| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.474 | | leniency | 0.947 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.97% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1151 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1151 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "depths" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "gloom" | | 6 | "echoing" | | 7 | "raced" | | 8 | "racing" | | 9 | "searing" | | 10 | "intensity" | | 11 | "sense of" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "pulse" | | 14 | "resolve" | | 15 | "pounding" | | 16 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "d with warmth" | | 1 | "d with unease" |
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| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1149 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 47.85% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 979 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.04 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Richmond | 3 | | Park | 3 | | Evan | 1 | | Rory | 20 | | Eva | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Isolde | 5 | | Carter | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Evan" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Carter" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.479 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 34.62% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if urging her onward" | | 1 | "seemed suddenly distant and hazy" | | 2 | "it was as if the pendant had fused with her skin, anchoring her to this strange place" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1149 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | |
| 96.65% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 44.19 | | std | 21.58 | | cv | 0.488 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 95 | | 1 | 64 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 67 | | 4 | 63 | | 5 | 70 | | 6 | 74 | | 7 | 60 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 45 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 54 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 42 | | 16 | 58 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 52 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 44 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 39 | | 24 | 40 | | 25 | 67 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 161 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 69.60% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 78 | | ratio | 0.026 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory hesitated, her hand hovering near the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist – a nervous habit she'd developed after leaving Evan." | | 1 | "But one thing was certain – she would have to face it alone, in a world that was far stranger and more dangerous than she had ever imagined." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 998 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.03006012024048096 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0070140280561122245 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 78 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 99.68% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 78 | | mean | 14.73 | | std | 5.88 | | cv | 0.399 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 58.55% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.358974358974359 | | totalSentences | 78 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 92.73% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, glancing over her" | | 1 | "It had been a simple" | | 2 | "She turned back to face" | | 3 | "She took a tentative step" | | 4 | "Her voice sounded small and" | | 5 | "She pressed on, the trees" | | 6 | "She blinked, trying to focus," | | 7 | "She thought of the stories" | | 8 | "Its warmth had become almost" | | 9 | "She took a step back," | | 10 | "It was a woman, tall" | | 11 | "Her eyes were a piercing" | | 12 | "She'd never been to this" | | 13 | "She took another step back," | | 14 | "She had always felt different," | | 15 | "she said, her voice trembling" | | 16 | "She tried to pull away," | | 17 | "she cried out, her voice" | | 18 | "She was no longer just" | | 19 | "She was something more, something" |
| | ratio | 0.318 | |
| 58.48% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped into the grove," | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant, cold against" | | 2 | "She paused, glancing over her" | | 3 | "It had been a simple" | | 4 | "She turned back to face" | | 5 | "The air was thick with" | | 6 | "Rory's skin prickled with unease" | | 7 | "She took a tentative step" | | 8 | "Her voice sounded small and" | | 9 | "Rory hesitated, her hand hovering" | | 10 | "The grove felt wrong, a" | | 11 | "She pressed on, the trees" | | 12 | "The shadows between the oaks" | | 13 | "Figures, pale and insubstantial, flitted" | | 14 | "She blinked, trying to focus," | | 15 | "The ground beneath her feet" | | 16 | "Rory's breath came faster now," | | 17 | "She thought of the stories" | | 18 | "A sudden rustling in the" | | 19 | "The sound came again, closer" |
| | ratio | 0.803 | |
| 75.76% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 71.43% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory hesitated, her hand hovering near the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist – a nervous habit she'd developed after leaving Evan." | | 1 | "The grove felt wrong, a pocket of otherness that didn't belong in the familiar landscape of Richmond Park." | | 2 | "Her eyes were a piercing shade of violet, and they fixed on Rory with an intensity that made her skin crawl." | | 3 | "As if on cue, the pendant flared with a brilliant crimson light, bathing the grove in its eerie glow." | | 4 | "But one thing was certain – she would have to face it alone, in a world that was far stranger and more dangerous than she had ever imagined." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory asked, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "Isolde said, her voice taking on a singsong quality" | | 2 | "Rory demanded, her fear giving way to anger" | | 3 | "she said, her voice trembling" | | 4 | "she cried out, her voice echoing through the trees" | | 5 | "the woman said, her voice dripping with malice" |
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| 44.74% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory demanded (demand)" | | 1 | "she cried out (cry out)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.368 | | leniency | 0.737 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.211 | |