Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF16BY5EDPQZ1Q4ZQWENBV

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Duration:
1m 9s
Cost:
$0.001595
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest hummed with its usual evening murmur—the clink of glasses, the low rumble of conversations lost in the whiskey-tinged air. Aurora Carter balanced a tray of pints against her hip as she wove through the scattered tables. The green neon from the sign outside bled through the front windows, painting the floorboards in sickly light. She barely noticed anymore. Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a tumbler with his usual precision. His signet ring caught the light—silver flashing like a muted warning. She caught his eye, and he gave her the slightest nod toward a corner booth. A frown pinched between his brows. Rory followed his gaze. The man sitting there was unremarkable at first glance—cropped dark hair, shoulders hunched over a half-finished drink. But then he turned slightly, and her pulse skittered. Evan. It had been three years. Not long enough. Her tray nearly slipped. She forced herself to breathe, forced her fingers to steady. Three years should have been enough time to scrub the memory of his hands from her skin, but here he was, like a bruise she'd thought long healed, pressing fresh pain into her. Silas's voice was quiet when she returned to the bar. "You don't have to go over there." She wiped her palms on her jeans. "I know." "Then don't." But she was already moving. Evan looked up as she approached, and his expression flickered—surprise, then something softer, tinged with a relief that made her stomach twist. "Laila," he said, and the old nickname landed like a punch. "Don't." She didn't sit. He leaned back, studying her. "You cut your hair." It wasn't what she expected. Her fingers twitched toward the ends of her hair—shorter now, no longer the length he'd preferred. She curled them into her palm. "What are you doing here?" "Looking for you." Of course. She exhaled sharply. "How did you find me?" "Someone mentioned you worked at a bar in Soho." His gaze skated past her, toward Silas. "I didn't realize it was this kind of place." Her jaw tightened. "It's just a bar." "Is it?" His thumb traced the rim of his glass. Three years ago, that same thumb had pressed into the dip of her collarbone hard enough to leave a mark. "You changed your number. Moved. Didn't leave a forwarding address." "Yeah," she said flatly. "That's usually how leaving works." His mouth twisted. "Still sharp." "And you're still here when you shouldn't be." For a moment, silence pooled between them. The bar noise faded to a dull roar in her ears. He looked different—older, obviously, but there was something else. A weariness in the set of his shoulders that hadn't been there before. He drained the rest of his drink. "Can we talk? Not here." "No." "Five minutes." Her fingers found the scar on her wrist, a nervous habit she'd never shaken. "You don't get five minutes." "Christ, Laila—" "Rory." He exhaled through his nose. "Rory. Fine." His fingers tapped against the table. "I just want to apologize." She laughed—a short, brittle sound. "You could've mailed a card." "I needed to say it to your face." His voice dropped. "I wasn't—I wasn't good to you." Understatement of the fucking century. She wanted to walk away. She should have. But something in her prickled—not curiosity, exactly, but the need to see this through to its miserable end. "And?" He hesitated. "And I'm sorry." Three words. That's all they were. Three syllables stacked like kindling. But they didn't catch fire, didn't burn away the memory of his hands around her arms, the way he'd sneered when she flinched. Silas's voice cut in from behind the bar—too deliberate to be casual. "Rory, the delivery for Yu-Fei's is here." Blessed intervention. She stepped back. "I have to go." Evan's expression darkened. "That's it?" "Yeah," she said. "That's it." She turned before he could say more, before the part of her still stupid enough to miss him could protest. Silas handed her a set of keys as she passed the bar. His grip lingered just a second too long, a silent question. She shook her head. Outside, the London air was damp with impending rain. She tilted her face up, let it cool the heat prickling at her temples. Some things couldn't be undone with an apology. Some scars didn't fade. The Raven's Nest door creaked open behind her, and for one terrible moment, she thought he'd followed. But it was just Silas, leaning against the frame, his knee giving the slightest protest. "You okay?" he asked. She let out a long breath. "Will be." He nodded, unsurprised. He'd always known when to push and when to let silence do the work. She pocketed the keys. "Better get those deliveries done." And with that, she walked away—not running this time, just leaving. The night smelled like rain and diesel fumes. The weight in her chest didn't lift, but she carried it anyway. That was the thing about ghosts—they only haunted you if you let them. She wasn't Laila anymore. She wasn't his.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said flatly [flatly]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.231
