Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF5272QC8R8CYY2ZHDFPDV

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Duration:
50.7s
Cost:
$0.000984
Provider:
AtlasCloud

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park after midnight held a damp, earthy chill that seeped through Aurora Carter’s jacket. The city’s orange glow was a smudge against the clouds to the east, but here, among the ancient oaks, the darkness was nearly absolute. She’d come on a delivery for Yu-Fei, a late-night order of lo mein and prawn crackers to an address that didn’t, according to her phone’s map, actually exist. The client had texted specific, strange instructions: follow the deer track west of the Pembroke Lodge car park until you see the three birches leaning together like gossips. Then go north. She’d done it. Now, standing before a circle of towering, moss-clad standing stones that looked more like petrified oak trees than rock, she felt the first true prickle of unease. This was the Fae Grove. Silas had muttered about it once, a warning over a polished bar, his eyes serious. *Don’t go looking for it, Rory. Time gets funny there.* But here it was. The delivery bag was a light, greasy weight in her hand. The client had promised a hundred-pound tip, cash. After rent, after sending a little something to her mum, it was too much to ignore. She took a steadying breath, the cool-headed logic she prided herself on asserting control. *In and out. Leave the food on the central flat stone, they said. Don’t wait.* She stepped between two of the stones. The temperature shifted instantly, from autumn chill to a soft, spring-like warmth that carried the cloying perfume of a thousand flowers. Wildflowers, impossibly vibrant, bloomed in velvety profusion across the clearing, defying the October night outside. The air itself seemed to thrum with a silent, living energy. Wrong. This was all wrong. The map pin had been a lure. Rory set her jaw and walked forward, her trainers sinking silently into thick moss. In the centre of the clearing was a low, flat altar stone, pale in the gloom. The only light came from a feeble moon filtering through a canopy that looked… different. The branches seemed lower, more twisted, than they had from outside the circle. She placed the paper bag carefully on the stone. “Delivery,” she said, her voice swallowed by the dense air. No one answered. Of course no one answered. She was turning to leave when the Heartstone pendant, hidden beneath her shirt, gave a distinct, warm pulse against her sternum. She froze, her fingers instinctively going to the small lump of silver and crimson gem. Dymas had given it to her, a fae knight with shadows in his eyes, for ‘protection’. It only ever warmed near doors to Hel. There were no doors here. Just flowers and stone and wrong, wrong silence. Then she heard the first sound. It was a rustle, but not the gentle shiver of leaves. It was a dry, papery sound, like old parchment being slowly crumpled. It came from the treeline to her right. She snapped her head toward it, her bright blue eyes straining. Nothing. Just deeper shadow between the gnarled trunks. *Get out. Now.* She took a step back toward the stone circle. The rustle came again, this time from directly behind her, near the altar stone. She whirled, heart hammering against the warm gem. The delivery bag sat untouched. But at the very edge of the clearing, where flower met root, she saw something—a suggestion of movement. A patch of darkness that seemed to detach itself from the rest and then flow back, too quick to be real. It was the shape of a person kneeling, maybe, or a large animal crouched. It was gone before her mind could properly assemble it. “Hello?” The word was out before she could stop it, a stupid, human challenge to the quiet. The Grove drank the sound. No echo. The floral scent grew stronger, now edged with a hint of decay, like a vase of beautiful blooms left to rot in stagnant water. Rory began to walk backwards, keeping her eyes on the altar, on the treeline. The standing stones that marked the way out seemed farther away than they should have been. The geometry of the clearing was subtly off, the space stretching. A soft, wet click echoed from her left. The sound of a tongue against teeth. Her skin crawled. She wasn’t imagining it. Something was making a noise, tasting the air. She picked up her pace, the cool-headed thinker in her screaming to run, but the survivor, forged in quieter, more human terrors with Evan, knew running blind in an unknown place was a death sentence. Walk fast. Be deliberate. The rustling began in earnest, a syncopated rhythm from multiple points around the clearing now. *Dry leaves, insect wings, scraping claws.