Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF46A001RXY5CA1KSXF842

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Duration:
31.5s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest was exactly as she remembered it, down to the way the green neon sign buzzed faintly in the damp London air. Rory pushed through the heavy wooden door, the familiar scent of whiskey and old wood wrapping around her like a blanket. She'd been delivering to Silas for three months now, but this was the first time she'd actually stepped inside as a customer. The bar was nearly empty at this hour, just a few regulars hunched over their drinks. Silas stood behind the counter, polishing glasses with the same methodical precision he brought to everything. His grey-streaked auburn hair caught the light as he turned, and for a moment, Rory thought she saw recognition flicker across his face. "Silas?" she said, surprised by how small her voice sounded. He looked up, and the polishing cloth stilled in his hands. "Aurora Carter. I'll be damned." He set the glass down carefully. "Or should I call you Rory now?" She moved closer, noting the slight limp in his left leg as he came around the bar. "Rory's fine. It's been a long time." "Thirteen years," he said, pulling her into an embrace that felt both foreign and familiar. "You look exactly the same. Well, except for the hair. You've grown it out." Rory ran a hand through her shoulder-length black hair self-consciously. "I was thinking about cutting it again, actually." "Don't you dare." Silas released her and gestured to a booth in the corner. "Sit. Tell me everything. Last I heard, you were studying Pre-Law at Cardiff." She settled into the worn leather seat, suddenly aware of how much had changed since they'd last spoken. "I dropped out. After everything with Evan..." She trailed off, not wanting to revisit that particular chapter. Silas's expression darkened. "That bastard. I should have known something was wrong when you stopped coming around." "I needed to get away. Eva convinced me to move to London, and here I am." Rory shrugged, trying to make it sound more casual than it felt. "I'm delivering for Golden Empress now. It pays the bills." "Delivering?" He looked genuinely surprised. "But you were always so driven. So smart." "Life happens," she said, a little more sharply than intended. "Not everyone gets to retire early and open a bar, Silas." The words hung between them, and Rory immediately regretted them. Silas had been her father's closest friend, had practically been an uncle to her growing up. But thirteen years was a long time, and people changed. "I'm sorry," she said quickly. "That was uncalled for." "No, it's fine." Silas leaned back, studying her with those sharp hazel eyes that had always seemed to see right through her. "I suppose I have changed. The knee injury in Prague saw to that." "Prague?" Rory frowned. "I thought you retired from... whatever it was you did." "Retired is one word for it." He smiled wryly. "Let's just say I'm no longer running operations, but I still have contacts. The bar's a good front." Rory's mind raced, trying to reconcile this new information with her memories of Silas as a mysterious but benevolent presence in her childhood. "You were in intelligence? Like, MI6?" "Something like that." He waved a hand dismissively. "Ancient history now. Tell me about you. What's this I hear about an abusive ex?" The question caught her off guard. "How did you—" "Word gets around, especially in my line of work." Silas leaned forward, his voice lowering. "Rory, if you're in trouble, you need to tell me. I might not be in the field anymore, but I can still help." She wanted to accept his offer, to let herself fall back into the safety of his protection like she had when she was a teenager. But she'd spent the last two years learning to stand on her own two feet. "I'm not in trouble. Not anymore. Evan's gone, and I've got Eva looking out for me." "Eva's a good kid," Silas acknowledged. "But she's not equipped to handle someone like Evan if he comes back around." "He won't." Rory's voice was firmer than she felt. "I made sure of that." The unspoken implication hung in the air. Silas's eyes narrowed slightly, but he didn't press. Instead, he reached across the table and covered her hand with his own. "I'm glad you're safe. Truly. But if you ever need anything, anything at all, you call me. Day or night." "I will." She squeezed his hand, feeling the silver signet ring he always wore press against her skin. "I've missed you, Silas. I'm sorry I disappeared on you." "You were a kid dealing with adult problems." He squeezed back. "I should have reached out sooner. Kept tabs on you." "You had your own life." Rory pulled her hand back, suddenly needing the distance. "So, the bar. How did you end up here?" Silas settled back, and Rory could see the way he was assessing her, trying to determine how much to reveal. "After Prague, I knew I couldn't go