Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF2V80ZCHVF0A1DR3Z3EJE

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

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The Raven's Nest smelled of aged whiskey and wood polish, a comforting musk that clung to Rory's clothes whenever she descended the creaking stairs from her flat. Neon light bled green through the front windows, painting irregular rectangles across the mahogany bar where Silas polished glasses with a linen cloth, his signet ring catching the dim light with each methodical motion. The photograph behind him showed a younger Silas in Prague, before the knee injury, standing rigid beside people whose faces had been scratched out with a knife tip. Rory traced the crescent scar on her wrist absently as she waited for her usual order—Yu-Fei's cumin lamb and baskets of steaming bao—to be wrapped behind the bar. Silas had insisted she eat something besides takeaway containers balanced on her knees, though he'd only grunted when she thanked him, the way he did whenever kindness slipped past his defenses. The bell above the door jangled. Rory turned, expecting another Wednesday night regular—perhaps the journalist who nursed single malts while pretending not to eavesdrop, or the art forger who smelled of turpentine and talked too loudly about Courbet. Instead, she saw a ghost from Cardiff. "Evan?" The name slipped out before she could trap it between her teeth. He stood framed in the doorway, blinking as his eyes adjusted to the gloom. The overhead bulb caught highlights in his hair—longer now, threaded with premature silver at the temples. His navy peacoat was tailored, expensive-looking. Nothing like the boy who'd bought second-hand blazers for moot court competitions. "Laila?" he said, using the name she'd discarded along with everything else from that life. His accent had smoothed out, the Cardiff lilt softened by years in London boardrooms. Silas stopped polishing glasses. Rory felt his gaze like a physical weight between her shoulder blades. She flexed her left hand—no ring. Not anymore. "You're the last person I expected to find holed up in a Soho dive," Evan said, stepping closer. His shoes were Italian leather, she noticed. The cuffs of his shirt peeked out, French and crisp against his wrists. "I live upstairs." She didn't mention the leaky shower or how the radiator groaned like a dying animal in winter. Evan tapped the bar with two fingers. "Double Macallan. Neat." Silas didn't move. "We're a beer and whiskey house." His limp was more pronounced as he shifted his weight, deliberate. Evan sighed. "Fine. Whatever single malt you've got back there." Silas slid a tumbler across the bar with more force than necessary. On cue, Rory's phone buzzed—Yu-Fei's kitchen shift manager confirming her pickup time. She ignored Evan's glance at the cracked screen. "Still delivering takeaway?" He smirked, swirling the whiskey. "Bit of a downgrade from the Inns of Court, isn't it?" Rory remembered the exact timbre of his laugh when she'd told him about leaving law school. How it had curdled before the sound fully formed. "The food's better," she said lightly, taking her paper bag from Silas. The bao smelled of star anise and five-spice. Evan always hated cumin, called it peasant food. He drained his whiskey in one swallow. "Christ, that's awful." Pressing a fifty-pound note under the glass, he nodded toward the tables near the back. "Catch up?" Rain smeared the windows behind him. The art forger muttered into his pint. In the photograph, young Silas stood frozen beside his faceless companions. Rory exhaled through her nose. They took the corner booth where the vinyl split along the seams. Evan unbuttoned his coat, revealing a waistcoat and pocket watch chain. The Evan she'd known owned exactly two ties, both Christmas gifts from his mum. "You look..." "Like I belong in a hedge fund?" He grimaced. "Was going to say 'tired.'" Rory unwrapped a bao, letting the steam bloom between them. "Why are you here, Evan?" He studied his empty glass. "Meeting clients at the club around the corner. Saw the green sign." His thumb rubbed at a watermark on the table. "Remember how we used to чтение по губам—" "Don't." Her bao crumbled between her fingers. For years they'd played that game in crowded pubs, mouthing words across tables as drunks jostled them. Private jokes in public places. The silence stretched. Behind the bar, Silas shook ice from a shaker with unnecessary vigor. Evan cleared his throat. "I heard about your dad. Passed the bar, did he?" "Two years ago." Rory wiped her hands on a napkin. "Eviscerated some junior barrister's negligence argument right before the stroke. Typical Brendan." A pause. Pipes groaned in the walls. Evan hesitated. "When you left Cardiff—" "I didn't leave," she corrected. "I ran." "Without a word." Outside, a cab splashed through puddled gutter. Someone dropped coins on the pavement. "You got the first editions," Rory said abruptly. Evan blinked. "The Dickens collection. You kept them." He opened his mouth, then shut it. In the dim light, his crow's feet deepened—laughter lines Rory used to trace with her fingertips, now etched deeper by years she hadn't witnessed. "You never came back," Evan said at last. Rory thought of Yu-Fei's kitchen, her bicycle with the wobbly front wheel, the way Silas had wordlessly changed her locks when Evan's name appeared on a police report months after she fled. "No," she agreed. Evan stood abruptly, fishing another note from his wallet. "For the whiskey," he told Silas, who grunted. At the door, he turned. "You were right, you know." Rory waited. "That last fight." Evan's hand hovered near the knob. "About cruelty taking more forms than bruising." The bell jangled as he left. Silas emerged from behind the bar, bringing a damp cloth to wipe the table. He gathered Evan's untouched second fifty-pound note—compensation for old wounds—and stuffed it into the till with finality. "Eat your damn bao before they get cold," he muttered. Rain streaked the windows. Somewhere in the city, Evan was hailing a cab, adjusting his cufflinks, stepping back into a life that had grown around Rory's absence like bark around a nail. She took a bite. The cumin burned her tongue.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