* It kept time with her heartbeat. From the corner of her left eye, a shape darted between two far stones—tall, spindly, all wrong angles. When she looked directly, there was only the unmoving, ancient oak. The pendant pulsed again, warmer, a tiny heartbeat of warning. The warmth was not comforting. It was a brand. A whisper brushed the air, not in her ears but inside her skull. It was a thread of sound, a single word she couldn’t quite grasp, in a language that felt old and cold and hungry. It was followed by a low, resonant hum that seemed to come from the stones themselves. She was halfway to the boundary. The flowers here were different; their colours were bleached in the weak light, pale blues and yellows giving way to bruised purples and charred blacks. They smelled of damp soil and copper. Something brushed against her ankle. Rory stifled a cry, jumping sideways. A vine, thick and ropy, was snaking across the moss where she had just stood. It hadn’t been there a second ago. It moved with a slow, sinuous purpose, not blown by any wind. As she watched, frozen, another vine uncurled from a nearby flower cluster, its tip questing like a blind worm. They were coming from the flowers. The beautiful, impossible flowers. Forget quiet. She ran. The clearing erupted. The rustling became a frenzied chorus, the whispering a chaotic babble in her mind. Shapes flitted at the edges of her vision—a tatter of shadow that might have been a cloak, a gleam that could have been an eye, a long-fingered hand resting for a second on a stone before vanishing. They never stood still when she looked. They were always just leaving, impressions burned into her peripheral sight. Something cold and damp grabbed her wrist—the left one, with the small crescent scar. She yanked it back with a force born of pure panic, stumbling. There was nothing there but a tendril of mist, coiling and dissolving. Where it had touched, her skin was numb. The standing stones were right there. Thirty feet. Twenty. The air directly in front of her *warped*. It was like looking through heat haze off asphalt, but cold, a lens of distortion through which the stones looked melted and strange. A figure stood within that warp, silhouetted against the darker trees beyond. It was tall, too tall, and thin. It didn’t move. It just watched her with a terrible, patient stillness. She skidded to a halt, breath sawing in her throat. The thing blocking the path didn’t feel like the flitting shadows. This felt solid. Intentional. The source of the lure. The Heartstone flared, a sudden, painful heat against her chest. Not a pulse, but a sustained burn, as if shouting a warning it had only whispered before. Rory did the only thing she could think of. She stopped trying to look at the thing head-on. She fixed her gaze on a point just to the left of the distortion, a trick she’d learned in a different life, when direct eye contact was a provocation. With her peripheral vision, she could see it more clearly—a suggestion of elongated limbs, a head that tilted with a bird-like curiosity. And it was holding something. A small, dark shape. The delivery bag. It had her food. It had been behind her, at the altar, and now it was here. Time moves differently here, Silas had said. She didn’t think. She ran, not at the gap it blocked, but veering sharply to the right, toward the space between two other stones. She kept her gaze averted, focusing on the black, familiar leather of her own trainers pounding the moss. The whispering rose to a hiss. The cold spot in the air seemed to reach for her, the temperature plummeting as she passed near it. Then she was through, bursting between the standing stones and into the familiar, biting cold of the October night. The oppressive floral stench vanished, replaced by the clean, rotten-leaf smell of the park. The silence was broken by the distant hum of a night flight coming into Heathrow. She didn’t stop running until she hit the tarmac of the car park, her lungs burning. She bent double, hands on her knees, and vomited into the gutter. The Heartstone at her neck was cool again, an inert piece of jewellery. When she finally straightened, wiping her mouth, she looked back toward the deer track. It was just a path into black woods. No strange perfume, no whispering. But on her left wrist, where the mist had touched, the skin around her old crescent scar was blanched white, as if touched by frost. It ached with a deep, bone-deep cold. And in the pocket of her jacket, her fingers, trembling, found something they hadn’t put there. She pulled it out. A single, perfect flower, the colour of a fresh bruise. It was still warm from the Grove. She dropped it as if it were a live coal, watching it wither and turn to black dust on the wet tarmac before the wind scattered it. The hundred pounds didn’t matter. The delivery didn’t matter. Something had seen her. Something knew her name. And it had let her go. For now.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1682
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slowly"
2"very"
3"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.57% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1682
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"chill"
count2
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"gloom"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"echo"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"comforting"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"chaotic"
count1
12
word"familiar"
count2
13
word"pounding"
count1
14
word"oppressive"
count1
15
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"weight"
2"warmth"
3"gloom"
4"pulse"
5"silence"
6"echo"
7"echoed"
8"pulsed"
9"comforting"
10"whisper"
11"chaotic"
12"familiar"
13"pounding"
14"oppressive"
15"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences158
matches(empty)
88.61% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences158
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences158
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords35
totalWords1667
ratio0.021
matches
0"Don’t go looking for it, Rory. Time gets funny there."
1"In and out. Leave the food on the central flat stone, they said. Don’t wait."
2"Get out. Now."
3"Dry leaves, insect wings, scraping claws."