back to fieldwork. Too many injuries, too many close calls. But I still had contacts, still had information that people wanted. Opening the bar gave me a legitimate way to maintain those connections without raising suspicion." "And the back room?" Rory nodded toward the bookshelf that concealed the secret meeting space she'd discovered during one of her deliveries. "That's for private consultations." His lips twitched in a half-smile. "Nothing illegal, if that's what you're thinking. Just... discreet." Rory thought about the coded conversations she'd overheard, the way certain customers always asked for Silas personally. "I always knew there was something different about you. Even when I was little, you were never quite like the other adults." "I tried to protect you from all that." Silas's expression grew serious. "Your father would have killed me if he knew I was filling your head with stories of my adventures." "Dad never understood why you left the family business." Rory's father had been a barrister, like she'd originally planned to become. "He thought you were wasting your potential." "Your father and I saw the world very differently." Silas's tone made it clear this was not a topic he wished to discuss further. "But enough about me. What are your plans now? You can't deliver Chinese food forever." The question stung more than it should have. Rory looked down at her hands, at the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a childhood accident that had required Silas to drive her to the emergency room. "I don't know. I haven't really thought that far ahead." "Bullshit." Silas's voice was gentle but firm. "You always have a plan, Aurora. Even when you were six years old, you had a five-year plan for your lemonade stand empire." She couldn't help but smile at the memory. "I'd forgotten about that." "I haven't." He reached across the table again, tilting her chin up so she had to meet his gaze. "You're better than this, Rory. You're surviving, but I know you. You're meant to be thriving." The intensity of his belief in her was almost overwhelming. Rory felt tears prick at her eyes and blinked them back. "It's not that simple, Silas. I've got baggage, responsibilities. Eva depends on me, and I can barely cover my half of the rent as it is." "Then let me help." He pulled a business card from his pocket and slid it across the table. "This isn't charity. Think of it as an investment. I've got a contact who needs someone with your particular set of skills. Smart, resourceful, able to think on their feet." Rory picked up the card, noting the elegant script that simply read "Malcolm Reeve" and a phone number. "What kind of skills?" "The kind that can't be taught in law school." Silas's eyes twinkled with mischief. "Though I'm sure you would have excelled there too." She tucked the card into her pocket, feeling the weight of possibility settle in her chest. "I'll think about it." "That's all I ask." Silas stood, offering her his hand. "Now, how about that drink? My treat, for old times' sake." Rory let him pull her to her feet, suddenly exhausted by the emotional weight of the conversation. "Just a soda, please. I'm still on the clock." "Coming right up." He guided her to the bar, his hand warm and steady at her elbow. "You know, you never did tell me why you started going by Rory instead of Aurora." She settled onto a barstool, the vinyl creaking beneath her. "Aurora was his favorite name for me. After everything, I couldn't stand to hear it." Silas was quiet for a moment as he poured her drink. "I'm sorry, Rory. I truly am. No one should have to go through what you did." "Thanks." The word felt inadequate, but it was all she could manage. He set the glass in front of her, his fingers brushing hers as he passed it over. "You're stronger than you know. And you're not alone anymore. I'm here, and I'm not going anywhere." Rory wrapped her hands around the cold glass, letting the condensation seep into her skin. For the first time in years, she felt something she hadn't allowed herself to feel since leaving Cardiff: hope. Maybe it wasn't too late to become the person she was meant to be. Maybe some bridges, even those burned by time and circumstance, could still be rebuilt.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
85.06% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags31
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"He looked genuinely [genuinely]"
1"she said quickly [quickly]"
2"Silas leaned back [back]"
3"He smiled wryly [wryly]"
4"He squeezed back [back]"
dialogueSentences77
tagDensity0.403
leniency0.805
rawRatio0.161
effectiveRatio0.13
65.26% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1583
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count3
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
4
adverb"slightly"
count1
5
adverb"truly"
count2
6
adverb"very"
count1
7
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"suddenly"
2"sharply"
3"quickly"
