Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEY1A17TAPQC0770DGMQXS

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

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The Raven's Nest smelled of aged whiskey and yesterday's tobacco smoke, the kind of scent that clung to clothes and memories. Aurora leaned against the polished mahogany bar, tracing the crescent scar on her wrist absently as she waited for Silas to pour her usual. The green neon glow from outside painted ghostly reflections in the mirror behind the liquor bottles, turning the amber amber liquids into molten glass. "You're early," Silas remarked, sliding the gin across without looking up. His signet ring caught the dim light as he wiped the counter with practiced, economical motions. "Didn't feel like being alone today," she admitted, swirling the ice in her glass. The burn helped. The door creaked, letting in a gust of damp London air. Aurora didn’t look up until she heard the sharp intake of breath two stools down. "Laila?" That name punched through her ribs. She hadn’t been called it in years—not since Cardiff, not since before Evan. The voice was older, deeper, but unmistakable庞 Slowly, she turned. "Rowan." It was him, and it wasn’t. The gangly limbs he’d grown into broad shoulders, and the nervous energy that used to make him tap his foot had settled into a stillness that didn’t quite fit. His hair, once perpetually messy, was trimmed close to his scalp. But it was his eyes that undid her—the same green, but dulled, before they'd held the brightness of late-night laughter and overly ambitious plans. Ten years. She watched his gaze flicker over her—the black hair now neat instead of riotous, the tailored blazer in place of band shirts, the way she held her drink like someone who knew how to take her time with poison. A stranger mirrored back at both of them. Rowan exhaled sharply and shook his head. "Jesus. I almost didn't—Silas, you could've warned me." Silas polished a glass, unreadable. "Wouldn’t rob you of the moment." Rowan slid onto the stool beside her with a familiarity that didn’t exist anymore. Up close, Aurora noticed the scars along his knuckles—thick, raised—and smelled the old cigarette smoke clinging to his jacket. A far cry from the boy who’d sworn off smoking after his grandfather’d father died of lung cancer. "You look…" He trailed off, gesturing vaguely. "So do you." She sipped her gin. "Different." A laugh barked out of him. "Understatement." Silence settled between them, dense as the shadows in the corner. Aurora traced the rim of his untouched pint. "How'd you end up here?" "Delivery job." "You—" He blinked. "You were top of Wales’ brightest legal wunderkinds. What happened to barrister Aur—" "Things change." cold crawled up her spine. Even now, softened by liquor and years, still stung sharp enough to make her fingers tighten on her glass. Rowan’s jaw worked. "Rachel? The trial?" A shrug. "Dad wanted barrister. I didn’t." Across the bar, Silas discreetly turned up the jazz record player—Billie Holiday’s mournful croon wrapped around them. Rowan dragged al across his face. "Listen, about—" " "Don’t.," she cut in softly. The crescent scar on her wrist burned phantom pain. "We don’t owe each other explanations." He opened his mouth, shut it. Their knees brushed accidental Under the counter, —electric reminder of a thousand nights spent pressed together in library corners, sharing headphones, notes. He used smell like cheap aftershave and ink. Now it was leather and something medicinal This Rowan didn’t scribble hastily on papers wore rings on every finger—heavy silver that would’ve punched holes in his younger self’s arguments about integrity. "You really don’t?" Aurora finished her drink. Rise."Never said that. But what’s the point?" Difference is too wide now." His laugh was bitter. "Course Time skipped us.." Outside, neon blurred through the rain-streaked windows. She remembered the last time they’d had beers together—Cardiffen pub near campus, his restless fingers drumming anxiety while she pretended not to notice. Then he’d vanished after law school like smoke. Rowan broke first "You know why I left?" "Do I want to?" "Probably. might punch me." She snorted. "Try." The pause lasted three heartbeats. "I loved you," Rowan said quietly. The record scratched in her chest."Then you had shit timing." Silas poured another gin without asking. Rowan twistedy ring around his thumb. "Waited for you to call after Rachel’s trial Want to know why didn’t ?" "Because lawyers don’t beg." "I’m not"—sharp inhale—"the man you left." Aurora swallowed. "Neither I" the girl." Both stared at their reflections in the backbar’r, indistinct shapes warped by imperfections in old glass. Viz blurred outlines of people erased rewritten by years. After long moment, Rowan pushed up from stool. Ducked his head like he used to when nervous. "Still got thirst for chaos?" "No,, now charge." That earned half-smile. He rummaged for wallet—hands deft as when he’d stolen library books for her. "Still hate goodbyes?" "Vocally." Noddingpenny dropped between fingers before flicking it to her—same stupid old gesture. "Next round’ s mine then' She didn’t promise "Take care Rowan." Door groaned shut behind him, leaving the ghosts.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rowan said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.308
leniency0.615
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.051
76.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount844
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"sharply"
2"softly"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.53% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount844
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"flicker"
count1
2
word"unreadable"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"electric"
count1
6
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"flicker"
2"unreadable"
3"silence"
4"traced"
5"electric"
6"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences60
matches
0"was bitter"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
94.93% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen68
ratio0.012
matches
0"The voice was older, deeper, but unmistakable庞 Slowly, she turned."