4"warped"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Leave the food on the central flat stone, they said."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount1664
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.3
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora1
Carter1
Yu-Fei1
Pembroke1
Lodge1
Fae1
Grove3
Rory5
October2
Heartstone3
Hel1
Evan1
Silas2
Heathrow1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Heartstone"
4"Evan"
5"Silas"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Pembroke"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
5"Hel"
6"Heathrow"
globalScore1
windowScore1
36.36% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences110
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"darkness that seemed to detach itself from the rest and then flow back, too quick to be real"
1"seemed farther away than they should have been"
2"quite grasp, in a language that felt old and cold and hungry"
3"hum that seemed to come from the stones themselves"
4"as if shouting a warning it had only whispered before"
20.04% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.8
wordCount1667
matches
0"not in her ears but inside her skull"
1"Not a pulse, but a sustained burn, as if shouting a warning it had only whisp"
2"not at the gap it blocked, but veering sharply to the right, toward the space between two o"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences158
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean43.87
std26.37
cv0.601
sampleLengths
0101
160
268
37
459
558
627
773
86
950
103
1199
1217
1372
1430
1539
1656
1719
1852
1938
205
2159
2210
234
2472
2546
269
2762
2830
2927
3081
3124
3267
3348
3441
3559
3664
3725
94.16% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences158
matches
0"was gone"
1"was followed"
2"were bleached"
3"was broken"
4"was blanched"
50.19% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs267
matches
0"was turning"
1"wasn’t imagining"
2"was making"
3"was snaking"
4"were coming"
5"was holding"
34.36% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences158
ratio0.038
matches
0"But at the very edge of the clearing, where flower met root, she saw something—a suggestion of movement."
1"From the corner of her left eye, a shape darted between two far stones—tall, spindly, all wrong angles."
2"The flowers here were different; their colours were bleached in the weak light, pale blues and yellows giving way to bruised purples and charred blacks."
3"Shapes flitted at the edges of her vision—a tatter of shadow that might have been a cloak, a gleam that could have been an eye, a long-fingered hand resting for a second on a stone before vanishing."
4"Something cold and damp grabbed her wrist—the left one, with the small crescent scar."
5"With her peripheral vision, she could see it more clearly—a suggestion of elongated limbs, a head that tilted with a bird-like curiosity."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1680
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount66
adverbRatio0.039285714285714285
lyAdverbCount23
lyAdverbRatio0.01369047619047619
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences158
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences158
mean10.55
std7.32
cv0.694
sampleLengths
018
124
228
328
43
53
627
75
815
96
104
114
1211
138
1416
1514
163
1710
182
197
2021
2115
2211
231
244
257
2614
2716
2814
291
3013
319
3210
333
345
3521
3615
3716
388
395
408
416
4211
4312
448
4511
461
477
482
491
34.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats24
diversityRatio0.2911392405063291
totalSentences158
uniqueOpeners46
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences143
matches
0"Then go north."
1"Of course no one answered."
2"Just flowers and stone and"
3"Then she heard the first"
4"Just deeper shadow between the"
5"Then she was through, bursting"
ratio0.042
80.14% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences143
matches
0"She’d come on a delivery"
1"She’d done it."
2"She took a steadying breath,"
3"She stepped between two of"
4"She placed the paper bag"
5"she said, her voice swallowed"
6"She was turning to leave"
7"She froze, her fingers instinctively"
8"It only ever warmed near"
9"It was a rustle, but"
10"It was a dry, papery"
11"It came from the treeline"
12"She snapped her head toward"
13"She took a step back"
14"She whirled, heart hammering against"
15"It was the shape of"
16"It was gone before her"
17"Her skin crawled."
18"She wasn’t imagining it."
19"She picked up her pace,"
ratio0.35
68.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount112
totalSentences143
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park"
1"The city’s orange glow was"
2"She’d come on a delivery"
3"The client had texted specific,"
4"She’d done it."
5"This was the Fae Grove."
6"Silas had muttered about it"
7"Time gets funny there.*"
8"The delivery bag was a"
9"The client had promised a"
10"She took a steadying breath,"
11"She stepped between two of"
12"The temperature shifted instantly, from"
13"Wildflowers, impossibly vibrant, bloomed in"
14"The air itself seemed to"
15"This was all wrong."
16"The map pin had been"
17"Rory set her jaw and"
18"The only light came from"
19"The branches seemed lower, more"
ratio0.783
34.97% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences143
matches
0"Now, standing before a circle"
ratio0.007
46.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences74
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park after midnight held a damp, earthy chill that seeped through Aurora Carter’s jacket."
1"She’d come on a delivery for Yu-Fei, a late-night order of lo mein and prawn crackers to an address that didn’t, according to her phone’s map, actually exist."
2"Now, standing before a circle of towering, moss-clad standing stones that looked more like petrified oak trees than rock, she felt the first true prickle of une…"
3"The temperature shifted instantly, from autumn chill to a soft, spring-like warmth that carried the cloying perfume of a thousand flowers."
4"It was a thread of sound, a single word she couldn’t quite grasp, in a language that felt old and cold and hungry."
5"Shapes flitted at the edges of her vision—a tatter of shadow that might have been a cloak, a gleam that could have been an eye, a long-fingered hand resting for…"
6"Not a pulse, but a sustained burn, as if shouting a warning it had only whispered before."
7"With her peripheral vision, she could see it more clearly—a suggestion of elongated limbs, a head that tilted with a bird-like curiosity."
8"She didn’t stop running until she hit the tarmac of the car park, her lungs burning."
9"She dropped it as if it were a live coal, watching it wither and turn to black dust on the wet tarmac before the wind scattered it."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.4678%