4"slightly"
5"truly"
6"very"
7"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.10% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1583
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"methodical"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"raced"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count1
5
word"implication"
count1
6
word"coded"
count1
7
word"potential"
count1
8
word"intensity"
count1
9
word"weight"
count2
highlights
0"familiar"
1"methodical"
2"flicker"
3"raced"
4"unspoken"
5"implication"
6"coded"
7"potential"
8"intensity"
9"weight"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"couldn't help but"
count1
2
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"couldn't help but smile"
2"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences114
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1576
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount841
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.26
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
London1
Silas19
Rory18
Cardiff1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.37
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1576
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
86.27% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean29.19
std13.19
cv0.452
sampleLengths
067
155
210
329
424
529
618
727
835
917
1038
1113
1221
1336
149
1535
1613
1727
1829
1923
209
2138
2256
2320
2414
2548
2628
2721
2823
2963
3022
3119
3239
3331
3428
3539
3646
3730
3812
3935
4047
4148
4222
4323
4420
4521
4626
4733
4825
4927
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"was meant"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs164
matches
0"was assessing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences114
ratio0.009
matches
0"Rory looked down at her hands, at the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a childhood accident that had required Silas to drive her to the emergency room."
84.67% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount847
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.047225501770956316
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.023612750885478158
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean13.82
std6.67
cv0.482
sampleLengths
024
121
222
316
416
523
610
711
811
97
1017
117
1215
1314
1410
158
1614
1713
1818
1917
203
2114
2228
2310
245
258
2610
2711
2810
2916
3010
315
324
3322
3413
353
3610
379
3818
3923
406
418
4215
436
443
4515
4623
4725
4815
4916
61.99% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.40350877192982454
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners46
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences67
matches
0"Instead, he reached across the"
1"Maybe it wasn't too late"
2"Maybe some bridges, even those"
ratio0.045
70.75% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences67
matches
0"She'd been delivering to Silas"
1"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
2"she said, surprised by how"
3"He looked up, and the"
4"He set the glass down"
5"She moved closer, noting the"
6"he said, pulling her into"
7"She settled into the worn"
8"She trailed off, not wanting"
9"He looked genuinely surprised"
10"she said, a little more"
11"she said quickly"
12"He smiled wryly"
13"He waved a hand dismissively"
14"She wanted to accept his"
15"She squeezed his hand, feeling"
16"He squeezed back"
17"His lips twitched in a"
18"She couldn't help but smile"
19"He reached across the table"
ratio0.373
4.78% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences67
matches
0"The Raven's Nest was exactly"
1"Rory pushed through the heavy"
2"She'd been delivering to Silas"
3"The bar was nearly empty"
4"Silas stood behind the counter,"
5"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
6"she said, surprised by how"
7"He looked up, and the"
8"He set the glass down"
9"She moved closer, noting the"
10"he said, pulling her into"
11"Rory ran a hand through"
12"Silas released her and gestured"
13"She settled into the worn"
14"She trailed off, not wanting"
15"Silas's expression darkened."
16"Rory shrugged, trying to make"
17"He looked genuinely surprised"
18"she said, a little more"
19"The words hung between them,"
ratio0.91
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Rory looked down at her hands, at the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a childhood accident that had required Silas to drive her to the emergency ro…"
60.48% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags31
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"She trailed, not wanting to revisit that particular chapter"
1"Rory shrugged, trying to make it sound more casual than it felt"
2"Silas leaned, his voice lowering"
3"He guided, his hand warm and steady at her elbow"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Silas acknowledged (acknowledge)"
dialogueSentences77
tagDensity0.065
leniency0.13
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.026
81.6004%