Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEY485VMRT3RSTKRKGQEK0

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Duration:
2m 25s
Cost:
$0.002695
Provider:
SiliconFlow

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign buzzed overhead, casting a sickly glow on the damp pavement. *The Raven’s Nest*. Aurora pushed the heavy door open, the familiar scent of old wood, spilled whisky, and polish washing over her. It was a smell that had become synonymous with a strange kind of safety. Inside, the bar was in its usual late-afternoon lull. A few solitary figures hunched over pints, and the soft clink of glassware echoed in the dimness. Silas was behind the bar, polishing a tumbler with a methodical, practiced hand. He didn’t look up as she entered, but a slight, almost imperceptible nod in her direction acknowledged her arrival. His silver signet ring caught the low light as he worked. She appreciated that about him—the lack of fuss. She slid onto a stool at the far end of the counter, away from the other patrons. The day had been a long one, a blur of London traffic and navigating labyrinthine office buildings with containers of Yu-Fei’s fragrant Szechuan prawns. Her shoulders ached. “The usual, Rory?” Silas’s voice was a low rumble, like distant thunder. He was already reaching for the bottle of decent bourbon he kept for her beneath the counter. “Please, Si. Make it a double. It’s been one of those days where the Sat-Nav has a clearer life plan than I do.” A ghost of a smile touched his lips. He poured the amber liquid over a single large ice cube and pushed it towards her. His hazel eyes, sharp and knowing, scanned her face. “Trouble with the bike?” “No, the bike’s fine. Just… people.” She wrapped her hands around the cool glass, the condensation soothing against her skin. She caught sight of the small, pale crescent scar on her left wrist, a relic of a fall from a tree in her grandmother’s garden in Wexford. A lifetime ago. She was about to ask him about a strange delivery request she’d received—a parcel to be left under a specific bench in Holland Park, no signature required—when the door opened again, letting in a sharp slice of grey afternoon light. The man who entered was dressed in a well-cut, expensive-looking overcoat, its fabric seeming out of place among the worn leather and scratched wood of the Nest. He hesitated for a moment, letting his eyes adjust, before striding towards the bar with a confidence that bordered on arrogance. He took a stool a few down from Aurora. Silas finished wiping down the spot in front of the man, his movements slowing slightly. A subtle shift in the atmosphere, a tensing of the air, was the only sign that Silas was now on high alert. “What can I get for you?” “Macallan 18. Neat.” The voice was familiar. It was a voice that had been eroded by time and what sounded like a lot of cigarettes, but its underlying cadence was etched into a part of Aurora’s memory she rarely visited. She risked a glance. The profile was sharper than she remembered, the jawline more defined, with lines of tension around the mouth that hadn't been there before. But the set of the eyes, the way his hair, now impeccably styled with a hint of grey at the temples, fell across his forehead… “Evan?” The name was out of her mouth before she could stop it, a soft, disbelieving exhale. He turned. For a second, there was blank politeness in his gaze, the look one gives a stranger. Then it cleared, replaced by a slow-dawning recognition that seemed to drain the colour from his face. “Laila?” The old name, the one he’d called her, hit her like a physical blow. No one had called her that in years. It was a name from a sealed-off room in her life, a room she had painted over and locked tight. “It’s Aurora,” she corrected, her voice tighter than she intended. “Aurora Carter.” “Aurora,” he repeated, as if tasting the word. A slow, complicated smile spread across his face. It didn’t quite reach his eyes. “My God. Look at you.” Silas placed the glass of Macallan in front of Evan with a quiet thud. He didn’t move away, instead busying himself with rearranging bottles within earshot, a silent, watchful presence. “I could say the same,” Aurora said, forcing a calm she didn’t feel. The bourbon was a welcome anchor in her hand. “Macallan 18. You’ve moved up in the world.” Evan chuckled, a dry, humourless sound. “Perks of the job.” He picked up his glass, swirling the liquid. “I’m a partner now. At Clarkson & Frye.” He said the name of the corporate law firm with a practiced nonchalance that screamed of its importance. “Cardiff’s loss is London’s gain,” she said, her tone deliberately flat. Cardiff University felt like a different planet. Him in his cheap student blazer, full of fire and ambition, talking about changing the system from within. Her, trudging reluctantly through pre-law lectures to please her barrister father, feeling like an imposter in her own life. “I heard you’d moved to London,” he said, his eyes tracing her face, lingering on the lines of fatigue she knew were there. “Eva mentioned it, once. I ran into her at a conference.” “Eva has a big mouth.” “She was always worried about you.” He paused. “We all were. When you just… left.” The unspoken words hung between them, heavy and accusatory. *When you left me.