| 87.50% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "The creature's smile widened impossibly [impossibly]" | | 1 | "The creature laughed again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.406 | | leniency | 0.813 | | rawRatio | 0.154 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |
| 81.92% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1659 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "really" | | 3 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 57.81% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1659 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "perfect" | | 3 | "intricate" | | 4 | "charged" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "sense of" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "racing" | | 9 | "flickered" | | 10 | "raced" | | 11 | "echoes" | | 12 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 117 | | matches | | |
| 81.81% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 117 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 136 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 16 | | totalWords | 1647 | | ratio | 0.01 | | matches | | 0 | "The Grove knows your name. Midnight. Come alone if you want answers about the pendant." | | 1 | "Au-ro-ra-car-ter-mal-pho-ra." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 45 | | wordCount | 1319 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.9 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | October | 2 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | London | 2 | | Aurora | 25 | | Eva | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Year | 1 | | Carter | 2 | | Earth | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "October" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Carter" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Golden" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "London" | | 5 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.552 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "patterns that seemed to shift when she wasn't looking directly at them" | | 1 | "Not quite a person, not quite anything her eyes could process" | | 2 | "not quite anything her eyes could process" | | 3 | "sounded like glass breaking in reverse" | | 4 | "not quite breaking skin" | | 5 | "not quite the fingers too long, the nails like glass—signing something in blood on bark" | | 6 | "quite Earth, wasn't quite anywhere, clutching something precious and stolen" | | 7 | "quite anywhere, clutching something precious and stolen" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1647 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 136 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 54 | | mean | 30.5 | | std | 17.62 | | cv | 0.578 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 56 | | 1 | 35 | | 2 | 52 | | 3 | 47 | | 4 | 62 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 54 | | 7 | 41 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 41 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 46 | | 15 | 51 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 60 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 36 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 33 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 63 | | 31 | 41 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 37 | | 35 | 33 | | 36 | 30 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 49 | | 39 | 60 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 43 | | 42 | 33 | | 43 | 37 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 45 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 45 | | 49 | 49 |
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| 96.27% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "been carved" | | 1 | "were arranged" | | 2 | "been made" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 224 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't looking" | | 1 | "was cloying" | | 2 | "wasn't watching" |
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| 16.81% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 136 | | ratio | 0.044 | | matches | | 0 | "The torch beam caught them first—massive oak trees arranged in a perfect circle, their trunks so wide it would take three people holding hands to embrace them." | | 1 | "The air felt different here—thicker, older, charged with something that made her teeth ache." | | 2 | "Meeting an anonymous message writer in an isolated location after midnight—what had she been thinking?" | | 3 | "\"The ones who ran. The ones who thought they could escape their debts by hiding in human skin.\" The creature wearing a woman's shape leaned close enough that Aurora could smell its breath—sweet rot and copper and burned roses." | | 4 | "Her parents were boringly normal—her dad arguing cases, her mum teaching Year 3." | | 5 | "Her own hands—but not quite, the fingers too long, the nails like glass—signing something in blood on bark." |
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| 79.04% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1331 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 76 | | adverbRatio | 0.05709992486851991 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014274981217129978 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 136 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 136 | | mean | 12.11 | | std | 7.17 | | cv | 0.592 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 67.16% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.4338235294117647 | | totalSentences | 136 | | uniqueOpeners | 59 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "Of course there wouldn't be," | | 1 | "Just her name in spidery" | | 2 | "Even the distant sounds of" | | 3 | "Somewhere deep inside, beneath the" |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd climbed the fence an" | | 1 | "She'd worn it every day" | | 2 | "Her breath misted in the" | | 3 | "Their perfume was cloying, too" | | 4 | "Her voice came out smaller" | | 5 | "It was properly hot now," | | 6 | "She took another step into" | | 7 | "Their whisper sounded almost like" | | 8 | "She backed toward the center" | | 9 | "Her mother would have called" | | 10 | "She yanked it out from" | | 11 | "She wore a dress that" | | 12 | "She tried to step back" | | 13 | "She forced herself to breathe" | | 14 | "Their thorns pressed through her" | | 15 | "She'd lived in Cardiff her" | | 16 | "Her parents were boringly normal—her" | | 17 | "Their whispers grew louder, more" | | 18 | "She caught fragments of words" | | 19 | "It reached out one too-long" |
| | ratio | 0.207 | |
| 77.12% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 85 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oaks of Richmond" | | 1 | "Aurora pulled her jacket tighter" | | 2 | "She'd climbed the fence an" | | 3 | "The Heartstone lay heavy against" | | 4 | "She'd worn it every day" | | 5 | "Aurora swept her torch beam" | | 6 | "Her breath misted in the" | | 7 | "The torch beam caught them" | | 8 | "The bark had been carved," | | 9 | "The pendant grew warmer." | | 10 | "Aurora stepped between two of" | | 11 | "The air felt different here—thicker," | | 12 | "The October wind that had" | | 13 | "Bluebells and foxgloves and flowers" | | 14 | "Their perfume was cloying, too" | | 15 | "Her voice came out smaller" | | 16 | "Nothing answered but the flowers" | | 17 | "Aurora's hand went instinctively to" | | 18 | "It was properly hot now," | | 19 | "She took another step into" |
| | ratio | 0.766 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 96.77% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd climbed the fence an hour ago, following the cryptic instructions that had arrived at the Golden Empress that afternoon: *The Grove knows your name." | | 1 | "The air felt different here—thicker, older, charged with something that made her teeth ache." | | 2 | "She wore a dress that might have been made of cobwebs and starlight, her skin pale as bone, her eyes the color of winter ice." | | 3 | "Running through a forest that wasn't quite Earth, wasn't quite anywhere, clutching something precious and stolen." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "The creature laughed again (laugh)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.063 | | leniency | 0.125 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.063 | |