Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEZVV7KJEPQ4QRXZERYZJM

Run Details

Duration:
1m 26s
Cost:
$0.001744
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest was quiet for a Thursday evening. A few regulars hunched over their drinks at the bar, the soft clink of glassware punctuating the low hum of conversation. Aurora Carter traced the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist absently as she polished pint glasses behind the counter. The green neon sign outside cast an eerie glow through the front windows, bathing the room in flickering light that played across the old maps and photographs lining the walls. She glanced up when the door swung open, letting in a gust of chilly London air. The man who stepped inside paused just over the threshold, his gaze sweeping the room with practiced ease. His dark hair was longer than she remembered, streaked with silver at the temples, and faint lines etched his face where there had only been youthful charm before. But those hazel eyes were unmistakable. "Silas," she said, setting down the glass she'd been polishing. Her voice sounded strange to her own ears. Silas Blackwood's eyes narrowed, then widened in recognition. A slow smile spread across his face, though it didn't quite reach his eyes. "Rory Carter," he said, his voice warm but tinged with something she couldn't quite place. "As I live and breathe." He moved toward the bar with that familiar slight limp, his silver signet ring catching the light as he rested his hand on the polished wood. Up close, she could see the years etched more clearly in his face, the shadows beneath his eyes hinting at sleepless nights. He smelled faintly of whiskey and cigars, the scent mingling with something metallic that made her nose itch. "Thought I'd find you here," he said, sliding onto a stool. His gaze flicked to the scar on her wrist, then back up to meet her eyes. "You've changed." Her laugh was short and brittle, but nervous. "You're one to talk." She reached for a bottle of his favorite Scotch without thinking, pouring him a generous measure. "What brings you back to London?" Silas lifted the glass, watching the amber liquid catch the light. "Business," he said simply, before taking a sip. His eyes never left hers over the rim of the glass. "And what about you? Last I heard, you were in Cardiff, studying law." She shook her head, turning away to rearrange bottles on the back shelf that didn't need rearranging. "That was a lifetime ago," she said, keeping her voice light. "I'm just a delivery girl these days." "Just a delivery girl," he repeated, his tone skeptical. He set the glass down with a soft thud. "You were never 'just' anything, Rory." The words hung between them, weighted with unspoken meaning. Aurora felt the familiar pull of their shared history, the magnetic force that had always drawn them together even when they'd been forced apart. She busied herself with wiping down the already spotless counter, anything to avoid meeting his gaze. "So," she said after a moment, "how's the Spymaster business?" Silas chuckled, a low rumble that sent shivers down her spine. "Retirement doesn't suit me," he admitted. "I've been keeping busy." "I bet." She finally looked up, noting the new lines around his eyes, the way his shoulders seemed to carry an invisible weight. "You look... tired." "Direct as ever," he said, his smile turning wry. "You haven't lost that, at least." They fell into an uneasy silence, the years stretching between them like a chasm. Aurora reached for a glass to polish, needing something to do with her hands. Silas watched her with that same unreadable expression, his fingers tracing the rim of his glass. "Do you ever think about Prague?" he asked suddenly, his voice low. Her hand stilled on the glass. The memory came unbidden–the cold night, the sound of gunfire, the way Silas had pushed her out of harm's way, taking the bullet meant for her. She'd never forgiven herself for leaving him behind, for following orders instead of staying to make sure he'd be okay. "Every day," she admitted softly, setting the glass down with trembling hands. Silas nodded, his expression grim. "Me too." Another silence stretched between them, heavy with unspoken words and regrets. Aurora busied herself with wiping down the bar, her movements almost frantic. Silas watched her with that same intense gaze, his fingers tapping restlessly against the polished wood. "Rory," he said finally, his voice firm. When she didn't look up, he reached across the bar to gently grasp her wrist. "Look at me." She froze, her breath catching in her throat. Slowly, she raised her eyes to meet his, and the intensity in his gaze made her