* Aurora took a long swallow of her drink, the bourbon burning a welcome path down her throat. She could feel Silas’s quiet attention like a physical weight. He knew fragments of it, enough to be wary. “I needed a change,” she said, her voice even. “London offered… possibilities.” “Delivering takeaways?” The question wasn’t malicious, just baffled, dripping with the condescension of someone who measured success in partnership tracks and year-end bonuses. A hot flush crept up her neck. “Among other things. It pays the rent. The flat above this very bar, in fact.” She saw his gaze flicker around the dim room, taking in the faded maps on the walls, the sense of layered secrets. His expression was one of pure incomprehension. The Aurora he knew—Laila—was supposed to be drafting legal briefs in a high-rise, not living above a pub in Soho. “I never pictured this for you,” he said quietly, almost to himself. “People change, Evan.” “Do they?” He leaned forward slightly, his cologne—something expensive and woody—briefly overpowering the scent of the bar. “You still have that scar.” He nodded towards her wrist. Instinctively, she turned her wrist over, hiding the crescent mark. It was a gesture she hadn’t made in years. He remembered the scar from a childhood accident, but he’d mapped other, fresher marks onto her skin with his words, marks that had taken much longer to fade. “Some things stick with you,” she said, her gaze steady on him. The silence that fell between them was thick and uncomfortable. He took a sip of his whisky, wincing slightly as if it was bitter. “I looked for you, you know. After. For a while.” “Why?” The directness of the question seemed to throw him. He shrugged, a loose, awkward movement. “I don’t know. To apologise, I suppose. For… how things ended.” “‘Ended’ is a polite word for it.” The words were out, sharp and brittle. She saw Silas’s shoulders tense minutely. She never talked about this. Not with anyone. But seeing him here, cloaked in his expensive success, the ghost of the man she’d been foolish enough to love smirking behind his eyes, cracked something open. Evan had the decency to look down at his glass. “I wasn’t… well. The pressure, the exams… I wasn’t myself.” “‘I wasn’t myself,’” Aurora repeated softly. “You know, I used to wait to see who would show up. The funny, ambitious guy I fell for? Or the one who thought his stress gave him the right to…” She trailed off, letting the sentence hang. She wouldn’t give him the specifics. He didn’t deserve the absolution of hearing her say the words aloud. The slammed doors. The things thrown, not at her, but near enough. The vicious, cutting critiques of her dreams, her friends, her family. The constant, erosive drip of blame. “It was a dark time,” he mumbled, his confidence seeming to leach away, revealing the insecure boy she remembered from their worst moments. “I’ve worked on it. Therapy. All that.” “Good for you.” She meant it to sound dismissive, but it came out weary. She was suddenly, overwhelmingly tired. Tired of the memory, tired of the ghost, tired of the weight of this chance encounter. He seemed to sense her retreat. “And you? Are you… are you happy, Aurora?” The question was so vast, so unanswerable, that she almost laughed. Happy? She was surviving. She had a roof over her head, a job that, while menial, offered a peculiar kind of freedom. She had Silas’s gruff protection and the complex, shadowy network of the Nest. She had a life she had built piece by piece from the wreckage he’d had a hand in creating. It wasn’t the life anyone had pictured for her, least of all herself. But it was hers. “I’m content,” she said finally, finishing her bourbon. The ice cube clicked softly against the empty glass. He nodded, absorbing this. Contentment was clearly a foreign concept, a poor cousin to the triumphant happiness he’d no doubt envisioned for his own life. Silas appeared as if summoned by the sound of her empty glass. “Another, Rory?” “No, Si. I think I’m done.” She slipped off the stool, pulling a ten-pound note from her jacket pocket and laying it on the bar. Silas gave a slight shake of his head, but she pushed it towards him. She didn’t want any part of this evening, even the price of a drink, to be connected to Evan. Evan stood up as well, a clumsy, abrupt movement. “It was… good to see you, Aurora.” He reached into his breast pocket and pulled out a crisp, white business card. “In case you ever… I don’t know. Decide to use that law degree. I could put in a word.” She looked at the card, at his name embossed in sharp, black letters. *Evan Griffiths, Partner*. It was a monument to everything he had become, and a tombstone for everything they had been. She didn’t take it. “I’m not that person anymore, Evan.” She gave him a small, tight smile that held no warmth. “Some of us really do change.” She turned and walked towards the door, feeling his gaze on her back. She didn’t look at the hidden bookshelf that led to Silas’s secret room, or the photographs of forgotten spies on the wall. She just pushed open the door and stepped back out into the London drizzle, the buzz of the green neon sign fading behind her, leaving only the echo of a name she no longer answered to.
created_at"2026-02-17T09:32:04.17287+00:00" 2/17/2026, 9:32:04 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.78% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
1"Aurora repeated softly [softly]"
2"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.49
leniency0.98
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.122
72.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1844
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
2
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count2
5
adverb"suddenly"
count1
6
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"deliberately"
2"reluctantly"
3"very"
4"softly"
5"suddenly"
6"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1844
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"solitary"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"methodical"
count1
4
word"navigating"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"tracing"
count1
9
word"unspoken"
count1
10
word"could feel"
count1
11
word"weight"
count2
12
word"measured"
count1
13
word"flicker"
count1
14
word"sense of"
count1
15
word"silence"
count1
16
word"encounter"
count1
17
word"complex"
count1
18
word"warmth"
count1
19
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"solitary"
2"echoed"
3"methodical"
4"navigating"
5"scanned"
6"etched"
7"tension"
8"tracing"
9"unspoken"
10"could feel"
11"weight"
12"measured"
13"flicker"
14"sense of"
15"silence"
16"encounter"
17"complex"
18"warmth"
19"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences122
matches
0"was bitter"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences122
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences144
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords10
totalWords1827
ratio0.005
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"When you left me."
