Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF6SWWYG7NCEH4MBTNVZ3Y

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Duration:
26.9s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest was exactly as Rory remembered it from her university days—dimly lit, the walls covered in maps and black-and-white photographs that seemed to watch from their frames. The green neon sign above the entrance had flickered then, and it flickered now, casting everything in an eerie glow that made the dust motes in the air visible. She'd come here after her shift at Golden Empress, craving something stronger than green tea after delivering the same order to the same flat three times this week. She slid onto a barstool, the vinyl creaking beneath her. Silas emerged from the back room, wiping his hands on a towel. His grey-streaked auburn hair was slightly more grey than she remembered, and the limp in his left leg seemed more pronounced tonight. He looked up, and for a moment, his hazel eyes held the same sharpness they always had—the kind that could see through you to the parts you tried to hide. "Aurora Carter," he said, his voice carrying that familiar lilt that was equal parts Welsh and something else she could never place. "Or do you prefer Rory these days?" "Either's fine," she said, surprised at how easily the old nickname came to her lips. "It's been what, five years?" "Six," Silas corrected, already pouring her usual—Hendrick's gin with a twist of cucumber, no ice. He set it in front of her with practiced precision. "You look... different." Rory ran a hand through her straight black hair, self-conscious suddenly. She'd cut it shoulder-length after Evan, a small act of rebellion she'd told herself. "Life does that to a person." Silas leaned against the bar, his silver signet ring catching the low light as he folded his arms. "I heard about Evan. I'm sorry, Aurora." The use of her full name made her flinch slightly. "You and everyone else. It's been six months. I'm fine." "You're not," he said simply. "But you will be." Before she could respond, the door opened, letting in a gust of cold air and a familiar figure. Rory's breath caught in her throat. The man who entered was taller than she remembered, his shoulders broader, face more angular. He wore a well-tailored coat that looked expensive, the kind of thing Evan would have sneered at as "pretentious." But it was his eyes that stopped her cold. Evan's eyes had been brown, warm like whiskey. This man's were blue—bright, piercing blue that seemed to see everything at once. He scanned the room, and when his gaze landed on her, he froze. Recognition flashed across his features, followed by something she couldn't quite name. Surprise? Regret? Anger? "Silas," he said, his voice deeper than she remembered, carrying an accent that definitely wasn't Welsh. "Fancy seeing you here." "Aiden," Silas nodded, his expression carefully neutral. "It's been a while." Aiden. The name settled in Rory's chest like a stone. Aiden Gallagher. Her childhood best friend. The boy who'd taught her to climb trees and sneak into R-rated movies. The one who'd promised they'd always be friends, no matter what. The one who'd disappeared without a trace the summer before university, leaving nothing but a note that said "I'm sorry" and a phone that went straight to voicemail. "Aurora Carter," Aiden said, and the way he said her name—her full name, just like Silas had—made something twist in her stomach. "You've changed." "So have you," she managed, her voice steadier than she felt. "Last I heard, you were in Edinburgh. Studying medicine, wasn't it?" "Was," he confirmed, moving to the bar with that same confident stride he'd always had. "Things change." Silas watched the exchange with the careful attention of someone observing a chess match. "What can I get you, Aiden? The usual?" "Please," Aiden said, not taking his eyes off Rory. "It's good to see you, Rory. Even if it's been—" "Six years," she finished for him. "Yes. I know." The silence stretched between them, heavy with all the things left unsaid. The late-night conversations about their future. The promises made under oak trees. The way he'd held her hand when her father's cancer diagnosis came through. All of it, suspended in the space between two barstools. Aiden's drink arrived—something amber in a tumbler, neat. He took a sip, and Rory noticed the way his hands moved, more controlled than she remembered. More deliberate. "I didn't know you knew Silas," she said finally, because she had to say something. "We go way back," Aiden said, his eyes flicking to Silas briefly. "He was a friend of my father's. Helped me out when I needed it." "Helped you out how?" The question slipped out before she could stop it. Aiden's jaw tightened almost imperceptibly. "Let's just say I made some mistakes. People got hurt. Silas helped me make it right." The words hung in the air, and Rory felt something shift in her understanding of the man across from her. This wasn't the boy who'd stolen apples from Mrs. Henderson's garden or stayed up all night helping her study for A-levels. This was someone harder, someone who'd seen things she couldn't imagine. "You disappeared," she said quietly. "Just left. No explanation. I thought—" "What? That I'd died?" His voice was sharp, cutting through her words. "That I'd abandoned you?" The bar suddenly felt too small, too intimate. She could hear the clink of