| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 81.27% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 801 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "utterly" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 801 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "glint" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "throbbed" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "shimmered" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "down her spine" | | 11 | "roaring" | | 12 | "loomed" | | 13 | "sinister" | | 14 | "weight" | | 15 | "fluttered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 6 | | markdownWords | 27 | | totalWords | 784 | | ratio | 0.034 | | matches | | 0 | "Don’t go looking for it, Rory. Not unless you’re ready to lose a few hours—or a few years." | | 1 | "You’re imagining things." | | 2 | "Move. Just move." | | 3 | "wasn’t" | | 4 | "Run." | | 5 | "pop" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.98% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 784 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.02 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | October | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Rory | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Aurora | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.99 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 43.62% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite sound like leaves" | | 1 | "not quite just a breath of sound, too deliberate to be the wind" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 784 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 20.1 | | std | 18.45 | | cv | 0.918 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 75 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 52 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 62 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 46 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 40 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 36 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 42 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 36 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 35 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 35 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 24 |
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| 97.55% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 133 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 18 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 17 | | totalSentences | 91 | | ratio | 0.187 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park smelled different after dark—damp earth and something faintly metallic beneath the usual green scent of grass and leaves." | | 1 | "The beam of her phone flashlight cut a shaky path ahead, illuminating patches of gnarled roots and the occasional glint of eyes—foxes, probably, or maybe just her imagination." | | 2 | "The Heartstone had led her to strange places before—abandoned warehouses, half-collapsed churches, the odd alleyway that smelled of ozone—but never somewhere this…" | | 3 | "It was October; nothing should be blooming." | | 4 | "Aurora slowed as the first of the standing stones came into view—ancient oaks, their trunks twisted into unnatural angles, forming a rough circle just beyond the treeline." | | 5 | "Not unless you’re ready to lose a few hours—or a few years.*" | | 6 | "The air changed instantly—thicker, heavier, like walking through syrup." | | 7 | "They carpeted the clearing in impossible colors—petals so deep violet they looked black, stems that shimmered like oil on water." | | 8 | "Not words—not quite—just a breath of sound, too deliberate to be the wind." | | 9 | "Maybe—" | | 10 | "Between them, something glinted—a pair of eyes, reflecting her flashlight like a cat’s." | | 11 | "The silence pressed in, thick and suffocating, until—" | | 12 | "The flashlight beam caught the edge of something—a shape, tall and too thin, slipping behind one of the standing stones." | | 13 | "A laugh echoed through the grove—soft, melodic, and utterly wrong." | | 14 | "And if she saw it—" | | 15 | "The sounds of the park rushed in—distant traffic, the cry of a night bird, her own ragged breathing." | | 16 | "But as she turned away, something fluttered to the ground from her jacket—a single violet petal, black at the edges, already crumbling to dust." |
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| 72.73% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 801 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 57 | | adverbRatio | 0.07116104868913857 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01373283395755306 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 91 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 91 | | mean | 8.62 | | std | 7.28 | | cv | 0.845 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 51.65% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.3626373626373626 | | totalSentences | 91 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she heard it." | | 1 | "Just shadows and those impossible" | | 2 | "Maybe there was a Hel" | | 3 | "Slowly, she turned." | | 4 | "Then they were gone." | | 5 | "Just move.* But her legs" | | 6 | "Only then did she glance" |
| | ratio | 0.093 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldn’t be here." | | 1 | "It was October; nothing should" | | 2 | "She’d heard the name in" | | 3 | "Her pulse kicked up." | | 4 | "She stepped between two of" | | 5 | "They carpeted the clearing in" | | 6 | "They shouldn’t exist." | | 7 | "She reached up to touch" | | 8 | "Her head snapped toward the" | | 9 | "*You’re imagining things.*" | | 10 | "She forced herself to exhale." | | 11 | "She wasn’t alone." | | 12 | "Her throat tightened." | | 13 | "She whirled, heart hammering." | | 14 | "She barely registered the pain" | | 15 | "It came from everywhere and" | | 16 | "She scrambled to her feet," | | 17 | "She burst through the stone" | | 18 | "She didn’t stop running until" |
| | ratio | 0.253 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter pulled her jacket" | | 2 | "The beam of her phone" | | 3 | "She shouldn’t be here." | | 4 | "The Heartstone had led her" | | 5 | "A breeze whispered through the" | | 6 | "That wasn’t right." | | 7 | "It was October; nothing should" | | 8 | "Aurora slowed as the first" | | 9 | "The Fae Grove." | | 10 | "She’d heard the name in" | | 11 | "Her pulse kicked up." | | 12 | "The pendant throbbed in response." | | 13 | "She stepped between two of" | | 14 | "The air changed instantly—thicker, heavier," | | 15 | "The sounds of the park" | | 16 | "Aurora’s breath fogged in front" | | 17 | "They carpeted the clearing in" | | 18 | "They shouldn’t exist." | | 19 | "Aurora swallowed hard and took" |
| | ratio | 0.72 | |
| 66.67% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "If she looked, she’d see" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 75.89% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone had led her to strange places before—abandoned warehouses, half-collapsed churches, the odd alleyway that smelled of ozone—but never somewhere th…" | | 1 | "They carpeted the clearing in impossible colors—petals so deep violet they looked black, stems that shimmered like oil on water." | | 2 | "The flowers rustled as she bolted, their stems tangling around her ankles like grasping fingers." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |