Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFAFAGA5K8SJ2DSN5WDYQF

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Duration:
32.0s
Cost:
$0.001753
Provider:
Novita

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park smelled different after dark—damp earth and something faintly metallic beneath the usual green scent of grass and leaves. Aurora Carter pulled her jacket tighter around her shoulders as she stepped off the paved path, her sneakers crunching over twigs and dry leaves. The beam of her phone flashlight cut a shaky path ahead, illuminating patches of gnarled roots and the occasional glint of eyes—foxes, probably, or maybe just her imagination. She shouldn’t be here. Not at night. Not alone. But the pendant around her neck had pulsed insistently all evening, a slow, rhythmic warmth against her collarbone, and she’d learned by now not to ignore it. The Heartstone had led her to strange places before—abandoned warehouses, half-collapsed churches, the odd alleyway that smelled of ozone—but never somewhere this… open. This quiet. A breeze whispered through the trees, carrying the faintest hint of wildflowers. That wasn’t right. It was October; nothing should be blooming. Aurora slowed as the first of the standing stones came into view—ancient oaks, their trunks twisted into unnatural angles, forming a rough circle just beyond the treeline. The Fae Grove. She’d heard the name in passing from Silas, muttered between pints like a warning. *Don’t go looking for it, Rory. Not unless you’re ready to lose a few hours—or a few years.* Her pulse kicked up. The pendant throbbed in response. She stepped between two of the stones. The air changed instantly—thicker, heavier, like walking through syrup. The sounds of the park vanished, replaced by an eerie silence broken only by the rustle of leaves that didn’t quite sound like leaves. Aurora’s breath fogged in front of her, though the night wasn’t that cold. And the flowers. They carpeted the clearing in impossible colors—petals so deep violet they looked black, stems that shimmered like oil on water. They shouldn’t exist. Not here. Not on Earth. Aurora swallowed hard and took another step forward. The pendant’s warmth spread, almost uncomfortable now, like holding a lit match too close to skin. She reached up to touch it, half-expecting to find it burning, but the metal was cool. Then she heard it. A whisper. Not words—not quite—just a breath of sound, too deliberate to be the wind. Her head snapped toward the source, flashlight beam swinging wildly. Nothing. Just shadows and those impossible flowers. *You’re imagining things.* She forced herself to exhale. To think. The pendant had brought her here for a reason. Maybe there was a Hel portal nearby, one of those ragged tears between worlds that let things slip through. Maybe— Another whisper. Closer this time. Aurora went still. The back of her neck prickled. She wasn’t alone. Slowly, she turned. The flowers swayed, though there was no breeze. Between them, something glinted—a pair of eyes, reflecting her flashlight like a cat’s. But they were too high off the ground. Too still. Her throat tightened. The eyes blinked. Then they were gone. Aurora’s breath came fast now, her fingers tightening around her phone. *Move. Just move.* But her legs refused to obey. The silence pressed in, thick and suffocating, until— A twig snapped behind her. She whirled, heart hammering. The flashlight beam caught the edge of something—a shape, tall and too thin, slipping behind one of the standing stones. The glimpse lasted less than a second, but it was enough. Long limbs. Skin that wasn’t quite skin. The pendant burned against her chest. Aurora stumbled back, her heel catching on a root. She barely registered the pain as she hit the ground, too focused on the space between the trees where the thing had been. Where it *wasn’t* anymore. A laugh echoed through the grove—soft, melodic, and utterly wrong. It came from everywhere and nowhere, skittering down her spine like ice. *Run.* She scrambled to her feet, pulse roaring in her ears. The flowers rustled as she bolted, their stems tangling around her ankles like grasping fingers. The standing stones loomed ahead, their twisted forms suddenly sinister. Something moved in her periphery. Aurora didn’t look. She couldn’t. If she looked, she’d see it. And if she saw it— The laugh came again, closer. She burst through the stone circle, the air snapping back to normal with an almost audible *pop*. The sounds of the park rushed in—distant traffic, the cry of a night bird, her own ragged breathing. She didn’t stop running until her lungs burned and the pendant had cooled to a dull, lifeless weight against her skin. Only then did she glance back. The grove was gone. Just trees. Just shadows. But as she turned away, something fluttered to the ground from her jacket—a single violet petal, black at the edges, already crumbling to dust.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
81.27% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount801
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"utterly"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount801
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"glint"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count2
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"throbbed"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"shimmered"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count2
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"down her spine"
count1
11
word"roaring"
count1
12
word"loomed"
count1
13
word"sinister"
count1
14
word"weight"
count1
15
word"fluttered"
count1
highlights
0"glint"
1"pulsed"
2"rhythmic"
3"warmth"
4"pulse"
5"throbbed"
6"silence"
7"shimmered"
8"whisper"
9"echoed"
10"down her spine"
11"roaring"
12"loomed"
13"sinister"
14"weight"
15"fluttered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences91
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences91
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords27
totalWords784
ratio0.034
matches
0"Don’t go looking for it, Rory. Not unless you’re ready to lose a few hours—or a few years."
