Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEZE72GA1CZSZ8WHD2VV0J

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Duration:
7.6s
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Clarifai

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The night air inRichmond Park tasted like damp earth and ozone, thick and heavy as Aurora Carter pushed through the ancient oaks. The path, barely more than a deer trail, wound deeper into the heart of the grove, the only sound her own breathing and the distant, rhythmic crash of the Thames. She’d come for the pendant, the Heartstone, a gift from a stranger that now felt like a curse. Its faint, internal warmth was a constant, unsettling presence against her skin, a reminder of the Hel portal it sensed nearby. The grove itself felt wrong from the start – the air shimmered slightly, like heat haze over hot tarmac, and the usual nocturnal chorus of owls and foxes was absent, replaced by an unnatural silence that pressed in on her. She’d parked her bike a quarter-mile back, the engine’s growl swallowed by the dense canopy. Now, the path narrowed, the ancient oak standing stones marking the true boundary of the Fae realm. Aurora’s hand drifted unconsciously to her left wrist, tracing the small, crescent-shaped scar – a relic from a childhood fall. The pendant, nestled in her pocket, pulsed again, a faint, internal heat that made her shiver. She’d come because the pendant’s warning was clear, even if the reason wasn’t. Someone, or something, was using the grove as a conduit, and she needed to find out who. The silence deepened, becoming a physical weight. Aurora paused, straining her ears. No wind rustled the leaves. No insects hummed. Just the distant, muffled thrum of the city, distorted and distant, like it was coming from underwater. She took a step forward, and the ground beneath her boots felt subtly different – softer, spongier, as if the earth itself had shifted. A flicker of movement caught the corner of her eye. She spun, heart hammering against her ribs, but the darkness swallowed the space. Only the gnarled roots of an ancient oak, twisting like skeletal fingers, met her gaze. She forced herself to breathe, counting slowly to ten. It was just her imagination, frayed by exhaustion and the pendant’s insistent warmth. The path opened into a small clearing. Moonlight, pale and cold, filtered through the dense canopy, illuminating patches of unnaturally vibrant wildflowers – orchids that shouldn’t bloom in November, their petals like stained glass. In the center stood a single, massive oak, its bark deeply furrowed and ancient, seeming to watch her. Aurora felt a prickle of unease crawl up her spine. This wasn’t just a hidden grove; it was a place where the veil between worlds was thin, and thin places attracted things best left undisturbed. The pendant’s pulse quickened, a low, resonant throb that vibrated in her chest. She moved towards the oak, her footsteps muffled by the thick moss. The air grew colder, carrying the scent of damp stone and something else – ozone, metallic, like blood. A sound, faint but unmistakable, reached her: the soft, wet *squelch* of something large moving through mud. Aurora froze, her breath catching in her throat. She spun again, but the clearing was empty. The only movement was the swaying of the wildflowers in a non-existent breeze. She pressed herself against the rough bark of the oak, her fingers digging into the grooves, feeling the cold seep through her coat. The pendant’s glow intensified, a deep crimson ember that cast eerie, shifting shadows on the moss. The silence returned, heavier than before. Then, a sound from behind her. A low, guttural *chuckle*, like stones grinding together. Aurora whirled, her hand instinctively going to the small, worn knife tucked into her belt. Nothing. Just the oppressive stillness, broken only by the frantic drumming of her own pulse. The pendant pulsed violently now, a hot, painful throb in her pocket. She knew she wasn’t alone. The grove wasn’t just a conduit; it was a trap. The Fae weren’t known for their hospitality, especially towards humans who meddled with their pathways. She backed away from the oak, her eyes scanning the clearing, the shadows between the trees. The wildflowers seemed to lean towards her, their petals shifting like watching eyes. A cold sweat broke out on her forehead. The time distortion was real; she’d been here only minutes, but it felt like hours. The city’s distant thrum was gone, replaced by the oppressive silence and the feeling of being watched. The pendant’s warmth was a beacon, drawing something – or someone – to her. She needed to leave. Now. But the path back was gone. The dense canopy closed in, the standing stones vanished, replaced by a tangled thicket of thorns and ancient roots. The clearing itself seemed to have shrunk, the oak looming larger, its branches like skeletal arms reaching out. The wildflowers pulsed with an inner light, a sickly green glow that made the crimson of the Heartstone