leniency0.462
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.051
88.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount858
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount858
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"tinged"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"tinged"
1"pulse"
2"flickered"
3"stomach"
4"traced"
5"silence"
6"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords843
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount692
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.87
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Carter1
Silas6
Three4
Understatement1
London1
Laila1
Evan3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Silas"
4"Laila"
5"Evan"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
36.36% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"fferent—older, obviously, but there was some"
1"smelled like rain and diesel fumes"
81.38% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.186
wordCount843
matches
0"not curiosity, exactly, but the need to see this through to its miserable end"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean14.79
std13.5
cv0.913
sampleLengths
061
144
24
326
41
58
647
717
89
92
105
1122
1211
134
149
1532
163
1710
1825
197
2040
219
225
238
2440
2512
261
272
2819
292
301
3118
3210
3317
345
3527
365
3734
3819
392
407
415
425
4320
4423
454
4623
4712
4832
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs128
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences110
ratio0.1
matches
0"The Raven's Nest hummed with its usual evening murmur—the clink of glasses, the low rumble of conversations lost in the whiskey-tinged air."
1"His signet ring caught the light—silver flashing like a muted warning."
2"The man sitting there was unremarkable at first glance—cropped dark hair, shoulders hunched over a half-finished drink."
3"Evan looked up as she approached, and his expression flickered—surprise, then something softer, tinged with a relief that made her stomach twist."
4"Her fingers twitched toward the ends of her hair—shorter now, no longer the length he'd preferred."
5"He looked different—older, obviously, but there was something else."
6"She laughed—a short, brittle sound."
7"But something in her prickled—not curiosity, exactly, but the need to see this through to its miserable end."
8"Silas's voice cut in from behind the bar—too deliberate to be casual."
9"And with that, she walked away—not running this time, just leaving."
10"That was the thing about ghosts—they only haunted you if you let them."
89.08% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount705
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.0524822695035461
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.01276595744680851
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean7.66
std5.88
cv0.768
sampleLengths
022
117
218
34
412
511
615
76
84
917
109
111
125
133
144
1510
1633
1710
187
197
202
212
225
2322
2411
254
265
274
285
2916
306
315
323
332
343
355
3616
379
383
394
4010
4120
4210
434
445
453
462
478
487
4911
55.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.36363636363636365
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners40
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
6.30% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences73
matches
0"She barely noticed anymore."
1"His signet ring caught the"
2"She caught his eye, and"
3"It had been three years."
4"Her tray nearly slipped."
5"She forced herself to breathe,"
6"She wiped her palms on"
7"he said, and the old"
8"She didn't sit"
9"He leaned back, studying her."
10"It wasn't what she expected."
11"Her fingers twitched toward the"
12"She curled them into her"
13"She exhaled sharply."
14"His gaze skated past her,"
15"Her jaw tightened."
16"His thumb traced the rim"
17"she said flatly"
18"His mouth twisted."
19"He looked different—older, obviously, but"
ratio0.534
42.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences73
matches
0"The Raven's Nest hummed with"
1"Aurora Carter balanced a tray"
2"The green neon from the"
3"She barely noticed anymore."
4"Silas stood behind the bar,"
5"His signet ring caught the"
6"She caught his eye, and"
7"A frown pinched between his"
8"Rory followed his gaze."
9"The man sitting there was"
10"It had been three years."
11"Her tray nearly slipped."
12"She forced herself to breathe,"
13"Silas's voice was quiet when"
14"She wiped her palms on"
15"Evan looked up as she"
16"he said, and the old"
17"She didn't sit"
18"He leaned back, studying her."
19"It wasn't what she expected."
ratio0.836
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Evan looked up as she approached, and his expression flickered—surprise, then something softer, tinged with a relief that made her stomach twist."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.103
leniency0.205
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.2120%