| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said flatly [flatly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.231 | | leniency | 0.462 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.051 | |
| 88.34% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 858 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.55% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 858 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "tinged" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "traced" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 110 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 843 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 692 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.87 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 2 | | Carter | 1 | | Silas | 6 | | Three | 4 | | Understatement | 1 | | London | 1 | | Laila | 1 | | Evan | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Carter" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Laila" | | 5 | "Evan" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 36.36% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "fferent—older, obviously, but there was some" | | 1 | "smelled like rain and diesel fumes" |
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| 81.38% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.186 | | wordCount | 843 | | matches | | 0 | "not curiosity, exactly, but the need to see this through to its miserable end" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 57 | | mean | 14.79 | | std | 13.5 | | cv | 0.913 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 47 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 40 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 40 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 34 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 23 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 32 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 128 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 110 | | ratio | 0.1 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven's Nest hummed with its usual evening murmur—the clink of glasses, the low rumble of conversations lost in the whiskey-tinged air." | | 1 | "His signet ring caught the light—silver flashing like a muted warning." | | 2 | "The man sitting there was unremarkable at first glance—cropped dark hair, shoulders hunched over a half-finished drink." | | 3 | "Evan looked up as she approached, and his expression flickered—surprise, then something softer, tinged with a relief that made her stomach twist." | | 4 | "Her fingers twitched toward the ends of her hair—shorter now, no longer the length he'd preferred." | | 5 | "He looked different—older, obviously, but there was something else." | | 6 | "She laughed—a short, brittle sound." | | 7 | "But something in her prickled—not curiosity, exactly, but the need to see this through to its miserable end." | | 8 | "Silas's voice cut in from behind the bar—too deliberate to be casual." | | 9 | "And with that, she walked away—not running this time, just leaving." | | 10 | "That was the thing about ghosts—they only haunted you if you let them." |
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| 89.08% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 705 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.0524822695035461 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01276595744680851 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 110 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 110 | | mean | 7.66 | | std | 5.88 | | cv | 0.768 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 55.15% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.36363636363636365 | | totalSentences | 110 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 6.30% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "She barely noticed anymore." | | 1 | "His signet ring caught the" | | 2 | "She caught his eye, and" | | 3 | "It had been three years." | | 4 | "Her tray nearly slipped." | | 5 | "She forced herself to breathe," | | 6 | "She wiped her palms on" | | 7 | "he said, and the old" | | 8 | "She didn't sit" | | 9 | "He leaned back, studying her." | | 10 | "It wasn't what she expected." | | 11 | "Her fingers twitched toward the" | | 12 | "She curled them into her" | | 13 | "She exhaled sharply." | | 14 | "His gaze skated past her," | | 15 | "Her jaw tightened." | | 16 | "His thumb traced the rim" | | 17 | "she said flatly" | | 18 | "His mouth twisted." | | 19 | "He looked different—older, obviously, but" |
| | ratio | 0.534 | |
| 42.19% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven's Nest hummed with" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter balanced a tray" | | 2 | "The green neon from the" | | 3 | "She barely noticed anymore." | | 4 | "Silas stood behind the bar," | | 5 | "His signet ring caught the" | | 6 | "She caught his eye, and" | | 7 | "A frown pinched between his" | | 8 | "Rory followed his gaze." | | 9 | "The man sitting there was" | | 10 | "It had been three years." | | 11 | "Her tray nearly slipped." | | 12 | "She forced herself to breathe," | | 13 | "Silas's voice was quiet when" | | 14 | "She wiped her palms on" | | 15 | "Evan looked up as she" | | 16 | "he said, and the old" | | 17 | "She didn't sit" | | 18 | "He leaned back, studying her." | | 19 | "It wasn't what she expected." |
| | ratio | 0.836 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Evan looked up as she approached, and his expression flickered—surprise, then something softer, tinged with a relief that made her stomach twist." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.103 | | leniency | 0.205 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |