Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF0QN2K0R09A12XSJMZWAT

Run Details

Duration:
49.2s
Cost:
$0.002584
Provider:
Fireworks

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The path that had seemed so clear in the late afternoon had vanished somewhere between one step and the next. Aurora stopped, her trainers crunching on something that wasn't gravel anymore but a soft, yielding moss that hadn't been there moments before. She raised her phone, but the flashlight revealed nothing but trees - old ones, older than the park's managed woods, their trunks thick as ancient pillars and their canopy so dense it blocked out the stars. She checked the time. 9:47 PM. She'd left the flat at eight, following the route Silas had described when she'd asked about the grove - past the Isabella plantation, through the gap in the fence, down the deer trail to the standing stones. Simple. But she'd walked for what felt like twenty minutes and the stones weren't here. Instead, there was only this: a clearing she didn't recognize, ringed by oaks that watched her with the patience of things that had been watching for centuries. The pendant against her chest pulsed. Warm, then warmer. She hadn't meant to come tonight. Hadn't meant to come at all, really - not after what Eva had said about the place, not after the stories Silas wouldn't quite tell. But the Heartstone had been pulling at her since yesterday, a faint rhythmic warmth against her sternum that had grown impossible to ignore. Like a heartbeat that wasn't hers, calling her forward. So she'd come. Foolish, maybe. But Rory had never been the type to let a mystery fester. She walked further into the clearing, and the trees shifted with her, maintaining their distance, keeping her in a ring of open ground. Her footsteps were the only sound - until they weren't. A branch snapped. Then another. Somewhere to her left, in the dark between two oaks, something moved. She turned her phone toward the sound, but the light only revealed more shadows, layered and deep, and within them - or perhaps her mind was playing tricks - the suggestion of a shape. Tall. Thin. Not quite still. "Hello?" Her voice came out smaller than she'd intended. The shadows didn't answer. Rory forced herself to breathe. There were explanations for all of this - animals, her eyes adjusting, the way unfamiliar places distorted perception. She'd studied enough criminal law to know how witness testimony failed, how the brain invented patterns to fill in gaps. This was just that. Gaps. Nothing more. She kept walking, slower now, and the pendant pulsed faster. Warmer. The faint inner glow was visible even through her shirt, a crimson shimmer that painted her chest in arterial red. The standing stones appeared at the center of the clearing. They were taller than she'd expected - eight feet at least, maybe more - and arranged in a loose circle that seemed to hold the very air in place. The bark that covered them was ancient, gnarled, but she could feel the oaks beneath rather than see them, a presence that pressed against her awareness like a hand against glass. The boundary. She'd found the boundary. But she wasn't alone here. The certainty arrived without evidence, sinking into her bones with a weight that made her breath catch. She wasn't alone, and she hadn't been since she'd entered the clearing. Something had been watching her since the path vanished, something that moved when she wasn't looking and stayed still when she was. She turned in a slow circle, phone raised, but the darkness gave nothing back. Just trees. Just shadows. Just the sense of being observed by a patience so vast it made her chest ache. The flowers should have been impossible at this hour, at this time of year, but they were everywhere - wildflowers she couldn't name, pale and luminous in the dark, their petals open as if drinking the moonlight. Except there was no moonlight tonight. She'd checked the weather before leaving. Cloudy, with rain expected by midnight. Yet the flowers glowed. Faint. Soft. The color of forgotten things. And then she heard the music. It came from everywhere and nowhere, a melody that wasn't quite music - more like the memory of music, played on instruments that had never existed in the human world. Flutes that sounded like wind through hollow bones, strings that hummed with the resonance of something long dead. It wrapped around her, through her, and her legs wanted to move toward it, toward the center of the circle where the stones stood closest together and the flowers grew thickest. Rory bit down on her tongue, hard, and the pain gave her a second of clarity. She forced herself to step backward, away from the center, and the pendant screamed against her chest - not warm anymore but burning, a brand of heat that made her gasp and double over. When she looked up, the shadows had grown closer. They stood at the edge of the light her phone cast, four of them, five, more - shapes that were almost human but wrong in the proportions, too long and too thin, their faces featureless or perhaps simply turned away. They didn't move. They didn't need to. They simply watched, and their watching was a weight that pressed against her skull from the inside. "This isn't real," she whispered, but her voice came out strange, flattened, as if the air itself was eating the sound. "This isn't—" One of the shapes tilted its head. An acknowledgment. A mocking of the gesture. She ran. Not toward the path she'd come from - there was no path now, only darkness - but toward the gap between two of the standing stones, toward the far side of the clearing where the trees thinned and the glow of the city might be visible through the canopy. Her legs carried her fast, faster than she'd known she could move, and the music rose around her, through her, trying to sink its notes into her brain and make her stop, make her turn, make her walk into the center of the circle and wait for whatever waited there. The pendant cracked. She felt it - a fissure running through the artifact, a break in whatever ancient magic had kept it whole. And with that crack came a sound, a vibration that wasn't quite a word but carried meaning nonetheless: a warning. A name. Not hers. Hel. The word sank into her like a blade, and suddenly she understood why she'd been drawn here - not by