Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF3BGS11YNCB6FNZM4MS54

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Duration:
2m 5s
Cost:
$0.001692
Provider:
SambaNova

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign hummed overhead, casting an otherworldly glow on the damp pavement of the Soho alley. Aurora Carter—Rory to anyone who'd known her longer than a week—pushed open the heavy door to The Raven’s Nest, the familiar scent of old wood, polished brass, and Silas’s good whiskey washing over her. It was a smell that had come to mean safety, a stark contrast to the metallic tang of fear that had clung to her life just a year ago. She slipped onto her usual stool at the far end of the bar, the one with a slightly wobbling leg that Silas kept meaning to fix. The place was quiet for a Tuesday, just the low murmur of a couple in a corner booth and the soft clink of glass as Silas polished a tumbler. He looked up, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners, and gave her a slow, almost imperceptible nod. His right hand, the one that always bore the heavy silver signet ring, moved with practised ease as he set the glass down and reached for the bottle of Tamnavulin without her having to ask. “Rough one, Rory?” he asked, his voice a low rumble that seemed to emanate from the very foundations of the place. He poured two fingers, neat. She offered a tired smile, running her thumb absently over the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. “The new sat-nav system at Golden Empress is a menace. Sent me to three different Wellingtons. I think Yu-Fei is trying to will the city’s geography into something more logical through sheer force of annoyance.” Silas’s mouth quirked. “The city resists logic. It’s part of its charm.” He pushed the glass toward her. His movements were economical, precise, but she’d learned to notice the slight favouring of his left leg, the ghost of Prague that would never quite leave him. She was about to take her first sip when the door opened again, letting in a burst of cool, diesel-scented evening air and a man silhouetted against the neon glow. He hesitated for a moment, his eyes adjusting to the dim light, scanning the room as if looking for a specific table or confirming a memory. Then his gaze landed on her, and stopped. The casual assessment hardened into genuine, stunned recognition. Rory felt the air leave her lungs. It was Tomasz. Tomasz from Cardiff. Tomasz from the debating society, from the library all-nighters fueled by terrible coffee and shared ambition, from the world before Evan, before London, before she’d had to become someone else entirely. He looked… successful. That was the first, jarring thought. The Tomasz she’d known had been all sharp angles and second-hand tweed jackets smelling of mothballs and earnestness. This man wore a beautifully tailored navy coat, his hair was expertly cut, and he carried himself with an assurance that seemed to take up physical space in the quiet bar. But his eyes, when they finally met hers, were the same—wide, intelligent, and now, utterly bewildered. “Aurora?” he said, the single word laden with a decade of questions. “Tomasz,” she replied, her voice thankfully steady. She gestured to the stool beside her. “Join me?” He approached slowly, as if navigating a minefield, and slid onto the stool. He unbuttoned his coat, revealing a crisp shirt and a silk tie. The Tomasz she remembered had owned one tie, a garish thing covered in cartoon pigs that he’d worn for every formal occasion. Silas materialized, a silent question in his raised eyebrows. “Whiskey, please. Whatever’s good,” Tomasz said, his voice deeper than she remembered, polished smooth. “Two of my best customers in one night,” Silas murmured, his tone utterly neutral, but Rory caught the subtle shift in his posture. He was assessing, filing information away. The Spymaster was always on duty. He placed a fresh glass in front of Tomasz and retreated to the other end of the bar, giving them the illusion of privacy. For a long moment, they just looked at each other. The silence was a chasm filled with the ghosts of who they had been: two bright, fiercely competitive students from modest backgrounds, certain they were going to conquer the world of law, to be a voice for the voiceless. They’d argued philosophy on the steps of the National Museum, sketched out their future chambers over pints of cheap lager, dared each other to be brilliant. “I heard you’d moved to London,” Tomasz began, finally breaking the silence. He swirled the amber liquid in his glass. “After… everything.” ‘Everything’. Such a small word for the cataclysm that had been Evan. The control, the isolation, the way he’d systematically dismantled her confidence, her friendships, her sense of self until the idea of a legal career felt like a pathetic joke from another lifetime. Tomasz had been one of the friends she’d been forced to let go. “I did,” she said simply. “And you’re… a barrister here? Chambers?” he asked, hope and professional curiosity colouring his tone. It was the most obvious, the only logical path. The one they had planned together. Rory took a sip of her whiskey, letting the heat of it fortify her. She could lie. She could spin a tale of a small practice, of pro bono work. It would be easier. But the weight of his expectation, the sheer force of the person he still believed her to be, felt oppressive. “No,” she said, her voice quiet but clear. “I deliver Chinese food.” The sentence hung in the air between them, absurd and devastating. Tomasz blinked, his smile frozen, then slowly melted away. He looked around the bar again, as if searching for the hidden cameras, for the punchline. “You’re joking.” It wasn’t a question. “I’m not.” “But… your mind, Aurora. Your arguments. You were the best of us. Professor Davies said you were the most naturally gifted litigator he’d seen in twenty years.” He was leaning forward now, his voice intense, almost angry. “You were going to take on the Crown Prosecution Service. You were going to change things.” Each word was a little hammer tap on the shield she’d built around herself. She remembered that fire. She remembered believing it. It felt like remembering a story about someone else. “Plans change,” she said, her tone flat. “Plans don’t change like that,” he insisted, his polished veneer cracking to reveal the dogged, uncompromising debater he’d always been at his core. “Not for someone like you. What happened?” The real question hung unspoken in the air: *Who happened to you?