glasses from the other end, the low murmur of conversation, but it all faded into background noise. All she could focus on was the man who'd been her best friend, who'd left her behind. "I thought you were dead," she admitted, and her voice cracked on the last word. "After six months of nothing, what was I supposed to think?" Aiden looked away, his fingers tightening around his glass. "I'm sorry, Rory. I truly am. But you have to understand—I was in trouble. Bad trouble. The kind that doesn't just go away because you want it to." "What kind of trouble?" she pressed, despite the warning look Silas shot her. "The kind that involves people who don't like loose ends." Aiden's voice was flat now, all emotion stripped away. "The kind that requires you to disappear completely." Rory's mind raced, trying to reconcile this new Aiden with the one she'd known. The one who'd wanted to be a doctor, who'd spent summers volunteering at the animal shelter, who'd cried when his grandmother died. "Who are you?" she whispered. Aiden met her gaze, and for the first time, she saw the truth in his eyes. "I'm the person I had to become to survive, Aurora. The question is—who are you now?" The words hit her like a physical blow. Who was she? The girl who'd fled Cardiff to escape an abusive ex? The woman who delivered Chinese food part-time while trying to figure out what came next? The friend who'd been abandoned without explanation? "I'm someone who's tired of people leaving," she said, and the words tasted like ashes in her mouth. Aiden's expression softened, just slightly. "I never wanted to leave you. You have to believe that." "Then why did you?" The question came out harder than she intended. He opened his mouth, closed it, then finally said, "Because staying would have gotten us both killed." The confession landed between them with the weight of six years of silence. Rory's mind spun, trying to process what he'd said. Killed? What had he been involved in? Before she could ask, Silas cleared his throat. "Perhaps this is a conversation better suited for my office. Rory, would you like to join us?" She looked between them—Silas with his carefully neutral expression, Aiden with his guarded blue eyes—and something in her snapped. "No. I don't think I will. I think I've heard enough half-truths for one night." She stood, her chair scraping against the floor. Aiden reached for her, his hand hovering in the air between them. "Rory, please—" "Goodbye, Aiden," she said, and walked out into the cold London night, leaving behind the ghosts of who they used to be and the uncertainty of who they might become.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
74.53% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"he said simply [simply]"
1"she said finally [finally]"
2"she said quietly [quietly]"
3"all emotion stripped away [away]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.472
leniency0.943
rawRatio0.16
effectiveRatio0.151
67.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1368
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"suddenly"
count2
2
adverb"carefully"
count2
3
adverb"truly"
count1
4
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
2"carefully"
3"truly"
4"completely"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Henderson"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1368
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"lilt"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"raced"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"familiar"
2"lilt"
3"scanned"
4"stomach"
5"silence"
6"raced"
7"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
79.37% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences90
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences117
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1348
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
82.04% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount1030
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.36
worstName"Aiden"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aiden"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory9
Golden1
Empress1
Welsh2
Silas10
Hendrick1
Evan3
Aiden14
Gallagher1
Mrs1
Cardiff1
Chinese1
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Empress"
3"Silas"
4"Hendrick"
5"Evan"
6"Aiden"
7"Gallagher"
8"Mrs"
places
0"Golden"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore0.82
windowScore0.833
16.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"photographs that seemed to watch from their frames"
1"seemed more pronounced tonight"
2"quite name"
3"tasted like ashes in her mouth"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1348
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean27.51
std15.71
cv0.571
sampleLengths
086
174
229
320
428
531
625
720
89
958
1030
1128
1220
1311
1440
1528
1624
1722
1817
1922
2019
219
2247
2327
2415
2526
2613
2721
2852
2911
3016
3148
3226
3337
3413
3527
3636
375
3832
3943
4018
4116
4212
4317
4429
4525
4634
4722
4830
97.47% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences90
matches
0"been abandoned"
1"been involved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs197
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences117
ratio0.06
matches
0"The Raven's Nest was exactly as Rory remembered it from her university days—dimly lit, the walls covered in maps and black-and-white photographs that seemed to watch from their frames."
