaks. She snapped her gaze upward, but saw only the intricate, skeletal patterns of the branches against the dark sky. Her mind, the one she prided on its cool-headed, out-of-the-box thinking, was starting to fray at the edges. *It’s the wind,* it insisted. *It’s your imagination, hyped up on fear and folklore.* But the Grove had no wind. The rustling came again, closer now, from multiple directions. A soft, sliding sound to her right, a dry scrape to her left. They were circling her. She stood her ground by the mossy stone, her back to it, trying to watch every direction at once. Her breath was coming in short, sharp gasps, the sound ragged in the perfect silence. Then, a whisper. It wasn't a word, not in any language she knew. It was a sibilant exhalation that seemed to come from everywhere at once, weaving through the flowers, dripping from the branches. It was a sound that promised nothing good. The small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a relic of a fall from a tree when she was eight, began to prickle with a strange, sympathetic heat. Another whisper, this one from directly behind her. She jerked away from the altar stone, stumbling into a patch of flowers. Their glow seemed to intensify where her feet crushed them, leaking a faint, sickly-sweet sap. *You should not be here.* The thought slammed into her mind, clear and cold and entirely not her own. It was a statement of fact, devoid of malice, and that made it infinitely more terrifying than any threat could be. It was the simple, awful truth from something that knew the rules of this place and knew she was breaking every one of them. The shadows at the base of the standing stones began to deepen, to coalesce. They didn’t form shapes she could understand—no figures, no faces. They were just concentrations of a deeper darkness, pools of absolute nothing that were beginning to move, to flow toward her across the flower-strewn ground. The Heartstone pendant suddenly flared with a searing heat, so intense she cried out and released it, the crimson gem now glowing like a live coal from within. Its light, a bloody, pulsing radiance, pushed back against the advancing shadows, holding them at bay just a few feet away. They seethed at the edge of the light, amorphous and hungry. The whispers became a chorus, a cacophony of hissing, clicking, sighing sounds that clawed at the edges of her sanity. They were all around her now, held back only by the fragile light of the stone. She was trapped in a shrinking circle of protection, the things in the dark waiting for the light to fail. Terror, cold and absolute, washed over her. This wasn’t answers. This was a trap. The pendant hadn’t led her to truth; it had led her to this—a meal. She had walked herself right into the larder. She could feel them pressing in, not physically, but psychically, a pressure against her mind, a thousand alien thoughts trying to find a crack in her consciousness. Her cool-headedness was gone, incinerated by primal fear. There was no out-of-the-box thinking here. There was only the box, and it was closing in around her, and the things outside wanted in. The glow of the Heartstone flickered. A fresh wave of whispers erupted, this time tinged with something new. Not hunger. Not curiosity. Anticipation. And in that moment, standing alone in a grove that was not of her world, Aurora Carter knew with a certainty that froze the blood in her veins that she was not getting out of here alive.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
89.23% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1393
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
17.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1393
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"comfortable"
count1
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"crystalline"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count2
8
word"oppressive"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"intricate"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count2
13
word"searing"
count1
14
word"cacophony"
count1
15
word"could feel"
count1
16
word"flickered"
count1
17
word"tinged"
count1
18
word"anticipation"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"rhythmic"
2"comfortable"
3"silence"
4"chill"
5"pulsed"
6"crystalline"
7"perfect"
8"oppressive"
9"warmth"
10"flicker"
11"intricate"
12"whisper"
13"searing"
14"cacophony"
15"could feel"
16"flickered"
17"tinged"
18"anticipation"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences107
matches(empty)
36.05% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount8
narrationSentences107
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords17
totalWords1377
ratio0.012
matches
0"It’s the wind,"
1"It’s your imagination, hyped up on fear and folklore."
2"You should not be here."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1377
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.29
worstName"Grove"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Carter2
Rory2
Evan1
Heartstone3
London1
English1
Fae1
Grove4
Golden1
Empress1
Aurora2
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Evan"
3"Heartstone"
4"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
57.41% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"oaks that seemed to have grown into these impossible, upright shapes"
1"neck that seemed to have a mind of its own"
2"exhalation that seemed to come from everywhere at once, weaving through the flowers, dripping from the branches"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords2.905
wordCount1377
matches
0"neither unpleasant nor"
1"not the neat, tourist-friendly monoliths from history books, but gnarled, ancient oaks"
2"Not the dry shuffle of leaves, but something softer, wetter"
3"not physically, but psychically, a pressure against her mind, a thousand alien t"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences107
matches
0"screamed that this"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean47.48
std31
cv0.653
sampleLengths
099
173
293
36
488
5115
672
72
854
943
1058
114
1250
1364
146
1560
163
1767
1836
195
2059
2149
2260
2356
2436
2559
266
2717
2837
92.15% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences107
matches
0"been pressed"
1"was mentioned"
2"was trapped"
3"was gone"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs193
matches
0"was starting"
1"were circling"
2"was coming"
3"was breaking"
4"were beginning"
5"was closing"
9.35% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences107
ratio0.047
matches
0"Aurora Carter—Rory to almost no one these days—pulled her jacket tighter, the worn leather creaking in protest."