* She looked down at her hands, at the scar on her wrist. A childhood accident, she’d always said. A lie she’d told for so long she almost believed it herself. She could tell him. She could say the name ‘Evan’ and watch the understanding dawn in his eyes. She could unload the weight of the fear, the desperate midnight flight to London with nothing but a backpack, the months of terrified paranoia, jumping at shadows, certain he would find her. But to say it aloud would make it real in this space, in this new life she’d painstakingly built. It would bring the ghost of that man into The Raven’s Nest, into the one place she felt safe. And she saw the man Tomasz had become—successful, assured, untouched by such grubby, destructive chaos. The gap between them wasn’t just years; it was a canyon of experience. “Life happened, Tomasz,” she said finally, meeting his gaze. Her voice held a steadiness that surprised her. “It’s not a tragedy. I have a roof over my head. I have a job. It’s a quiet life. There’s value in that.” He stared at her, and she saw the moment his lawyer’s mind, trained to find the root cause, the culpable party, gave up. He saw the finality in her eyes. The conversation was closed. The hope in his expression drained away, replaced by a profound, bewildered sadness. He was mourning her. He was sitting right next to her, drinking Silas’s excellent whiskey, and mourning the loss of the brilliant girl from Cardiff. “A quiet life,” he repeated, the words tasting foreign. He knocked back the rest of his drink in one go, the expensive whiskey wasted on the gesture. “I’m at Clayton & Pierce. Commercial law. Mergers and acquisitions.” He said it like a confession, an apology for his own success in the face of her… quiet life. “I’m glad you’re doing well,” she said, and meant it. He stood up, buttoning his expensive coat. The movement was stiff, awkward. The easy confidence he’d entered with was gone. “It was… really good to see you, Aurora.” “You too, Tomasz.” He hesitated, as if he wanted to say something more—an offer, a plea, a way to bridge the impossible divide. Instead, he just gave a curt nod, turned, and walked out of the bar. The door sighed shut behind him, sealing the silence back in place. Rory let out a breath she hadn’t realized she’d been holding. Her whiskey glass was empty. Silas appeared as if summoned, wiping the bar where Tomasz’s glass had been. “Old friend?” he asked, his tone carefully casual. “The past,” Rory corrected softly, her thumb finding the scar on her wrist again. It was a map of a different life, a small, silent testament to the things that break and the things that heal, however quietly.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
71.05% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she said simply [simply]"
1"she said finally [finally]"
2"Rory corrected softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.633
leniency1
rawRatio0.158
effectiveRatio0.158
71.50% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1579
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"utterly"
count2
3
adverb"slowly"
count2
4
adverb"really"
count1
5
adverb"carefully"
count1
6
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
2"utterly"
3"slowly"
4"really"
5"carefully"
6"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
46.17% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1579
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"otherworldly"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"charm"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"navigating"
count1
6
word"silk"
count1
7
word"silence"
count3
8
word"sense of"
count1
9
word"weight"
count2
10
word"oppressive"
count1
11
word"unspoken"
count1
12
word"profound"
count1
13
word"testament"
count1
highlights
0"otherworldly"
1"familiar"
2"stark"
3"charm"
4"scanning"
5"navigating"
6"silk"
7"silence"
8"sense of"
9"weight"
10"oppressive"
11"unspoken"
12"profound"
13"testament"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences105
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords4
totalWords1568
ratio0.003
matches
0"Who happened to you?"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1354
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.89
worstName"Tomasz"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Tomasz"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Carter1
Rory6
Raven2
Nest2
Silas8
Tuesday1
Tamnavulin1
Prague1
Tomasz12
Cardiff2
Evan2
London2
Spymaster1
National1
Museum1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Silas"
3"Tomasz"
4"Evan"
5"Museum"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"Prague"
3"Cardiff"
4"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount7
matches
0"rumble that seemed to emanate from the very foundations of the place"
1"as if looking for a specific table or confirming a memory"
2"assurance that seemed to take up physical space in the quiet bar"
3"as if navigating a minefield, and slid onto the stool"
4"felt like a pathetic joke from another"
5"as if searching for the hidden cameras, for the punchline"
6"felt like remembering a story about som"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1568
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences115
matches
0"remembered that fire"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean39.2
std26.01
cv0.664
sampleLengths
081
1108
226
353
445
572
644
774
812
916
1047
1123
1259
1375
1422
1557
165
1730
1854
1912
2036
216
222
2353
2431
257
2630
2712
2880
2966
3040
3172
3256
3310
3428
353
3646
3729
388
3938
98.58% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences105
matches
0"been forced"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs223
matches
0"was assessing"
1"was mourning"
2"was sitting"
18.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences115
ratio0.043
matches
0"Aurora Carter—Rory to anyone who'd known her longer than a week—pushed open the heavy door to The Raven’s Nest, the familiar scent of old wood, polished brass, and Silas’s good whiskey washing over her."