2"Evan Griffiths, Partner"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount1516
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity0.73
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
London2
Yu-Fei1
Szechuan1
Wexford1
Holland1
Park1
Nest3
Aurora7
Silas11
Macallan1
Evan6
Cardiff1
University1
Laila1
Soho1
Instinctively1
Griffiths1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Aurora"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
5"University"
6"Laila"
7"Griffiths"
places
0"London"
1"Wexford"
2"Holland"
3"Park"
4"Cardiff"
5"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore1
27.45% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences102
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"sounded like a lot of cigarettes, but its"
1"recognition that seemed to drain the colour from his face"
2"as if tasting the word"
3"quite reach his eyes"
4"felt like a different planet"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.547
wordCount1827
matches
0"not at her, but near enough"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences144
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean35.13
std20.81
cv0.592
sampleLengths
050
177
244
329
423
537
650
740
857
943
1040
1152
121
1316
1436
1542
1612
1727
1830
1930
2044
2155
2234
235
2415
2549
2612
2723
2871
2912
303
3127
3247
3312
3434
351
3626
3755
3820
3991
4030
4135
4214
4382
4417
4525
4614
4758
4849
4937
96.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences122
matches
0"was dressed"
1"been eroded"
2"was etched"
3"was supposed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs242
matches
0"was surviving"
63.49% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences144
ratio0.028
matches
0"She appreciated that about him—the lack of fuss."
1"She was about to ask him about a strange delivery request she’d received—a parcel to be left under a specific bench in Holland Park, no signature required—when the door opened again, letting in a sharp slice of grey afternoon light."
2"The Aurora he knew—Laila—was supposed to be drafting legal briefs in a high-rise, not living above a pub in Soho."
3"“Do they?” He leaned forward slightly, his cologne—something expensive and woody—briefly overpowering the scent of the bar."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1532
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.0293733681462141
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.01370757180156658
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences144
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences144
mean12.69
std8.11
cv0.639
sampleLengths
014
13
219
314
49
517
613
719
811
98
1017
1124
123
1312
1417
1523
168
1716
189
194
2020
2127
223
2340
2427
2521
269
2715
2822
296
307
3133
324
3323
3425
351
3616
372
3816
3917
401
4114
428
4320
4410
452
468
478
486
495
41.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.3194444444444444
totalSentences144
uniqueOpeners46
56.02% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences119
matches
0"Then it cleared, replaced by"
1"Instinctively, she turned her wrist"
ratio0.017
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount66
totalSentences119
matches
0"It was a smell that"
1"He didn’t look up as"
2"His silver signet ring caught"
3"She appreciated that about him—the"
4"She slid onto a stool"
5"Her shoulders ached."
6"He was already reaching for"
7"He poured the amber liquid"
8"His hazel eyes, sharp and"
9"She wrapped her hands around"
10"She caught sight of the"
11"She was about to ask"
12"He hesitated for a moment,"
13"He took a stool a"
14"It was a voice that"
15"She risked a glance."
16"It was a name from"
17"she corrected, her voice tighter"
18"he repeated, as if tasting"
19"It didn’t quite reach his"
ratio0.555
10.42% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount107
totalSentences119
matches
0"The green neon sign buzzed"
1"*The Raven’s Nest*."
2"Aurora pushed the heavy door"
3"It was a smell that"
4"Silas was behind the bar,"
5"He didn’t look up as"
6"His silver signet ring caught"
7"She appreciated that about him—the"
8"She slid onto a stool"
9"The day had been a"
10"Her shoulders ached."
11"Silas’s voice was a low"
12"He was already reaching for"
13"A ghost of a smile"
14"He poured the amber liquid"
15"His hazel eyes, sharp and"
16"She wrapped her hands around"
17"She caught sight of the"
18"A lifetime ago."
19"She was about to ask"
ratio0.899
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
ratio0
66.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"It was a smell that had become synonymous with a strange kind of safety."
1"The man who entered was dressed in a well-cut, expensive-looking overcoat, its fabric seeming out of place among the worn leather and scratched wood of the Nest…"
2"He hesitated for a moment, letting his eyes adjust, before striding towards the bar with a confidence that bordered on arrogance."
3"Silas finished wiping down the spot in front of the man, his movements slowing slightly."
4"Then it cleared, replaced by a slow-dawning recognition that seemed to drain the colour from his face."
5"She didn’t look at the hidden bookshelf that led to Silas’s secret room, or the photographs of forgotten spies on the wall."
20.83% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she corrected, her voice tighter than she intended"
1"he repeated, as if tasting the word"
2"she said, her tone deliberately flat"
3"he said quietly, almost to himself"
4"she said, her gaze steady on him"
68.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she corrected (correct)"
1"he repeated (repeat)"
2"Aurora repeated softly (repeat)"
3"he mumbled (mumble)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.245
leniency0.49
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.163
75.0997%