Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF3THVCNJH6V9W2T6GW7R8

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Duration:
28.6s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rory stepped into the grove, her breath catching in her throat as the ancient oaks closed in around her like sentinels. The Heartstone pendant, cold against her skin, suddenly pulsed with warmth, a faint glow emanating from its crimson depths. She paused, glancing over her shoulder at the path she'd taken through Richmond Park. It had been a simple walk from her flat above Silas' bar, a short journey to clear her head after another tense shift at the Golden Empress. But now, the familiar trail seemed to have vanished, swallowed by the encroaching darkness. She turned back to face the grove, her eyes adjusting to the gloom. The air was thick with the scent of damp earth and wildflowers, their petals unnaturally vibrant in the moonlight. Rory's skin prickled with unease as she realized the flowers shouldn't be blooming at this time of year. She took a tentative step forward, the soft loam giving way beneath her boots. "Hello?" Her voice sounded small and fragile in the stillness, echoing back to her from the surrounding trees. "Is anyone there?" No answer came, but the pendant's warmth intensified, as if urging her onward. Rory hesitated, her hand hovering near the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist – a nervous habit she'd developed after leaving Evan. The grove felt wrong, a pocket of otherness that didn't belong in the familiar landscape of Richmond Park. But something had drawn her here, an inexplicable pull that she couldn't ignore. She pressed on, the trees seeming to lean in closer with each step. The shadows between the oaks deepened, and Rory's heart raced as she caught glimpses of movement at the periphery of her vision. Figures, pale and insubstantial, flitted between the trunks like wraiths. She blinked, trying to focus, but they remained just out of sight, taunting her with their elusive presence. The ground beneath her feet began to slope downward, leading her deeper into the grove. Rory's breath came faster now, her mind racing with the possibilities of what might lurk in this strange place. She thought of the stories Eva had told her as children, tales of the Fae and their capricious nature. Could this be one of their hidden realms, a place where the boundaries between worlds grew thin? A sudden rustling in the underbrush made her freeze, her muscles tensing. The sound came again, closer this time, and Rory's hand instinctively reached for the pendant. Its warmth had become almost unbearable, a searing heat that pulsed in time with her racing heart. She took a step back, her heel catching on a gnarled root. As she stumbled, the shadows around her seemed to shift and writhe, coalescing into a vaguely humanoid shape. Rory's scream caught in her throat as the figure stepped into a shaft of moonlight. It was a woman, tall and willowy, with skin like polished ivory and hair that cascaded down her back in a river of silver. Her eyes were a piercing shade of violet, and they fixed on Rory with an intensity that made her skin crawl. "Welcome, child of Earth," the woman said, her voice like the tinkling of bells. "I have been waiting for you." Rory's mind reeled, trying to make sense of the situation. How could this woman have been waiting for her? She'd never been to this place before, had she? The memories of her childhood, of playing in Richmond Park with Eva, seemed suddenly distant and hazy. "Who are you?" Rory asked, her voice barely above a whisper. "What do you want with me?" The woman smiled, a slow, predatory curve of her lips. "I am Isolde, guardian of this grove. And you, dear Rory, have a destiny that lies beyond the veil of your world." Rory's breath caught at the sound of her name. How did this stranger know who she was? She took another step back, her eyes darting around the grove for an escape route. But the trees had closed in even tighter now, their branches intertwining overhead to form a solid canopy of leaves and shadows. "You cannot leave," Isolde said, her voice taking on a singsong quality. "Not until you have fulfilled your purpose." "What purpose?" Rory demanded, her fear giving way to anger. "I don't even know what this place is!" Isolde's smile widened, revealing teeth that were too sharp to be human. "This is a crossroads, child. A place where the threads of fate converge. And you, dear Rory, are the key to unlocking a power that has been dormant for centuries." Rory's hand flew to the pendant, her fingers closing around its now-cool surface. The crimson gem seemed to pulse in time with her heartbeat, a silent affirmation of the woman's words. She had always felt different, out of place in the mundane world of deliveries and part-time jobs. But this? This was beyond anything she could have imagined. "I don't understand," she said, her voice trembling. "What power? What am I supposed to do?" Isolde stepped closer, her movements fluid and graceful. "You will learn, in time. But first, you must prove yourself worthy. The Heartstone has chosen you, but it will test your resolve." As if on cue, the pendant flared with a brilliant crimson light, bathing the grove in its eerie glow. Rory gasped, her hand burning where it touched the gem. She tried to pull away, but it was as if the pendant had fused with her skin, anchoring her to this strange place. "Help me!" she cried out, her voice echoing through the trees. "Someone, please!" But there was no answer, no one to hear her desperate plea. The grove was silent once more, the only sound the pounding of Rory's heart in her ears. Isolde's laughter rang out, a cruel and mocking sound that sent chills down Rory's spine. "You are alone, child," the woman said, her voice dripping with malice. "Alone in this place, and alone in your destiny. Embrace it, or be consumed by it." With those final words, Isolde vanished into the shadows, leaving Rory standing alone in the heart of the grove. The Heartstone's light dimmed, but its warmth remained, a constant reminder of the power that now coursed through her veins. Rory sank to her knees, her mind reeling with the implications of what had just transpired. She was no longer just Rory Carter, part-time delivery person and survivor of an abusive relationship. She was something more, something that defied explanation. And as the first rays of dawn began to filter through the canopy above, Rory knew that her life would never be the same. She had been chosen for a purpose, a destiny that she could not yet comprehend. But one thing was certain – she would have to face it alone, in a world that was far stranger and more dangerous than she had ever imagined.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.474