seem even more alarming. Aurora stumbled back, tripping over a root, landing hard on her hip. The breath was knocked from her lungs. The pendant flew from her pocket, rolling across the moss, its glow flaring bright enough to momentarily illuminate the clearing. In the sudden, harsh light, she saw it. Not a figure, but a shape – tall, impossibly thin, draped in shadows that seemed to absorb the moonlight. It stood just beyond the reach of the oak’s branches, watching her. Its eyes, if it had any, were black voids. It didn’t move, just stood there, radiating a cold that bit through her coat. The pendant’s glow dimmed, replaced by a deep, resonant silence. Aurora stared, frozen, the knife forgotten in her hand. The Fae weren’t just watchers; they were predators. And she was prey. The shape shifted, not walking, but flowing like smoke through the air. It moved towards her, the shadows around it coalescing, thickening. Aurora scrambled backwards, her hands scraping against the moss and roots, trying to find purchase. The air crackled with unseen energy. The pendant, now cold and heavy in her palm, pulsed weakly, a final, desperate warning. She looked at the shape advancing, a nightmare made flesh from the depths of the grove. The silence was absolute, broken only by the frantic beat of her heart and the distant, muffled sound of the city, now impossibly far away. The Fae Grove wasn’t just a place; it was a prison, and she was its newest inmate. The horror wasn’t in the gore; it was in the knowing, the absolute certainty that escape was impossible, and that the darkness watching her from the shadows was only the beginning.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
90.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1084
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1084
totalAiIsms33
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"reminder"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"silence"
count6
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count4
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"furrowed"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count2
11
word"quickened"
count1
12
word"throb"
count2
13
word"vibrated"
count1
14
word"footsteps"
count1
15
word"oppressive"
count2
16
word"scanning"
count1
17
word"beacon"
count1
18
word"looming"
count1
19
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"warmth"
2"reminder"
3"shimmered"
4"silence"
5"tracing"
6"pulsed"
7"weight"
8"flicker"
9"furrowed"
10"pulse"
11"quickened"
12"throb"
13"vibrated"
14"footsteps"
15"oppressive"
16"scanning"
17"beacon"
18"looming"
19"depths"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences79
matches
0"felt a prickle"
88.61% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences79
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences79
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1089
ratio0.002
matches
0"squelch"
1"chuckle"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1089
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.83
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Park1
Aurora9
Carter1
Thames1
Heartstone2
Hel1
Fae4
November1
Grove1
persons
0"Park"
1"Aurora"
2"Carter"
3"Heartstone"
places
0"Thames"
1"Fae"
2"November"
3"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
9.15% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"tasted like damp earth and ozone, thick a"
1"felt like a curse"
2"felt like hours"
3"shadows that seemed to absorb the moonlight"
16.35% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.837
wordCount1089
matches
0"Not a figure, but a shape"
1"not walking, but flowing like smoke through the air"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
4.95% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs10
mean108.9
std18.22
cv0.167
sampleLengths
0131
198
2121
3100
4115
592
688
7104
893
9147
91.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences79
matches
0"was gone"
1"was gone"
2"was knocked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs180
matches
0"was using"
1"was coming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount6
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences79
ratio0.165
matches
0"The grove itself felt wrong from the start – the air shimmered slightly, like heat haze over hot tarmac, and the usual nocturnal chorus of owls and foxes was absent, replaced by an unnatural silence that pressed in on her."
1"Aurora’s hand drifted unconsciously to her left wrist, tracing the small, crescent-shaped scar – a relic from a childhood fall."
2"She took a step forward, and the ground beneath her boots felt subtly different – softer, spongier, as if the earth itself had shifted."
3"Moonlight, pale and cold, filtered through the dense canopy, illuminating patches of unnaturally vibrant wildflowers – orchids that shouldn’t bloom in November, their petals like stained glass."
4"This wasn’t just a hidden grove; it was a place where the veil between worlds was thin, and thin places attracted things best left undisturbed."
