Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF4Z7XGSFEEFEGG329G8D8

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Duration:
7.6s
Cost:
$0.000281
Provider:
Clarifai

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon signoutside Silas’s bar blinked a sluggish, familiar rhythm against the Soho drizzle, casting a sickly glow on the wet pavement. Inside, the air hung thick with the scent of aged oak and something sharper, like ozone and old secrets. Aurora Carter, or Rory, as her friends still called her, pushed through the heavy oak door, the weight of her own shadow stretching long behind her. She’d been avoiding this place, avoiding him, for months. The scar on her left wrist, a faint crescent moon, itched beneath her sleeve cuff, a constant reminder of the accident that had nearly ended her childhood, and the choices that had followed. Silas Blackwood, leaning against the polished mahogany bar, watched her enter. His hazel eyes, sharp as ever beneath the grey-streaked auburn hair, narrowed slightly. The slight limp in his left leg was more pronounced today, a ghost of the Prague operation that had cost him his career and his freedom. He straightened, the movement fluid despite the injury, and pushed off the bar. “Rory. Didn’t expect to see you here. Or anywhere, really.” His voice was low, gravelly, the timbre of a man who had spent decades listening to whispers in dark corners. Rory’s breath hitched. The years hadn’t been kind to her either. The sharp intelligence that had once made her a force to be reckoned with was now tempered by a wariness that made her eyes dart around the room. She saw the signet ring on his right hand, the silver glinting in the bar’s dim light, a relic of a life she’d only ever glimpsed from afar. “Silas. Long time.” Her voice was cool, practiced. “I heard the bar’s still standing. Good for you.” She didn’t mention the part-time job she’d taken at Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress, delivering dumplings to Soho’s late-night crowd, the flat above his bar a constant reminder of the life she’d fled. He chuckled, a dry sound. “Still standing, still serving secrets. Though the dumplings are better at the Empress, I’ll grant you that.” He gestured to a stool. “Sit. Have a drink. It’s been… years.” The unspoken question hung heavy: *What are you doing here?* Rory slid onto the stool, the worn leather creaking. She ordered a whiskey, neat, her fingers steady as she held the glass. “Just passing through. London’s changed. So have you.” She looked at him, really looked. The grey in his hair was more pronounced, the lines around his eyes deeper, etched by time and perhaps regret. The limp was a constant companion now. “You look… older.” “Age happens,” he said, pouring himself a scotch. “You look… different. More… guarded.” He studied her, noting the straight black hair now pulled back severely, the bright blue eyes that held a world of calculation. The scar on her wrist was more visible beneath the rolled sleeve. “You’ve changed, Rory. More than just the years.” She took a slow sip of her whiskey, the burn a familiar comfort. “I had to.” The words were simple, but the weight behind them was immense. The abusive ex, Evan. The flight to London. The life she’d left behind, the person she’d been, felt like a ghost. “I needed to disappear. To become someone else.” Silas nodded, understanding flickering in his eyes. “I know that feeling.” He leaned forward, his voice dropping to a confidential murmur. “Prague. It changed me too. Cost me everything.” He tapped the signet ring. “This is a reminder. Of what I lost. And what I can never get back.” The conversation drifted, touching on old haunts, shared memories that now felt like echoes in a canyon. The hidden back room behind the bookshelf, a sanctuary for their clandestine meetings, felt like a lifetime away. Rory spoke of her work, her flat, the quiet desperation of her new life. Silas spoke of the bar, the network of contacts, the shadows he still moved in. The unspoken regret hung between them like a thick fog: the regret of paths not taken, of opportunities missed, of a friendship that had frayed at the edges under the weight of time and secrets. As the night deepened, the bar’s green neon sign pulsed a final, fading glow. Rory drained her glass, the ice clinking softly. “I should go.” Her voice was final, leaving no room for argument. “Thanks for… seeing me.” The words felt hollow, even to her. Silas watched her rise, the limp more noticeable as she moved towards the door. He saw the scar, the guarded eyes, the woman she had become. “Take care, Rory.” His voice was softer now, devoid of its usual authority. “Be careful who you become.” She paused at the threshold, looking back at him. The bar’s dim light caught the silver signet ring on his hand, a stark contrast to the grey in his hair. “I am careful, Silas. Every single day.” And with that, she was gone, the door closing softly behind her, leaving the green neon sign to blink its lonely vigil over the Soho night, and the weight of unspoken regret settling once more over the Raven’s Nest.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"the door closing softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.1