1"You’re imagining things."
2"Move. Just move."
3"wasn’t"
4"Run."
5"pop"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.98% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount784
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.02
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Carter1
Heartstone1
October1
Fae1
Grove1
Silas1
Rory1
Earth1
Hel1
Aurora8
persons
0"Carter"
1"Heartstone"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
globalScore0.99
windowScore1
43.62% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite sound like leaves"
1"not quite just a breath of sound, too deliberate to be the wind"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount784
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean20.1
std18.45
cv0.918
sampleLengths
075
19
252
322
462
59
67
746
83
928
1040
114
122
1330
143
1536
165
1712
183
1931
203
213
224
2328
245
2542
266
2736
2822
291
3035
315
3216
335
3435
3521
366
378
3824
97.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"were gone"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs133
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount18
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences17
totalSentences91
ratio0.187
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park smelled different after dark—damp earth and something faintly metallic beneath the usual green scent of grass and leaves."
1"The beam of her phone flashlight cut a shaky path ahead, illuminating patches of gnarled roots and the occasional glint of eyes—foxes, probably, or maybe just her imagination."
2"The Heartstone had led her to strange places before—abandoned warehouses, half-collapsed churches, the odd alleyway that smelled of ozone—but never somewhere this…"
3"It was October; nothing should be blooming."
4"Aurora slowed as the first of the standing stones came into view—ancient oaks, their trunks twisted into unnatural angles, forming a rough circle just beyond the treeline."
5"Not unless you’re ready to lose a few hours—or a few years.*"
6"The air changed instantly—thicker, heavier, like walking through syrup."
7"They carpeted the clearing in impossible colors—petals so deep violet they looked black, stems that shimmered like oil on water."
8"Not words—not quite—just a breath of sound, too deliberate to be the wind."
9"Maybe—"
10"Between them, something glinted—a pair of eyes, reflecting her flashlight like a cat’s."
11"The silence pressed in, thick and suffocating, until—"
12"The flashlight beam caught the edge of something—a shape, tall and too thin, slipping behind one of the standing stones."
13"A laugh echoed through the grove—soft, melodic, and utterly wrong."
14"And if she saw it—"
15"The sounds of the park rushed in—distant traffic, the cry of a night bird, her own ragged breathing."
16"But as she turned away, something fluttered to the ground from her jacket—a single violet petal, black at the edges, already crumbling to dust."
72.73% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount801
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount57
adverbRatio0.07116104868913857
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.01373283395755306
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean8.62
std7.28
cv0.845
sampleLengths
023
124
228
34
43
52
627
722
81
92
1012
113
127
1327
143
1514
166
1712
184
195
207
219
2224
2313
243
2520
263
272
283
298
3016
3116
324
332
3413
3510
361
376
383
395
402
419
4219
431
442
453
463
476
483
493
51.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3626373626373626
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners33
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount7
totalSentences75
matches
0"Then she heard it."
1"Just shadows and those impossible"
2"Maybe there was a Hel"
3"Slowly, she turned."
4"Then they were gone."
5"Just move.* But her legs"
6"Only then did she glance"
ratio0.093
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences75
matches
0"She shouldn’t be here."
1"It was October; nothing should"
2"She’d heard the name in"
3"Her pulse kicked up."
4"She stepped between two of"
5"They carpeted the clearing in"
6"They shouldn’t exist."
7"She reached up to touch"
8"Her head snapped toward the"
9"*You’re imagining things.*"
10"She forced herself to exhale."
11"She wasn’t alone."
12"Her throat tightened."
13"She whirled, heart hammering."
14"She barely registered the pain"
15"It came from everywhere and"
16"She scrambled to her feet,"
17"She burst through the stone"
18"She didn’t stop running until"
ratio0.253
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences75
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park"
1"Aurora Carter pulled her jacket"
2"The beam of her phone"
3"She shouldn’t be here."
4"The Heartstone had led her"
5"A breeze whispered through the"
6"That wasn’t right."
7"It was October; nothing should"
8"Aurora slowed as the first"
9"The Fae Grove."
10"She’d heard the name in"
11"Her pulse kicked up."
12"The pendant throbbed in response."
13"She stepped between two of"
14"The air changed instantly—thicker, heavier,"
15"The sounds of the park"
16"Aurora’s breath fogged in front"
17"They carpeted the clearing in"
18"They shouldn’t exist."
19"Aurora swallowed hard and took"
ratio0.72
66.67% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"If she looked, she’d see"
ratio0.013
75.89% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The Heartstone had led her to strange places before—abandoned warehouses, half-collapsed churches, the odd alleyway that smelled of ozone—but never somewhere th…"
1"They carpeted the clearing in impossible colors—petals so deep violet they looked black, stems that shimmered like oil on water."
2"The flowers rustled as she bolted, their stems tangling around her ankles like grasping fingers."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.2788%