Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEWFN21PV64S4CHQMJYFW1

Run Details

Duration:
54.6s
Cost:
$0.123945

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The ancient oaks of Richmond Park stood silent against the October darkness, their branches reaching toward a starless sky like arthritic fingers. Aurora pulled her jacket tighter and checked her phone again—no signal, just like Eva had warned. The beam from her torch cut through the mist rolling across the deer paths, illuminating nothing but wet grass and the occasional startled moth. She shouldn't have come alone. Eva had begged her to wait until morning, until they could come together, but the message had been clear: midnight at the grove, or the opportunity would pass. The pendant against her chest pulsed with unusual warmth, its rhythm matching her quickened heartbeat as she pushed deeper into the park. The standing stones appeared suddenly in her torch beam—massive oak trunks arranged in a perfect circle, their bark twisted into patterns that hurt to look at directly. Aurora had seen plenty of strange things since arriving in London, but these trees felt different. Wrong. They hummed with a frequency just below hearing, a vibration that settled into her teeth and made her jaw ache. She stepped between two of the oaks, and the world tilted. The torch flickered and died. Aurora smacked it against her palm, but the darkness had weight now, pressing against her eyes like wet velvet. The pendant's warmth intensified, its faint crimson glow providing just enough light to see her breath misting in air that had dropped twenty degrees in an instant. "Right then," she muttered, her voice swallowed by the unnatural quiet. Even her footsteps made no sound as she moved forward, following the pendant's pull toward the center of the grove. The darkness parted like theatre curtains, revealing a clearing that shouldn't exist. Wildflowers carpeted the ground—bluebells and foxgloves and flowers she couldn't name, all blooming impossibly in October's grip. Their petals glowed with a sickly phosphorescence that made her eyes water. The sweet scent of their decay clung to the back of her throat. Aurora checked her phone. The screen showed 12:03, but the numbers blurred and reformed: 12:01, 11:58, 12:07. Time stuttered and skipped like a scratched record. She pocketed the useless device and forced herself to breathe slowly, to think. Someone had sent that message. Someone wanted her here. A branch snapped behind her. She spun, hand instinctively reaching for the pepper spray in her pocket, but nothing moved in the writhing shadows between the trees. The wildflowers rustled without wind, their heads turning to track her movement like an audience of luminous eyes. "I'm here," Aurora called out, proud when her voice didn't shake. "Whatever game this is, I'm playing." The flowers laughed—a sound like children giggling underwater. The pendant burned against her skin now, its glow strengthening until it cast her shadow in multiple directions. Each shadow moved independently, reaching for things that weren't there, recoiling from threats she couldn't see. Something white drifted past her peripheral vision. Aurora turned, catching a glimpse of fabric, perhaps a dress, disappearing behind an oak. She followed, her footsteps finally making sound again—but the crunch of dead leaves beneath her boots didn't match the carpet of living flowers she walked on. "Wait," she called out, quickening her pace. The figure in white stood at the far edge of the grove, back turned, hair hanging in wet tangles despite the absence of rain. Aurora approached slowly, noting the bare feet, the way the dress clung to too-thin shoulders, the absolute stillness of the form. "Are you all right?" Aurora reached out, her fingers nearly touching the woman's shoulder. The figure's head snapped backward with the crack of breaking vertebrae, revealing a face that was her own—her own features stretched and distorted, bright blue eyes rolled back to show only whites, mouth opening wider than any mouth should open. Aurora stumbled backward as the thing wearing her face laughed with that underwater sound. Its limbs bent at impossible angles as it scuttled toward her on all fours, moving like a spider learning to use human parts. She ran. The grove stretched endlessly, the standing stones multiplying, creating a maze of identical clearings. In each one, another version of herself waited—some crawling, some floating inches off the ground, some with faces that bloomed like the poisonous flowers beneath her feet. They whispered in her voice, speaking words she'd never said, secrets she'd never shared, names of people she'd never met but somehow knew. The pendant's heat became unbearable. Aurora yanked it over her head, holding it out like a torch. Its light revealed the truth—the grove was full of watchers. They clung to the trees, hung from branches, emerged from the earth itself. Not versions of her, but things that had tried to become her and failed, wearing her face like an ill-fitting mask. One dropped from above, fingers like twigs raking across her shoulder. Aurora swung the pendant, and where its light touched, the creatures recoiled with sounds like steam escaping. She spun in a circle, using the Heartstone's glow to clear a path. There—a gap between two oaks that looked different from the others, their bark unmarred by those painful patterns. Aurora sprinted toward it, the things behind her shrieking in harmony, a choir of stolen voices singing her name. She burst through the gap and fell hard onto wet grass. Real grass. The torch beside her flickered back to life, revealing the normal park, the normal night, her phone buzzing with a dozen missed calls from Eva. The time read 12:04. Four minutes had passed. Aurora clutched the pendant, its heat already fading to warmth. Behind her, the standing stones looked like ordinary oaks again, nothing special about them except their age. But in their shadows, she could still see the glow of those poisonous flowers, could still hear that underwater laughter. Her phone rang. Unknown number. "Thank you for coming," said a voice that might have been her own, speaking from somewhere that might have been the grove. "We'll be in touch." The line went dead. Aurora's hand shook as she lowered the phone, noting the new contact that had somehow added itself: "The Waiting Ones." She backed away from the grove, then turned and ran properly, not stopping until she reached the park gates. Only then did she notice the tears in her jacket, the scratches on her shoulder arranged in a perfect spiral, and the fact that her shadow, when caught in the streetlight's glare, was still moving on its own.
total_cost0.123945