5"The air grew colder, carrying the scent of damp stone and something else – ozone, metallic, like blood."
6"The grove wasn’t just a conduit; it was a trap."
7"The time distortion was real; she’d been here only minutes, but it felt like hours."
8"The pendant’s warmth was a beacon, drawing something – or someone – to her."
9"Not a figure, but a shape – tall, impossibly thin, draped in shadows that seemed to absorb the moonlight."
10"The Fae weren’t just watchers; they were predators."
11"The Fae Grove wasn’t just a place; it was a prison, and she was its newest inmate."
12"The horror wasn’t in the gore; it was in the knowing, the absolute certainty that escape was impossible, and that the darkness watching her from the shadows was only the beginning."
98.43% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1084
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.04151291512915129
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.02029520295202952
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean13.78
std7.07
cv0.513
sampleLengths
022
130
218
321
440
515
617
720
816
913
1017
117
125
135
143
1517
1624
1710
1813
1915
209
2113
227
2327
2418
2510
2625
2713
2812
2918
3017
318
328
3313
3423
3516
366
376
388
3915
401
4114
4212
435
4410
4515
4616
4713
488
4915
34.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.24050632911392406
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners19
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences77
matches
0"Just the distant, muffled thrum"
1"Only the gnarled roots of"
2"Then, a sound from behind"
3"Just the oppressive stillness, broken"
ratio0.052
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences77
matches
0"She’d come for the pendant,"
1"Its faint, internal warmth was"
2"She’d parked her bike a"
3"She’d come because the pendant’s"
4"She took a step forward,"
5"She spun, heart hammering against"
6"She forced herself to breathe,"
7"It was just her imagination,"
8"She moved towards the oak,"
9"She spun again, but the"
10"She pressed herself against the"
11"She knew she wasn’t alone."
12"She backed away from the"
13"She needed to leave."
14"It stood just beyond the"
15"Its eyes, if it had"
16"It didn’t move, just stood"
17"It moved towards her, the"
18"She looked at the shape"
ratio0.247
37.92% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences77
matches
0"The night air inRichmond Park"
1"The path, barely more than"
2"She’d come for the pendant,"
3"Its faint, internal warmth was"
4"The grove itself felt wrong"
5"She’d parked her bike a"
6"Aurora’s hand drifted unconsciously to"
7"The pendant, nestled in her"
8"She’d come because the pendant’s"
9"Someone, or something, was using"
10"The silence deepened, becoming a"
11"Aurora paused, straining her ears."
12"She took a step forward,"
13"A flicker of movement caught"
14"She spun, heart hammering against"
15"She forced herself to breathe,"
16"It was just her imagination,"
17"The path opened into a"
18"Moonlight, pale and cold, filtered"
19"Aurora felt a prickle of"
ratio0.844
64.94% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"Now, the path narrowed, the"
ratio0.013
12.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The grove itself felt wrong from the start – the air shimmered slightly, like heat haze over hot tarmac, and the usual nocturnal chorus of owls and foxes was ab…"
1"The pendant, nestled in her pocket, pulsed again, a faint, internal heat that made her shiver."
2"She took a step forward, and the ground beneath her boots felt subtly different – softer, spongier, as if the earth itself had shifted."
3"Moonlight, pale and cold, filtered through the dense canopy, illuminating patches of unnaturally vibrant wildflowers – orchids that shouldn’t bloom in November,…"
4"The pendant’s pulse quickened, a low, resonant throb that vibrated in her chest."
5"She pressed herself against the rough bark of the oak, her fingers digging into the grooves, feeling the cold seep through her coat."
6"The wildflowers pulsed with an inner light, a sickly green glow that made the crimson of the Heartstone seem even more alarming."
7"The pendant flew from her pocket, rolling across the moss, its glow flaring bright enough to momentarily illuminate the clearing."
8"Not a figure, but a shape – tall, impossibly thin, draped in shadows that seemed to absorb the moonlight."
9"Aurora scrambled backwards, her hands scraping against the moss and roots, trying to find purchase."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
75.0287%