heart skip a beat. "Why did you leave?" he asked, his voice barely above a whisper. Her throat tightened, and she shook her head, unable to find the words. How could she explain the fear that had gripped her, the guilt that had driven her away? How could she tell him that she'd spent every day since wishing she'd had the courage to stay? Silas released her wrist, leaning back in his seat with a heavy sigh. "You hurt me, Rory," he admitted, his voice rough with emotion. "More than that bullet ever did." Tears stung her eyes, but she blinked them back, refusing to let them fall. "I know," she whispered, her voice breaking. "I'm so sorry, Si." He nodded slowly, his expression softening. "I forgave you a long time ago," he said simply. "Even if I didn't understand." The words were like a balm to her wounded soul, and she felt some of the tension seep from her shoulders. "I never stopped thinking about you," she admitted, her voice barely audible. Silas smiled then, a genuine smile that reached his eyes. "Good," he said, his tone lightening. "Because I'm not going anywhere this time." Aurora laughed softly, the sound tinged with relief. "Promise?" He reached across the bar again, this time to gently squeeze her hand. "Promise," he said firmly. "Besides, someone has to keep an eye on you." Their laughter mingled, easing some of the tension that had hung heavy between them. Aurora poured herself a drink, her movements steadier now, and they clinked glasses in a silent toast to new beginnings. As the evening wore on, they fell into an easy rhythm, trading stories and catching each other up on the years they'd missed. Silas told her about his travels, the adventures he'd had and the people he'd met along the way. Aurora shared tales of her life in London, the friends she'd made, and the challenges she'd faced. There was still much left unsaid, wounds that would take time to heal. But for the first time in years, Aurora felt a sense of peace settle over her. Silas's presence was like a balm to her weary soul, his familiar warmth chasing away the shadows that had lingered for so long. As the last patrons trickled out of the bar, Silas stood, stretching his long limbs with a groan. "Walk me home?" he asked, his tone casual but his eyes holding a deeper meaning. Aurora nodded, a small smile playing at the corners of her lips. "Lead the way." They stepped out into the cool night air, the city lights casting a soft glow around them. Silas offered her his arm, and she took it without hesitation, the weight of his presence grounding her in a way nothing else ever could. As they walked through the quiet streets, the years melted away, leaving only the bond that had always connected them. There would be time to unpack the past, to heal old wounds and forge new paths. But for now, in this moment, they were simply Rory and Si, two old friends finding their way back to each other in the dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
13.64% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount6
adverbTags
0"he said simply [simply]"
1"he asked suddenly [suddenly]"
2"she admitted softly [softly]"
3"he said finally [finally]"
4"he said simply [simply]"
5"he said firmly [firmly]"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.55
leniency1
rawRatio0.273
effectiveRatio0.273
69.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1302
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count2
2
adverb"gently"
count2
3
adverb"slowly"
count2
4
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"softly"
2"gently"
3"slowly"
4"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1302
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"practiced ease"
count1
2
word"etched"
count2
3
word"charm"
count1
4
word"tinged"
count2
5
word"familiar"
count3
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count2
8
word"magnetic"
count1
9
word"sent shivers down"
count1
10
word"weight"
count2
11
word"silence"
count2
12
word"unreadable"
count1
13
word"tracing"
count1
14
word"intensity"
count1
15
word"whisper"
count1
16
word"tension"
count2
17
word"firmly"
count1
18
word"sense of"
count1
19
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"practiced ease"
2"etched"
3"charm"
4"tinged"
5"familiar"
6"flicked"
7"unspoken"
8"magnetic"
9"sent shivers down"
10"weight"
11"silence"
12"unreadable"
13"tracing"
14"intensity"
15"whisper"
16"tension"
17"firmly"
18"sense of"
19"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences84
matches
0"d with relief"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1300
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1135
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.15
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Thursday1