leniency0.947
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1151
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1151
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"sentinels"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count4
3
word"depths"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count2
5
word"gloom"
count1
6
word"echoing"
count2
7
word"raced"
count1
8
word"racing"
count2
9
word"searing"
count1
10
word"intensity"
count1
11
word"sense of"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
13
word"pulse"
count1
14
word"resolve"
count1
15
word"pounding"
count1
16
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"sentinels"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"depths"
4"familiar"
5"gloom"
6"echoing"
7"raced"
8"racing"
9"searing"
10"intensity"
11"sense of"
12"whisper"
13"pulse"
14"resolve"
15"pounding"
16"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences67
matches
0"d with warmth"
1"d with unease"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences67
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1149
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
47.85% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount979
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.04
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone2
Richmond3
Park3
Evan1
Rory20
Eva2
Fae1
Isolde5
Carter1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Evan"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Isolde"
5"Carter"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.479
windowScore0.5
34.62% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if urging her onward"
1"seemed suddenly distant and hazy"
2"it was as if the pendant had fused with her skin, anchoring her to this strange place"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1149
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"knew that her"
96.65% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean44.19
std21.58
cv0.488
sampleLengths
095
164
221
367
463
570
674
760
820
945
1017
1132
1254
1319
1418
1542
1658
1716
1831
1952
2013
2144
2228
2339
2440
2567
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"been chosen"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs161
matches(empty)
69.60% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences78
ratio0.026
matches
0"Rory hesitated, her hand hovering near the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist – a nervous habit she'd developed after leaving Evan."
1"But one thing was certain – she would have to face it alone, in a world that was far stranger and more dangerous than she had ever imagined."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount998
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.03006012024048096
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.0070140280561122245
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
99.68% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean14.73
std5.88
cv0.399
sampleLengths
021
119
214
327
414
513
619
718
814
918
103
1113
1223
1318
1413
1513
1622
1710
1818
1915
2019
2119
2217
2312
2415
2517
2612
2718
2815
2924
3021
3114
326
3310
349
359
3617
3711
386
3910
4022
419
428
4315
4422
4512
467
4710
488
4912
58.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.358974358974359
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
92.73% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences66
matches
0"She paused, glancing over her"
1"It had been a simple"
2"She turned back to face"
3"She took a tentative step"
4"Her voice sounded small and"
5"She pressed on, the trees"
6"She blinked, trying to focus,"
7"She thought of the stories"
8"Its warmth had become almost"
9"She took a step back,"
10"It was a woman, tall"
11"Her eyes were a piercing"
12"She'd never been to this"
13"She took another step back,"
14"She had always felt different,"
15"she said, her voice trembling"
16"She tried to pull away,"
17"she cried out, her voice"
18"She was no longer just"
19"She was something more, something"
ratio0.318
58.48% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences66
matches
0"Rory stepped into the grove,"
1"The Heartstone pendant, cold against"
2"She paused, glancing over her"
3"It had been a simple"
4"She turned back to face"
5"The air was thick with"
6"Rory's skin prickled with unease"
7"She took a tentative step"
8"Her voice sounded small and"
9"Rory hesitated, her hand hovering"
10"The grove felt wrong, a"
11"She pressed on, the trees"
12"The shadows between the oaks"
13"Figures, pale and insubstantial, flitted"
14"She blinked, trying to focus,"
15"The ground beneath her feet"
16"Rory's breath came faster now,"
17"She thought of the stories"
18"A sudden rustling in the"
19"The sound came again, closer"
ratio0.803
75.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"As if on cue, the"
ratio0.015
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Rory hesitated, her hand hovering near the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist – a nervous habit she'd developed after leaving Evan."
1"The grove felt wrong, a pocket of otherness that didn't belong in the familiar landscape of Richmond Park."
2"Her eyes were a piercing shade of violet, and they fixed on Rory with an intensity that made her skin crawl."
3"As if on cue, the pendant flared with a brilliant crimson light, bathing the grove in its eerie glow."
4"But one thing was certain – she would have to face it alone, in a world that was far stranger and more dangerous than she had ever imagined."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Rory asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
1"Isolde said, her voice taking on a singsong quality"
2"Rory demanded, her fear giving way to anger"
3"she said, her voice trembling"
4"she cried out, her voice echoing through the trees"
5"the woman said, her voice dripping with malice"
44.74% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Rory demanded (demand)"
1"she cried out (cry out)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.737
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.211
74.3683%