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords830
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount684
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.32
worstName"Rowan"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rowan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas5
London1
Cardiff1
Evan1
Slowly1
Aurora6
Billie1
Holiday1
Rowan9
Cardiffen1
Door1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Evan"
4"Aurora"
5"Billie"
6"Holiday"
7"Rowan"
8"Door"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.842
windowScore0.667
89.02% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite fit"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount830
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean15.96
std17.2
cv1.078
sampleLengths
069
127
217
326
41
526
63
71
870
92
1047
1115
1211
1351
147
158
167
1724
182
1916
2026
216
227
2317
248
251
2620
2767
283
2916
308
3138
328
334
344
353
365
376
3810
396
4020
414
426
436
4425
4522
463
4719
481
4917
99.42% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"been called"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs122
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences81
ratio0.123
matches
0"She hadn’t been called it in years—not since Cardiff, not since before Evan."
1"But it was his eyes that undid her—the same green, but dulled, before they'd held the brightness of late-night laughter and overly ambitious plans."
2"She watched his gaze flicker over her—the black hair now neat instead of riotous, the tailored blazer in place of band shirts, the way she held her drink like someone who knew how to take her time with poison."
3"Up close, Aurora noticed the scars along his knuckles—thick, raised—and smelled the old cigarette smoke clinging to his jacket."
4"Across the bar, Silas discreetly turned up the jazz record player—Billie Holiday’s mournful croon wrapped around them."
5"He opened his mouth, shut it. Their knees brushed accidental Under the counter, —electric reminder of a thousand nights spent pressed together in library corners, sharing headphones, notes. He used smell like cheap aftershave and ink. Now it was leather and something medicinal This Rowan didn’t scribble hastily on papers wore rings on every finger—heavy silver that would’ve punched holes in his younger self’s arguments about integrity."
6"She remembered the last time they’d had beers together—Cardiffen pub near campus, his restless fingers drumming anxiety while she pretended not to notice."
7"\"I’m not\"—sharp inhale—\"the man you left.\""
8"That earned half-smile. He rummaged for wallet—hands deft as when he’d stolen library books for her. \"Still hate goodbyes?\""
9"Noddingpenny dropped between fingers before flicking it to her—same stupid old gesture. \"Next round’ s mine then'"
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount698
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"outside painted ghostly reflections"
1"same stupid old gesture."
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.0329512893982808
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.017191977077363897
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean10.23
std9.97
cv0.974
sampleLengths
021
124
224
311
416
514
63
711
815
91
106
1113
1210
131
146
1529
1611
1724
182
1939
208
217
228
235
246
2514
2619
2718
287
297
301
316
321
3311
348
355
362
373
3813
397
4019
413
423
432
445
4517
466
472
4820
4967
94.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5802469135802469
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners47
61.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"Then he’d vanished after law"
ratio0.019
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences54
matches
0"His signet ring caught the"
1"she admitted, swirling the ice"
2"She hadn’t been called it"
3"It was him, and it"
4"His hair, once perpetually messy,"
5"She watched his gaze flicker"
6"He trailed off, gesturing vaguely"
7"She sipped her gin"
8"she cut in softly. The"
9"He opened his mouth, shut"
10"His laugh was bitter."
11"She remembered the last time"
12"She didn’t promise"
ratio0.241
71.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences54
matches
0"The Raven's Nest smelled of"
1"Aurora leaned against the polished"
2"The green neon glow from"
3"Silas remarked, sliding the gin"
4"His signet ring caught the"
5"she admitted, swirling the ice"
6"The burn helped."
7"The door creaked, letting in"
8"Aurora didn’t look up until"
9"That name punched through her"
10"She hadn’t been called it"
11"The voice was older, deeper,"
12"It was him, and it"
13"The gangly limbs he’d grown"
14"His hair, once perpetually messy,"
15"She watched his gaze flicker"
16"A stranger mirrored back at"
17"Rowan exhaled sharply and shook"
18"Silas polished a glass, unreadable."
19"Rowan slid onto the stool"
ratio0.778
92.59% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"Even now, softened by liquor"
ratio0.019
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The Raven's Nest smelled of aged whiskey and yesterday's tobacco smoke, the kind of scent that clung to clothes and memories."
1"The gangly limbs he’d grown into broad shoulders, and the nervous energy that used to make him tap his foot had settled into a stillness that didn’t quite fit."
2"But it was his eyes that undid her—the same green, but dulled, before they'd held the brightness of late-night laughter and overly ambitious plans."
3"She watched his gaze flicker over her—the black hair now neat instead of riotous, the tailored blazer in place of band shirts, the way she held her drink like s…"
4"He opened his mouth, shut it. Their knees brushed accidental Under the counter, —electric reminder of a thousand nights spent pressed together in library corner…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.051
leniency0.103
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.051
86.4182%