1"The sounds of distant London traffic—the ever-present hum of the A316—simply vanished, replaced by an absolute, ringing silence."
2"It smelled of loam, of deep, turned earth, and something else underneath—something metallic and old."
3"They didn’t form shapes she could understand—no figures, no faces."
4"The pendant hadn’t led her to truth; it had led her to this—a meal."
70.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1393
adjectiveStacks5
stackExamples
0"neat, tourist-friendly monoliths"
1"flat, moss-covered stone,"
2"small, crescent-shaped scar"
3"faint, sickly-sweet sap."
4"absolute, washed over her."
adverbCount53
adverbRatio0.03804737975592247
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.015793251974156496
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean12.87
std8.54
cv0.664
sampleLengths
026
117
213
34
439
522
625
726
830
913
1010
1118
1222
136
1426
1514
163
173
186
1928
204
214
2216
239
246
2529
2613
2714
2824
294
3012
3117
3222
3321
342
3512
3617
375
388
391
4011
414
422
4316
447
4514
464
475
482
4910
33.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.2803738317757009
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners30
66.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"Just the silent, watchful stones"
1"Then, a whisper."
ratio0.02
28.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences100
matches
0"Her breath plumed in the"
1"She shouldn’t be here."
2"It had been pulsing with"
3"It had guided her away"
4"They were older than anything"
5"They formed a rough circle,"
6"She was in the Fae"
7"They bloomed with a defiance"
8"It was beautiful."
9"It was wrong."
10"It was a vacuum."
11"She’d come because she needed"
12"She walked slowly towards the"
13"She kept turning her head,"
14"She froze, one foot hovering"
15"It was a faint, crystalline"
16"It came from her left."
17"She turned slowly, heart hammering"
18"She took another step."
19"It was behind her."
ratio0.48
45.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences100
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park"
1"Aurora Carter—Rory to almost no"
2"Her breath plumed in the"
3"She shouldn’t be here."
4"The rational part of her"
5"It had been pulsing with"
6"It had guided her away"
7"They were older than anything"
8"They formed a rough circle,"
9"The sounds of distant London"
10"The temperature shifted, too, from"
11"She was in the Fae"
12"Wildflowers carpeted the ground, their"
13"They bloomed with a defiance"
14"It was beautiful."
15"It was wrong."
16"The silence was the first"
17"Here, there was nothing."
18"It was a vacuum."
19"Rory took a hesitant step"
ratio0.83
50.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences100
matches
0"Yet, the flowers themselves seemed"
ratio0.01
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount14
matches
0"The rational part of her brain, the part that had gotten her through pre-law, through Evan, through the messy business of building a new life in a city that did…"
1"But the pendant against her chest, the Heartstone, was a steady, warm weight, a silent, insistent pull that had led her here."
2"It had been pulsing with a low, rhythmic heat all afternoon, a sensation that was neither unpleasant nor entirely comfortable, like a second, quieter heartbeat."
3"They were older than anything she’d ever seen, not the neat, tourist-friendly monoliths from history books, but gnarled, ancient oaks that seemed to have grown …"
4"They bloomed with a defiance that spoke of a different season, a different world."
5"Yet, the flowers themselves seemed to provide their own illumination, casting soft, shifting shadows that danced at the edge of her vision."
6"She kept turning her head, trying to catch them, but they were always just gone when she looked directly at them."
7"She whirled around, her hand going instinctively to the pendant, her fingers closing around the smooth, warm crimson stone."
8"The air, once still, now carried a subtle current, a movement that brushed against her cheek like a sigh."
9"It was a sibilant exhalation that seemed to come from everywhere at once, weaving through the flowers, dripping from the branches."
10"It was the simple, awful truth from something that knew the rules of this place and knew she was breaking every one of them."
11"They were just concentrations of a deeper darkness, pools of absolute nothing that were beginning to move, to flow toward her across the flower-strewn ground."
12"The whispers became a chorus, a cacophony of hissing, clicking, sighing sounds that clawed at the edges of her sanity."
13"And in that moment, standing alone in a grove that was not of her world, Aurora Carter knew with a certainty that froze the blood in her veins that she was not …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
69.8156%