70.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount857
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count2
2
adverb"softly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount857
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"weight"
count4
2
word"reminder"
count3
3
word"glinting"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count3
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"echoes"
count1
7
word"sanctuary"
count1
8
word"clandestine"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"stark"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"weight"
2"reminder"
3"glinting"
4"unspoken"
5"etched"
6"echoes"
7"sanctuary"
8"clandestine"
9"pulsed"
10"stark"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences50
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences50
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences55
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords5
totalWords853
ratio0.006
matches
0"What are you doing here?"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount721
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.69
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Silas5
Soho3
Carter1
Rory5
Blackwood1
Prague1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
Evan1
London1
Raven1
Nest1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Blackwood"
4"Yu-Fei"
5"Cheung"
6"Empress"
7"Evan"
8"Raven"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a ghost"
1"felt like echoes in a canyon"
2"felt like a lifetime away"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount853
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
60.68% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs12
mean71.08
std25.76
cv0.362
sampleLengths
0110
193
2116
344
466
555
656
749
899
945
1044
1176
91.23% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences50
matches
0"been, felt"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs107
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount725
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.04
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.013793103448275862
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences55
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences55
mean15.51
std9.4
cv0.606
sampleLengths
023
119
226
39
433
511
613
726
813
930
103
118
1228
1328
148
1541
165
1722
1817
199
2013
2114
2220
237
243
258
2627
2712
288
2913
3014
314
324
3313
348
357
3614
3713
3815
3917
4018
4114
4215
4335
4414
458
4612
4711
4814
4912
49.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.36363636363636365
totalSentences55
uniqueOpeners20
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences50
matches
0"She’d been avoiding this place,"
1"His hazel eyes, sharp as"
2"He straightened, the movement fluid"
3"His voice was low, gravelly,"
4"She saw the signet ring"
5"Her voice was cool, practiced"
6"She didn’t mention the part-time"
7"He chuckled, a dry sound."
8"He gestured to a stool"
9"She ordered a whiskey, neat,"
10"She looked at him, really"
11"he said, pouring himself a"
12"He studied her, noting the"
13"She took a slow sip"
14"He leaned forward, his voice"
15"He tapped the signet ring"
16"Her voice was final, leaving"
17"He saw the scar, the"
18"His voice was softer now,"
19"She paused at the threshold,"
ratio0.4
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences50
matches
0"The green neon signoutside Silas’s"
1"Aurora Carter, or Rory, as"
2"She’d been avoiding this place,"
3"The scar on her left"
4"Silas Blackwood, leaning against the"
5"His hazel eyes, sharp as"
6"The slight limp in his"
7"He straightened, the movement fluid"
8"His voice was low, gravelly,"
9"Rory’s breath hitched."
10"The years hadn’t been kind"
11"The sharp intelligence that had"
12"She saw the signet ring"
13"Her voice was cool, practiced"
14"She didn’t mention the part-time"
15"He chuckled, a dry sound."
16"He gestured to a stool"
17"The unspoken question hung heavy:"
18"Rory slid onto the stool,"
19"She ordered a whiskey, neat,"
ratio0.94
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The scar on her left wrist, a faint crescent moon, itched beneath her sleeve cuff, a constant reminder of the accident that had nearly ended her childhood, and …"
1"The slight limp in his left leg was more pronounced today, a ghost of the Prague operation that had cost him his career and his freedom."
2"The unspoken regret hung between them like a thick fog: the regret of paths not taken, of opportunities missed, of a friendship that had frayed at the edges und…"
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He leaned, his voice dropping to a confidential murmur"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She didn’t (do)"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.1
75.3669%