1"But his eyes, when they finally met hers, were the same—wide, intelligent, and now, utterly bewildered."
2"And she saw the man Tomasz had become—successful, assured, untouched by such grubby, destructive chaos."
3"The gap between them wasn’t just years; it was a canyon of experience."
4"He hesitated, as if he wanted to say something more—an offer, a plea, a way to bridge the impossible divide."
85.40% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1373
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"cool, diesel-scented evening"
adverbCount59
adverbRatio0.04297159504734159
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.016023306627822288
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean13.63
std9.31
cv0.683
sampleLengths
018
134
229
326
429
518
635
721
85
918
1035
113
1215
1327
1430
1526
168
178
187
193
203
2131
222
231
246
2518
2631
2716
2812
297
307
312
3213
3312
3422
359
3614
3723
386
396
4024
4110
4239
4326
4412
458
462
471
4811
4932
41.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3130434782608696
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners36
99.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences101
matches
0"Then his gaze landed on"
1"Such a small word for"
2"Instead, he just gave a"
ratio0.03
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount56
totalSentences101
matches
0"It was a smell that"
1"She slipped onto her usual"
2"He looked up, his hazel"
3"His right hand, the one"
4"he asked, his voice a"
5"He poured two fingers, neat."
6"She offered a tired smile,"
7"He pushed the glass toward"
8"His movements were economical, precise,"
9"She was about to take"
10"He hesitated for a moment,"
11"It was Tomasz."
12"he said, the single word"
13"she replied, her voice thankfully"
14"She gestured to the stool"
15"He approached slowly, as if"
16"He unbuttoned his coat, revealing"
17"He was assessing, filing information"
18"He placed a fresh glass"
19"They’d argued philosophy on the"
ratio0.554
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount93
totalSentences101
matches
0"The green neon sign hummed"
1"Aurora Carter—Rory to anyone who'd"
2"It was a smell that"
3"She slipped onto her usual"
4"The place was quiet for"
5"He looked up, his hazel"
6"His right hand, the one"
7"he asked, his voice a"
8"He poured two fingers, neat."
9"She offered a tired smile,"
10"Silas’s mouth quirked."
11"He pushed the glass toward"
12"His movements were economical, precise,"
13"She was about to take"
14"He hesitated for a moment,"
15"The casual assessment hardened into"
16"Rory felt the air leave"
17"It was Tomasz."
18"Tomasz from Cardiff."
19"Tomasz from the debating society,"
ratio0.921
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
ratio0
26.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Aurora Carter—Rory to anyone who'd known her longer than a week—pushed open the heavy door to The Raven’s Nest, the familiar scent of old wood, polished brass, …"
1"His movements were economical, precise, but she’d learned to notice the slight favouring of his left leg, the ghost of Prague that would never quite leave him."
2"He hesitated for a moment, his eyes adjusting to the dim light, scanning the room as if looking for a specific table or confirming a memory."
3"This man wore a beautifully tailored navy coat, his hair was expertly cut, and he carried himself with an assurance that seemed to take up physical space in the…"
4"He approached slowly, as if navigating a minefield, and slid onto the stool."
5"He looked around the bar again, as if searching for the hidden cameras, for the punchline."
6"He hesitated, as if he wanted to say something more—an offer, a plea, a way to bridge the impossible divide."
7"It was a map of a different life, a small, silent testament to the things that break and the things that heal, however quietly."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"she replied, her voice thankfully steady"
1"Tomasz said, his voice deeper than she remembered, polished smooth"
2"she said, her voice quiet but clear"
3"she said, her tone flat"
4"he repeated, the words tasting foreign"
5"he asked, his tone carefully casual"
6"Rory corrected softly, her thumb finding the scar on her wrist again"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Silas murmured (murmur)"
1"he insisted (insist)"
2"he repeated (repeat)"
3"Rory corrected softly (correct)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.533
leniency1
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.25
67.2219%