Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF4D22XGDYZD1VE4NKEX37

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Duration:
1m
Cost:
$0.140520

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The ancient oaks of Richmond Park loomed like sentinels in the darkness, their gnarled branches reaching toward a moonless sky. Aurora's breath misted in the October air as she picked her way through the underbrush, following the crude map Eva had sketched on a napkin three hours earlier. The pendant against her chest pulsed with unusual warmth, its crimson glow barely visible through the thin fabric of her shirt. She shouldn't have come alone. Eva had warned her to wait until morning, to bring someone with her, but the message had been clear: midnight at the grove, come alone, or never learn the truth about the Heartstone. After weeks of dead ends and cryptic warnings, Aurora couldn't let this opportunity slip away. Her phone's flashlight carved a narrow tunnel through the darkness. According to Eva's map, the standing stones should be just ahead, marking the entrance to what locals called the Fae Grove. Most dismissed it as superstition, a bit of folklore to entertain tourists, but Aurora had learned to take such stories seriously since arriving in London. A branch snapped somewhere behind her. She froze, sweeping the light in a wide arc. Nothing but trees and shadows that seemed to shift and writhe at the edge of the beam. Just a deer, she told herself, though she'd seen no deer on her trek through the park. The usual nighttime sounds—owls, rustling leaves, distant traffic—had fallen away, leaving only the crunch of frost beneath her boots and the thunder of her own heartbeat. The pendant grew warmer. Through a gap in the trees, she spotted them: three oak standing stones arranged in a rough triangle, their surfaces carved with symbols that seemed to move in the flashlight's glare. The air here felt different, thicker, as if she were pushing through invisible curtains. The crescent scar on her left wrist began to ache, a phantom pain she hadn't felt since childhood. Aurora stepped between the stones. The world tilted. Her stomach lurched as if she'd missed a step going downstairs, and when she steadied herself, the darkness had changed. It was still night, but the quality of it felt wrong—too deep, too absolute, as if the sky had been painted over with pitch. The flashlight's beam seemed weaker here, barely penetrating more than a few feet ahead. Wildflowers carpeted the ground, their petals luminescent in the dark—blues and purples and colors that had no names. Their perfume was cloying, almost metallic, nothing like the sweet fragrance she'd expected. The pendant was burning now, not quite painful but impossible to ignore. "Hello?" Her voice came out as a whisper, swallowed immediately by the oppressive silence. She cleared her throat and tried again. "I received your message. I'm here." Nothing. No wind, no insects, no response. Just her own breathing, too loud in the stillness. She moved deeper into the grove, following a path that hadn't been there moments before—or perhaps it had always been there, waiting. The wildflowers seemed to lean away from her steps, and she could have sworn she heard them whispering, a susurrus of sound just below the threshold of understanding. Time felt strange here. Had she been walking for minutes or hours? Her phone had no signal, and the clock face showed nothing but blinking dashes. The path curved ahead, and she followed it, drawn by something she couldn't name. The pendant's heat had spread across her chest, a warning or invitation she couldn't decipher. A figure stood in the clearing ahead. Aurora's hand went to the pepper spray in her jacket pocket, though she suspected it would be useless here. The figure didn't move, didn't breathe, stood perfectly still in a way that made her skin crawl. As she approached, her light revealed more details: a woman in a dress that might have been white once but was now the color of old bone, her back turned, her hair hanging in dark sheets to her waist. "Are you the one who sent the message?" The figure's head began to turn, slowly, impossibly slowly, and Aurora realized with mounting horror that it was turning too far, the neck rotating past any human limit. She stumbled backward as the face came into view—her own face, but wrong, the features slightly off as if reflected in disturbed water. The eyes were black holes, depthless and hungry. The thing that wore her face smiled, and its mouth opened wider than any mouth should, revealing row after row of needle-sharp teeth spiraling down into darkness. No sound emerged, but Aurora felt the scream in her bones, a vibration that threatened to shake her apart. She ran. The path that had been so clear moments before twisted and branched, splitting into a dozen directions. Behind her, she could hear footsteps—not running but walking with terrible patience, knowing there was nowhere for her to go. The wildflowers caught at her ankles, their stems stronger than they should be, trying to hold her in place. Left, right, straight—every