Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF3RW6QJSBJXGSR0VHAC6M

Run Details

Duration:
26.4s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest was quieter than usual for a Friday night. Rory leaned against the polished mahogany bar, swirling the ice in her gin and tonic. The green neon sign cast an eerie glow across Silas' face as he wiped down glasses with practiced efficiency. "Busy night?" she asked, breaking the comfortable silence that had settled between them. Silas glanced up, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners. "Not particularly. The usual crowd will filter in later." He set down the glass he'd been polishing and leaned his elbows on the bar. "How's the delivery gig treating you?" Rory shrugged, taking a sip of her drink. "It pays the bills. Yu-Fei's a good boss, even if her mother is a bit... intense." "I've known the Cheung family for years. Mrs. Cheung means well, even if she comes across as demanding." Silas' expression softened. "How are you settling into London life, Rory? It's been what, six months now?" "Almost seven," Rory corrected. She traced the rim of her glass with her finger. "It's been... an adjustment. But I'm managing." "Good." Silas nodded, his gaze drifting to the door. "I'm glad you're finding your footing." Rory followed his line of sight, expecting to see a regular customer. Instead, her breath caught in her throat. Standing in the doorway, backlit by the streetlamps, was a familiar figure. Evan. Time seemed to slow as recognition dawned on his face. His eyes widened, and for a moment, he looked as though he might bolt. But then his expression hardened, and he strode towards the bar with purposeful steps. "Rory," he said, his voice low and dangerous. "I should have known I'd find you here." "Evan," she replied, her voice steady despite the racing of her heart. "What are you doing here?" "I could ask you the same thing." He leaned against the bar, his eyes roving over her face. "You left without a word, without a forwarding address. I had to track you down through your father." Rory's stomach twisted. She hadn't spoken to her father since she'd left Cardiff, hadn't wanted him to know where she was. "What do you want, Evan?" "I want to talk." His gaze flickered to Silas, who had gone very still. "In private." Rory glanced at Silas, who gave her a barely perceptible nod. She turned back to Evan, her jaw set. "Fine. But we're not going anywhere. We talk here, or not at all." Evan's eyes narrowed, but he nodded curtly. "Very well. I'll make it quick." Rory signaled to Silas, who poured her another gin and tonic without a word. She took a fortifying sip before fixing Evan with a level stare. "I know why you're here," she said, her voice low. "You want me to come back. To pretend like nothing happened." Evan's face darkened. "You owe me an explanation, Rory. You can't just walk away from three years together." "I can, and I did." Rory's voice was cold, detached. "What we had is over, Evan. It's been over for a long time." "Is that what you tell yourself?" Evan leaned in closer, his breath hot against her ear. "That it's over? Because I know you, Rory. I know how much you need me." Rory recoiled as if burned. She stood abruptly, her chair scraping against the floor. "I don't need you. I never did." Evan's eyes flashed with anger. "You're just scared. Scared of what we could have been, if you'd just given me a chance." "I'm not scared." Rory's voice was barely a whisper. "I'm free." For a moment, Evan looked as though he might strike her. But then he laughed, a harsh, bitter sound. "You think you're free? You're nothing without me, Rory. Nothing." Rory met his gaze steadily, refusing to flinch. "I'm more without you than I ever was with you." Evan's face contorted with rage. He opened his mouth as if to say something more, but then seemed to think better of it. With a final, venomous look, he turned on his heel and strode out of the bar. Rory watched him go, her hands trembling slightly. She became aware of Silas' presence at her side, his hand resting lightly on her shoulder. "Are you alright?" he asked, his voice low and concerned. Rory nodded, swallowing hard. "I will be." Silas squeezed her shoulder gently before moving away to tend to another customer. Rory took a deep breath, trying to steady herself. She picked up her drink and took a long sip, relishing the burn of the gin as it slid down her throat. She thought of the girl she'd been when she'd first met Evan, young and naive and desperate for love. She thought of the woman she'd become under his influence, small and scared and constantly walking on eggshells. And then she thought of the woman she was now, strong and independent and finally free. It wasn't an easy journey, and there were still scars that would never fully heal. But as she looked around the familiar comfort of the Raven's Nest, surrounded by the warmth of friendship and the promise of a new beginning, Rory knew that she was exactly where she was meant to be. She raised her glass in a silent toast to herself, to the woman she'd become and the woman she was still becoming. And as she took another sip, she felt a sense of peace settle over her, a quiet certainty that no matter what the future held, she would face it head-on, with courage and grace and an unwavering sense of self. The past was the past, and it could stay there. Rory had a new life to live, and she was ready to embrace it with open arms.