94.44% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said lightly [lightly]"
1"Rory said abruptly [abruptly]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.514
leniency1
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.111
95.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1023
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.01% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1023
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"comforting"
count1
1
word"methodical"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"gloom"
count1
4
word"lilt"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"comforting"
1"methodical"
2"traced"
3"gloom"
4"lilt"
5"weight"
6"silence"
7"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences82
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1006
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions62
wordCount829
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity1.93
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory14
Silas12
Prague1
Yu3
Fei3
Wednesday1
Courbet1
Cardiff2
London1
Italian1
French1
Evan16
Rain2
Christmas1
Yu-Fei1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Fei"
5"Evan"
6"Rain"
7"Christmas"
8"Yu-Fei"
places
0"Prague"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore0.535
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1006
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"played that game"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean21.87
std16.53
cv0.756
sampleLengths
089
159
245
313
448
529
624
738
820
910
1020
1110
1232
1319
1425
1528
1627
1729
1837
192
207
217
2215
2334
2429
2515
2614
2722
287
296
307
313
3213
3316
3431
358
3632
373
3817
3910
402
4116
4237
4310
4432
459
96.71% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences82
matches
0"been scratched"
1"was tailored"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs152
matches
0"was hailing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences99
ratio0.071
matches
0"Rory traced the crescent scar on her wrist absently as she waited for her usual order—Yu-Fei's cumin lamb and baskets of steaming bao—to be wrapped behind the bar."
1"Rory turned, expecting another Wednesday night regular—perhaps the journalist who nursed single malts while pretending not to eavesdrop, or the art forger who smelled of turpentine and talked too loudly about Courbet."
2"The overhead bulb caught highlights in his hair—longer now, threaded with premature silver at the temples."
3"She flexed her left hand—no ring."
4"On cue, Rory's phone buzzed—Yu-Fei's kitchen shift manager confirming her pickup time."
5"In the dim light, his crow's feet deepened—laughter lines Rory used to trace with her fingertips, now etched deeper by years she hadn't witnessed."
6"He gathered Evan's untouched second fifty-pound note—compensation for old wounds—and stuffed it into the till with finality."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount846
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.024822695035460994
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.01182033096926714
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean10.16
std7.59
cv0.747
sampleLengths
027
134
228
328
431
56
632
77
813
914
1016
116
1212
1315
1414
154
1612
176
182
1918
207
2113
2220
237
243
253
2617
272
288
2912
3012
318
328
3311
3416
359
3612
378
388
397
4018
412
426
437
4411
455
4612
4711
4814
492
80.47% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.494949494949495
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners49
92.59% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences72
matches
0"Instead, she saw a ghost"
1"Somewhere in the city, Evan"
ratio0.028
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences72
matches
0"He stood framed in the"
1"His navy peacoat was tailored,"
2"he said, using the name"
3"His accent had smoothed out,"
4"She flexed her left hand—no"
5"His shoes were Italian leather,"
6"She didn't mention the leaky"
7"His limp was more pronounced"
8"She ignored Evan's glance at"
9"He smirked, swirling the whiskey"
10"she said lightly, taking her"
11"He drained his whiskey in"
12"They took the corner booth"
13"He studied his empty glass."
14"His thumb rubbed at a"
15"Her bao crumbled between her"
16"He opened his mouth, then"
17"he told Silas, who grunted"
18"He gathered Evan's untouched second"
19"She took a bite."
ratio0.278
43.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences72
matches
0"The Raven's Nest smelled of"
1"Neon light bled green through"
2"The photograph behind him showed"
3"Rory traced the crescent scar"
4"Silas had insisted she eat"
5"The bell above the door"
6"Rory turned, expecting another Wednesday"
7"The name slipped out before"
8"He stood framed in the"
9"The overhead bulb caught highlights"
10"His navy peacoat was tailored,"
11"Nothing like the boy who'd"
12"he said, using the name"
13"His accent had smoothed out,"
14"Silas stopped polishing glasses."
15"Rory felt his gaze like"
16"She flexed her left hand—no"
17"Evan said, stepping closer"
18"His shoes were Italian leather,"
19"The cuffs of his shirt"
ratio0.833
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
37.04% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The Raven's Nest smelled of aged whiskey and wood polish, a comforting musk that clung to Rory's clothes whenever she descended the creaking stairs from her fla…"
1"Rory turned, expecting another Wednesday night regular—perhaps the journalist who nursed single malts while pretending not to eavesdrop, or the art forger who s…"
2"Nothing like the boy who'd bought second-hand blazers for moot court competitions."
3"Somewhere in the city, Evan was hailing a cab, adjusting his cufflinks, stepping back into a life that had grown around Rory's absence like bark around a nail."
97.22% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he shifted, deliberate"
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"he shifted (shift)"
1"pound note (pound note)"
2"she corrected (correct)"
3"she agreed (agree)"
4"he muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.314
leniency0.629
rawRatio0.455
effectiveRatio0.286
80.5580%