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.75
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1090
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1090
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"quickened"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count2
4
word"flickered"
count2
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"velvet"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count2
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"quickened"
3"perfect"
4"flickered"
5"weight"
6"velvet"
7"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences72
filterMatches
0"notice"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences74
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1079
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1053
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.33
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
October2
Eva3
London1
Heartstone1
Aurora14
persons
0"Eva"
1"Heartstone"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"October"
3"London"
globalScore0.835
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like ordinary oaks again, nothing"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.927
wordCount1079
matches
0"Not versions of her, but things"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean37.21
std19.01
cv0.511
sampleLengths
062
155
264
311
451
531
654
747
85
940
1017
1142
1247
137
1445
1514
1640
1737
182
1964
2061
2141
2237
2346
2447
255
2626
2724
2857
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs196
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences74
ratio0.122
matches
0"Aurora pulled her jacket tighter and checked her phone again—no signal, just like Eva had warned."
1"The standing stones appeared suddenly in her torch beam—massive oak trunks arranged in a perfect circle, their bark twisted into patterns that hurt to look at directly."
2"Wildflowers carpeted the ground—bluebells and foxgloves and flowers she couldn't name, all blooming impossibly in October's grip."
3"The flowers laughed—a sound like children giggling underwater."
4"She followed, her footsteps finally making sound again—but the crunch of dead leaves beneath her boots didn't match the carpet of living flowers she walked on."
5"The figure's head snapped backward with the crack of breaking vertebrae, revealing a face that was her own—her own features stretched and distorted, bright blue eyes rolled back to show only whites, mouth opening wider than any mouth should open."
6"In each one, another version of herself waited—some crawling, some floating inches off the ground, some with faces that bloomed like the poisonous flowers beneath her feet."
7"Its light revealed the truth—the grove was full of watchers."
8"There—a gap between two oaks that looked different from the others, their bark unmarred by those painful patterns."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1064
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.039473684210526314
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.013157894736842105
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences74
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences74
mean14.58
std8.44
cv0.579
sampleLengths
022
116
224
35
428
522
627
716
81
920
1011
115
1219
1327
1411
1520
1612
1717
1812
1913
204
2113
228
2313
245
254
265
2722
2818
2911
306
318
3218
3316
347
3514
3626
377
3824
3921
4014
4140
4214
4323
442
4514
4627
4723
485
4912
68.92% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.44594594594594594
totalSentences74
uniqueOpeners33
98.04% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences68
matches
0"Even her footsteps made no"
1"Only then did she notice"
ratio0.029
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences68
matches
0"She shouldn't have come alone."
1"They hummed with a frequency"
2"She stepped between two of"
3"she muttered, her voice swallowed"
4"Their petals glowed with a"
5"She pocketed the useless device"
6"She spun, hand instinctively reaching"
7"She followed, her footsteps finally"
8"she called out, quickening her"
9"Its limbs bent at impossible"
10"They whispered in her voice,"
11"Its light revealed the truth—the"
12"They clung to the trees,"
13"She spun in a circle,"
14"She burst through the gap"
15"Her phone rang."
16"She backed away from the"
ratio0.25
26.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences68
matches
0"The ancient oaks of Richmond"
1"Aurora pulled her jacket tighter"
2"The beam from her torch"
3"She shouldn't have come alone."
4"Eva had begged her to"
5"The pendant against her chest"
6"The standing stones appeared suddenly"
7"Aurora had seen plenty of"
8"They hummed with a frequency"
9"She stepped between two of"
10"The torch flickered and died."
11"Aurora smacked it against her"
12"The pendant's warmth intensified, its"
13"she muttered, her voice swallowed"
14"The darkness parted like theatre"
15"Wildflowers carpeted the ground—bluebells and"
16"Their petals glowed with a"
17"The sweet scent of their"
18"Aurora checked her phone."
19"The screen showed 12:03, but"
ratio0.868
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"They hummed with a frequency just below hearing, a vibration that settled into her teeth and made her jaw ache."
1"The pendant's warmth intensified, its faint crimson glow providing just enough light to see her breath misting in air that had dropped twenty degrees in an inst…"
2"Their petals glowed with a sickly phosphorescence that made her eyes water."
3"Each shadow moved independently, reaching for things that weren't there, recoiling from threats she couldn't see."
4"The figure's head snapped backward with the crack of breaking vertebrae, revealing a face that was her own—her own features stretched and distorted, bright blue…"
5"In each one, another version of herself waited—some crawling, some floating inches off the ground, some with faces that bloomed like the poisonous flowers benea…"
6"Not versions of her, but things that had tried to become her and failed, wearing her face like an ill-fitting mask."
7"The torch beside her flickered back to life, revealing the normal park, the normal night, her phone buzzing with a dozen missed calls from Eva."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Aurora reached out, her fingers nearly touching the woman's shoulder"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Aurora called out (call out)"
2"she called out (call out)"
3"said a voice that might have been her own (say might have be)"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
78.9517%