| 74.53% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 25 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said simply [simply]" | | 1 | "she said finally [finally]" | | 2 | "she said quietly [quietly]" | | 3 | "all emotion stripped away [away]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 53 | | tagDensity | 0.472 | | leniency | 0.943 | | rawRatio | 0.16 | | effectiveRatio | 0.151 | |
| 67.11% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1368 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "truly" | | 4 | "completely" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 59.80% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1368 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "lilt" | | 3 | "scanned" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "raced" | | 7 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 79.37% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 117 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1348 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 24 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.04% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 48 | | wordCount | 1030 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.36 | | worstName | "Aiden" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aiden" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Welsh | 2 | | Silas | 10 | | Hendrick | 1 | | Evan | 3 | | Aiden | 14 | | Gallagher | 1 | | Mrs | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Chinese | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Empress" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Hendrick" | | 5 | "Evan" | | 6 | "Aiden" | | 7 | "Gallagher" | | 8 | "Mrs" |
| | places | | 0 | "Golden" | | 1 | "Cardiff" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.82 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 16.67% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "photographs that seemed to watch from their frames" | | 1 | "seemed more pronounced tonight" | | 2 | "quite name" | | 3 | "tasted like ashes in her mouth" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1348 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 49 | | mean | 27.51 | | std | 15.71 | | cv | 0.571 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 86 | | 1 | 74 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 58 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 40 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 47 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 52 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 48 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 37 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 36 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 32 | | 39 | 43 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 29 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 34 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 30 |
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| 97.47% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "been abandoned" | | 1 | "been involved" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 197 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 117 | | ratio | 0.06 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven's Nest was exactly as Rory remembered it from her university days—dimly lit, the walls covered in maps and black-and-white photographs that seemed to watch from their frames." | | 1 | "He looked up, and for a moment, his hazel eyes held the same sharpness they always had—the kind that could see through you to the parts you tried to hide." | | 2 | "\"Six,\" Silas corrected, already pouring her usual—Hendrick's gin with a twist of cucumber, no ice." | | 3 | "This man's were blue—bright, piercing blue that seemed to see everything at once." | | 4 | "\"Aurora Carter,\" Aiden said, and the way he said her name—her full name, just like Silas had—made something twist in her stomach." | | 5 | "Aiden's drink arrived—something amber in a tumbler, neat." | | 6 | "She looked between them—Silas with his carefully neutral expression, Aiden with his guarded blue eyes—and something in her snapped." |
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| 99.90% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1047 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.04011461318051576 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01623686723973257 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 117 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 117 | | mean | 11.52 | | std | 6.92 | | cv | 0.6 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 28 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 57.55% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.4017094017094017 | | totalSentences | 117 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 83.41% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd come here after her" | | 1 | "She slid onto a barstool," | | 2 | "His grey-streaked auburn hair was" | | 3 | "He looked up, and for" | | 4 | "he said, his voice carrying" | | 5 | "she said, surprised at how" | | 6 | "He set it in front" | | 7 | "She'd cut it shoulder-length after" | | 8 | "he said simply" | | 9 | "He wore a well-tailored coat" | | 10 | "He scanned the room, and" | | 11 | "he said, his voice deeper" | | 12 | "Her childhood best friend." | | 13 | "she managed, her voice steadier" | | 14 | "he confirmed, moving to the" | | 15 | "she finished for him" | | 16 | "He took a sip, and" | | 17 | "she said finally, because she" | | 18 | "she said quietly" | | 19 | "His voice was sharp, cutting" |
| | ratio | 0.341 | |
| 2.68% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven's Nest was exactly" | | 1 | "The green neon sign above" | | 2 | "She'd come here after her" | | 3 | "She slid onto a barstool," | | 4 | "Silas emerged from the back" | | 5 | "His grey-streaked auburn hair was" | | 6 | "He looked up, and for" | | 7 | "he said, his voice carrying" | | 8 | "she said, surprised at how" | | 9 | "Silas corrected, already pouring her" | | 10 | "He set it in front" | | 11 | "Rory ran a hand through" | | 12 | "She'd cut it shoulder-length after" | | 13 | "Silas leaned against the bar," | | 14 | "The use of her full" | | 15 | "he said simply" | | 16 | "Rory's breath caught in her" | | 17 | "The man who entered was" | | 18 | "He wore a well-tailored coat" | | 19 | "Evan's eyes had been brown," |
| | ratio | 0.915 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Before she could respond, the" | | 1 | "Before she could ask, Silas" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 65.64% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven's Nest was exactly as Rory remembered it from her university days—dimly lit, the walls covered in maps and black-and-white photographs that seemed to …" | | 1 | "The green neon sign above the entrance had flickered then, and it flickered now, casting everything in an eerie glow that made the dust motes in the air visible…" | | 2 | "The man who entered was taller than she remembered, his shoulders broader, face more angular." | | 3 | "The woman who delivered Chinese food part-time while trying to figure out what came next?" |
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| 5.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 25 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "He wore, the kind of thing Evan would have sneered at as" | | 1 | "Silas nodded, his expression carefully neutral" | | 2 | "she managed, her voice steadier than she felt" | | 3 | "Aiden said, not taking his eyes off Rory" | | 4 | "Aiden said, his eyes flicking to Silas briefly" | | 5 | "she said, and the words tasted like ashes in her mouth" |
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| 55.66% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 16 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Silas corrected (correct)" | | 1 | "he confirmed (confirm)" | | 2 | "she admitted (admit)" | | 3 | "she pressed (press)" | | 4 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 53 | | tagDensity | 0.302 | | leniency | 0.604 | | rawRatio | 0.313 | | effectiveRatio | 0.189 | |