Carter1
London2
Blackwood1
Scotch1
Silas13
Tears1
Aurora9
Rory1
Si1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Blackwood"
3"Silas"
4"Tears"
5"Aurora"
6"Rory"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.927
windowScore0.833
84.21% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite reach his eyes"
1"quite place"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1300
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean33.33
std17.68
cv0.53
sampleLengths
079
168
218
342
466
529
634
743
835
924
1049
1110
1221
1326
1415
1544
1612
1752
1812
197
2039
2125
2228
2312
2448
2530
2625
2721
2833
2923
309
3126
3234
3358
3452
3533
3615
3742
3861
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"been forced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs204
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences102
ratio0.01
matches
0"The memory came unbidden–the cold night, the sound of gunfire, the way Silas had pushed her out of harm's way, taking the bullet meant for her."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1137
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"familiar slight limp, his"
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.03869832893579595
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.019349164467897976
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean12.75
std6.52
cv0.512
sampleLengths
09
121
219
330
416
518
628
76
810
98
108
1114
1215
135
1426
1522
1618
1711
1816
192
208
2120
226
2311
248
2511
2613
2717
2811
297
309
319
326
339
3424
3516
3610
3711
386
394
4023
413
429
436
4414
4514
4616
4712
486
4926
68.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.43137254901960786
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners44
40.16% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"Slowly, she raised her eyes"
ratio0.012
22.41% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences83
matches
0"She glanced up when the"
1"His dark hair was longer"
2"she said, setting down the"
3"Her voice sounded strange to"
4"he said, his voice warm"
5"He moved toward the bar"
6"He smelled faintly of whiskey"
7"he said, sliding onto a"
8"His gaze flicked to the"
9"Her laugh was short and"
10"She reached for a bottle"
11"he said simply, before taking"
12"His eyes never left hers"
13"She shook her head, turning"
14"she said, keeping her voice"
15"he repeated, his tone skeptical"
16"He set the glass down"
17"She busied herself with wiping"
18"she said after a moment"
19"She finally looked up, noting"
ratio0.494
38.31% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences83
matches
0"The Raven's Nest was quiet"
1"Aurora Carter traced the crescent-shaped"
2"The green neon sign outside"
3"She glanced up when the"
4"The man who stepped inside"
5"His dark hair was longer"
6"she said, setting down the"
7"Her voice sounded strange to"
8"Silas Blackwood's eyes narrowed, then"
9"A slow smile spread across"
10"he said, his voice warm"
11"He moved toward the bar"
12"He smelled faintly of whiskey"
13"he said, sliding onto a"
14"His gaze flicked to the"
15"Her laugh was short and"
16"She reached for a bottle"
17"Silas lifted the glass, watching"
18"he said simply, before taking"
19"His eyes never left hers"
ratio0.843
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The green neon sign outside cast an eerie glow through the front windows, bathing the room in flickering light that played across the old maps and photographs l…"
1"The man who stepped inside paused just over the threshold, his gaze sweeping the room with practiced ease."
2"She shook her head, turning away to rearrange bottles on the back shelf that didn't need rearranging."
3"Aurora felt the familiar pull of their shared history, the magnetic force that had always drawn them together even when they'd been forced apart."
4"Silas's presence was like a balm to her weary soul, his familiar warmth chasing away the shadows that had lingered for so long."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"he repeated, his tone skeptical"
1"he said, his smile turning wry"
2"he asked suddenly, his voice low"
3"he said finally, his voice firm"
4"he asked, his voice barely above a whisper"
5"he admitted, his voice rough with emotion"
6"she whispered, her voice breaking"
7"she admitted, her voice barely audible"
8"he said, his tone lightening"
9"he asked, his tone casual but his eyes holding a deeper meaning"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags20
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
1"he admitted (admit)"
2"she admitted softly (admit)"
3"he admitted (admit)"
4"she whispered (whisper)"
5"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.3
72.8575%