Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF7Z7HHZY17VMFCQMTFZDC

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Duration:
57.8s
Cost:
$0.007195
Provider:
Minimax

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest was quiet for a Tuesday, the kind of quiet that Silas had learned to appreciate in his years since Prague. He stood behind the bar, polishing a glass that didn't need polishing, watching the green neon sign flicker through the window. Half past nine. The evening crowd wouldn't trickle in for another hour, and he had the luxury of stillness, of listening to the old floorboards creak beneath his weight. His right hand moved unconsciously to the signet ring, twisting it half a rotation the way he'd done since the hospital. A nervous habit. The doctors had told him he'd never walk without a limp, and they'd been right, but they'd also told him he'd never sleep through the night again, and on that count they'd been wrong. He didn't sleep at all anymore. He just rested. The door opened, letting in the hum of Soho and the particular chill of an October evening. He didn't look up immediately—customer service was a performance he'd never quite learned, and besides, most people who came to The Raven's Nest knew what they were looking for. The bar attracted a certain type. Researchers of obscure history. Journalists who'd heard rumors. Occasional former colleagues who needed a safe line and a drink that didn't come with questions. But when he did look up, the glass stopped moving in his hand. She stood just inside the doorway, coat still buttoned to the throat, hair shorter than he remembered and shot through with grey at the temples. Ten years—actually eleven, he realized, doing the math with the same precision he'd once applied to asset movements and extraction windows—eleven years could reshape a person, and it had reshaped her. The girl he'd known had worn her confidence like armor, sharp-edged and deliberate. This woman stood in the doorway of his bar like she wasn't sure the floor would hold her. "Hello, Silas." Her voice hadn't changed. That was the thing that struck him first—the way the vowels still curled at the edges, that slight lift on his name that had always made it sound like something other than a word. He set the glass down. "Margaret." "Magda," she corrected gently. "I haven't been Margaret in a long time." He nodded slowly, reaching for another glass because his hands needed something to do. "What can I get you?" "Whiskey. Neat." She moved toward the bar, and he could see now the way she favored her left side slightly, the way her jacket hung differently on one shoulder. A holster, probably. Or had been, once. "Irish, if you have it." He had it. He poured a generous measure of Green Spot, set it in front of her, watched her wrap her fingers around the glass without lifting it. The bar lamp caught the hollows beneath her eyes, the new lines at the corners of her mouth. She'd been beautiful once in a way that made other people nervous—dangerous beauty, the kind that made men underestimate her and women envy her. She was beautiful still, but differently now. The sharpness had softened into something else. Something tired. "You look good," she said, and the words came out awkward, rehearsed. "The bar suits you." "It pays the bills." "I heard about Prague." He flinched, almost imperceptibly. Almost. "You heard." "It was my job to hear things." She took a sip of whiskey, grimaced slightly at the taste. "I was in Vienna when it happened. There was nothing I could do." "There was nothing anyone could do." He said it flatly, the way he'd trained himself to speak about Prague in the years since. A closed file. A closed door. "It was my operation. My call. The consequences were mine." "Consequences." She repeated the word like she was testing its weight. "Is that what you call it?" The question hung between them. Outside, a car passed, its headlights sweeping briefly across the window and casting their reflections back at them—two ghosts in a dim room, older than they remembered being. "I looked for you," she said finally. "After. When I got out. I tried to find you." "I know." "You knew I was looking?" "I make it a point to know who's looking for me." She laughed, a short bitter sound. "Of course you do. That sounds like you." She turned the glass in her hands, watching the liquid catch the light. "I thought maybe you'd retired. Gone somewhere warm. Spain, maybe. Somewhere with beaches and no extradition treaties." "I thought about it." "But you stayed." "The bar needed me." He gestured vaguely at the room—the maps, the photographs, the carefully curated sense of age and mystery. "It's a front, obviously. You know that. But it's also real. People come here and they don't know they're being watched, and for a few hours they can pretend they're somewhere else. I know what that's worth." "I know what that's worth," she echoed, and something in her voice shifted, softened. "I thought about this place, actually. When I was in Kraków. During the job that—" She stopped, shook her head. "There's a bar there, very small, very dark. I sat there one night and I thought about walking in here. Just appearing. Letting you see what I'd become." "What you've become," he repeated. "And what is that?" She met his eyes then, and for a moment he saw her as she'd been—twenty-six, brilliant, impossible. The best operative he'd ever trained, though he'd never told her so. She'd been his responsibility and his failure, in the end. The two had always gone together where she was concerned. "Unemployed," she said. "Surprisingly. I thought I'd die in the field. I thought that's what I was built for. But it turns out there's a shelf life for people like us, and when it expires—" She shrugged. "Here I am." "The shelf life." "That's what they call it in the files. I saw them, before I left. They had a whole assessment, my psychological profile, my 'diminishing operational capacity.' Apparently I was becoming a liability." "You're not a liability." "I know that." She sounded tired rather than angry. "I knew that then, too. But it doesn't matter what you know. It matters what they see. And what they saw was a woman who couldn't sleep, couldn't shoot straight, couldn't walk past a window without checking for threats." She paused. "So they let me go. With a pension and a commendation