curiosity, not by the pendant alone, but by something that had been waiting for her, something that had planted the desire in her mind and watched her walk into its trap with the patience of centuries. She burst through the standing stones and into a wall of cold. Not air - something else. Something that pushed against her like frozen water, like the breath of a grave, and then released her, and she was running through ordinary trees, ordinary darkness, ordinary silence broken only by her own ragged breathing and the distant hum of traffic from the road. She didn't stop until she reached the fence. Didn't stop until she was through it and on the path and halfway up the hill toward the car park, her legs shaking, her hands trembling so badly she could barely hold her phone. Behind her, the grove was invisible. A fold in the world, closed to her now but not gone. Never gone. The pendant was dark. The crack had killed its glow, and when she pressed her fingers to the gemstone, it was cold - cold like the thing that had pushed against her, cold like the word that had sunk into her mind. Hel. She didn't know what it meant. Not yet. But she knew it wasn't over. The walk back to the flat took twenty minutes, and by the time she reached the door, the sky had begun to lighten with the first grey suggestion of dawn. She had been in the grove for hours. Or minutes. Time moved differently there - she'd felt that, felt the way it stretched and compressed around her like taffy, like something being pulled and shaped by hands she couldn't see. Rory stood on the doorstep, her key in her hand, and made herself a promise. She would find out what had called her. What had almost had her. And she would make it stop. But not tonight. Tonight, she would sleep, and try not to dream of flowers that glowed in the dark, and shapes that watched from the edge of impossible light. Tonight, she would rest. And tomorrow, the hunt would begin.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.44% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1421
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"very"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.26% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1421
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"could feel"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"sense of"
count1
7
word"resonance"
count1
8
word"desire"
count1
9
word"grave"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"rhythmic"
2"warmth"
3"footsteps"
4"could feel"
5"weight"
6"sense of"
7"resonance"
8"desire"
9"grave"
10"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences110
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1441
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions10
wordCount1435
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.28
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Silas2
Isabella1
Eva1
Heartstone1
Rory4
One1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Eva"
2"Heartstone"
3"Rory"
places
0"Isabella"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount8
matches
0"seemed so clear in the late afternoon had vanished somewhere between one step and the next"
1"felt like twenty minutes and the stones"
2"quite tell"
3"circle that seemed to hold the very air in place"
4"as if drinking the moonlight"
5"quite music - more like the memory of music, played on instruments that had never existed in the human world"
6"sounded like wind through hollow bones, st"
7"quite a word but carried meaning nonetheless: a warning"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.082
wordCount1441
matches
0"not warm anymore but burning, a brand of heat"
1"not by curiosity, not by the pendant alone, but by something"
2"not by the pendant alone, but by something"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean32.75
std25.8
cv0.788
sampleLengths
020
158
285
39
463
517
633
756
89
94
1050
1131
1210
1366
145
1551
1634
1755
1811
196
2079
2150
229
2364
2423
2514
262
2799
2847
291
3056
3112
3250
3342
3420
3542
361
3714
3870
3915
4019
4129
424
436
95.69% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences110
matches
0"being observed"
1"been drawn"
2"being pulled"
87.96% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs238
matches
0"was playing"
1"wasn't looking"
2"was eating"
3"was running"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount20
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences17
totalSentences111
ratio0.153
matches
0"She raised her phone, but the flashlight revealed nothing but trees - old ones, older than the park's managed woods, their trunks thick as ancient pillars and their canopy so dense it blocked out the stars."
1"She'd left the flat at eight, following the route Silas had described when she'd asked about the grove - past the Isabella plantation, through the gap in the fence, down the deer trail to the standing stones."
2"Hadn't meant to come at all, really - not after what Eva had said about the place, not after the stories Silas wouldn't quite tell."
3"Her footsteps were the only sound - until they weren't."
4"She turned her phone toward the sound, but the light only revealed more shadows, layered and deep, and within them - or perhaps her mind was playing tricks - the suggestion of a shape."
5"There were explanations for all of this - animals, her eyes adjusting, the way unfamiliar places distorted perception."
6"They were taller than she'd expected - eight feet at least, maybe more - and arranged in a loose circle that seemed to hold the very air in place."
7"The flowers should have been impossible at this hour, at this time of year, but they were everywhere - wildflowers she couldn't name, pale and luminous in the dark, their petals open as if drinking the moonlight."
8"It came from everywhere and nowhere, a melody that wasn't quite music - more like the memory of music, played on instruments that had never existed in the human world."
9"She forced herself to step backward, away from the center, and the pendant screamed against her chest - not warm anymore but burning, a brand of heat that made her gasp and double over."
10"They stood at the edge of the light her phone cast, four of them, five, more - shapes that were almost human but wrong in the proportions, too long and too thin, their faces featureless or perhaps simply turned away."