created_at"2026-02-17T09:33:10.078109+00:00" 2/17/2026, 9:33:10 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.361
leniency0.722
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
73.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount959
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"lightly"
count1
3
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
2"lightly"
3"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.22% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount959
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"comfortable"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count2
4
word"racing"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"sense of"
count2
10
word"unwavering"
count1
highlights
0"comfortable"
1"silence"
2"traced"
3"familiar"
4"racing"
5"stomach"
6"flickered"
7"whisper"
8"warmth"
9"sense of"
10"unwavering"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"time stood still"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"eyes narrowed"
2"Time seemed to slow"
96.75% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences59
matches
0"d with anger"
1"d with rage"
70.22% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences59
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tend to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords957
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
28.05% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount656
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.44
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Friday1
Silas6
Rory16
Cardiff1
Evan10
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.28
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount957
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"knew that she"
99.05% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean25.86
std12.85
cv0.497
sampleLengths
045
113
240
324
435
521
615
731
81
938
1016
1117
1236
1326
1416
1532
1613
1726
1821
1918
2023
2131
2221
2322
2411
2529
2618
2739
2824
2910
307
3144
3237
3316
3452
3562
3627
99.32% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"was meant"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs127
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences81
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount682
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.03372434017595308
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.017595307917888565
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean11.81
std6.7
cv0.567
sampleLengths
011
115
219
313
410
524
66
78
816
921
1014
114
1210
137
149
156
1612
177
1812
191
2010
2114
2214
238
248
2512
265
2718
2818
293
3018
315
3214
332
3411
358
3613
377
386
3914
4012
4110
4211
433
4415
4510
4613
4716
4815
495
55.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.35802469135802467
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners29
59.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"Instead, her breath caught in"
ratio0.018
70.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences56
matches
0"she asked, breaking the comfortable"
1"He set down the glass"
2"She traced the rim of"
3"His eyes widened, and for"
4"he said, his voice low"
5"she replied, her voice steady"
6"He leaned against the bar,"
7"She hadn't spoken to her"
8"His gaze flickered to Silas,"
9"She turned back to Evan,"
10"She took a fortifying sip"
11"she said, her voice low"
12"She stood abruptly, her chair"
13"He opened his mouth as"
14"She became aware of"
15"he asked, his voice low"
16"She picked up her drink"
17"She thought of the girl"
18"She thought of the woman"
19"It wasn't an easy journey,"
ratio0.375
40.36% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences56
matches
0"The Raven's Nest was quieter"
1"Rory leaned against the polished"
2"The green neon sign cast"
3"she asked, breaking the comfortable"
4"Silas glanced up, his hazel"
5"He set down the glass"
6"Rory shrugged, taking a sip"
7"She traced the rim of"
8"Silas nodded, his gaze drifting"
9"Rory followed his line of"
10"Time seemed to slow as"
11"His eyes widened, and for"
12"he said, his voice low"
13"she replied, her voice steady"
14"He leaned against the bar,"
15"Rory's stomach twisted."
16"She hadn't spoken to her"
17"His gaze flickered to Silas,"
18"Rory glanced at Silas, who"
19"She turned back to Evan,"
ratio0.839
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"Silas nodded, his gaze drifting to the door"
1"he said, his voice low and dangerous"
2"she replied, her voice steady despite the racing of her heart"
3"He leaned, his eyes roving over her face"
4"she said, her voice low"
5"Evan leaned, his breath hot against her ear"
6"She became, his hand resting lightly on her shoulder"
7"he asked, his voice low and concerned"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.056
78.6240%