and a pat on the head. And I walked out into a world that didn't make sense anymore." Silas poured himself a whiskey—he didn't usually drink on the job, but this wasn't a job, this was something else—and raised the glass in a small toast. "To worlds that don't make sense." She touched her glass to his. "To the ones who survive them anyway." They drank in silence, and the silence was easier than the words had been. The old maps on the walls seemed to lean closer, listening. Somewhere in the back room—the hidden room, the one behind the bookshelf—someone was waiting for a contact that might never come. But that was tomorrow's problem. Tonight there was only this: two people who had once known each other completely, rebuilding a bridge across years of silence. "I kept the ring," she said suddenly. "The one you gave me. The signet." He looked at her hand, and she turned it over, showing him the inside of her wrist where a thin silver band was pressed into the skin. He'd forgotten he'd given it to her—Moscow, 1998, the night before the op that had nearly gotten them both killed. A reckless gesture. A promise he'd never made aloud. "I thought you'd sell it." "I thought about it." She smiled, and for a moment she looked like herself again, like the woman who'd once told him that fear was just information and that information could be managed. "But I couldn't. It reminded me that someone out there knew what I was. That I wasn't just—" She stopped. "Wasn't just what?" "A monster. A tool. Something they could put in a drawer when they were done with it." He reached across the bar, his hand covering hers. The signet ring pressed cold against his palm. "You were never a tool." "Neither were you." Her fingers curled around his, gripping tight. "That's what I came to tell you, actually. When I walked in here, that's what I wanted to say. You were never just what they made you. Neither of us was." The words landed somewhere deep, in a place he'd walled off years ago. He felt his throat tighten, felt the old grief rise up like water through a crack in a dam. "I thought about you," he admitted. "After Prague. I thought about looking for you. But I didn't want—" He stopped, shook his head. "I didn't want to drag you back into this." "Back into what? The lies? The waiting? The knowing that any moment could be the last moment?" She squeezed his hand. "I was already in it. I was in it up to my neck and I was drowning, Silas. And you were the only one who ever made me feel like I could breathe." Outside, the neon sign flickered again, casting green light across their joined hands. The street outside was growing busier now, the sounds of Soho at night filtering in—a shout, a laugh, the rumble of a bus. Normal sounds. The sounds of a world that didn't know what happened in back rooms and behind closed doors. "Stay," he said. The word came out rough, too raw. He cleared his throat. "The flat upstairs is empty. You can stay there tonight. We can—there's a lot we haven't talked about." "A lot we can't talk about," she corrected gently. "But we can drink. And we can remember. And we can be here, in this place that doesn't make sense, together." She smiled again, and this time it reached her eyes. "That sounds like enough." He nodded, not trusting his voice, and reached for the bottle again. The glasses filled, the night stretched out before them, and for a few hours the past and present held each other in a careful balance. There would be time tomorrow for questions, for explanations, for the complicated architecture of a life rebuilt. But tonight there was only this: two old friends in a bar that was also a lie, telling the truth of their survival in the only language they had left.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
42.31% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount7
adverbTags
0"she corrected gently [gently]"
1"she said finally [finally]"
2"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
3"she said suddenly [suddenly]"
4"Her fingers curled around [around]"
5"she corrected gently [gently]"
6"She smiled again [again]"
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.269
effectiveRatio0.215
71.78% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1772
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"gently"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count2
5
adverb"completely"
count1
6
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"slowly"
2"slightly"
3"carefully"
4"very"
5"completely"
6"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.78% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1772
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"sense of"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"silence"
count3
6
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"weight"
2"chill"
3"sense of"
4"echoed"
5"silence"
6"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences95
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences134
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1755
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount1130
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.18
worstName"Raven"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Raven"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Tuesday1
Silas2
Prague2
Soho2
October1
Green1
Spot1
Moscow1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Spot"
places
0"Prague"
1"Soho"
2"Moscow"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like herself again, like the woman"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1755
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean32.5
std25.81
cv0.794
sampleLengths
073
167
276
313
487
52
643
71
812
919
1041
1186
1216
134
144
157
1631
1739
1817
1933
2017
212
225
2311
2444
254
263
2758
2862
299
3049
3140
323
3332
344
3579
3633
3713
3872
3914
4056
415
4253
433
4417
4522
4641
4732
4832
4954
97.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences95
matches
0"was concerned"
1"was pressed"
96.37% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs193
matches
0"were looking"
1"was testing"
2"was waiting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences134
ratio0.082
matches
0"He didn't look up immediately—customer service was a performance he'd never quite learned, and besides, most people who came to The Raven's Nest knew what they were looking for."
