| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rowan said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.308 | | leniency | 0.615 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.051 | |
| 76.30% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 844 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 58.53% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 844 | | totalAiIsms | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "tracing" | | 1 | "flicker" | | 2 | "unreadable" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "traced" | | 5 | "electric" | | 6 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 94.93% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | gibberishSentences | 1 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 1 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 68 | | ratio | 0.012 | | matches | | 0 | "The voice was older, deeper, but unmistakable庞 Slowly, she turned." |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 830 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 684 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.32 | | worstName | "Rowan" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rowan" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Silas | 5 | | London | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Slowly | 1 | | Aurora | 6 | | Billie | 1 | | Holiday | 1 | | Rowan | 9 | | Cardiffen | 1 | | Door | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Aurora" | | 5 | "Billie" | | 6 | "Holiday" | | 7 | "Rowan" | | 8 | "Door" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.842 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 89.02% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 830 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 52 | | mean | 15.96 | | std | 17.2 | | cv | 1.078 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 69 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 70 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 47 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 51 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 67 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 38 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 99.42% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 122 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 81 | | ratio | 0.123 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn’t been called it in years—not since Cardiff, not since before Evan." | | 1 | "But it was his eyes that undid her—the same green, but dulled, before they'd held the brightness of late-night laughter and overly ambitious plans." | | 2 | "She watched his gaze flicker over her—the black hair now neat instead of riotous, the tailored blazer in place of band shirts, the way she held her drink like someone who knew how to take her time with poison." | | 3 | "Up close, Aurora noticed the scars along his knuckles—thick, raised—and smelled the old cigarette smoke clinging to his jacket." | | 4 | "Across the bar, Silas discreetly turned up the jazz record player—Billie Holiday’s mournful croon wrapped around them." | | 5 | "He opened his mouth, shut it. Their knees brushed accidental Under the counter, —electric reminder of a thousand nights spent pressed together in library corners, sharing headphones, notes. He used smell like cheap aftershave and ink. Now it was leather and something medicinal This Rowan didn’t scribble hastily on papers wore rings on every finger—heavy silver that would’ve punched holes in his younger self’s arguments about integrity." | | 6 | "She remembered the last time they’d had beers together—Cardiffen pub near campus, his restless fingers drumming anxiety while she pretended not to notice." | | 7 | "\"I’m not\"—sharp inhale—\"the man you left.\"" | | 8 | "That earned half-smile. He rummaged for wallet—hands deft as when he’d stolen library books for her. \"Still hate goodbyes?\"" | | 9 | "Noddingpenny dropped between fingers before flicking it to her—same stupid old gesture. \"Next round’ s mine then'" |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 698 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "outside painted ghostly reflections" | | 1 | "same stupid old gesture." |
| | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.0329512893982808 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017191977077363897 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 81 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 81 | | mean | 10.23 | | std | 9.97 | | cv | 0.974 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 29 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 39 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 67 |
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| 94.24% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5802469135802469 | | totalSentences | 81 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 61.73% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Then he’d vanished after law" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "His signet ring caught the" | | 1 | "she admitted, swirling the ice" | | 2 | "She hadn’t been called it" | | 3 | "It was him, and it" | | 4 | "His hair, once perpetually messy," | | 5 | "She watched his gaze flicker" | | 6 | "He trailed off, gesturing vaguely" | | 7 | "She sipped her gin" | | 8 | "she cut in softly. The" | | 9 | "He opened his mouth, shut" | | 10 | "His laugh was bitter." | | 11 | "She remembered the last time" | | 12 | "She didn’t promise" |
| | ratio | 0.241 | |
| 71.11% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven's Nest smelled of" | | 1 | "Aurora leaned against the polished" | | 2 | "The green neon glow from" | | 3 | "Silas remarked, sliding the gin" | | 4 | "His signet ring caught the" | | 5 | "she admitted, swirling the ice" | | 6 | "The burn helped." | | 7 | "The door creaked, letting in" | | 8 | "Aurora didn’t look up until" | | 9 | "That name punched through her" | | 10 | "She hadn’t been called it" | | 11 | "The voice was older, deeper," | | 12 | "It was him, and it" | | 13 | "The gangly limbs he’d grown" | | 14 | "His hair, once perpetually messy," | | 15 | "She watched his gaze flicker" | | 16 | "A stranger mirrored back at" | | 17 | "Rowan exhaled sharply and shook" | | 18 | "Silas polished a glass, unreadable." | | 19 | "Rowan slid onto the stool" |
| | ratio | 0.778 | |
| 92.59% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Even now, softened by liquor" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 21 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven's Nest smelled of aged whiskey and yesterday's tobacco smoke, the kind of scent that clung to clothes and memories." | | 1 | "The gangly limbs he’d grown into broad shoulders, and the nervous energy that used to make him tap his foot had settled into a stillness that didn’t quite fit." | | 2 | "But it was his eyes that undid her—the same green, but dulled, before they'd held the brightness of late-night laughter and overly ambitious plans." | | 3 | "She watched his gaze flicker over her—the black hair now neat instead of riotous, the tailored blazer in place of band shirts, the way she held her drink like s…" | | 4 | "He opened his mouth, shut it. Their knees brushed accidental Under the counter, —electric reminder of a thousand nights spent pressed together in library corner…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.051 | | leniency | 0.103 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.051 | |