choice looked the same. The pendant burned against her skin, and she grabbed it, ready to tear it off, when its light suddenly flared. The crimson glow cut through the darkness like a blade, and for a moment, she saw the grove as it truly was. The trees were wrong. They weren't trees at all but towering figures draped in bark and shadow, their branch-arms reaching down toward her. The wildflowers were eyes, thousands of unblinking eyes carpeting the ground, watching her stumble and flee. And there were other things moving in the darkness, shapes that her mind refused to process, geometries that hurt to perceive. The light faded, and darkness crashed back. But now she knew which way to run—toward the pain. The pendant's heat was agony, but it was real, anchoring her to herself, to the world she knew. She followed that pain like a lifeline, crashing through undergrowth that grabbed and tore, past whispers that promised terrible truths if she would only stop and listen. The standing stones appeared ahead, solid and real and beautiful in their mundane existence. She dove between them, felt that sickening lurch again, and collapsed onto the frost-covered grass of Richmond Park. Real grass. Real trees. Real darkness lit by distant streetlamps and stars. Behind her, something howled—a sound like wind through broken glass, like children laughing underwater, like her own voice screaming her name. She scrambled to her feet and ran, not stopping until she reached the park gates, not looking back until she stood under the harsh fluorescent lights of a 24-hour Tesco. Her phone showed 12:07 AM. Seven minutes. She'd been in the grove for seven minutes. The pendant had gone cold and dark against her chest. When she pulled it out to examine it, she saw that the crimson stone had cracked down the middle, a hairline fracture that hadn't been there before. Through the crack, something moved—a darkness deeper than the stone itself, watching her with patient malevolence. Aurora's hands shook as she tucked the pendant back under her shirt. Whatever truth she'd sought in the grove, she'd found something else instead. Something that knew her name, wore her face, and waited in the spaces between worlds. The automatic doors of the Tesco slid open, welcoming her into the bright, banal safety of fluorescent lights and security cameras. She stepped inside, but couldn't shake the feeling that she'd brought something back with her, a shadow that would follow her home, patient and hungry and wearing her own smile. The crescent scar on her wrist had begun to bleed.
total_cost0.14052

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1279
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"slowly"
2"slightly"
3"suddenly"
4"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1279
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"lurched"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"oppressive"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"lurch"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"sentinels"
2"pulsed"
3"warmth"
4"stomach"
5"lurched"
6"whisper"
7"oppressive"
8"silence"
9"footsteps"
10"lurch"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
54.67% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences81
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1264
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount1249
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.64
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
October1
Eva3
Heartstone1
Aurora8
Fae1
Grove1
London1
Tesco2
Real3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Aurora"
2"Tesco"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"October"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
5"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
5.07% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"shadows that seemed to shift and writhe at the edge of the beam"
1"symbols that seemed to move in the flashlight's glare"
2"seemed weaker here, barely penetrating more than a few feet ahead"
3"appeared ahead solid and real and beautiful in their mundane existence"
41.77% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.582
wordCount1264
matches
0"not quite painful but impossible to ignore"
1"not running but walking with terrible patience, knowing there was nowhere fo"
86.35% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences83
matches
0"followed that pain"
1"saw that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean42.13
std22.57
cv0.536
sampleLengths
069
153
256
375
44
563
65
761
843
927
1016
1150
1255
137
1475
158
1659
1746
182
1956
2049
2160
2262
2344
2451
2515
2653
2739
2851
2910
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"been painted"
79.34% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs221
matches
0"were pushing"
1"was cloying"
2"was burning"
3"was turning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences83
ratio0.12
matches
0"The usual nighttime sounds—owls, rustling leaves, distant traffic—had fallen away, leaving only the crunch of frost beneath her boots and the thunder of her own heartbeat."