1"Ten years—actually eleven, he realized, doing the math with the same precision he'd once applied to asset movements and extraction windows—eleven years could reshape a person, and it had reshaped her."
2"That was the thing that struck him first—the way the vowels still curled at the edges, that slight lift on his name that had always made it sound like something other than a word."
3"She'd been beautiful once in a way that made other people nervous—dangerous beauty, the kind that made men underestimate her and women envy her."
4"Outside, a car passed, its headlights sweeping briefly across the window and casting their reflections back at them—two ghosts in a dim room, older than they remembered being."
5"\"The bar needed me.\" He gestured vaguely at the room—the maps, the photographs, the carefully curated sense of age and mystery."
6"She met his eyes then, and for a moment he saw her as she'd been—twenty-six, brilliant, impossible."
7"Silas poured himself a whiskey—he didn't usually drink on the job, but this wasn't a job, this was something else—and raised the glass in a small toast."
8"Somewhere in the back room—the hidden room, the one behind the bookshelf—someone was waiting for a contact that might never come."
9"He'd forgotten he'd given it to her—Moscow, 1998, the night before the op that had nearly gotten them both killed."
10"The street outside was growing busier now, the sounds of Soho at night filtering in—a shout, a laugh, the rumble of a bus."
89.93% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1146
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount58
adverbRatio0.0506108202443281
lyAdverbCount24
lyAdverbRatio0.020942408376963352
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences134
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences134
mean13.1
std10
cv0.764
sampleLengths
023
121
23
326
421
53
634
76
83
917
1029
116
124
134
1416
1513
1625
1731
1813
1918
202
214
2234
235
241
254
268
2714
285
2929
303
314
325
333
3425
3518
3624
377
387
392
4012
414
424
434
444
451
462
4718
4813
4923
51.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.35074626865671643
totalSentences134
uniqueOpeners47
39.22% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"Somewhere in the back room—the"
ratio0.012
12.94% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences85
matches
0"He stood behind the bar,"
1"His right hand moved unconsciously"
2"He didn't sleep at all"
3"He just rested."
4"He didn't look up immediately—customer"
5"She stood just inside the"
6"Her voice hadn't changed."
7"He set the glass down."
8"she corrected gently"
9"He nodded slowly, reaching for"
10"She moved toward the bar,"
11"He had it."
12"He poured a generous measure"
13"She'd been beautiful once in"
14"She was beautiful still, but"
15"she said, and the words"
16"He flinched, almost imperceptibly."
17"She took a sip of"
18"He said it flatly, the"
19"She repeated the word like"
ratio0.518
18.82% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences85
matches
0"The Raven's Nest was quiet"
1"He stood behind the bar,"
2"The evening crowd wouldn't trickle"
3"His right hand moved unconsciously"
4"A nervous habit."
5"The doctors had told him"
6"He didn't sleep at all"
7"He just rested."
8"The door opened, letting in"
9"He didn't look up immediately—customer"
10"The bar attracted a certain"
11"Researchers of obscure history."
12"Journalists who'd heard rumors."
13"She stood just inside the"
14"The girl he'd known had"
15"This woman stood in the"
16"Her voice hadn't changed."
17"That was the thing that"
18"He set the glass down."
19"she corrected gently"
ratio0.882
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
14.65% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"He stood behind the bar, polishing a glass that didn't need polishing, watching the green neon sign flicker through the window."
1"He didn't look up immediately—customer service was a performance he'd never quite learned, and besides, most people who came to The Raven's Nest knew what they …"
2"Occasional former colleagues who needed a safe line and a drink that didn't come with questions."
3"She'd been beautiful once in a way that made other people nervous—dangerous beauty, the kind that made men underestimate her and women envy her."
4"Outside, a car passed, its headlights sweeping briefly across the window and casting their reflections back at them—two ghosts in a dim room, older than they re…"
5"Somewhere in the back room—the hidden room, the one behind the bookshelf—someone was waiting for a contact that might never come."
6"Tonight there was only this: two people who had once known each other completely, rebuilding a bridge across years of silence."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, and the words came out awkward, rehearsed"
73.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she corrected gently (correct)"
1"She repeated (repeat)"
2"he repeated (repeat)"
3"he admitted (admit)"
4"she corrected gently (correct)"
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.169
leniency0.338
rawRatio0.455
effectiveRatio0.154
75.9919%