11"Not toward the path she'd come from - there was no path now, only darkness - but toward the gap between two of the standing stones, toward the far side of the clearing where the trees thinned and the glow of the city might be visible through the canopy."
12"She felt it - a fissure running through the artifact, a break in whatever ancient magic had kept it whole."
13"The word sank into her like a blade, and suddenly she understood why she'd been drawn here - not by curiosity, not by the pendant alone, but by something that had been waiting for her, something that had planted the desire in her mind and watched her walk into its trap with the patience of centuries."
14"Not air - something else."
15"The crack had killed its glow, and when she pressed her fingers to the gemstone, it was cold - cold like the thing that had pushed against her, cold like the word that had sunk into her mind."
16"Time moved differently there - she'd felt that, felt the way it stretched and compressed around her like taffy, like something being pulled and shaped by hands she couldn't see."
98.52% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1415
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount59
adverbRatio0.04169611307420495
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.008480565371024734
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean12.98
std12.92
cv0.995
sampleLengths
020
122
236
34
42
537
61
714
827
96
103
116
1225
1323
149
153
162
1712
1823
1910
203
212
2212
2334
241
251
263
279
284
295
3018
3120
324
331
342
3510
361
3720
3810
3929
4031
412
424
435
4417
4512
4622
4714
482
492
62.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.43243243243243246
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners48
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences87
matches
0"Instead, there was only this:"
1"Somewhere to her left, in"
2"Just the sense of being"
ratio0.034
82.07% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences87
matches
0"She raised her phone, but"
1"She checked the time."
2"She'd left the flat at"
3"She hadn't meant to come"
4"She walked further into the"
5"Her footsteps were the only"
6"She turned her phone toward"
7"Her voice came out smaller"
8"She'd studied enough criminal law"
9"She kept walking, slower now,"
10"They were taller than she'd"
11"She'd found the boundary."
12"She wasn't alone, and she"
13"She turned in a slow"
14"She'd checked the weather before"
15"It came from everywhere and"
16"It wrapped around her, through"
17"She forced herself to step"
18"They stood at the edge"
19"They didn't move."
ratio0.345
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences87
matches
0"The path that had seemed"
1"Aurora stopped, her trainers crunching"
2"She raised her phone, but"
3"She checked the time."
4"She'd left the flat at"
5"The pendant against her chest"
6"She hadn't meant to come"
7"She walked further into the"
8"Her footsteps were the only"
9"A branch snapped."
10"She turned her phone toward"
11"Her voice came out smaller"
12"The shadows didn't answer."
13"Rory forced herself to breathe."
14"She'd studied enough criminal law"
15"This was just that."
16"She kept walking, slower now,"
17"The faint inner glow was"
18"The standing stones appeared at"
19"They were taller than she'd"
ratio0.667
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount17
matches
0"The path that had seemed so clear in the late afternoon had vanished somewhere between one step and the next."
1"Aurora stopped, her trainers crunching on something that wasn't gravel anymore but a soft, yielding moss that hadn't been there moments before."
2"But the Heartstone had been pulling at her since yesterday, a faint rhythmic warmth against her sternum that had grown impossible to ignore."
3"She walked further into the clearing, and the trees shifted with her, maintaining their distance, keeping her in a ring of open ground."
4"The faint inner glow was visible even through her shirt, a crimson shimmer that painted her chest in arterial red."
5"The bark that covered them was ancient, gnarled, but she could feel the oaks beneath rather than see them, a presence that pressed against her awareness like a …"
6"The certainty arrived without evidence, sinking into her bones with a weight that made her breath catch."
7"Something had been watching her since the path vanished, something that moved when she wasn't looking and stayed still when she was."
8"The flowers should have been impossible at this hour, at this time of year, but they were everywhere - wildflowers she couldn't name, pale and luminous in the d…"
9"Flutes that sounded like wind through hollow bones, strings that hummed with the resonance of something long dead."
10"She forced herself to step backward, away from the center, and the pendant screamed against her chest - not warm anymore but burning, a brand of heat that made …"
11"They stood at the edge of the light her phone cast, four of them, five, more - shapes that were almost human but wrong in the proportions, too long and too thin…"
12"And with that crack came a sound, a vibration that wasn't quite a word but carried meaning nonetheless: a warning."
13"The word sank into her like a blade, and suddenly she understood why she'd been drawn here - not by curiosity, not by the pendant alone, but by something that h…"
14"Something that pushed against her like frozen water, like the breath of a grave, and then released her, and she was running through ordinary trees, ordinary dar…"
15"Didn't stop until she was through it and on the path and halfway up the hill toward the car park, her legs shaking, her hands trembling so badly she could barel…"
16"The crack had killed its glow, and when she pressed her fingers to the gemstone, it was cold - cold like the thing that had pushed against her, cold like the wo…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she whispered, but her voice came out strange, flattened, as if the air itself was eating the sound"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.667
72.3366%