1"It was still night, but the quality of it felt wrong—too deep, too absolute, as if the sky had been painted over with pitch."
2"Wildflowers carpeted the ground, their petals luminescent in the dark—blues and purples and colors that had no names."
3"She moved deeper into the grove, following a path that hadn't been there moments before—or perhaps it had always been there, waiting."
4"She stumbled backward as the face came into view—her own face, but wrong, the features slightly off as if reflected in disturbed water."
5"Behind her, she could hear footsteps—not running but walking with terrible patience, knowing there was nowhere for her to go."
6"Left, right, straight—every choice looked the same."
7"But now she knew which way to run—toward the pain."
8"Behind her, something howled—a sound like wind through broken glass, like children laughing underwater, like her own voice screaming her name."
9"Through the crack, something moved—a darkness deeper than the stone itself, watching her with patient malevolence."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1264
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.03560126582278481
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.010284810126582278
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean15.23
std8.53
cv0.56
sampleLengths
020
128
221
35
433
515
610
721
825
96
109
1117
1217
1326
144
1531
1614
1718
185
193
2020
2124
2214
2318
2413
2512
2614
277
286
291
306
319
3222
3328
344
358
3614
3714
3815
397
4019
4117
4239
438
4428
4523
468
4727
4819
492
54.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3855421686746988
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners32
87.72% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences76
matches
0"Just a deer, she told"
1"Just her own breathing, too"
ratio0.026
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences76
matches
0"She shouldn't have come alone."
1"Her phone's flashlight carved a"
2"She froze, sweeping the light"
3"Her stomach lurched as if"
4"It was still night, but"
5"Their perfume was cloying, almost"
6"Her voice came out as"
7"She cleared her throat and"
8"She moved deeper into the"
9"Her phone had no signal,"
10"She stumbled backward as the"
11"They weren't trees at all"
12"She followed that pain like"
13"She dove between them, felt"
14"She scrambled to her feet"
15"Her phone showed 12:07 AM."
16"She'd been in the grove"
17"She stepped inside, but couldn't"
ratio0.237
78.42% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences76
matches
0"The ancient oaks of Richmond"
1"Aurora's breath misted in the"
2"The pendant against her chest"
3"She shouldn't have come alone."
4"Eva had warned her to"
5"Her phone's flashlight carved a"
6"A branch snapped somewhere behind"
7"She froze, sweeping the light"
8"Nothing but trees and shadows"
9"The usual nighttime sounds—owls, rustling"
10"The pendant grew warmer."
11"The air here felt different,"
12"The crescent scar on her"
13"Aurora stepped between the stones."
14"The world tilted."
15"Her stomach lurched as if"
16"It was still night, but"
17"The flashlight's beam seemed weaker"
18"Wildflowers carpeted the ground, their"
19"Their perfume was cloying, almost"
ratio0.763
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
15.31% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The air here felt different, thicker, as if she were pushing through invisible curtains."
1"It was still night, but the quality of it felt wrong—too deep, too absolute, as if the sky had been painted over with pitch."
2"She moved deeper into the grove, following a path that hadn't been there moments before—or perhaps it had always been there, waiting."
3"As she approached, her light revealed more details: a woman in a dress that might have been white once but was now the color of old bone, her back turned, her h…"
4"She stumbled backward as the face came into view—her own face, but wrong, the features slightly off as if reflected in disturbed water."
5"The thing that wore her face smiled, and its mouth opened wider than any mouth should, revealing row after row of needle-sharp teeth spiraling down into darknes…"
6"The path that had been so clear moments before twisted and branched, splitting into a dozen directions."
7"She followed that pain like a lifeline, crashing through undergrowth that grabbed and tore, past whispers that promised terrible truths if she would only stop a…"
8"Something that knew her name, wore her face, and waited in the spaces between worlds."
9"She stepped inside, but couldn't shake the feeling that she'd brought something back with her, a shadow that would follow her home, patient and hungry and weari…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
77.8936%