1"He looked up, and for a moment, his hazel eyes held the same sharpness they always had—the kind that could see through you to the parts you tried to hide."
2"\"Six,\" Silas corrected, already pouring her usual—Hendrick's gin with a twist of cucumber, no ice."
3"This man's were blue—bright, piercing blue that seemed to see everything at once."
4"\"Aurora Carter,\" Aiden said, and the way he said her name—her full name, just like Silas had—made something twist in her stomach."
5"Aiden's drink arrived—something amber in a tumbler, neat."
6"She looked between them—Silas with his carefully neutral expression, Aiden with his guarded blue eyes—and something in her snapped."
99.90% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1047
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.04011461318051576
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.01623686723973257
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences117
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences117
mean11.52
std6.92
cv0.6
sampleLengths
029
129
228
310
412
522
630
722
87
915
105
1115
1210
133
1411
1514
166
1718
187
1910
2010
215
224
2318
246
2515
2619
279
288
2913
3013
3112
321
331
341
3516
364
377
384
391
409
412
424
4313
4411
4528
4622
472
4811
4911
57.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.4017094017094017
totalSentences117
uniqueOpeners47
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.41% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences82
matches
0"She'd come here after her"
1"She slid onto a barstool,"
2"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
3"He looked up, and for"
4"he said, his voice carrying"
5"she said, surprised at how"
6"He set it in front"
7"She'd cut it shoulder-length after"
8"he said simply"
9"He wore a well-tailored coat"
10"He scanned the room, and"
11"he said, his voice deeper"
12"Her childhood best friend."
13"she managed, her voice steadier"
14"he confirmed, moving to the"
15"she finished for him"
16"He took a sip, and"
17"she said finally, because she"
18"she said quietly"
19"His voice was sharp, cutting"
ratio0.341
2.68% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences82
matches
0"The Raven's Nest was exactly"
1"The green neon sign above"
2"She'd come here after her"
3"She slid onto a barstool,"
4"Silas emerged from the back"
5"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
6"He looked up, and for"
7"he said, his voice carrying"
8"she said, surprised at how"
9"Silas corrected, already pouring her"
10"He set it in front"
11"Rory ran a hand through"
12"She'd cut it shoulder-length after"
13"Silas leaned against the bar,"
14"The use of her full"
15"he said simply"
16"Rory's breath caught in her"
17"The man who entered was"
18"He wore a well-tailored coat"
19"Evan's eyes had been brown,"
ratio0.915
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences82
matches
0"Before she could respond, the"
1"Before she could ask, Silas"
ratio0.024
65.64% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The Raven's Nest was exactly as Rory remembered it from her university days—dimly lit, the walls covered in maps and black-and-white photographs that seemed to …"
1"The green neon sign above the entrance had flickered then, and it flickered now, casting everything in an eerie glow that made the dust motes in the air visible…"
2"The man who entered was taller than she remembered, his shoulders broader, face more angular."
3"The woman who delivered Chinese food part-time while trying to figure out what came next?"
5.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"He wore, the kind of thing Evan would have sneered at as"
1"Silas nodded, his expression carefully neutral"
2"she managed, her voice steadier than she felt"
3"Aiden said, not taking his eyes off Rory"
4"Aiden said, his eyes flicking to Silas briefly"
5"she said, and the words tasted like ashes in her mouth"
55.66% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Silas corrected (correct)"
1"he confirmed (confirm)"
2"she admitted (admit)"
3"she pressed (press)"
4"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.302
leniency0.604
rawRatio0.313
effectiveRatio0.189
74.2270%